<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">1月24日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读 (问天)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水映青螺夜照飞（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">行穷柳岸戴星归（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">顿觉秋风透薄衫（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>舟犁湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风抚林纱鸟语幽（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">吹寒玉笛踏霜行（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">再续春茶助谨修（琢玉）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风破云棉雁影高（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">观池碧水望鱼游（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">偶遇晨钟扰雅书（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕剪柳丝月影摇（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">望穿秋水盼郎归（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乍见晨烟动雅思（老农）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂林梢鹊语悠（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凭栏深夜望星沉（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又感霜风扰静思（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂荷盘鲤影惊（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凭栏高阁盼卿归（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乍见晨鸡扰绮思（若水）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风剪柳帘宿鸟惊（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饮干别酒逆风行（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">始觉秋凉沁薄衣（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴撒珠声燕梦甦 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">步轻幽径赏枫来 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">方觉月银泻满堂 (青丝羽衣)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">樵唱阳关柳色新（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">登临危阁带蟾归（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">方觉秋窗染暮寒（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风弄竹篱蛩语悠（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">行经曲岸盼舟归（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">顿觉蟾光伴竹窗（淡定）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风抚柳丝莺语轻（学荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">行春短棹送君归（学荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">偶见晨星伴静思（学荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风吻松额鹤侣惊（雨燕)(今)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">拂晨老圃探菊来（雨燕)(今)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又遇曙鸡扰妙思（雨燕）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日落山头雁影横（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">临渊碧水羡鱼来（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">再续香醪伴夜斟（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹤舞碧云月影稀（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">临望远浦待舟还（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又听晨钟绕梦思（八哥）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂柳烟舞步闲 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">望穿秋岭醉霞飞 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">再借漏声谱秀章 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">天接山屏斗影斜 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">送穷兰棹立江愁 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">唯见蜡灯怜苦修 (乡间晚风)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风曳柳丝栖鸟惊（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">候来美女绕花行（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">顿觉月辉透竹窗（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>舟犁湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月映江心水影摇 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">行舟远浦待潮来 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又见晨光启皓篇 (美西洋)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风抚柳绦鹤影悠 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">行迟古道望风来 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">疑觉晓筹催沈眠 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪带风弦渔火幽 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">偷闲凉岸鼓蛙藏 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但见银勾惹别愁 (听花无语)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拨竹弦笛韵欢（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐晚长亭辞雁去（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">行穷秋岭赏枫来（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽闻宵柝惊清读（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹借蟾光寄雅怀（文心）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">简 评：</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：舟犁湖镜蟾光碎 </p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 蟾光即月色、月光，唐皎然 《溪上月》：“蟾光散浦溆，素影动沦涟。”</p><p class="ql-block"> 湖镜：湖面清澈如镜，比喻的修辞手法。</p><p class="ql-block"> “犁”：划的意思，有拟人的成分。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 船儿划过平如镜面的湖面，把照入水中的皎洁的月光都扰动了。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句画面唯美，形象生动。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们画面同框、修辞恰当、生发自然的佳对是：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">舟犁湖镜蟾光碎</span></p><p class="ql-block">风破云棉雁影高</p><p class="ql-block">风拂荷盘鲤影惊</p><p class="ql-block">风剪柳帘宿鸟惊</p><p class="ql-block">风弄竹弦蛩语悠</p><p class="ql-block">天接山屏斗影斜 </p><p class="ql-block">风曳柳丝栖鸟惊</p><p class="ql-block">浪带风弦渔火幽 </p><p class="ql-block">风拨竹弦笛韵欢</p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：坐晚长亭辞雁去 </p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 情景联</p><p class="ql-block"> “坐晚”是动补式的短语，“长亭”是隐含主语“我”所处的环境，“雁去”按古诗文的传统，凡说“去”或“辞”，一般来说都是指飞向南方，即指秋季。“辞雁去”起情绪烘托的作用。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> （我）在秋天的长亭上坐了很晚，大雁都一群群地飞向南方去了。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们词工意美、节令相合、生发自然的佳句是：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">坐晚长亭辞雁去</span></p><p class="ql-block">行穷柳岸戴星归</p><p class="ql-block">行穷秋岭赏枫来</p><p class="ql-block">吹寒玉笛踏霜行</p><p class="ql-block">望穿秋水盼郎归</p><p class="ql-block">步轻幽径赏枫来 </p><p class="ql-block">行经曲岸盼舟归</p><p class="ql-block">望穿秋岭醉霞飞</p><p class="ql-block">送穷兰棹立江愁</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：忽闻宵柝惊清读</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 情景联</p><p class="ql-block"> 宵柝，tuò，释义是巡夜的梆声。出自唐·李商隐《马嵬》诗之二：“空闻虎旅传宵柝，无复鸡人报晓筹。”</p><p class="ql-block"> 清读：偏正短语，清静的阅读。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 忽然听见巡夜的梆声，惊扰了我清静的阅读。或我清静的阅读都被惊扰了。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句反衬出夜的寂静以及我夜读之久的情形。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们顺着这个思路，想象丰富、合理的佳对是：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">忽闻宵柝惊清读</span></p><p class="ql-block">犹借蟾光寄雅怀</p><p class="ql-block">顿觉秋风透薄衫</p><p class="ql-block">再续春茶助谨修</p><p class="ql-block">又感霜风扰静思</p><p class="ql-block">始觉秋凉沁薄衣</p><p class="ql-block">方觉月银泻满堂 </p><p class="ql-block">又遇曙鸡扰妙思</p><p class="ql-block">唯见蜡灯怜苦修 </p><p class="ql-block">顿觉月辉透竹窗</p><p class="ql-block">又见晨光启皓篇</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：元其 琢玉 大海 老农 荷花 若水 云朵 青丝羽衣 梧桐 淡定 学荣 雨燕 於发 八哥 燕燕于飞 乡间晚风 弦思 美西洋 笛里关山 听花无语 文心 </p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序） </p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片来自网络，致谢原作者</p>