<p class="ql-block">整理去年的格律习作，从涉及山水田园题材的作品中选出七绝30首，分享大家，以求指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">这些小诗大都发表于《诗词月刊》、《新浪潮》杂志和《诗词中国一群》、《诗坛》、《雅阁》、《邂逅诗词》、《黄埔诗社》及《轻龄家》等微刊平台，恕不一一详列。</p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬晨</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜风带哨净霾尘，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">日照金山曙色新。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹挺梅馨枝雪落，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">启扉野步鸟亲人。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">春日村居</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">杏粉农家柳碧村，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">釆蒿挖荠近黄昏。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜谈无惧晨兴晏，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">喜鹊夫妻住对门。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">野菜</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">槐叶榆钱翠柳花，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">白蒿绿荠紫椿芽。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">舌尖漫品春滋味，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">浮现陈年想起家。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">吉隆坡黑风洞见蜻蜓</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">春分惊睹蜻蜓舞，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">洞府花丛幻彩虹。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">齐鲁幼蛉荷角立，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">南洋老翅变阿公。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">楸花</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">又逢谷雨绽楸花，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">地润天晴好埯瓜。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">数十年前离故土，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">依然忆旧梦桑麻。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">村叟言</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">松土平畦整垄沟，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">年年春种望秋收。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">莫愁南亩无青壮，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">留守翁婆不退休。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">小满回乡见闻</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">榴启朱唇麦灌浆，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">声声布谷杏微黄。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">整齐机具联通网，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">三夏乡亲不再忙。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">郊行书见闻</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">麦气传香喜稔丰，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">偷尝丹杏白头翁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">穿林布谷声声脆，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蜀季花开一丈红。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">济南城中山</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">喜看新城奋盛威，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">昂头阔步快如飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">不甘一任泉湖秀，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">络绎青山农转非。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夏野</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">半熟山桃坠短蒿，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">阳骄水瘦少蝉嚣。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">有心饲粟鸠疑怯，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">无意惊禾兔脱逃。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">伏日野步</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">叶垂风懒倦鸣蝉，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">野径槐花铺玉毡。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓叟收纶田父歇，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪湾浴罢柳阴眠。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夏游黄龙</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">野旷天低远扰嚣，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">叠池幻彩竞妖娆。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">盘桓既久觉凉意，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">欲扯轻云护护腰。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">宿松潘川主寺</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">雪山皓首草原青，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">客醉风光主转经。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜幕初垂惊走报，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">哪曾见过这多星。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">处暑</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">伏日余威蒸未央，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">微风夙夜已添凉。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">灌浆稻谷悄垂首，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">沃野山川渐换装。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">敕勒川草原</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">背倚阴山瞰大河，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">羊肥草美笑颜多。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">何时长得毡包住，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">白马蒙袍唱牧歌。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">包头南海湿地</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">苇暗帆明漾渌波，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">鱼嘻莲叶逗天鹅。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">金滩健舞银舟跃，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">满载渔翁唱老歌。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">鄂尔多斯敖包</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">风雷难撼草原情，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">俯仰乾坤佑太平。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">更喜牧归秋月朗，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴音篝火伴歌声。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">故乡晨兴</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">喜鹊斑鸠争叫早，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">绕村漫步净无尘。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">乡邻笑脸花颔首，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">北岭西河处处亲。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">老宅即景(其一)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一畦萝卜半沟葱，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">扁豆丝瓜缀满空。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">土菜新粮中饭罢，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">葡萄架下卧如弓。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">老宅即景(其二)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝶飞蚁聚慢悠蟾，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">鸟憩槐荫猫睡檐。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">菜碧花红瓜满架，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">隔窗够枣品清甜。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">老宅即景(其三)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">扇舞蛩鸣待月升，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">初生猫狗比谁能。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">天河卧看流星过，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">三两飞萤亮尾灯。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">戏题秋雨</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">细雨牛毛野笼纱，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">含烟凝翠静无涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">只知急缓不知住，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">怪道人称秋傻瓜。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋日山行</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">鸟鸣蝶舞艾香亲，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹭涉芦湾跃锦鳞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">欲问黄花前路事，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">牵牛招手绽红唇。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">霜降野望</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">麦绿芦黄野换装，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">月高日短履轻霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">崖枫易染先成炬，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹见迟归雁一行。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">泛舟塞纳河</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">初临塞纳零星雨，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">西岱卢浮淡笼烟。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">风助启航云谢幕，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">峥嵘铁塔湛蓝天。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">瑞士风光</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">田园诗画牧歌悠，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">少女银峰半露羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">金色长龙山口过，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">琉森湖上泛轻舟。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">故乡初冬(其一)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">菘青菊艳草葱笼，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">红柿晶莹挂浅冬。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">风雪羁迟存暖意，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">花心犹见卧胡蜂。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">故乡初冬(其二)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">未睹琼芳应节来，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">畦头野菊抱香开。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">田园老圃忙收菜，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">动作循时不待催。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">故乡初冬(其三)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">坡净场光粮进仓，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">操机冬管保墒忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">小康老表开心话，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">真正农家不撂荒。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">大雪盼雪</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">枫叶依稀松后凋，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">呼朋逐乐亦逍遥。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">归来犹觉少神趣，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">假寐芸窗梦雪飘。</span></p> <p class="ql-block">图片取自网络，侵删。</p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">🙏谢谢关注🙏</span></p><p 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