<p class="ql-block">2025.1.15</p><p class="ql-block">指导老师无为斋主人</p> 🟥️🟥️🟥️ <p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">1</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">出句与对句</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">出句：蛇舞江山秀；</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">对句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">2</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">自撰诗联</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">出题与点评老师闫秀萍</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> </b></p> 🟥️ <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">廉永明作业：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凤翔天地春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，对仗工整，“春”字动用，写出了新春伊始万物复苏，到处生机勃勃的景象，寄托了对美好未来的期待和向往。佳对。</span></p> 🌹 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赵文英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞千山秀，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙腾四海欢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞千山秀，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙腾四海欢；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">红梅春绽放，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">白雪惹人观。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：本次作业出句录错了，注意上联标点。本联对仗工整，意境相随，写出举国欢度新春场面。</span></p> 💢💢 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘建和</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙归天地新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.自撰联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝.《春燕》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙归天地新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜临飞瑞雪，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晓燕喜迎春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.对仗工整，形对意联，辞旧迎新，新年新起点，新年新希望。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.自撰联，平仄合律，一气呵成。</span></p> 🟥️ <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">王海良作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙腾岁月红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">燕归天地新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.自撰联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">贺春联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">挂春联，贴年画，剪窗花，欢欢喜喜迎新岁；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">听京剧，猜灯谜，逛庙会，火火红红过大年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.一比，对仗工整，形对意联，“红”字生动形象，热情饱满地讴歌了祖国繁荣昌盛、各行各业业绩骄人及人民生活蒸蒸日上。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二比，对仗工整，形对意联，展现了春天来临，燕子翻飞的一幕幕祥和、美好、和谐的画面，象征着新的开始和美好的希望。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二比均为佳对。</span></p> 🍊 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">霍成奎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙吟草木春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：对仗工整，形对意联，“春”字动用，春回大地，万物复苏，佳对。</span></p> 🌟 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">许晋武</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙腾日月新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：对仗工整，形对意联，新年新气象，龙蛇共舞谱新章。</span></p> 🌹 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">张期望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙藏岁月悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：对仗工整，形对意联，岁月悠悠，见证了时光更迭、季节轮回、万象更新、冬去春又来。</span></p> 💥 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">崔晓清</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凤飞日月新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙腾宇宙欢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：二比都对仗工整，形对意联，蛇年将临，对未来充满美好期待，幸福感溢于言表。</span></p> 🌈 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">程永红</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙腾华夏安。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：对仗工整，形对意联，江山秀丽，国泰民安，生于华夏，幸逢盛世，自豪感油然而生。佳对。</span></p> 💥 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">武达</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙腾岁月安。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：对仗工整，形对意联，江山如画，岁月静好，国家昌盛，人民安康。</span></p> 🟥️ <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">下期作业：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莺歌岁月新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.自撰联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">题村朴诗联群：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">联苑新风春正好，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陶城古韵日争晖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.对仗工整，形对意联，美好的春天鸟语花香，崭新的岁月由衷歌唱。佳对。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.自撰联对仗工整，形对意联，抒发了对村朴诗联群的赞美之情，佳联。</span></p> 🍊 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句（改作业）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">郝建富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">燕归岁月新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：对仗工整，形对意联，新的岁月，新的画图，新的起点，新的祝福。</span></p> 🦋 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">本期作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">温丕彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 龙腾风雨调。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.撰诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 五律•新年</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 韵/二箫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雪眠琼野阔 初日一轮骄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">爆竹惊寰宇 新歌载九韶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">楹红言寿福 酒满庆丰饶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大小龙交岁 嘉年风雨调</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.对仗工整，形对意联，江山秀美，风调雨顺，五谷丰登，国富民强，新的一年，祝福满满。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.自撰联，意境优美，朗朗上口，有静有动，有声有色，将新年的喜庆场面和美好祝愿真实地呈现出来。佳作[强]</span></p> 💢 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：春来花木荣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一一郭保旺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对仗合律，形对意联，语境优美，百花齐放，欣欣向荣，山河秀丽，风景如画。佳对。</span></p> 🌺 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梁金翠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙腾岁月新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对仗工整，形对意联，龙蛇共舞，岁月换新，新年新愿景，新岁新宏图。</span></p> 🌟 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赵显勇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙藏四野新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，意境关联，辞旧迎新，冬去春来。江山和四野二者词性不同。</span></p> 🍊 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梁小彬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雪飞天地新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙行家国昌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一比，对仗工整，形对意联，语言新颖，意境优美。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二比，对仗工整，形对意联，立意明确，蛇年来临之际，祝愿国家昌盛，人民幸福。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二比均为佳对。</span></p> 💢 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冀雅玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">福临天地欢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：对仗工整，形对意联，新年到来，福满人间，欢欣鼓舞，普天同庆。佳对。</span></p> 🌹 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘红作业：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莺歌岁月新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.自撰联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">题村朴诗联群：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">联苑新风春正好，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陶城古韵日争晖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.对仗工整，形对意联，美好的春天鸟语花香，崭新的岁月由衷歌唱。佳对。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.自撰联对仗工整，形对意联，抒发了对村朴诗联群的赞美之情，佳联。</span></p> 🌈 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘宽应</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莺歌草木香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：对仗工整，形对意联，新的一年新的景象，草长莺飞，鸟语花香。</span></p> <p class="ql-block">💢🌈</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闫秀萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙腾华夏昌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞江山秀；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">骏驰天地宽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：两联平仄合律，对仗工整，意境相联。第一联描写祖国昌盛，第二联描写天地广阔，意境上都很壮阔。佳联。[强][强][强]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">点评老师武达</span></p>