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<p class="ql-block">一、典例示范</p><p class="ql-block"> 假定你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Rudy对中国美食很感兴趣。你们班最近组织了一次包饺子活动,请用英语给他写一封邮件,介绍此次活动。内容包括:1. 活动的经过;2. 体会或感受。</p><p class="ql-block">参考词汇:生面团dough;馅filling</p><p class="ql-block">注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。</p> <p class="ql-block">二、文思梳理</p><p class="ql-block"> 本文是一封告知信,也是一封介绍信,向朋友介绍班里组织的包饺子活动,并分享活动感受。所以,本文时态以一般过去时为主;人称以第一人称为主。</p> <p class="ql-block">三、谋篇布局</p><p class="ql-block"> 全文分三段来写。第一段:表明写信目的并简要介绍包饺子活动;第二段:详细介绍包饺子活动过程并分享感受;第三段:重申目的并表示期待。</p> <p class="ql-block">四、范文欣赏</p><p class="ql-block">Dear Rudy,</p><p class="ql-block"> Nothing is more exciting than knowing that you have a passion for Chinese food. So I am writing to share an amazing activity with you,where we made dumplings together by ourselves.</p><p class="ql-block"> To start with,the activity was launched by our headteacher in our school dining Hall. We gathered with materials needed to make dumplings,ranging from dough to filling. We were divided into several groups,some of whom made dumpling wrappers and others of whom made dumplings. Finally we made it due to our cooperation and careful labour. Although those dumplings varied in sizes and shapes,they were the most delicious ones we had ever tasted.</p><p class="ql-block"> We were more than delighted and proud because we not only realized the meaning of labour,but also we enjoyed the joy of teamwork. If only you had joined us.</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:right;">Yours Sincerely</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:right;">Li Hua </p>