批改作业用豆包，太好用了

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教师培训第三场二月23

任务两点：

一学会用豆包批改造句作业

体验：时间效率

体验：解析准确率

二复习语法项目时，考虑从“病句出发，摸底，先漏洞”再导出知识网，知识点最后练习巩固再到验收

适合于词汇语法项目全部

这是学生造句练习，拍照给豆包

以下是对这些句子的批改及分析：

1“I can't do my homework because I was ill”

- 错误：时态不一致，前面“can't”是一般现在时，后面“was ill”是一般过去时。

- 修改：I couldn't do my homework because I was ill.（我当时因为生病做不了作业，前后都用一般过去时） 或者 I can't do my homework because I am ill.（我现在因为生病做不了作业，前后都用一般现在时）

“I won't let you go unless you tell me the truth”

- 正确：此句语法正确，“unless”引导条件状语从句，遵循“主将从现”原则，即主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时。

“Work hard and I'll pass the exam”

- 正确：这是“祈使句+and+陈述句”的结构，祈使句表示条件，陈述句表示结果，语法正确。

“He can't sleep until turn on the light”

- 错误：“until”后缺少主语和谓语动词，表达不完整。

- 修改：He can't sleep until he turns on the light. （他直到打开灯才能睡着，“he”作主语，“turns on”作谓语，遵循“主将从现”或“主情从现”原则，这里主句含情态动词“can't” ）

“If you work hard you will get good grades.”

- 正确：“if”引导条件状语从句，遵循“主将从现”原则，语法正确。

“While the children playing, the adult is watching TV”

- 错误：“while”引导时间状语从句时，从句通常用进行时态，这里缺少谓语动词“are”。

- 修改：While the children are playing, the adult is watching TV. （当孩子们在玩耍的时候，成年人在看电视 ）

怎么样，你有收获吗

修改病句

1

I have important something to tell you.

（错误点：形容词修饰不定代词时位置错误，应改为 I have something important to tell you.）

2She is a ill girl and needs to see a

doctor.

（错误点：ill 作定语时意为“邪恶的”，此处表示“生病的”应用 sick，应改为 She is a sick girl and needs to see a doctor. ）

3The interested look on his face showed

he was really into the story.

（错误点： - ed 形容词和 - ing 形容词混淆，此处表示“脸上感兴趣的表情”应用 interested，原句正确，可改为 The interesting story made him excited. 把正确的句子改出错误，错误点为混淆 - ed 和 - ing 形容词，应改为 The interested story made him excited. ）

4This is the most perfect gift I've ever

received.

（错误点：perfect 为绝对形容词，无比较级和最高级，应改为 This is a perfect gift I've ever received. ）

5He is more taller than his brother.

（错误点：比较级前不能再加 more，应改为 He is taller than his brother. ）

Who is the cleverest between the two boys?（错误点：两者比较应用比较级，应改为 Who is the cleverer between the two boys? ）

6The weather in Beijing is colder than Shanghai.

（错误点：比较对象不一致，应改为 The weather in Beijing is colder than that in Shanghai. ）

7She is the second tall girl in our class.

（错误点：the + 序数词 + 最高级表示“第几最……”，应改为 She is the second tallest girl in our class. ）

8It is getting more warm these days.

（错误点：warm 比较级为 warmer，不是 more warm，应改为 It is getting warmer these days. ）

9The book is enough easy for him to read.（错误点：enough 修饰形容词要后置，应改为 The book is easy enough for him to read. ）

10He is very better today.

（错误点：比较级前不能用 very 修饰，应用 much，应改为 He is much better today. ）

11My sister is elder than me.

（错误点：elder 只作定语，此处作表语应用 older，应改为 My sister is older than me. ）

12The little child looks happily.

（错误点：look 为系动词，后接形容词作表语，应改为 The little child looks happy. ）

13The room is too much small for

five people.

（错误点：too much 修饰不可数名词，此处修饰形容词 small 应用 much too，应改为 The room is much too small for five people. ）