<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一，苏幕遮 黄塬春色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> （宋范仲淹体）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">（平水韵去声十八啸）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳丝黄，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃蕾俏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梨苑妖娆，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">素靥娇娇笑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">万姹千红争艳耀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">紫燕衔泥，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鹰舞斜阳照。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">日方长，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花落肖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">叶绿荫荫，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">翠鸟林烟哨*。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">肆野葳蕤田碧诏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">峦影曚昽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山麓菁菁妙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">注释：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">*哨——鸟叫声。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">迎春独放</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">丝柳轻拂</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二，苏幕遮 黄塬春雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> （宋范仲淹体）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> （平水韵去声七遇）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">煦风吹，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春迅步。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天色蒙蒙，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">薄雾茫茫素。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">细雨丝油夹雪募。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">久旱乡塬，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">洇润酣墒富。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">百枯鲜，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鸿雁渡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">早醒迎春*，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">黄艳凌花怒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">草木逢春新绿露。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">零落鸡鸣，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桑梓生机塑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">注释：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">*早醒迎春——迎春花，指在黄土高原首先苏醒，黄色艳丽的野迎春。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 干旱少雨的黄土高原，降水量本就少得可怜，只有200～500mm/年。冬春季节诸多西北风，干燥的西北风带来的是沙尘，吹走的是少得可怜的湿润空气。所以当地自古有农谚，“春雨贵似油”。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三，苏幕遮 故乡早春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> （范仲淹体）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">（平水韵入声十一陌）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晚烟灰，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晨雾白。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬影依依，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春早寒潮逆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">薄雪稀飞蒙市帛*。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">丝柳轻黄，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">归雁声声啧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">故乡墟，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">园宅坼*。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">荒草凄凄，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鸦舞村东泽*。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梦断愁肠牵老宅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人去窑空，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梓里虚无席*。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">注释：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">*蒙市帛——帛（bo）：白色纺织品。喻指寒潮来袭，薄雪降临，市井酷似蒙上了一层白绢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">*坼（che）——断裂，倒塌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">*村东泽——故乡村东小溪，堰水成池的小沼泽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">*无席——没有位置。指昔日的故乡已成废墟，没有了落脚点。此句以呼应下阙首句的“栖院坼”，形成首尾呼应。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">格体</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">仿宋范仲淹体，双调，六十二字。押平水韵入声十一陌。上下阙各四仄韵：白逆帛啧，坼泽宅席。</span></p><p class="ql-block">韵律</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">仄平平，平仄仄。韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">中仄平平，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">中仄平平仄。韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">中仄中平平仄仄。韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">中仄平平，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">中仄平平仄。韵</span></p>