<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">3月14日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽谷流泉玉佩鸣（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">茶灶飘香惬静思（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">细品茶香静悟禅（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曲径飞花蝶梦悠（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">槛影摇红漫品茶（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">更揽山光好放怀（荷花）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽谷鸣泉石罅歌（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花影摇红读雅诗（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暂借风声好放歌（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">湍瀑泻银玉佩摇 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">树影披红笑醉杯 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且奏琴音得遣怀 (震撼哥)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽谷喷泉玉笛扬（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花蕊吐红漫举杯（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且听泉声可悦心（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">碧水游鱼燕尾摇（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">院暖铺红唱老歌（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又拾春光再写诗（大海）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">石径摇花彩蝶飞（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花径披红漫品诗（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且借花香可作诗（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">叠岭盘溪玉带环 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">径寂漫红意盎游 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽听东风乱叩窗 (青丝羽衣)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">深谷听松客梦长（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花影摇红伴苦吟（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">也谢花香可清心（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">迸瀑投渊素沫浮（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花径飞红惬吟诗（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且借梅魂好赋诗（雨燕）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">松谷抚琴涧水流 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹韵摇诗品淡茶 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且借清风闲赋诗 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野涧飞鸥水气腾（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水澈泛青有暗流（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且嗅兰香好作诗（若水）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽谷归莺柳带摇（学荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水影摇青醉慢吟（学荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且借花香好赋诗（学荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">旷野连天柳带垂（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花径洇红自雅吟（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹煮春光长入杯（梧桐）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽谷聚蛙串鼓鸣（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">地气回阳适早耕（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">何患清风难入诗（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">深海藏鲸客镜追 (不亦le乎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">卷厚泛黄觅雅诗 (不亦le乎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">好拟风词嵌入歌 (不亦le乎)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽谷啼莺锦羽娇（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花径闻香漫拨弦（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且伴松涛共放歌（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野水拍岩霹雳惊 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">茶味浮香宜浅尝 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">更纳泉声好养闲 (乡间晚风)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">碧水潜鱼桂棹游 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">泉韵流清漫抚琴 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且揽花香好入诗 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳岸栖莺翠帐垂（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">篱落摇红欲妙吟（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">独对春光漫品茶（於发）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">深谷积潭玉镜平（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">时鸟开声且畅听（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且点檀香好静心（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽涧飞泉玉笛鸣 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">槛外摇红赏雅弹 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">倾寄泉声难辍弦 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危崖来鹤云裳舞（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽涧飞虹彩练飘（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈 （问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荷影摇丹漫诵章（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但赊月色不辞卷 （问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且揽荷芳好净心（Ang.zq）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">简 评：</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：危崖来鹤云裳舞</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 危崖：高峻的悬崖。明·胡应麟《再游大慈岩》：“危崖常堕虎，怪石尽成羊。”</p><p class="ql-block"> 云裳：仙人的衣服,偏正式的合成词。仙人以云为衣，故称。宋韩淲《江城子‧德久同醉子似出新置佐酒》：“天孙应为织云裳,试宫妆问刘郎。”清谭嗣同《别意》：“何以压轻装，鲛绡缝云裳。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 高峻的悬崖上飞来了仙鹤，仙人穿着云裳（和仙鹤）一起飞舞。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句人、物形象极具浪漫主义色彩，下面的对句和出句意境相称、相得益彰的佳句：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">危崖来鹤云裳舞</span></p><p class="ql-block">幽谷流泉玉佩鸣</p><p class="ql-block">曲径飞花蝶梦悠</p><p class="ql-block">湍瀑泻银玉佩摇</p><p class="ql-block">幽谷喷泉玉笛扬</p><p class="ql-block">叠岭盘溪玉带环</p><p class="ql-block">深谷听松客梦长</p><p class="ql-block">幽谷啼莺锦羽娇 </p><p class="ql-block">碧水潜鱼桂棹游</p><p class="ql-block">柳岸栖莺翠帐垂</p><p class="ql-block">深谷积潭玉镜平 </p><p class="ql-block">幽涧飞虹彩练飘</p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"> </p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：庭阴覆翠聊闲弈</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：情景联</p><p class="ql-block"> 庭阴、覆翠以及闲弈都不是合成词，而是短语。</p><p class="ql-block"> 庭阴是庭院中的树阴或绿阴，偏正式的短语；覆翠：覆盖着翠绿的颜色，动宾式的短语；闲弈：悠闲地下棋的意思，偏正式的短语，其中，“闲”为形容词，“弈”为动词。</p><p class="ql-block"> 聊：是谈或闲谈的意思，动词。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 庭院中覆盖着翠绿的浓阴，（我和朋友）悠闲地聊着下棋的事情。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句“庭阴覆翠”是幽静的环境处所，“聊闲弈”是优雅的一种交流行为，意境唯美，意象闲雅。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们的对句辞工、律正、意美的佳句举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">庭阴覆翠聊闲弈</span></p><p class="ql-block">茶灶飘香惬静思</p><p class="ql-block">花影摇红读雅诗</p><p class="ql-block">树影披红笑醉杯</p><p class="ql-block">院暖铺红唱老歌 </p><p class="ql-block">径寂漫红意盎游</p><p class="ql-block">花影摇红伴苦吟 </p><p class="ql-block">水影摇青醉慢吟</p><p class="ql-block"> </p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：但赊月色不辞卷</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：情景联</p><p class="ql-block"> 但赊：“但”有“只、仅”的意思，“赊”有“赊欠等含义。“但赊”表示“只赊欠”之类的意思。</p><p class="ql-block"> 不辞：不辞让；不推辞。《庄子‧天下》：“惠施不辞而应，不虑而对，遍为说万物，说而不休，多而无已。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> （我）只赊欠月色，（就着月色）读书，一点也不推辞。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句的意思就是借月苦读、乐读，也写出了情趣的高雅。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们的对句深谙出句意旨，生发自然，意境相谐的佳对俯拾皆是，请师友们阅读体会，不再一一列举。</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：琢玉 荷花 老农 震撼哥 弦思 大海 淡定 青丝羽衣 元其 雨燕 燕燕于飞 若水 学荣 梧桐 闲云 不亦le乎 文心 乡间晚风 美西洋 於发 云朵 笛里关山 ANG.ZQ</p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序）</p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片来自AI</p>