<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">12月28日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履 (问天)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暄江水鸭知情（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花凭时雨傲妆庭（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风流清晓酒馨堤（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云飞柳岸鸟知情（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花凭晓日傲妆园（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风梳柳幔鸟藏身（淡定）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水摆烟柳鸟依人 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花辞北树慢漂流 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">星垂平野士吟词 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云生水涧鹭含情（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草经豪雨喜盈川（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风吹麦地妇援巾（元其）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云遮绿柳鸟知心（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃依暖日漫妆山（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇芦荡鹭归巢（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨滋林圃鸟关情（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃凭丽日悦妆园（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风吹渔棹妪丢巾（雨燕）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">露凝晨草叶传情（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃凭晓日笑迎春（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨淋樵径客披蓑（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨翻绿浪水含情（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">禾承春雨慢侵堤（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风侵游舫客添衣（老农）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">松栖翠岭意留云 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪因喜雨乐吟江 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟停桃坞媪簪花 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟迷古渡鸟迎人（秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花依暖日肆开颜（秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花开野径叟凝香（秋生）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟飘晓岸柳摇情（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花遭夜雨乱零阶（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风吹征路女丢纱（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语（问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨润秋岭叶含情（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸（问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃依暖日醉吟春（美西洋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履（问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霞飞帆影客迷津（美西洋）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日移柳影鸟传情（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕凭暖日醉鸣枝（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雾遮渡口妪迷途（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨摧杏蕊鸟伤情（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕寻新宅急衔泥（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风吹水榭客吟诗（文心）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霞涂水面浪吟诗（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花依飞蝶漫传香（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨淋牧地叟藏身（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨滋江岸柳舒眉 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芦乘春雨猛钻天 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风吹去棹客扬帆 (乡间晚风)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨飞篱圃蝶藏身（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃依春日惬馨园（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟归野渡女收篙（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日升晓树鸟营巢（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杏依春雨媚花园（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风临渔港叟抛锚（於发）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨滋晓叶露含情 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鱼凭春水喜腾空 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风吹行径客牵衣 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨滋沃野草知恩（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕衔新绿巧营巢（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇芦荻鹭惊滩（Ang.zq）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨滋野草叶知情（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草依春雨漫抽青（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨淋渡口妪披蓑（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂春枝花解语（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日临晨树鸟聊天（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳仗东风狂舞岸（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕逢春日醉飞空（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪拍钓矶翁湿履（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟行苇荡鹭惊飞（弦思）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">简 评：</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：风拂春枝花解语</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 春枝：指春日草木的枝条或花枝。南朝·陈·贺循《赋得夹池修竹》：“来风韵晚迳，集凤动春枝。”</p><p class="ql-block"> 解语：会说话。唐司空图《杏花》：“解笑亦应兼解语，只应慵语倩莺声。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 春风吹拂着草木的枝条或花枝，仿佛花儿会说话似的。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句运用了拟人的修辞手法，形象地写出了春天的勃勃生机。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们的词工意美的佳句举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">风拂春枝花解语</span></p><p class="ql-block">日暄江水鸭知情</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">雨摧杏蕊鸟伤情</span></p><p class="ql-block">云生水涧鹭含情</p><p class="ql-block">雨滋林圃鸟关情</p><p class="ql-block">露凝晨草叶传情</p><p class="ql-block">烟飘晓岸柳摇情</p><p class="ql-block">日移柳影鸟传情</p><p class="ql-block">雨滋江岸柳舒眉 </p><p class="ql-block">雨飞篱圃蝶藏身</p><p class="ql-block">雨滋沃野草知恩</p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：柳仗东风狂舞岸 </p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 东风指春风。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 柳树（或柳条）依仗着春风，欢快地在岸边飘舞。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句为主干（主谓宾）是：柳舞岸。“仗东风”“狂”均作状语。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们辞工意美的佳句是：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">柳仗东风狂舞岸</span></p><p class="ql-block">花凭时雨傲妆庭</p><p class="ql-block">草经豪雨喜盈川</p><p class="ql-block">桃凭晓日笑迎春</p><p class="ql-block">花遭夜雨乱零阶</p><p class="ql-block">燕凭暖日醉鸣枝</p><p class="ql-block">燕寻新宅急衔泥</p><p class="ql-block">花依飞蝶漫传香</p><p class="ql-block">桃依春日惬馨园</p><p class="ql-block">草依春雨漫抽青</p><p class="ql-block">燕逢春日醉飞空</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：浪拍钓矶翁湿履</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 钓矶：钓鱼时坐着的岩石。宋陆游《晚春感事》：“幽居自喜浑无事，又向湖阴坐钓矶。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 浪花拍打着钓鱼时坐着的岩石，钓翁的鞋都被打湿了。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句为前四后三结构，具有前因后果的关系。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们生发自然、符合逻辑，辞工意美的佳句是：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">浪拍钓矶翁湿履</span></p><p class="ql-block">舟归野渡女收篙</p><p class="ql-block">风流清晓酒馨堤</p><p class="ql-block">风吹麦地妇援巾</p><p class="ql-block">雨淋樵径客披蓑</p><p class="ql-block">风侵游舫客添衣</p><p class="ql-block">雾遮渡口妪迷途</p><p class="ql-block">风吹水榭客吟诗</p><p class="ql-block">雨淋牧地叟藏身</p><p class="ql-block">风临渔港叟抛锚</p><p class="ql-block">风摇芦荻鹭惊滩</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：琢玉 淡定 燕燕于飞 元其 荷花 雨燕 老六 老农 青丝羽衣 秋生 闲云 美西洋 八哥 文心 大海 乡间晚风 云朵 於发 笛里关山 ANG.ZQ 若水 弦思 </p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序） </p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片来自网络，致谢原作者</p>