2024年所写诗词——辞旧迎新之际，感慨颇多2024.12

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<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">　　2024年共写诗词85首。平均每月7首。有20多首登上《都市头条》平台，列为红榜，评为精华。是我学写诗词以来数量最多的一年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我写诗词主要是记录生活，自娱自乐。诗词讲究字、词、音、韵、律、对仗；环境、心境、意境；词美、格高、意新、味厚。既有描写，也有抒情议论，形象思维。我是有感而发，边学习边写作，留下时光印迹。感谢铁岭市《老文艺家协会微信群》众诗友每天有新作使我能欣赏！感谢《铁岭诗词》主编丛延春鼓励！感谢《都市头条》总编老师鼓励！感谢警界诗人李玉恒警友互动鼓励！感谢铁岭市委党校教授、老同学张宪尧的鼓励！感谢《青年作家网》平台的鼓励！感谢《中华诗词学会通讯》期刊按时给会员邮寄，也感谢中国诗词大家于海洲先生赠送学写诗词专业书籍《诗词曲律与写作技巧》，使我学习有借鉴。多年的努力，有的作品虽已登上知名平台，获得大、小奖励，但仍有瑕疵，我写诗来颇费力，常常二句三年得。今后愿诗词继续伴随我的生活，兴致勃勃！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.12</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">以下录的是2024年全年所写诗词</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·新年有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初升旭日启新轮，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">锦绣河山喜庆春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">南北东西同祝贺，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">手机微信响铃频！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.元旦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·2024年佳和志愿者迎新年联欢会感作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">耕耘漫步又新年，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">破浪乘风意盎然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">携手并肩来助力，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">摘星揽月共登山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉壶滴漏催春早，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">韵味斟来敬众仙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恭祝今朝同道友，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">龙腾华夏永着鞭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.1.2</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·感周总理远行48年</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">辛劳一世为人民，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">尽瘁躹躬不朽魂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伟绩丰功如日月，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">千秋万代照乾坤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·怀念周恩来总理</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">海棠依旧吐芬芳，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">叶绿花香溢远方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">年少读书怀大志，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">终身理政为国昌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清风两袖如明镜，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冰月英才似海江。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每到年初思总理，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗词花海寄飞觞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.1.8</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·赞佳和社区“剪爱志愿者服务队”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">剪爱队员服务好，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常年坚守为居民。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">朝迎旭日精神爽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">步入翁家笑脸欣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨雪风霜难阻挡，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">阳光朗月伴耕耘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雷锋故事传承美，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一股清流总胜春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.1.8</span></p> <p class="ql-block">七律·感佳和社区预备党员孙莉莉转正</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">从来高尚令人钦，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">服务为民本我心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">傲雪迎风当表率，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">家园靓美显精神。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">千家巧理和谐共，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诚信勤劳正果真。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">带领居民奔梦想，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">英豪励志画图新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：孙莉莉，佳和社区业委会主任、志愿者服务队副队长</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.1.10</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赠警友、好友桂宝红</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">女子豪杰有宝红，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">做工奉献榜留名。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">继承夫志来从警，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">迈入公安踏远程。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">服务社区民赞誉，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十佳专刊报高评。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">才德兼备沃利恋，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">网漫八年正果成。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">万水千山欣挚侣，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">真情漫旅世人称。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：桂宝红，在工厂工作时被评为省劳动模范，当警察是铁岭市首届十佳民警之一，铁岭日报周日专刊曾整版面介绍她的事迹，美国人沃利先生三次来中国苦恋她八年，现宝红已生活在美国，优秀的人不分国界，爱情不分国界。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.1.16</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">照片为宝红、沃利在美国结婚时与证人合影</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·寒假里照顾小孙子生活感作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闹钟铃响动身行，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">过巷穿街几换乘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">迈进厨房精细做，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烹出美味胃中盈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陪孙上课何谈苦，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">立世躬耕尽所能。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">年过七旬难惧老，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">成才小树借东风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：我家住沈河区，儿子家在浑南区。我们早7点离家乘公交、换乘二次地铁，给小孙子做早、午饭，陪他上课感作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.1.16</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·复玉恒《感生活中的“小确幸”》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">小确幸中自觉舒，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心情愉悦靓容姝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">知足常乐无烦恼，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春韵雪飘赏美图。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：小确幸，这个概念源自日本作家村上春树的随笔作品，由翻译家林少华引入现代汉语中，小确幸不仅仅是物质层面的满足，更多的是精神上的愉悦和内心深处的宽容与满足感。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">写于2024.1.19</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">附：玉恒原作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">小确幸中怡自舒，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">健康长寿此中出。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春花秋月情无限，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莫负人生晩景图。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.1.19</span></p> <p class="ql-block">律诗·赠老领导、警友杨伟生</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">知青从警选精英，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">预审侦查似夜鹰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">脚踏征程开大步，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曾经一线率群雄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">几番岗位责权重，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挥手交通故事丰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐阵中心八面稳，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七旬办案驾车行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长途取证为真理，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不辞辛苦解民情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：杨伟生，曾任铁岭市公安局预审处长、西丰县公安局局长、市司法局副局长、市交警支队支队长、110指挥中心主任。