<p class="ql-block">2024.12.18</p><p class="ql-block">指导老师无为斋主人</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><u>1</u></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><u>出句对句</u></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><u>闲时喜让书香占；</u></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><u>2</u></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><u>自撰诗联</u></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"><u>出题与点评老师</u></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"><u>程树兰</u></b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赵显勇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">室雅常闻翰墨香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、出句中的“闲时”为定心结构，对句中的“室雅”为主谓结构。闲时/室雅为失对。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、“香”字重复出现。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘红作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙里羞为食色酬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、自撰联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">题联孔子《左传》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">情关世代民生意，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">兴至江山国色风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、对句合律。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">釆用反对手法，写出与对句完全不同的生活乐趣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、自撰联入木三分，佳联！反映刘红学养之深。好样的，向你学习！</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">廉永明作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">静夜常随画意游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句形对意联。对句承接出句，共同描绘出文人雅士的高雅生活状态。让人浮想联翩。佳对！</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">王占安作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">假日悲从铜臭忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">假日悲从铜臭忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">淡定从容过岁月，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">且听鸟唱与风扬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、对句合律。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、王老师把出句当作一种理想中的生活状态，对句采用反对手法写出现实的无奈。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梁金翠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老去欣凭墨韵留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">形对意联。对句承接出句的意境，共同描绘出一种文人雅士生活情趣。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">霍成奎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">醉意平添墨韵酣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句合律。对句的意境是醉意中泼墨挥毫，酣畅淋漓。大有书圣王羲之之风范。与出句相得益彰，彼此呼应！</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘建和</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙里悄约诗韵来。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">形对意联。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句与出句彼此呼应，意境承接紧密，给人以“如切如磋，如琢如磨”的谦谦君子之风范。佳对！</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">郝建富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙处欣将墨韵留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句合律。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">从对句的意境看，似乎是以“抄书为生”的一种职业，否则逻辑上说不通。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">武达</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晚岁勤将诗句题。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">形对意联。对句与出句形成一种功到自然成的默契，意境承接紧密。也许这是“村朴诗联群”诸位的追求所在。佳对！</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘宽应</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙里欣闻墨韵来。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句合律。对句本身前后逻辑矛盾，表意不清。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">郭彩萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晚岁深知墨韵添。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">形对意联。对句承接出句，将意境升华，积累书香之后，墨韵的添加更將增加文学的韵味，于是产生了一种喜爱与渴望之情。佳对！</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冀雅玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">静处频吟诗稿成。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙里欣将志业酬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句1，形对意联。在意境上，对句是出句的升华，与出句彼此呼应，构勒出一幅“如切如磋，如琢如磨”的风雅风范。佳对！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句2，釆用反对手法，从实处着笔，描绘普通人的真实生活。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">两组对句，两种风格。通俗精练，表意顺畅。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">程树光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙里频将掌故添。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句合律。从对句的意境上看，这是将研究古今中外历史作为终身事业的大家。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">许晋武</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">静处欣邀月影陪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对仗工整。对句描绘出另一种悠闲状态，与出句形成互补。画面感十足。佳对！</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">许晋武</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">静处欣邀月影陪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对仗工整。对句描绘出另一种悠闲状态，与出句形成互补。画面感十足。佳对！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">程永红</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">静处欣能灵气添。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">形对意联。对句承接出句意境，将出句做为铺垫，进一步升华。佳对！</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">崔晓清</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">静坐诚待挚友来。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、“闲时”为定心结构，“静坐”为状心结构。闲时/静坐，结构不对应。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、意境不关联。对句所反映的意境与出句无任何关联，完全是另一种意境。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">王海良作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙罢常沉墨海游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、自撰联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">联贺天津楹协四代会</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">联界流芳，雅韵两行书凤藻；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">津门焕彩，俊贤四届续龙章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对仗工整。书香/墨海，二者总伴文人墨客之左右，对句与出句彼此互补，共绘出文人生活常态。佳对！</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">温丕彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">静处欣挥墨迹狂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.自撰诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 《 耕 读 》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳畔田畴两季忙，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">篱萝瓜豆伴溪阳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书馨占，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">静处欣挥墨迹狂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋月春风情不察，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">捻须击案韵犹香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">敲词但有篇臻日，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">挚友咸邀共满觞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、对仗工整。对句与出句在意境上互补，书香不占即墨迹狂，书香占了即墨迹不狂。这也许是文人雅士的常态。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、律诗《耕读》，记录真实，表意清晰。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">耿宝异</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙里爱将墨韵侵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句合律。对句前后意思不够通畅，舞文弄墨之亊，岂能在“忙里”接近？不合常理。个见。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梁小彬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙里乐教农事缠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对仗工整。对句釆用反对手法，与出句形成合情合理的正反互补。佳对！</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：忙罢欣听鸟语鸣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一一郭保旺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对仗工整。对句描绘出另一种闲情逸趣，与出句彼此互应，提供“闲时读书，累时赏鸟”的选择。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">崔晓清</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙后欣闻乐曲来。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对仗工整。对句与出句的意境不关联，且用词欠妥。“乐曲来”有为对仗而对仗之嫌。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">重改作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赵显勇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙后欣观翰墨浓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对仗工整。对句与出句形成劳逸结合，彼此有爱的消遣方式。意境互补，兴趣皆在一处。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赵文英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书诗占，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙里尽情笔墨贪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书诗占，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙里情挥笔墨贪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">无限夕阳红艳缀，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">畅欢澄浸画屏参。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">“喜让”是状心结构，“尽情”是动宾结构。喜让/尽情，失对。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书诗占，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙里偷将笔墨贪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书诗占，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙里偷将笔墨贪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">无限夕阳红艳缀，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">畅欢澄浸画屏参。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">程树兰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲时喜让书香占；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">他日犹期心境升。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对仗工整，上下联意境关联，思路清晰出彩，可谓眼到，思达，心领，且深层次地升华了出句，强调了学识和修养的重要性，妙对！</span></p>