<p class="ql-block">文/竹林居士128</p><p class="ql-block">图/网络 致谢</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 家是最小国，国是千万家。家的幸福依托国的昌盛，国的繁荣源于千万家的奉献。让我们在蛇年新春愉快氛围中，感受家国情怀。今以“家”“国”为题，作诗钟七唱：</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:22px;">凤顶格：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">家乡山水连天际；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">国邑风光接海涯。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">燕颔格：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千</span><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">家</span><span style="font-size:22px;">共筑同心梦；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">举</span><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">国</span><span style="font-size:22px;">齐修致富桥。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鸢肩格：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">温馨</span><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">家</span><span style="font-size:22px;">院欢声绕；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">昌盛</span><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">国</span><span style="font-size:22px;">邦瑞气萦。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蜂腰格：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">勤俭持</span><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">家</span><span style="font-size:22px;">承祖业；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忠诚报</span><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">国</span><span style="font-size:22px;">绘宏图。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鹤膝格</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夫妻奋勉</span><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">家</span><span style="font-size:22px;">兴盛；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">党政廉明</span><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">国</span><span style="font-size:22px;">富强。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凫胫格：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春风化雨兴</span><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">家</span><span style="font-size:22px;">教；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋月穿云照</span><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">国</span><span style="font-size:22px;">邦。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雁足格：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">位卑岂敢忘忧</span><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">国</span><span style="font-size:22px;">；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">权重安能只顾</span><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">家</span><span style="font-size:22px;">。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗钟写作中应注意的几个问题：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1，避免重字：除了规则允许的情况，上下联尽量不出现重复的字。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2，忌合掌：上下联所表达的意思不能过于相似或重复，要有变化和拓展。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3，注意逻辑：内容要符合正常的逻辑和情理，避免生硬拼凑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4，选好钟眼：即在嵌字格中，所嵌的字要巧妙安排，使其自然融入且不突兀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5，控制节奏：语句的停顿和韵律要协调，读起来有节奏感。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6，避免生僻：用词不宜过于生僻冷涩，要保证读者能理解。（摘抄）</span></p>