退休后当律师，为企业和当事人提供法律服务，是领导层中难得的人才。近日，闻其驾车远赴北京、山西阳泉办案取证往返四天二千五百公里，有感而作。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.1.24</span></p> <p class="ql-block">七律·<span style="font-size:20px;">佳和社区庆新年联欢会感作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">佳和民众喜迎春，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雪韵含情气象新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">戏曲悠扬弘国粹，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舞姿优美悦人心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">年年岁岁联欢会，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岁岁年年血脉深。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">共庆龙年歌好运，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红红火火众欢欣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.2.</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•2024年立春有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">立春腊月龙年早，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">洒满阳光始见馨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">微信响铃频问好，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">生机无声悄滋新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗人吟诵豪情爽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春饼品尝美味淳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山水绵长天野远，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">东西南北绿渐深。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：第八句“渐”字，此处读音jian，第一声，是浸，渐染的意思。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.2.4</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·龙年春节观舞台剧《沈阳印记》有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">盛京宝地祖先居，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">辽水奔流永不俗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">世代相传豪气勇，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">辉煌洒落四方书。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">英雄城市名天下，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古往今来故事姝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">胜迹犹存风韵美，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">关东儿女绘新图。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.2.14</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">参加社区猜灯谜，庆元宵活动有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​年到元宵聚友暄，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花团锦簇笑声欢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​红黄蓝绿猜谜奖，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​一碗汤圆情万千。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​2024.2.22</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">观“同学友谊群”孙德胜同学上传西丰闹元宵视频有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block">一、</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上元自古人间庆，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">圆月初轮喜气浓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">吉日良辰观美景，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秧歌锁呐悦心声。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">通衢楼舍狂欢夜，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">灯火万家醉玉虹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">朵朵礼花菊绽放，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">千姿百态令人倾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">西丰大地龙腾起，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫气东来祥瑞融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我看视频生感慨，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">期颐逃鹿幸福增。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：逃鹿，西丰古名称。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逃鹿城内锣鼓喧，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舞龙耍狮赛摇船。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">东风紫气祥云罩，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">盛世太平景色妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.正月十五元宵夜写于沈阳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​图片为视频截图</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·劝学</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风又起百花妍，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学子欣然入杏坛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每日专心听教导，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">经年累月渐博涵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">少时就要心存志，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老去何谈岁感难。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">流水光阴无往返，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苦读乐趣自驱寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.3.2</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诉衷情·写给女神节</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">女神节日不寻常，开启崭新章。古今故事人敬，豪气世传扬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">慈母爱，佑儿郎，盼家康。为国强富，重担肩挑，绚丽辉煌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：此词以陆游·《当年万里觅封侯》双调44字为例。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.3.4</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝—惊蛰·北方有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">惊蛰大地暖阳升，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">万物复苏绿渐浓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又见北方春色好，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃红柳嫩始相争。</span></p><p class="ql-block">2024.3.5</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">满庭芳·龙年龙抬头日感怀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">（本词采用晏几道体，双调九十五字）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">龙角星升，东方瑞象，大田春暖开耕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仰翻云雾，杏月有神情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">敬法祀龙数首，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">自然象、星运循成。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">炎黄古，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">先民信仰，华夏故乡龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">龙能，兴致雨，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">胸怀大志，天地穿行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五州扫阴霾，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">笑建勋功。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">华夏苍龙傲世，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">无畏惧，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">正气威风。神州众，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">龙之后代，屹立九州荣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024年2月初二</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">虞美人·植树节</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">（本词采用南唐·李煜双调五十六字，前后段各四句，两仄韵，两平韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挖坑栽树苗生长，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">培育精心养。