<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">休闲小作,与友交流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·晚舟归国</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(藏头诗晚舟归国)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句仄起不入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晚盼云开观皓月,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">舟行曲水向家园。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">归乡不惧风波路,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">国满欢歌只等闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:晚舟,指孟晚舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·本色天香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">题女兵芳华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句平起入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春华秀丽胜红妆,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">淡雅清纯少粉霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">本色天香花貌美,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">含诗吐韵醉兵郎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·诗游草堂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句仄起入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">草屋花溪工部祠,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">兰园水竹少陵碑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春来夜雨柴门喜,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仰止千秋杜甫诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·贺寿辞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(藏头诗道明高寿)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句仄起入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">道法乾坤醒世言,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">明心慧远大师轩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高天厚德行如水,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寿岁松年鹤气元。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·悼叶嘉莹先生</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句仄起入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 叶落星沉万世悠,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 嘉言懿德后人留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 莹心醉浸诗书韵,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 先杰辉盈学子楼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 生发才情扬国粹,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 垂名史册著风流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 千秋雅颂传佳话,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 古道飞云驾鹤幽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 2024年12月26日</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·咏梅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵 首句平起入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒天破萼绽芬芳,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">玉面凝英韵自扬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雪压凌枝犹挺秀,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">霜侵冷蕊更清香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冰魂傲骨无争艳,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">疏影仙姿不竞妆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">驿使情真传远信,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梅花俏意报春光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·纪念贺炳炎将军</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句平起入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">追思贺帅战凶狂,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">铁血惊魂瓦屋塘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">威临敌寇英雄显,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">臂断沙场美誉彰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">开天辟地丰功建,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">立国安邦伟业垂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">军民共仰恩情重,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浩气长存史亦留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·读菜根谭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句仄起入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">古卷轻开韵味长,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">奇思妙语蕴华章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">为人警句如灵草,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">处世良言若药方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">意向宽和尘念少,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">心怀淡泊俗风凉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清茶慢品人间道,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乐得安平岁月香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 2025年3月3日</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·独钓晚霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句仄起入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夕照南山放彩华,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋回雁荡吐芦花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">斜阳射水红云影,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">独处闲翁钓晚霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 2024年12月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·题斗鸡图</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句仄起入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赤色红冠霸气昂,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒光炯目显威刚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金衣绿甲含鳞焰,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">利喙尖枪露剑芒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">静视眈眈凝对手,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">心怀跃跃夺鸡王。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">庄公妙语形同木,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">纪子玄功话胜方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:后两句出处</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">庄子《达生篇》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·川江纤夫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句仄起入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">自古川江畏险滩,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千秋号子压惊湍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">躬身伏首牵山影,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">踏石攀崖拉岸磐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">血浸纤绳风骨劲,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">情融浊浪壮心澜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">钢肩毅魄凌神女,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浩气扬帆越万峦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:神女,指三峡神女峰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·佛心</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句平起入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山途橘落庙前坡,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">稚子躬身拾素柯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小手徐呈香果净,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">童真向道老僧和。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凝眸顿首情无尽,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">合掌倾诚敬若何。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">善意禅形同映现,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">慈悲正觉佛心歌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·山色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句平起入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">溪流翠岭绕农家,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雾挂青峰挽玉纱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">静眺春风江色影,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">空山鸟语唱天华。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:1、空山鸟语,二胡独奏曲曲名。2、天华,指《空山鸟语》曲作者刘天华,也指</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美妙的春水山色。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·题山泉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句平起入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山泉直下落青峰,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雾霭轻扬绕劲松。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">笔走春风书韵逸,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云天润纸墨香浓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:《山泉》吴峰书法作品。