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<p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">[梅弄影]</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">《大年初三》感吟</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/闫贵生</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">大年初三,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">岁月匆匆如电转。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">春花待放枝头浅,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">暗香浮动,惹人怜。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">人生易老,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">镜里青丝成雪线。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">回首往昔多遗憾,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">且将心事,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">付与梅花管。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">《卜算子·年味浓》</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">岁序又更新,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">瑞彩盈芳甸。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">爆竹声声辞旧岁,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">笑语欢声遍。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">儿孙绕膝前,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">事业皆登巅。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">盛世繁华春意闹,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">福满人间院。</span></p>