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荒原沃土万千乡，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">绿水青山回首已新妆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">众人洒水齐心创，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又是一年爽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劲风吹荡遍八方，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">子子孙孙乘我辈清凉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.3植树节</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">好事近·贺杨七芝“文韵、诗意三清路”二本新书出版</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">（宋祁体·双调45字，押仄声韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">近日，闻青年作家网继杨七芝《风雨三清路》书出版后，又策划出版了《文韵三清路》《诗意三清路》，为她高兴，遂填此词以示祝贺！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">青网有佳音，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">才子女杰书迅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">出版韵书三本，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">美文芳香品。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗书乐画很精通，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三部曲留印。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故事好心相契，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">锦绣中华震。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：杨七芝，曾是上海市知青，北大荒兵团战士。上海总工会专职画师，现居三清山，是著名书画家、作家，百度可捜出一大堆词条。我与她在“中国知青作家杯”征文活动和青网组织的书评中相识，在她的鼓励下也加入了青年作家网成为签约作家。几年来成了文友、好友。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.3.16</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·贺好友七芝再出版新书</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欣闻好友再出书，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三部韵文艺苑姝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一座名山人向往，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">女神景色众欢呼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">几经迤逦追仙境，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">历尽艰辛展画图。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴瑟和鸣传久远，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">动听美妙世间殊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：三清山的开发者刘鹏飞、杨七芝夫妇最早把三清山介绍给世人，如今已成为世界文化遗产；杨七芝以三清山为背景，创立了三清山画院，连出版了风雨、文韵、诗意三清路三本著作。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.3.17</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">此篇诗文被都市头条刊登，登上红榜评为精华。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·悲喜随缘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春夏秋冬来又去，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红尘清浅自堪怜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月圆花好何常见，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">成败得失也坦然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.3.21</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·感长寿花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">锦簇团团衬绿裙，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清香淡淡伴红云。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬春璀璨窗前靓，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨雪风霜日日新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">互依小朵汇芳颜，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长寿美名引众欢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">独占四时呈异彩，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长青不老报平安。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.3.22</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​家里养盆长寿花，已开了半年，有感而发</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·参加市柔力球协会组织的《全国全民健身运动会》彩排表演有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柔力球飞天地舞，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">婀娜曼妙动心灵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一招一式功夫垒，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仪态万方别样情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.3.24</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024年清明诗词三首</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忆江南·清明悼父母</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">依窗立，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽思忆爹娘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春雨缠绵如泪淌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">双亲慈爱暖心尝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梦见叹无常。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024年清明节</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忆少年·悼警魂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凭窗远眺，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽思忆往，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">投身从警。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">徽章盾牌镇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">铸成精英敬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">朗月琼华仙已哽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">槁身孤、尽忠心骋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">星垂警旗荡，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">固平安久鼎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：琼华，古代中国神话中琼树的花蕊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024年清明节忆牺牲和已远行的警友</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·往事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如歌岁月常浮影，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">缱绻悠悠故事多。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">阡陌纵横曾坎坷，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云烟飘散几蹉跎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.4.2</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">此三首诗词被都市头条刊登，并登上红榜。</span></p> <p class="ql-block">七绝•悼《难忘青春岁月》微信群三位远行同学</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心香一瓣见音容。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校友同窗结友情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">时代风云光灿烂，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如歌岁月忆峥嵘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.4.4</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•迁居沈阳十三年有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">省城居住十三载，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不觉年龄已古稀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亲友时常微信见，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">消息偶尔可惊奇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">婴儿已立凌云志，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翁妪渐衰步履迟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花落花开知四季，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一方水岸也吟诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.4.5</span></p> <p class="ql-block">七绝•感姐妹们一起游南湖公园</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">沈城四月芳菲景，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">姐妹南湖漫步舒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又是一年花艳丽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭台乐享饮一壶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.4.18</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">四月佳和小区的景色：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">佳和花香微醺，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春光令人欲醉，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一池春水荡漾，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红已始瘦绿肥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">（手机拍摄于4月21日）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•复警界诗人李玉恒《平生趣事》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">人生闲赋老居家，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一世夫妻缘分夸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每日三餐精细做，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饮食运动巧安插。