<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">1月10日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">悦赏蝶姿徐转身（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云栖晚岫鹤闲闲（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">徒有情丝枉自伤（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲看鱼嬉不出声（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风吹水榭燕翩翩（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">倘有心思最可怜（元其）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">贪恋钱财罔顾身（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风吹晓岸草萋萋（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若有亲情尚可依（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">怕断莺歌俱噤声 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风经竹径叶沙沙 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">自有情花另细寻 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">怕忧蝶踪慢转身（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春溪花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇岸柳叶翩翩（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">尽是浮云不必追（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">怕扰蝶眠慢移身（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风梳竹杪叶悠悠（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">情有心知不用求（八哥）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">痴望雁踪静倚楼（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风巡芳径蝶翩翩（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">既断情丝不必伤（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欲赞春姿久忘言 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云闲野渡水融融 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且展胸襟不必烦 (乡间晚风)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲沐月辉漫动身（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风临柳岸鸟翩翩（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若有真情必自争（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欲看鸟嬉慎摘巾（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风梳柳杪叶离离（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若有真情勿怕分（雨燕）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">为赏蝶姿静立身（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风巡水岸柳依依（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">偏守春情犹自痴（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">为慰香魂暖著衣（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风巡古渡柳依依（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若有挚情岂可抛（老农）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">观望月光慢仰头（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风临竹院柳摇摇（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">只要真情必定思（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">为解燕愁忙送泥（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳岸鸟喧喧（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莫负韵华当自知（文心）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且喜云心漫抚弦（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风梳夏柳影悠悠（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若有灵犀自可通（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">怕扰鸟歌半捲帘（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风吹秋圃柳依依（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">唯有相知自可期（於发）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲赏燕姿微侧身（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇竹苑叶悠悠（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如有挚情必可留（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欣揽东风暗拾香 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风舒杨柳絮绵绵 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">难舍挚情怎忍抛 (燕燕于飞)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">醉赏莺声悄过廊 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风穿水榭柳青青 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且具情怀兀自吟 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欲嗅荷香慢俯身（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风梳翠柳韵悠悠（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若有真心不必言（美西洋）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">容借月魂漫看梅 (瘦竹清影)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟笼晚郭草深深 (瘦竹清影)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">还有契机自可期 (瘦竹清影)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">应惜鸟声慢隐身 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风梳柳岸燕翩翩 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">应惜友情切莫耽 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不负春情早倚栏（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟窥竹径野茫茫（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常抱初心自得安（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐惊花梦轻携履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">独听鸟歌暗倚窗（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浣春篱花浅浅（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风临原野草青青（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本无缘份何须念（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如有真情也可追（若水）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">简 评：</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：恐惊花梦轻携履</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 花梦：灵活解释为花儿做梦，明末清初 · 邝露《并蒂莲为何夫子赋》：“香闺解刺熊罴筦，花梦遥通翡翠裙。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> （我）害怕惊扰了花儿做梦，轻轻地提着鞋（观看）。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句形象地写出花儿将开未开时的状态，以及我对此时观看花儿的喜悦之情。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们生发自然，词工意美的佳作举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">恐惊花梦轻携履</span></p><p class="ql-block">悦赏蝶姿徐转身</p><p class="ql-block">闲看鱼嬉不出声</p><p class="ql-block">怕断莺歌俱噤声 </p><p class="ql-block">怕忧蝶踪慢转身</p><p class="ql-block">欲赞春姿久忘言 </p><p class="ql-block">欲看鸟嬉慎摘巾</p><p class="ql-block">为赏蝶姿静立身</p><p class="ql-block">闲赏燕姿微侧身</p><p class="ql-block">醉赏莺声悄过廊 </p><p class="ql-block">不负春情早倚栏</p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：雨浣春篱花浅浅 </p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 浣：洗，洗涤的意思。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 小雨洗涤者春天的篱笆，花儿还未盛开，但已露出浅浅的颜色。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句写出了早春的春雨润花的特色，形象鲜明。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句“雨”是主语，可工对的意象不多，但师友们的对句佳句多多。节令相合、辞工意美的佳句略举几例：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">雨浣春篱花浅浅</span></p><p class="ql-block">云栖晚岫鹤闲闲</p><p class="ql-block">云闲野渡水融融 </p><p class="ql-block">风摇柳岸鸟喧喧</p><p class="ql-block">风吹水榭燕翩翩</p><p class="ql-block">风吹晓岸草萋萋</p><p class="ql-block">风巡芳径蝶翩翩</p><p class="ql-block">风临柳岸鸟翩翩</p><p class="ql-block">风巡水岸柳依依</p><p class="ql-block">风舒杨柳絮绵绵</p><p class="ql-block">风穿水榭柳青青 </p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：本无缘份何须念</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 感怀联</p><p class="ql-block"> 缘分：谓由于以往因缘致有当今的机遇。 宋吕南公《奉答顾言见寄新句》： “更使襟灵憎市井，足知缘分在云山。”明沈周《咏帘》 “知无缘分难轻入 敢与杨花燕子争。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 本来没有缘份，因而何必牵念、挂念 呢。出句表达了对待情感问题的洒脱的人生态度。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们紧承上联意旨，感怀恰切的对句是：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">本无缘份何须念</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">莫负韵华当自知</span></p><p class="ql-block">徒有情丝枉自伤</p><p class="ql-block">倘有心思最可怜</p><p class="ql-block">若有亲情尚可依</p><p class="ql-block">尽是浮云不必追</p><p class="ql-block">既断情丝不必伤</p><p class="ql-block">且展胸襟不必烦 </p><p class="ql-block">偏守春情犹自痴</p><p class="ql-block">若有真心不必言</p><p class="ql-block">常抱初心自得安</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：琢玉 元其 闲云 青丝羽衣 老六 八哥 ANG.ZQ 乡间晚风 弦思 雨燕 云朵 老农 大海 文心 荷花 於发 淡定 燕燕于飞 听花无语 美西洋 瘦竹清影 笛里关山 梧桐 </p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序） </p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片来自网络，致谢原作者</p>