<p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"><i><u>我的原创诗词</u></i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> 廖正夫</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 1，卜算子.赞深度探索</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 2，五律 游流花湖公园</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 3，七律 钦佩马斯克</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> 1，卜算子. 赞深度探索</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> （词林正韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> 廖正夫</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 序：今年春节，我请深度探索将我的一首七律译成英语。深度探索只花19秒钟，就把诗译出来了，而且还作了注解。通过仔细阅读，我发现译诗准确而传神，不但顾及了押韵和对称，还采用了英诗的形式。我感到无比惊喜，并为我国青年科学家的杰出成就而自豪，特作此词。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 都道译诗难，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 译后行文乱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 古典诗词格律严，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 圣手摇头叹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 世上有神奇，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 深度寻求冠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 刹那功夫汉译英，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 准确由衷赞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> 2025.2.8</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> 2，五律 游流花湖公园</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> （平水韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> 廖正夫</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 流花湖水阔，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 沿岸景迷人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 榕树英雄气，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 涟漪倾国颦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 浮丘荣碧草，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 鹭岛摄奇鹑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 游客休闲乐，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 携家迎早春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> 2025.2.10</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"></b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> 3，七律 钦佩马斯克 </b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> （平水韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> 廖正夫</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 美国孔明非过誉，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 化身智慧久闻名。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 航天成就震环宇，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 创业艰辛催激情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 累卧车间何怨苦，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 痴迷科技只求精。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 幸逢英主展鸿志，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 效率惊人风气清。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> 2025.2.14</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"></b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">附我请深度探索翻译的七律：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 观力夫二胡独奏《良宵》有感” </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> （平水韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> 廖正夫</b></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 功成名就女儿邀，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 异国他乡山水遙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 皓月繁星思旧事，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 芳庭美景奏良宵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 悠扬宛转琴声远，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 潇洒怡然身影骄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 何日归来兄弟会，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 清甜家酒飲三瓢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> 2024.2.1</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">深度探索的翻译如下：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">Reflections on Listening to Lifu's Erhu Solo "Serene Night"</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> By Liao Zhengfu*</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">Success achieved, my daughter bids me stay,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">Yet foreign lands stretch far as mountains gray.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">Beneath moon's glow, old memories take flight,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">Through fragrant court, "Serene </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">Night" greets the night.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">The erhu's voice like distant rivers flows,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">His dancing bow a crane in sunset shows.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">When shall we brothers reunite</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> again?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">Three gourds of homebrew wine</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> to quench this pain.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> February1,2024</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"></b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;"><i><u>美友赠言</u></i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">1，娜云美友赠言：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 廖老师的诗好的无法说，而且每篇作品的背景音乐又恰好表达出作者的心声，使作品完美融合，把读者带入作品意境。👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️</span></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">2。华剑蒙慧美友赠言；</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 点赞精品佳作！祝您元宵快乐！👍👍👍🌹🌹🌹🙏🙏🙏🎉🎉🎉👌👌👌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;"><i><u> 谢谢美友们欣赏和谬赞</u></i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;"><i><u> 感谢大家的支持和鼓励</u></i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;"><i><u></u></i></b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 作者近照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p>