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">窗前几净邀明月，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红绿盎然映晚霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">淡饮香茶心肺爽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书写韵伴生涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：写韵，传说中的吴彩鸾书写《唐韵》的故事，这里指作诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.5.9</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">附：玉恒原作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·平生趣事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读书赋韵喜植花，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">数载相陪赖有她。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">言志遣怀添雅趣，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寻章摘句伴生涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">迎来丽朵夸新叶，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">送走晨光抱晚霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">倘若朝夕无所事，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">索然寡味怎居家？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.4.23</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝•观赏沈阳长白岛南京桥下千米樱花路樱花有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如雪似云堆满枝，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">素雅清丽扮春时。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">樱花与客同相悦，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">醉了身心醉了诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">写于2024.5.3</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝•春离</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春姑不舍别人间，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">再等情郎又一年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">四季轮回难阻挡，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">随缘喜乐赏花妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.5.9</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝•初夏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梨花春雨落泥尘，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草长莺飞绿愈茵，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风起槐花香满院，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">待来六月看荷新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.5.9</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">游沈阳水洞有感：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">盛京沈水在一方，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秀丽风光远近扬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水洞清幽思日月，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">涧泉倒影觅沧桑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蜿蜒八百通天路，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">迤逦千年化瑞祥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">薛礼藏军书旧日，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">征东烽火话由长。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">写于2024.5.18</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•感《第二届中国知青作家杯》征文颁奖会在北京召开</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五月槐花遍地香，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">知青文友乐奔忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">北天南水心心印，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昨曲今声口口扬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岁月融歌歌永久，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芳华流史史绵长。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">而今虽是夕阳景，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">必注丹青载乐章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：悉闻5月25日《中国知青作家杯征文颁奖会》将在北京现代文学馆召开，遂有感而作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.5.22</span></p><p class="ql-block">被都市头条刊登，并登上红榜评为精华</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•登华山有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">华山险峻最称奇，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五岳海拔数第一。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云海范茫星斗近，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">巨石蟒蟒九天齐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陡岩峭壁叠千尺，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">怪石孤峰挺万岐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">千里迢迢寻美景，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古稀年迈不知疲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.6.2</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•复警友李玉恒《感谢淑坤大姐携夫旅行》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">四次夫伴去旅行，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉恒赋韵励征程。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古稀年迈身前往，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">景色风光故事丰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">险峻华山观论剑，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">天然湖水好澄清。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">敦煌文化心仪久，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大美新疆赶早能。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：湖水指茶卡盐湖、青海湖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.6.14写于敦煌去乌鲁木齐途中</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">附：玉恒原作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·感谢淑坤大姐偕夫旅行</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">感汝偕夫又旅行，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">征文参会赴京城。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">华山峰顶曾留影，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">青海湖边任采风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">虽过稀龄奔塔寺，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仍酬宿愿赏驼铃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">前番吾亦临斯境，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">可叹今朝已不能！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【注】塔寺，指青海</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">塔尔寺，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">6.14</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•游敦煌感怀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">敦煌文化诱人观，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">汇聚人流比水欢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风啸鸣沙千载立，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">泉清映月碧泓弯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">洞窟艺术光芒耀，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">壁画飞天故事传。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我愿寄情心向往，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常留大漠不思还。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">写于2024.6.22</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•赠《中国知青》专刊采编室微友“勇往直前”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">关注新闻走在前，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忠心为党写书刊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">讴歌正气坚持久，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">锤炼文章把握严。