<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">1月17日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠 (问天)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新暖莺歌柳浪柔（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芳岭蝶嬉醉杏林（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">樵径飞花弄雨芳（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乍暖莺啼柳叶柔（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花径蝶欢沐暖阳（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曲径繁花经雨新（淡定）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">早夏鱼翻雪浪明 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳港云飞散早晴 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">流水拂荷坠粉香 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乍暖风摇柳眼迷 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芷岸柳摇醉暮烟 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草野浅花散暗香 (燕燕于飞)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">向午莺啼柳絮飞（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芷圃花开馨故园（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莲坞扁舟觅暗香（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暖蜂喧玉蕊香 (瘦竹清影)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草甸萤飞照夜阑 (瘦竹清影)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">樵径乱云抱暮烟 (瘦竹清影)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软 （问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乍暖莺啼柳色新（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓 （问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">绮陌花开映日红（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠 （问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">倚榭观荷弄影娇（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新暖鹅浮萍水青 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">衡皋禽集喧春晓 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">汀渚风生催苇新 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">游谷壁峰留线蓝 (青丝羽衣)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乍暖莺梳岸柳新（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">林苑蜂临吻杏花（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寥宇流云弄影闲（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">薄暮林暄山霭疏（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">衡皋禽集喧春晓 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野旷花开趁好时（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">远岭双鸦对日红（梧桐）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新晓莺啼柳色柔（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">衡皋禽集喧春晓 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">篱畔蝶嬉沐暖阳（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">樵径绽花送野香（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">复冷凫游淀水寒（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水淀凫游搅碧波（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">牧岭群松向日青（大海）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">略暖蜂鸣桃蕊鲜（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岫壑兽栖匿草窠（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔棹披霞照水彤（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">向晚蝉眠竹径幽 (震撼哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">涧壑鱼潜避水寒（震撼哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">临水丛桃聚软红（震撼哥）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">正午莺歌柳岸喧（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳岸燕飞沐日旸（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野渡闲花送淡馨（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乍暖蝶翩杏影娇（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃坞香浮醉晚风（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江岸临荷染素香（老六）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软（问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">向晚蝉鸣柳影长（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓（问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蓼渚鹭翔醉暮霞（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">樵径穿花送暗香（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">将晓鸡啼春梦消（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岩壁鹰翔俯世空（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">樵谷丛箐透日红（闲云）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乍暖莺穿柳浪轻 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳岸蛙鸣闹晚晴 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">傍水夭桃绽粉红 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">薄暮莺啼柳线长（学荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳港舟归响暮更（学荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">临水群荷映夕晖（学荣）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乍暖莺歌柳岸幽（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">兰浦蝶翩醉日斜（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">行径繁花过雨新（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">微暖鸦啼院竹幽（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳院莺歌唱晚风（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">流水携花送冷香（若水）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暖莺啼柳叶舒 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">兰畹蝶飞喜暖香 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">药院发花播暗香 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴燕啄芹泥软（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨后蛙鸣荷叶青（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘅皋禽集喧春晓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芷岸花繁沐早曦（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓溪排柳投阴翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">泛棹观花映日红（老农）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">简 评：</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：初晴燕啄芹泥软 </p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 芹泥，是指燕子筑巢所用的草泥。唐代杜甫《徐步》：“芹泥随燕嘴，花蕊上蜂须。”宋代曹冠 《踏莎行》：“芹泥带湿燕双飞，杜鹃啼诉芳心怨。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 刚刚放晴，燕子就辛勤地去啄软软的筑巢所用的草泥了。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句富含生机，富有诗意。但燕子衔泥筑巢的时节应当在早春，以春分前后为最盛。因此，所对的意象也应与之相合。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们节令相合，辞工意美的佳句是：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">初晴燕啄芹泥软</span></p><p class="ql-block">新暖莺歌柳浪柔</p><p class="ql-block">乍暖风摇柳眼迷</p><p class="ql-block">渐暖蜂喧玉蕊香</p><p class="ql-block">乍暖莺啼柳色新</p><p class="ql-block">乍暖莺梳岸柳新</p><p class="ql-block">新晓莺啼柳色柔</p><p class="ql-block">略暖蜂鸣桃蕊鲜</p><p class="ql-block">正午莺歌柳岸喧</p><p class="ql-block">乍暖蝶翩杏影娇</p><p class="ql-block">乍暖莺穿柳浪轻</p><p class="ql-block">薄暮莺啼柳线长</p><p class="ql-block">乍暖莺歌柳岸幽</p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：蘅皋禽集喧春晓 </p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 蘅皋：长有香草的水边之地，或沼泽。三国曹植《洛神赋》： “尔迺税驾乎蘅皋， 秣驷乎芝田。”清龚自珍《莺啼序》： “悄凝盼十里蘅皋，多少心期伤暮？”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 长有香草的水边之地，在春天的早晨，禽鸟们聚集在一起，欢快地竞相地鸣叫着。</p><p class="ql-block"> 春晓：偏正式的名词性的合成词，为春天的早晨的意思。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们景物同框，生发自然的佳句举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">蘅皋禽集喧春晓 </span></p><p class="ql-block">芳岭蝶嬉醉杏林</p><p class="ql-block">花径蝶欢沐暖阳</p><p class="ql-block">芷圃花开馨故园</p><p class="ql-block">林苑蜂临吻杏花</p><p class="ql-block">篱畔蝶嬉沐暖阳</p><p class="ql-block">柳岸燕飞沐日旸</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：钓溪排柳投阴翠</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 在垂钓的小溪边，长着成排的柳树，这些柳树投下浓阴，这浓阴翠绿翠绿的。</p><p class="ql-block"> 或简单理解：在垂钓的小溪边，长着成排的柳树，这些柳树投下翠绿翠绿的浓阴。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句句意简单，易于理解。写出了柳树的生机勃勃。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们调动听觉、视觉等感官，相互补充的佳句是：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">钓溪排柳投阴翠</span></p><p class="ql-block">樵径飞花弄雨芳</p><p class="ql-block">曲径繁花经雨新</p><p class="ql-block">流水拂荷坠粉香</p><p class="ql-block">草野浅花散暗香 </p><p class="ql-block">寥宇流云弄影闲</p><p class="ql-block">樵径绽花送野香</p><p class="ql-block">渔棹披霞照水彤</p><p class="ql-block">野渡闲花送淡馨</p><p class="ql-block">江岸临荷染素香</p><p class="ql-block">临水群荷映夕晖</p><p class="ql-block">行径繁花过雨新</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：琢玉 淡定 乡间晚风 燕燕于飞 元其 瘦竹清影 荷花 青丝羽衣 云朵 梧桐 八哥 大海 雨燕 震撼哥 文心 老六 美西洋 闲云 听花无语 学荣 於发 若水 笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序） </p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片来自网络，致谢原作者</p>