<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="font-size:20px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">1月3日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹笛横吹牛背闲（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨歇燕裁千柳帘（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">入暮犹思把酒吟（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">铜铎频摇客路长 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山暖羊痴万草茵 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遇事不堪抱憾留 (乡间晚风)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">宝勒紧提衣袂飘（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖燕裁万柳帘（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">入夜时因念旧凄（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荷伞斜撑蜒影浮（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨过燕穿七彩门（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遇友常思步月行（老农）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">线辘慢松鸢翅欢（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳绿燕梳千缕丝（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别雁屡思送远迁（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风信频传客路遥（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风暖莺啼万树诗（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">把酒常期踏浪归（老六）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花影漫摇燕语欢（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖莺歌万木林（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遇友更欣把盏聊（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杏雨纷飞燕影斜（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋至鸿传千里书（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遇菊常思对酒吟（荷花）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">骨笛骤吹鹰啸昂 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日出莺歌绿柳台 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">聚友时常带醉归 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花瓣微摇蝶梦幽（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日落莺飞五柳家（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赏菊屡欣敬酒吟（淡定）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹笛叠吹牧曲欢 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬去燕登万户门 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">咏雁偏思揽水还 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霞彩渐离人影孤（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风暖莺鸣千柳丝（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">观水犹因有淡愁（弦思）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荷盏斜支舟楫闲（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夕至霞飞万寿山（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">到老方知绕膝欢（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">船桨紧摇木舸欢（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风动竹吟一笛歌（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">采菊常思归雁临（大海）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花影漫摇蝶梦酣 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雾散云开千岭娇 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">向晚常思把盏吟 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霜管狂鸣蝶翼香（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风暖莺穿千柳丝（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">爱菊偏迷把酒吟（梧桐）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃扇漫摇燕语娇（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋至雁书千里情（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遇酒常思共月吟（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹笛横吹牛尾闲（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨住霞描五彩图（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抚柳常思伴友居（闲云）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">朱履紧穿衣带飞 （文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日丽燕衔五彩泥（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">临晚偶思赏月吟（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">戍鼓频敲雁翼翩（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水涨鱼游千岛湖（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赋客常来照旧迎（若水）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莲步轻摇人语欢（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨歇莺题五柳诗（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">入夜仍思对月吟（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳鞭轻舞马蹄急（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹笛欢歌牛背悠 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春归蝶赴百花宴（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖莺邀五柳歌 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋每欲登高望（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">向晚那堪弄月吟 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">简 评：</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：柳鞭轻舞马蹄急</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 柳鞭，也叫杨柳鞭，意思是柳树枝做的马鞭。宋·晏几道《浣溪沙》：“白纻春衫杨柳鞭，碧蹄骄马杏花鞯。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 柳鞭轻轻挥舞，马蹄特别轻快。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句写出了春天的生机与活力，饶有趣味。出句为前四后三结构，有因果关系。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们节令相合，生发自然的佳对举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">柳鞭轻舞马蹄急</span></p><p class="ql-block">宝勒紧提衣袂飘</p><p class="ql-block">竹笛横吹牛背闲</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">竹笛叠吹牧曲欢</span></p><p class="ql-block">铜铎频摇客路长 </p><p class="ql-block">线辘慢松鸢翅欢</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">朱履紧穿衣带飞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：春归蝶赴百花宴 </p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 春天来临了，蝶儿们欢快的飞舞在百花丛中，好像是赴宴一般。</p><p class="ql-block"> “春归”是时间状语，“蝶赴宴”是句子的主干结构。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句运用了拟人的修辞手法，写出了春天的勃勃生机。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们的辞工意美的佳句是：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">春归蝶赴百花宴</span></p><p class="ql-block">雨歇燕裁千柳帘</p><p class="ql-block">山暖羊痴万草茵 </p><p class="ql-block">日暖燕裁万柳帘</p><p class="ql-block">柳绿燕梳千缕丝</p><p class="ql-block">风暖莺啼万树诗</p><p class="ql-block">夕至霞飞万寿山</p><p class="ql-block">风暖莺穿千柳丝</p><p class="ql-block">雨住霞描五彩图</p><p class="ql-block">日丽燕衔五彩泥</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：逢秋每欲登高望</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 感怀联</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 每逢秋天，（我）都要登上高处，像远处眺望。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句为隐藏主语句。为什么“逢秋登高望”，而且欲望还很强烈，是对句需要补充生发的内容。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们的辞工意美的佳句是：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">逢秋每欲登高望</span></p><p class="ql-block">入暮犹思把酒吟</p><p class="ql-block">入夜时因念旧凄</p><p class="ql-block">把酒常期踏浪归</p><p class="ql-block">遇友更欣把盏聊</p><p class="ql-block">遇菊常思对酒吟</p><p class="ql-block">聚友时常带醉归 </p><p class="ql-block">遇酒常思共月吟</p><p class="ql-block">临晚偶思赏月吟</p><p class="ql-block">赋客常来照旧迎</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：琢玉 乡间晚风 云朵 老农 雨燕 荷花 青丝羽衣 淡定 燕燕于飞 弦思 元其 大海 ANG.ZQ 梧桐 美西洋 闲云 文心 若水 於发 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序） </p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片来自网络，致谢原作者</p>