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚景辉煌尤灿烂，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">真情深厚且长绵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">感君助我风推力，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">待举青云再润篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：我的文章“小颖的婚礼”入选中华知青作家学会《知青之歌》一书，我收到了学会赠书33本。7月13日上午我特将此书20本赠送社区。受到社区党委书记高玉娟等人热情接待。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 在参加第二届中华知青作家杯征文比赛活动中，我很幸运的获得一等奖。被选编入书。难忘的知青岁月，磨炼了我们的意志，锤炼了我们的筋骨。我们这一辈，真正尝到了人生的滋味。虽然都已过古稀之年，但知青情结，知青自强不息的精神，依然激励着我们热爱生活，珍爱生命。在夕阳红的路上要活出知青一代人的风采。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 社区书记将我捐书消息发布后，志愿者群里，一位新闻工作者，现任《中国知青》专刊的采编“勇往直前”联系了我，要采访我，根据我的情况，准备出二期报道，我考虑一下，我写作主要是充实自己的生活，我在文学领域仍是探索跋涉中，我谢绝了他的好意，但他的弘扬正能量，满满的追求真善美精神令我感动，遂写此诗记之</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.7.18</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•复警界诗人李玉恒《自谴》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">（依韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">时光荏苒人间幻，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不觉不知几万天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">年少风华情壮美，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夕阳沉静意昂然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浮生坎坷荒平仄，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚景蹉跎探韵玄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗作常吟传寄我，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每和一首润心田。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.7.28</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">附：李玉恒原作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·自谴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白驹过隙怜时短，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">已过稀龄不畏难。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昔日青葱追丽影，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">今朝鹤发眷昨天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">堪怜父辈人多去，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">喜度余年景尚鲜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">酷爱诗书成伴侣，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">卿卿我我总缠绵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.7.27</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•感八一建军节</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">义起南昌万里风，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">中华大地启新程。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">硝烟弥漫留昨影，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">弹雨密集立战功。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抗美援朝铭历史，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">防夷制霸卫安宁，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上天入地冲锋勇，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钢铁长城子弟兵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.8.1</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝•感《诗意三清路》出版</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗意人生故事多，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挥将彩笔绘山河。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">耕耘致力凌云志，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">艺苑中华好放歌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读“感悟《诗意三清路》出版——走进作者的内心世界，品味诗意人生”有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一口气读完青网推荐文章“感悟《诗意三清路》出版——走进作者的内心世界，品味诗意人生”。心情不禁为一位共和国同龄人、上海女知青杨七芝感动。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">这本书27.2万字，三百首诗，是作者五十多年的时光长河中的精选。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">作者一生经历了下乡北大荒当兵团战士、病休、组建家庭、家庭变故，前往三清山，沉醉三清山，钟情三清山，同三清山结缘，成为仙山眷侣，不断受到媒体追踪报道，取得了显著的进步和发展。开启了与社会的联系以及国内外文坛的交流。百度搜索会出来一大堆介绍。她在书画、文学、音乐、摄影等领域以古为鉴，于大自然和人文景观中汲取营养，三清山是她创作的源泉，赋予她灵感，本人不懈努力，才有了《诗意三清路》的问世。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">从书中可以看出作者的心路历程，创作历程和出书历程。她废寝忘食伏案写作，减少了许多社交活动，奋力拼搏的辛劳，为世人奉献了今年新出版的《诗意三清路》等共三本书。应该说是青年作家网的策划，才有了诗意、文韵、风雨三清路三本书的正式出版。青年作家网策划的恰如其分，非常好！青网是人才济济的地方，是精英荟萃的地方，是出好书的地方。感恩遇见！祝七芝再接再厉再创佳绩！祝青年作家网越办越好！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.8.3</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•读叶辛老师著《往日的情书》有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">封封书信叙真情，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">漫漫人生伴旅程。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岁月艰难筋骨炼，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文学创作笔中行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">砂锅寨里书声朗，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">食品面包教案明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忆起青春思往事，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久长今日画屏生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：第六句指叶辛老师在砂锅寨当教师讲到面包时，学生们没见过，他回上海时特地带回面包让同学们了解；第八句久长，地名，叶辛老师下乡的地方</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">叶辛，中国作家协会副主席，上海市文联副主席，上海市作家协会副主席，中华知青作家学会名誉主席，全国五一劳动奖章获奖者，著有《蹉跎岁月》《孽债》等多部长篇小说，被编成电视剧，是全国人大代表，建国七十年七十部长篇小说入选者。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.8.10</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">此篇诗文被都市头条海外头条刊登，并登上红榜，评为精华。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长相思•中元节思父母</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">所念人。所想人。人已阴阳两世分。相逢梦里欣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">思纷纷。忆纷纷。忆到情深方泪奔。月圆人倚门。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024中元节</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我所念父母，隔在两世间，而今相逢只能在梦里。双亲长眠，我常想念，愿天上双亲，安息珍重，愿世上人间，再无疾苦。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•读韩湘生著《岁月的歌吟》感怀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岁月长河骇浪多，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">深情回望写心歌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">真实记录知青事，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不懈攀登岭上坡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">段段文章神韵美，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">行行诗句意深苛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">今读此著醍醐悟，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">飞向彩虹墨雨沱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：第六句苛，本意严厉，这里指寓意深刻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">韩湘生，男，北京人。1969年下乡赴黑龙江生产建设兵团一师三团后调入六师工作，毕业于北京影视艺术学院。中国小说学会会员，中国散文学会会员，中国林业生态作家协会会员，北大荒作家协会会员，中华知青作家协会副主席，《文学月报》杂志社常务主编，《荒土文学》副主编，青年作家网签约作家，《文学与艺术》签约作家，海岛作家村签约作家，至今已发表作品1500篇，出版了个人专集《那一片遥远的山林》《梦中的白桦林》《岁月的歌吟》，都被国家图书馆收藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.8.23</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•处署后佳和新城小区散步有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伏过署消雨后晴，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">阳光明媚起微风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">家园漫步清新景，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草树轻舞绿意情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">湖岸亭中人语响，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">银杏树下鹊飞腾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">轮回四季时宜好，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">愉悦身心入画屏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：第六句“杏”字出律，本着词不压意</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.8.25</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•忆游新疆时</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大美新疆不负名，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">令人震撼驻心中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">天山湖水清如镜，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草地鲜花艳似虹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">峡谷崖层惊几度，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">险峰曲路入银屏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一天四季轮回度，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">难忘今生好恣情！