<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="font-size:20px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">4月11日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">迎风岸柳舞婆娑（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风动竹林弦乐扬（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">唯期日暖蝶翩来（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">狂风岸柳舞纷纭（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风软湖心縠皱铺（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">惟期雨霁稼生荣（雨燕）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">餐霞野菊绽参差（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云淡山亭玉磬鸣（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">更怜夜寂鹊声孤（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">微风岸柳舞婆娑（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雾淡山腰素练悬（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">偶逢夏浅藕初开（荷花）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">临风岸柳曳轻阴（学荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风劲桥边锦鲤腾（学荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">还期风暖鸟啼频（学荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">随风柳絮舞高低（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风过阶前云帚挥（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">却期日暖果修成（元其）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">罡风蓑草覆西东（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风劲墙头竹哨鸣（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">却怜日暖燕飞高（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">微风紫燕舞参差 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风细楼头柳幕斜 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">却怜山远水流长 (燕燕于飞)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">飚风岸柳摆无章（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云淡山头锦玉飘（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">还期香盛味传长（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新晴林鸟唱高低（Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霁止枝头雀语喧（Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常悲岁晚梦成空（Ang.zq)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">细风岸草舞东西（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风急竹杪绿绮鸣（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">更期天暖鸟飞闲（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乘风岸柳荡横斜 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风急窗棂竹手敲 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">却欣叶茂果栖新 (青丝羽衣)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凝烟溪竹舞婆娑（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳暗轩窗玉影斜（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但期风软雨来稀（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨梨花开次第 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柔风岸柳绿参差 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雾薄枝头素锦披 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且喜秋来果满枝 (美西洋)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">迎风竹叶舞参差（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风软柳堤帷幕垂（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">却逢日暖蝶飞来（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穿林紫燕舞翩跹（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落湖心玉镜来（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">只期风暖燕归来（弦思）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">顶风竹叶落东西（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风掠河床玉带飞（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又怜夜冷燕栖寒（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">招风岸柳舞婆娑（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风细林间玉笛吹（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">已逢雨后笋初生（於发）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穿云翠鸟啭悠扬（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苔厚墙边翠毯铺（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幸逢日暖燕归来（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">迎风径草舞参差 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云淡荷塘宝镜开 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">空怜路远燕归迟 (震撼哥）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饱雨篱花开次第（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">迎阳阶筱绿参差 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨微檐角珠帘缀（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鱼跃湖心玉镜开 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怯春残花落尽（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">正怜节换笋初生 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block">简 评：</p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：饱雨篱花开次第</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 饱雨：①饱受雨水。宋陆游《归云门》： “甑炊饱雨湖菱紫，篾络迎霜野柿红。”②方言，透雨。</p><p class="ql-block"> 次第：依次的意思。唐刘禹锡《秋江晚泊》：“暮霞千万状，宾鸿次第飞。”宋陆游《书事》：“闻道舆图次第还，黄河依旧抱潼关。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 饱受雨水的篱花依次的开放了。</p><p class="ql-block"> 饱雨是动宾式的合成词，次第是副词，而篱花是偏正式的短语。</p><p class="ql-block"> 强调“饱雨”，是说“篱花”开的鲜艳、富有生机的缘由或条件，故而作定语。</p><p class="ql-block"> 整句应调整语序理解为“饱雨篱花次第开”。师友们理解出句意旨，辞工意美的佳句有很多，请师友们比较品析，不再一一举例。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：雨微檐角珠帘缀</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 雨微即是微雨的意思，即微小的雨。</p><p class="ql-block"> 珠帘：珍珠缀成的帘子。唐李白《怨情》：“美人卷珠帘，深坐颦蛾眉。但见泪痕湿，不知心恨谁。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 微小的雨不停地下着，雨水从檐角不停地流下来，像是珍珠缀成的帘子。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句运用了比喻的修辞手法，意象鲜明突出。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们修辞运用恰当，意境契合的佳句举例如下:</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">雨微檐角珠帘缀</span></p><p class="ql-block">风动竹林弦乐扬</p><p class="ql-block">风软湖心縠皱铺</p><p class="ql-block">雾淡山腰素练悬</p><p class="ql-block">风细楼头柳幕斜</p><p class="ql-block">云淡山头锦玉飘</p><p class="ql-block">柳暗轩窗玉影斜</p><p class="ql-block">雾薄枝头素锦披</p><p class="ql-block">风软柳堤帷幕垂</p><p class="ql-block">风掠河床玉带飞</p><p class="ql-block">风细林间玉笛吹</p><p class="ql-block">苔厚墙边翠毯铺</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：犹怯春残花落尽</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：感怀联</p><p class="ql-block"> 犹怯的意思是仍然害怕或畏惧。犹”表示“仍然”或“尚且”，强调状态的延续性。“怯”意为“害怕”或“畏惧”，描述一种缺乏勇气或胆量的心理状态。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> （我）仍然担心或害怕春天去了，花儿都落尽了（的这种情况的出现）。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句为隐藏主语句。有感叹美好事物逝去的焦虑不安的心理。</p><p class="ql-block"> 对句可以有两种思路：</p><p class="ql-block"> 一是选取意象，同向补充这种担忧的心理状态的佳句是：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">犹怯春残花落尽</span></p><p class="ql-block">更怜夜寂鹊声孤</p><p class="ql-block">常悲岁晚梦成空</p><p class="ql-block">又怜夜冷燕栖寒</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> 二是选取意象，反向生发，表达出希望，排解不安的心理状态的佳句是：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">犹怯春残花落尽</span></p><p class="ql-block">唯期日暖蝶翩来</p><p class="ql-block">惟期雨霁稼生荣</p><p class="ql-block">却怜日暖燕飞高</p><p class="ql-block">更期天暖鸟飞闲</p><p class="ql-block">却欣叶茂果栖新</p><p class="ql-block">却逢日暖蝶飞来</p><p class="ql-block">只期风暖燕归来</p><p class="ql-block">已逢雨后笋初生</p><p class="ql-block">幸逢日暖燕归来</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：琢玉 雨燕 老农 荷花 学荣 元其 闲云 燕燕于飞 大海 ANG.ZQ 若水 青丝羽衣 梧桐 美西洋 淡定 弦思 文心 於发 云朵 震撼哥 笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序）</p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片运用Al根据意境创作</p>