——律绝四首—— 学作、年轮、风月

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<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一,七律 学作</span></p><p class="ql-block"> (上平四支)</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心潮猝涌赋诗词,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">违律犯孤韵押歧*。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">少入理工文路短,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老揶平仄格粘痴*。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">消遣寥寂融翰墨,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">充数滥竽自觉奇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风雨繁华擦影去,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">空留岁月梦依稀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">注释:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">*违律犯孤韵押歧——指不懂诗词的格律、孤平、韵脚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">*格粘——指律诗的格律粘对。</span></p> <p class="ql-block">苏轼雕像</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二,七律 年轮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> (上平十一真)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暑往寒来雪雨循,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍桑岁月绘年轮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冰天枯树葳蕤少,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">炙地轮纹潋滟伸*。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鲜有人生多惬意,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常见古槐茂枯身。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">子推归隐林中难*,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">骄横贪官假作真。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">注释:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">*炙地轮纹潋滟伸——炙地,指夏天。冷热更迭,树木生长冬枯夏茂,快慢相间而成年轮,年轮随气候冷热,光线充缺自然变化,形成酷似水中潋滟一般的美妙花纹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">*子推——指晋国大臣介子推。相传子推力助晋国公成就大业,而后放弃荣华富贵,辞官归隐山林。晋国公为寻找介子推火烧绵山,以逼其出山,不料子推拥母林中而焚,不为荣华富贵所动。子推鼎力为国为民,不图享乐,在民间传为佳话,后人为纪念介子推,在每年清明节后祭祀“寒食节”。难:遇难。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">唐槐</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三,七绝 风</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> (下平二萧)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒风冷月夜萧萧,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雪野晶莹影寂寥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">残焰借风飘异彩,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽留夜景享良宵。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四,七绝 月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> (下平十一尤)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">皓月寒辉傍阁楼,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">人生好梦美难求*。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">当缘满月多留步,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">何奈风尘有律周。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">注释:</p><p class="ql-block">*好——喜好。</p>