《回家的路》《归心似箭》华夏微型诗社周周发同题第529期

巴山一松

<p class="ql-block">@所有人</p><p class="ql-block">华夏微型诗社第529期周周发同题创作开始了。</p><p class="ql-block"> 欢迎诗友们参与微型诗写作!请早日构思打磨!</p><p class="ql-block">备注:</p><p class="ql-block">1、投稿、收稿时间:</p><p class="ql-block">1月21日晚上7点——10点。</p><p class="ql-block">2、每人选投一首微型诗。</p><p class="ql-block">3、请单独发帖,不要自行接龙,由巴山一松老师统一收稿。</p><p class="ql-block">4、稿件选编到美篇,并由诗社老师予以点评。</p><p class="ql-block">5、本期题目:</p><p class="ql-block">①《归心似箭》 </p><p class="ql-block">②《回家的路》</p><p class="ql-block">6.出题老师:诗心</p><p class="ql-block">7、交流时可交流两首,投稿时只选投一首,收稿只收一首,点评也只点评一首。</p><p class="ql-block">8.优秀作品推荐“微诗坊”。</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/小乙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一条拉满的弓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">搭上渴望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">向着热切欢快地飞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/南湖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">再平常不过的距离</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如今走得却很艰难</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">最美的风景 化作永恒的思念</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/付光渝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">归途中 些许人烟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我从诗和远方</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">来到民间 奔向家园</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/古道白杨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">连着故乡的弦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曾经 演奏出多少离合悲欢</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如今 哀怨诉说凄凉孤单</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/岐麟散人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梦中 可劲的缩短</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山水之间架起一座高速桥</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">汽笛声中 我站在老宅门前</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/吉新</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一根不断的弦。弹着</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">高山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">流水——思乡曲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/杨继廷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">魂牵悠悠辽河水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梦绕袅袅炊烟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寻找儿时的记忆</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">归心似箭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/陈兴茂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">流浪天涯 酸甜苦辣尝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">思爹娘 风送瘦影飘故乡</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">重逢话凄凉</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">归心似箭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/吉新</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一张张焦急的脸庞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一趟趟高铁里的故事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">将一年的漂泊,在团聚中安放</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">归心似箭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/森林雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故乡是靶心,高铁如弓弦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">而我们一只只候鸟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">宛若飞矢</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 文/晗羲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">流星带走了岁月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">椿萱天庭携手</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤独何以倾诉?怀念、悲苦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/丹霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">小车蜗牛般前行</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春运临屛</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">华夏大迁徙上演</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/新</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">扬帆,为了加速</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不忘一直拥抱和贴面礼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">感恩托举半生的大海</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/徐宏安</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">两边围堵着杂草和树木</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">跟我磨蹭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">才放行急促的脚步</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/雪儿怀春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">天宽与地窄的体会</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幸福旅行快乐节奏最美奔波</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">都在短暂几天划上圆满</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/行天 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">多少次预计归期 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">多少回查看归程 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">还是无法定位</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/阳光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">很长很长</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">从童年走到暮年</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/绿柳枫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">列车如导线,把站台串联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">归心汇聚成汹涌电流</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">在思念的回路里,乡愁不短路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/赵正霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一条线 系着两头</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一端是家人 一端是我</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">中间 亲情在流淌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/执着</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">听鸟儿翻唱《思乡曲》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">看炊烟招手</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心,如离弦的箭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/随风</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一淌一淌似流水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">随着风的蒲公英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乘高铁看期待我,父母</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/吴琳玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">空气中弥漫幸福的味道</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">脚步越走越轻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">家的灯火 是最温柔的导航</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">归心似箭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/八乡人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">路不远</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">总是嫌慢</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">路很长却不会觉得长</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/八乡人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">车灯闪烁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">收音机里循环播放着</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">王杰的《回家》</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/东方虹雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">脐带 一头连着大山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一头连着游子</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梦里千百次地 扯疼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/半罐书生</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老花镜里,那团黑影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">从山坳转角冒出</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桌上老酒,已蹲守在杯口</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">归心似箭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/老妖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家牵扯游子每根神经</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">怎让父母儿女老伴泪朦胧</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晓行夜奔追赶不息</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">归心似箭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/家乡小河</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">偌大的世界,漫漫的旅途</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仿佛被攥在手里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我看到笑脸,听到呼唤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/康秀炎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一节一节削减路牌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心弦揪得生疼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">目光射向家的方向</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/往往醉后</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忆着 炊烟的味道</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">在那张返程票里陶醉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乡音 近了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回家的路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/巴山一松</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乡愁,已淌了一地</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雪花来填埋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">却又被零乱的脚步,拓印出</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">归心似箭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/蔡厚炳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风 吹净路上坷绊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">车轱辘 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">在故乡双眸里疾驰</span></p>