<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">岁尾诗怀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">孙福奎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">白驹过隙临年末，案上心情汝可知。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">只见朝霞深意笑，与吾盘点篓中诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">（辞暮尔尔，烟火年年（鹿鸣931期）靖远鹿鸣诗社 2025年01月03日 ）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">鹿鸣诗社每日一联选评</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:22px;"> 孙福奎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：负雪千年山有恨【陈扶军】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：以山、雪为载体，表达被压迫者心声。雪似大自然的暴君，压在山身上千万年，山岂能无恨！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：送舟万里水含情【王保恒】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：舟行万里水相助，水之情当咏。对句中的水与出句中的雪相对照，一正一反，十分鲜明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：莳花三径爱无垠【张正聪】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：莳花三径，表达心中之爱、之情，一种不寻常追求。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：行舟万里水无声【刘卫胜】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：借助水，行舟万里。水不仅有功，且默默无声，那么谦虚，多么可贵的品质。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：读书万卷笔惊神【高和平】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：杜甫诗曰：“读书破万卷，下笔如有神。”化用古诗，惊字有味。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：染霜两鬓岁无情【李耀辉】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：岁月无情人有情，不叹息，永奋进，焕发夕阳光彩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：蓄粮万斗户无忧【张弓】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：家中蓄粮家无忧，国中蓄粮国无忧。粮食是家国稳定的基石，太重要了。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：穿云一梦枕含情【邓小宁】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：好美的梦，好美的画面。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：吟诗几度夜无眠【徐振国】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：爱诗至深，骚人情怀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：镶星亿座昊无边【赵镜人】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：天的博大胸怀，堪敬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：沐霞半响叶怀情【王荣堂】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：霞光使叶更美，懂得感恩，人当效仿。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">新年咏怀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">孙福奎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">辞旧迎新胸臆抒，心潮滚滚向长天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风光增美人增力，老骥驰行更策鞭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">冬至有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">孙福奎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天冷我心热，诗行飞院梅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">新苞迎雪绽，浩气誉花魁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">（江山放眼云邀伴，瑞气盈怀步渐频（鹿鸣932期）靖远鹿鸣诗社 2025.1.29）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">步正聪社长诗韵新岁书怀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">孙福奎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春节到来欢乐天，老翁增岁展新篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">含情赏画怡山水，带兴吟诗会圣贤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">醇酒斟杯能大醉，月光照枕可深眠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">永持雅趣葆心态，五福纳祥高寿延。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">年 味</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">孙福奎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">喜迎春节万家中，炖肉做馍忙略同。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吾放灶台诗一首，掺和年味醉皤翁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">（好景当从花甲始，林泉高致寿康延（鹿鸣933期）靖远鹿鸣诗社 2025年02月02日）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">元夕观灯</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">孙福奎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">上元美景夺人目，火树银花布满城。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">盏盏金蛇灵兔挂，时时欢乐瑞祥迎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">灯光璀璨顽童瞅，谜语殊奇老叟评。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仿佛嫦娥舒袖舞，同心共寄九州情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">元宵节</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">孙福奎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">盏盏花灯呈异彩，汤圆香味万家飘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">约来皎月杯斟酒，画意诗情在此宵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">（弹冠当庆太平日，挥笔同题锦绣篇（鹿鸣936期）2025.2.14）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">春雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">孙福奎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">好雨伴春滋大地，沙沙乐奏喜人心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仰头田里麦苗赞，亮嗓枝间小鸟吟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">活力增添繁茂旺，彩毫描绘绿红深。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是谁展出唐诗句，元稹高才世众钦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">（金衣几点韶光促，香雨一帘风日迎（鹿鸣938期）2025.3.9）</span></p>