农民文学社(村朴诗联群)诗联佳作欣赏2024篇(总第438)

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<p class="ql-block">2024.12.11</p><p class="ql-block">指导老师无为斋主人</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">1</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">出句与对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">2</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">自撰诗联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">出题老师刘建和</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘建和</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">盼郎望月锦书来。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">◎◎◎◎◎◎</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">程树兰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">抱琴弹拔寸心宽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">自撰联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">暮雪飘窗欺梅蕊;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">红泥焙酒饮愁思。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎*</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘红作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">抚琴捻曲别情生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.自撰诗联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">悼琼瑶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一帘幽梦,雪花飘落还珠泪;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">几度夕阳,梅烙横斜婉珺歌。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赵显勇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">面湖观影逸情生。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梁金翠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凭栏望月泪花盈。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">王占安</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凭栏远眺暗恨生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝 闺中怨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凭栏远眺暗恨生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">长亭一去无音讯,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜夜断肠日日空。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">霍成奎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">倚窗把酒醉颜憔。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:看花作赋笑颜开。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一一郭保旺</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">廉永明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">推窗迎雪瑞祥生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12月11日喜逢大雪</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">王晓娟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吟诗作赋雅心高。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冀雅玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衔杯翻卷雅情生。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">张期望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">焚香泼墨笑颜开。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">◎◎◎◎◎◎。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">许晋武</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">临窗望远诗意生。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">温丕彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">看花零落惋情生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">听钟嘀嗒憾心浓。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">&◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">程树光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">当窗吟咏逸情飞。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">***◎◎◎◎◎◎&&</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">郭彩萍作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">当窗顾盼故人归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、自撰联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忆少时</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">淡饭粗茶香日月;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">油灯土炕伴春秋。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">◎◎◎◎*******</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">王海良作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">翻相回念怆情生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.自撰诗联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">联挽平遥鸟虫体字画非遗传承人温晋享老先生</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寿享九三,忠心赤胆为人师表,满腔正气立身树范;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">勤劳一世,育女养儿启智成才,四世同堂德厚功高;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一卷鸟虫流雅韵;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三千桃李悼恩师。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">联贺大连楹联协会八代会</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">卅五载喷珠吐玉,韵海涌澜,滨城锦绣;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">万千贤振藻扬葩,联涛奏曲,华夏辉煌。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">***◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">耿宝异</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">倚案题诗灵感生。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎**</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闫秀萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仰天感慨岁华流。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">*◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">崔晓清</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">倚窗守望憾心生。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">◎◎◎◎◎***</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梁小彬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朝阳起舞俗尘空。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">王占安</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凭栏眺望暗恨生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝 闺中怨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凭栏眺望暗恨生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">长亭一去无音讯,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜夜断肠日日空。</span></p> <p class="ql-block">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">宋红霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对镜梳妆愁绪起;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">隔屏诉说泪痕拋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句形对意联。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句承接出句,将愁绪发泄出来,做到时空统一,意境紧密关联。佳对!</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评老师程树兰</span></p>