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.8.30</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•读《诗意三清路》感怀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗意三清路上行，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">韵文绘画世知容。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">目标明确追求美，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山水纷呈奉献荣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三本新书今面世，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">百花艺苑榜留名。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">历经磨难初心守，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">才女节操令众崇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.8.30</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">西江月•观樊振东大战莫雷加德获金牌有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">（中华新韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">奥运巴黎赛场，全球此刻荧屏。今霄鏖战显神功。局势起伏必胜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苦练多年一剑，豪情十亿威风。肩担重任有雄鹰。满贯乒乓圆梦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.8.5</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝•忆游绍兴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曾经到访绍兴城，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">胜迹名人纪念亭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">越语贯耳听不厌，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">流传故事永英铭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">沈园千古“钗头凤”，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老店咸亨酒最醇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三味书屋天下诵，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">流觞曲水意难寻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.8.31</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝•观叶辛之子叶田为父母拍《岁月未蹉跎》纪录片视频有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">砂锅寨里写春秋，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岁月长河笔作舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">喜有儿郎拍贵影，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">名家后代展鸿猷。​</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：贵，此处指贵州省。叶辛老师曾在贵州下乡、工作了21年7个月。​</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二、​</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">《蹉跎岁月》撼人心，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">感动万千华夏民。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">空巷当年皆寂静，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如今承业孝儿尊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 2024.9.1</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">迎中秋•庆祝中华人民共和国成立75周年</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一轮明月照家国，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">万里江山处处歌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">畅饮今宵杯酒满，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">中秋十五祝福多。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">祖国今岁七十五，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">辽阔山川靓丽颜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十亿人歌欢乐舞，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五星旗灿耀华天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">千家万户脱贫日，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">百里江河映绿田。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">盛世繁荣思远望，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">静观沧海忆先贤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​2024.9.16</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•参加沈阳第十九届老年人健身展示大会“柔力球”项目有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柔力球飞大沈阳，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云集高手技能强。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">天辽地阔龙腾跃，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水秀山青人奋昂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舞动圆弧开眼界，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翩跹姿态美灵光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">健身轻巧如玄鸟，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">养性修心寿且康。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.9.30</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律 国庆七十五周年有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">（平起首句不入韵式）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红旗国庆迎风展，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">华夏人民喜气盈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歌舞鲜花诗赞颂，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">远程导弹世惊评。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江山瑰伟宏图远，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">社稷繁荣百姓宁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亿万同胞追好梦，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">神州崛起势如虹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024年国庆节</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•2024国庆节游沈阳北陵公园</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">国庆游玩到北陵，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红灯花海好心情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">摩肩接踵人流涌，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">拍照连接画面丰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">盛世腾飞民众幸，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欢声笑语祖国荣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">中华已是天娇美，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">科技腾飞傲世雄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.国庆节</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024年重阳节邻居们聚会感作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">九九重阳今又到，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">祝福网络互相传。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">枫红似火霞瑰丽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">菊艳丰姿色最斓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古有茱萸头上戴，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">今来聚会宴席欢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">话聊深处情难诉，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歌舞纷纷奏管弦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024重阳节</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•复警友李玉恒《谢幕》：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">（一）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">人生世上太匆匆，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不觉黄昏变妪翁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">年少青春曾历过，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">酸甜苦辣必须经。