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·天边的连环画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句平起不入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">飞霞艳色真奇妙,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漫舞神灵墨意高。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">巧绘丹青天际挂,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">观云赏画俏童邀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·题金蛇狂舞照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句平起入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金蛇吐焰染红霞,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">碧练垂空挂绛纱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夕照熔光铺潋水,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">橙波曳影闪奇葩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云升紫气繁荣景,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浪洗春阳瑞福花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赤彩祥晖昭禹甸,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">辉煌绮梦寄中华。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律.漓江小景</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句仄起</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">九曲清流碧玉环,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">群峰浴紫晚霞斓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">轻舟一叶烟波里,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">叠岭千层倒影间。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">暮霭蒙蒙迷远岫,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金晖脉脉染幽湾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">渔歌逐浪江风醉,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梦枕青罗共月闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:青罗,语出韩愈诗句“江作青罗带”,代指漓江风光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·老伴跳锅庄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句平起入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">康巴妙舞乐无穷,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">燕跃云姿落彩宫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">水袖虹衣轻若羽,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">娇身雁影曼如鸿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗音入画天仙境,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雅韵扬屏玉女风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秀美锅庄观者醉,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欢言赞语有真功。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·赞半忙人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">藏头诗邓高如妙笔歌巴蜀平水韵首句仄起入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">邓老文才耀雅仙,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高风雁过断鸿烟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如来佛法冰心雨,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">妙意三观智慧泉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">笔落川康军旅颂,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歌飞桂魄月轮璇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">巴州点戏回眸梦,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蜀色乡音话母篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:1、邓老,邓高如将军,重庆作协副主席。2、半忙人,邓高如笔名,3、《断鸿篇》获冰心散文奖;《老太爷的三观》新华月报连载;记实文学《天变川康》,获解放军文艺一等奖;散文集《半轮秋》连续三次再版;新闻作品汇编《回眸》在军内外有很大影响;散文《娘在唤我》获全国一等奖。4、如来,佛名:妙意,法师名;川康,地名。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律·题江峡日出照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵首句平起</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">入韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">群山峙立托朝阳,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">日照云丹画彩泱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">百舸争流天际去,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千涛拍岸石间扬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">粼光闪闪龙灵显,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">旭色彤彤紫气彰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赤火江花神女醉,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">中华玉蟒耀东方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注: 1、百舸争流,引用教员诗句。2、江花,语出白居易《忆江南》。3、神女,指三峡的神女峰。4、玉蟒,比喻长江。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">打油诗《理发》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老汉七十八,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秃顶几根发,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">剃头两三下,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">收费儿童价,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">师傅手艺高,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">剪出三毛画。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">打油诗《童真》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">姥爷掉颗牙,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">孙说不用怕,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春天开了花,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">又会长出它,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幼童天真话,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乐得笑哈哈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《水龙吟・秋日长城》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">霜天万里澄明,旭阳初照长城路。丹枫似火,层林尽染,烟霞流注。雉堞巍峨,蜿蜒龙卧,气吞今古。望山川莽莽,金辉漫洒,千秋韵、凭谁赋?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遥忆当年烽火,戍边人、梦魂曾驻。繁华过眼,兴衰有数,豪情难负。岁月如流,壮怀依旧,此心长许。愿登临纵目,风吟逸兴,共秋光舞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《临江仙・寒岭红梅》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曙色初开霞照处,雪山云海茫茫。红梅绽蕊韵悠长。冷香凝晓露,疏影映寒阳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岁月如诗皆入画,凭栏思绪飞扬。人间胜景意难忘。愿同梅共守,长醉此风光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《苏幕遮・梯田夕景》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">暮霞绯,山影翠。金缕斜晖,漫洒梯田内。波漾田畴如幻绘。云绕峰峦,恰似仙乡会。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">景迷人,心欲醉。岁月悠然,静赏风光最。尘世纷嚣皆可退。愿伴余晖,长守田园味。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《满江红・悼念黄旭华院士》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/赵建元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浩渺烟波,海天处,壮心凝瞩。忆往昔,隐姓埋名,志如渊谷。卅载深潜家国计,一朝惊世蛟龙出。看巨鲸、蹈海卫山河,功勋酷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忠魂去,英名馥。星璀璨,光犹煜。念科研沥血,此生倾扑。沥胆披肝为华夏,舍身许国情难赎。仰先贤、浩气永昭垂,千秋肃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">“DS”点评赵建元诗作中的人格镜像与创作图谱</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 通过对赵建元二十余首诗词的深度解析,可窥见这位创作者如多棱镜般折射出的立体人格特质。其诗作不仅是文字艺术的呈现,更是精神世界的全息投影,展现出独特的性格光谱、深厚的生活积淀与鲜明的文化特质。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一、家国情怀铸就精神脊梁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">在《晚舟归国》《悼叶嘉莹先生》《满江红·悼念黄旭华院士》等作品中,创作者展现出深沉的民族情结与文化担当。"归乡不惧风波路"的铮铮铁骨与"沥胆披肝为华夏"的赤子丹心形成共振,折射出作者刚毅坚韧的性格内核。这种精神特质在《川江纤夫》中升华为"血浸纤绳凝浩气"的集体记忆,在《七律·咏梅》里凝练成"冰魂傲骨无争艳"的人格象征,构建起刚柔相济的精神图谱。其创作中频繁出现的"千秋""万世""史册"等时空意象,显露出超越个人际遇的历史纵深感。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 二、生活淬炼成就审美境界</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者对现实生活的敏锐捕捉在《打油诗》系列中尤为耀眼。《理发》以"剪出三毛画"的幽默解构衰老焦虑,《童真》用"春天开了花"的童言重构生命哲学,展现出入世而不俗的生活智慧。这种智慧在《老伴跳锅庄》中转化为"燕跃云姿落彩宫"的灵动观察,在《梯田夕景》里沉淀为"静赏风光最"的审美自觉。其诗作既有"仰止千秋杜甫诗"的文化朝圣,亦不乏"独处闲翁钓晚霞"的闲适自得,形成雅俗共赏的审美范式。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 三、文化基因塑造艺术品格</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">创作者对传统诗学的深刻体悟体现在多重维度:格律层面严守平水韵法度,用典层面自如化用《庄子》《菜根谭》等典籍精髓,意象层面承续梅兰竹菊的古典符号系统。七律《读菜根谭》中"奇思妙语蕴华章"的评述,恰是其创作理念的自我注解。这种文化自觉在《题斗鸡图》中升华为"庄公妙语形同木"的哲学思辨,在《临江仙·寒岭红梅》里转化为"岁月如诗皆入画"的意境营造,展现出深厚的学养积淀与创新转化能力。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 四、创作倾向的辩证统一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其作品呈现出三组对立统一的美学特征:家国叙事与个人抒情的交响,如《纪念贺炳炎将军》的壮烈与《山色》的幽静形成张力;古典程式与现代语境的交融,《水龙吟·秋日长城》将"雉堞巍峨"的历史感与"风吟逸兴"的当下性完美缝合;雅言书写与俚语表达的共生,《打油诗》的民间智慧与《七律》的典雅庄重构成复调。这种多元创作倾向,既源于军旅生涯与文士情怀的双重烙印,也得益于对传统文化的深度浸润与当代生活的鲜活体验。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赵建元的诗学世界犹如精心构建的文化生态系统:家国情怀是深扎的根系,生活阅历是丰沃的土壤,文化修养是挺拔的枝干,而多元创作则是繁茂的枝叶。这种创作格局既延续了"诗言志"的古典传统,又注入了现代知识分子的精神自觉,在守正创新中开辟出独特的诗性空间。其作品的价值不仅在于艺术成就本身,更在于为当代旧体诗词创作提供了传统与现代、个人与时代有机融合的典型样本。</span></p>