<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二零二五年二月上社课</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">要求：五言绝句、平水韵六语</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">收集简评：牟明英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刊头题字 ：谢宗山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美篇编辑 ：赵以顺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【周国庆】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">闻友北去江城返工遥寄</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">年味渐阑珊，忽闻人北去。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">枝头萼绿新，间或听抟黍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">料峭正春寒，潇潇风著雨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">当年事已缄，吹哨人何处？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">简评：天意难违，芳音独爱。岁月匆忙，人生无奈……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【祝西峰】 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">望 鹤</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有鹤起寒塘，回头呼伴侣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">双飞暮色中，夜宿知何许？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">铁梗海棠</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">院角海棠枝，恬恬春带雨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">芳苞绽口时，一树香风举。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">简评：寒塘双鹤，夜栖何处？海棠一树，花拥香浮……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【梁正森】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">场外看哪吒</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">劳生如逆旅，俯仰将何许？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仿佛牢笼中，长年困饥鼠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">神魔一念间，善恶相尔汝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我命原由我，逆天脱刀俎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是谁调律吕，颠倒乱时序。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一入玉虚宫，不知有寒暑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">四</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">众生为鱼肉，天地执刀俎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">可叹申公豹，空持降魔杵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">简评：人生之路，八九坎坷，世事无常，吟情不尽……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【牟明英】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">闲 吟</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凭栏添别绪，四处无人语。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">但见白云间，一行鸿雁去。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和风识物意，犹自撒红雨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">最是绮园喧，人来不忍去。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">独行幽径里，常在花间伫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不觉又春深，残红飞似雨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">自评：花开有信，岁去无痕，闲来无事，凑字凑韵……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【赵学鹏】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">春节毕将往贵阳开启网蛙品味一年工作行前自勉</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">过岭入高天，逆风行独旅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">将开梦一帘，窗挂潇潇雨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">也说哪吒</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">命既不由天，岂思天给予。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是魔还是仙，只在我心许。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">简评：车驰梦处，逆风独行，我掌我命，傲骨铮铮……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">新年走贵阳忆访酒十年事</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十载漫漫路，几番寒易暑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">峰光恍如影，只有风追叙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">简评：寒来暑往，岁去无还，漫漫长路，唯诗作伴……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【文受刚】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">怀姚献中先生</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">聪明天赐与，绛帐身相许。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学子每聆听，谆谆教诲语。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">怀黄仁泰先生</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有幸曾相与，知交年若许。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">谈诗并论词，多少惊人语。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">简评：德才兼备，诲人不倦，亦师亦友，妙语连连……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【汪守先】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">归 途</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">无计逃尘累，有情待春雨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">归途余晚色，山雀闲闲语。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">寻 诗</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒气来三面，路灯情几许。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寻诗步晚街，清寂蒙蒙雨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">简评：动静成画，句句含情，满怀希望，景幽韵长……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">【张 雨】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">鸣沙山行</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">黄沙卷北风，纷错落如雨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何处漫驼铃，声声思几许。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">应恨归来迟，胡杨不作语。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萧萧大漠寒，任我伤心绪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">简评：萧萧大漠，处处流沙，思心骤起，何处是崖……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【赵以顺】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">山 野</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">野水绕山青，桃红湿烟雨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">但知崖上村，隐在云深处。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">儿时山路遇兰而未寻得其踪</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">静倚春风开，有香妙无语。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山边走且停，不辨香来处。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">简评：烟雨山乡，清新脱俗，寻兰不遇，但闻浮香……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【牟明鹏】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春日登山寻隐</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">空山闻鸟语，欲往云深处。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">但得刘怜醉，不思留与去。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">偶 得</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晚照清江渚，浮光能否伫？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">生生无所义，何自寻愁绪？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">简评：自得其乐，随处可安，何来愁绪，扰我清闲……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【廖德勋】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;"> 羡</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春虽料峭寒，山雀遍呼侣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">枝矮与枝高，颉颃来复去。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">去 来</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">征铎逐严寒，浮生多逆旅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">归思将又浓，或是清明雨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">简评：动静成趣，乐享其中；感慨浮生，意韵无穷……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【谢 勇】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">也说哪吒二首</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不信命由天，劳生皆逆旅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一尘终究微，申豹诚如许。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尘埃化泞泥，聊作潇潇雨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">反天哪吒儿，背景岂如许。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">简评：典为今用，想象不凡，词虽简单，意却悠远……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"></span></p>