赏孙春亭《迎春花灯秀名园》|| 诗友雅评集锦

雨花梦

美篇制作/雨花梦 <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px;">2025年济南市第44届天下泉城迎春花灯会,于大年初一(1月29日)璀璨启幕,为期一月。本次花灯会规模空前,融入多元文化内涵,巧妙运用前沿科技,阵容远超以往历届,为市民和游客带来一场前所未有的视觉盛宴。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗书名家孙春亭先生灵感迸发,创作了《迎春花灯秀名园》(散曲小令新韵十首),以优美细腻的笔触,深情赞美花灯盛会。与此同时,雨花在岁末年初期间,十余次亲临园区拍摄记录,精心制作美篇与视频并发布到网络,获众多朋友的点赞与鼓励,感谢诸位诗友挥笔撰诗点评。今选取数首作品与朋友同赏,共赴这场浪漫的新春之约。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">【中吕·喜春来】</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">试和孙春亭老师</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者:张素梅</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">新春佳景名园晒,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">新曲高吟画意揣,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">新声雅韵醉人怀。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">齐喝彩,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">同唱喜春来。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">如梦令·赞[双调·折桂令]</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者:听泉观松</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文似华亭二陆①,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">读罢心旌倾慕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">翰墨逸余香,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">字字联珠缀玉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">频顾,频顾,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如看红梅一树。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:二陆,陆机、陆云。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">步孙老韵[折桂令] </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">泉城花灯会</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者:于静</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px;">逛花灯、亦逛名泉,步步生辉,步步流连。妙手灵心,奇思巧构,扮靓新年。似银汉繁星落幔,若仙林绮梦盈帘。蛇舞龙盘,灯火频燃,玉树琼枝,惊世空前。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">[双调·折桂令]赏灯趵突泉</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">依韵敬和拱辰先生《灯亮趵突泉》</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/清莲子</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px;">赏花灯、游趵突泉,携手桥边,笑语盈园。妙塑成形,巧思绘彩,幻境如仙。射万道霞光若霰,聚寰球游子凭栏。水韵流烟,画蕴行云,诗唱珠联,迷醉凡间。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">和孙老[双调·折桂令] </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">灯亮趵突泉</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者:雨花梦</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px;">拍花灯、数访名园,霞满波涟,影戏池渊。锦树摇光,琼楼焕彩,绮径流丹。看画境游人醉酣,赏奇观笑语喧天。火树斑斓,星汉垂悬。盛世华筵,福满新年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">附[双调·折桂令]</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">灯亮趵突泉</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者:孙春亭</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 看花灯、再上名园,处处争妍,处处堪怜。巧手扎形,匠心赋艺,琴韵萦潭。聚万缕丹霞遍染,惹九域游众欣观。灯火珠环,诗涌流泉;画蕴华光,璀璨人间。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莺歌的评与诗: </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 孙老一首折桂令,精彩绝伦,精美珠玑,不同凡响,才华横溢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 雨花的一首曲和,文采飞扬,妙笔生辉,字字绮丽,句句旖旎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 两首散曲小令相呼相应,把个趵突泉描绘的天上飞虹,地上流金,辉煌新奇,细细品来让人沉醉其中!</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 遂赋诗点赞——</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">名园盛景入新篇,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">孙老挥毫韵万千。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">巧手匠心凝妙笔,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">琴音潭影化佳联。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">丹霞万缕灯中绘,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游众八方心上牵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗涌流泉添璀璨,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">华光画蕴颂流年。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">读《迎春花灯秀名园》美篇佳作有感(通韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者:侯庆水</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">丽曲佳词唱秀园,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗翁兴会正无前。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二安惊叹家乡美,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梦幻灯节靓济南。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">赏“迎春花灯秀名园”美篇有记</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者:赵玉霞</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十曲分将十景拈,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花灯又把幻形添。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">泉城今更多佳士,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">丽影清吟构美篇。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">赏《辛弃疾花灯感怀》(视频)有记</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者:莺韵</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">趵突泉边灯火灿,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">辛公意气跃眸中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">词章笔底藏兵甲,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">剑胆心间忆战戎 。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">醉里挑灯思复土,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梦回吹角念精忠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千年过往豪情在,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">映照泉波万世雄 。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">赏《咏明湖雨荷灯》(视频)有怀</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者:莺韵</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">明湖潋滟水云悠,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨润荷香醉眼眸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">粉靥含情波上舞,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">罗裳带露韵中留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风摇翠盖添佳景,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雾隐娇姿惹客愁 。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不与百花争艳丽,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">独倾雅意满芳洲。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美篇链接:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5aa8xnd4" target="_blank" style="font-size:20px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);"><b>迎春花灯秀名园--孙春亭</b></a></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px;">2025年济南市第44届天下第一泉迎春花灯会(视频)</span></p>