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">往昔叱咤朝前勇，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">今日蹒跚退后行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">规律自然难有悖，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坦然面对踏归程。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">写于2024.10.13晚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">（二）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">谢幕悄悄踏晚程，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不需忧虑太悲情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春花秋月曾陶醉，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬雪夏风也兴浓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逝水流年如浪滚，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芳林陈叶换新生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">偶然有幸来活过，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">短暂人生乐岁增。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">写于2024.10.14</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">附玉恒原作：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·读博文《谢幕》感作二首</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/李玉恒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">（一）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">光阴荏苒太无情，溯往韶华变妪翁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">社会无存主角影，职场早换后昆容。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">已成秋叶霜痕重，曾是青春火样红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">规律难违皆若此，人间代代总相同。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">（二）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">谢幕人生不再重，汤汤江水总流东。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">当年叱咤英豪士，今日淹缠病老翁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">骏马伏槽空壮志，雄鹰无力愧苍穹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梦得一首夕阳曲，喜看霞天火样红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024年9月24日</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•观习主席《人民是文艺创作的源头活水》讲话视频感作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">殷殷话语动人心，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雅论高评万众亲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雪健叶辛成榜样，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花坛艺苑满芳芬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">源头活水民为本，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕊蕾鲜葩木做根。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">吾辈知青当自省，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">韶华可负火红魂？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.10.17</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝•洗温泉的时候</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 夕阳的我们，想去哪儿就去哪！每年外出旅行一个月，洗温泉半个月，把时光留给自己，对自己好一点。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​小镇深秋叶渐黄，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">北风吹起也添凉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">此时泡浴驱寒气，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">活水温泉惬意长。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.10.17</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝•复警友李玉恒《感“写作可疗疾”》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗意文中有画来，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">无穷韵味好舒怀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">平平仄仄须合律，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">脑洞大开怎可呆？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.10.21</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">附李玉恒原作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·感“写作可疗疾”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">写作疗疾愿景开，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">疏通脑络避痴呆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">百零六岁钦杨绛，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不辍构思洒墨斋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.10.21</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•复警友玉恒《迎霜降》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霜降秋天最后期，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">人间七彩放光时。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红枫衬日骄如火，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">碧野梳妆笑傲迟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">黄叶离枝轻漫舞，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仙菊醉酒品香痴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">难得忘却三千事，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欣赏眼前可认知？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.10.23</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">附玉恒原作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·迎霜降</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霜降来临近冷期，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">西风漠漫憾东篱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">观枫飘叶情无尽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赏雁凌翮意未疲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霏雨秋吟思子美，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仙菊樽酒忆微之。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">羸身弱体须珍重，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">保暖防寒莫少衣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">〔注〕子美，即杜甫，有《霜降后雨》诗。微之，即元稹 ，有《咏廿四气诗·霜降九月中》。颈联，暗引其中诗句。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">10.23（霜降日）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝•重逢好友在东汤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">重逢好友在东汤，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">小镇温泉沐谷阳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">远近闻名疗病好，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">休闲度假喜洋洋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.10.25</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">排律•长沙行感怀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">旅游来到长沙市，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渴盼韶山必首行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">露月初冬晴朗朗，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍山满目绿葱葱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">中华亘古多杰俊，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赤县危难有救星。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">继往开来讴壮志，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">承前启后咏豪情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">群心仰望环天宇，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">众步追随洒血旌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">万险千难无所惧，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">复兴大业正登峰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：赤县，指华夏，中国，中土；露月，十月。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.11.1</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•忆谒《爱晚亭》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岳麓山中爱晚亭，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">中华大地久闻名。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">牧诗清唱留绝韵，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">巨笔高悬表厚情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">彩色鎏金情趣美，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">丹枫古树画图中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山行有意更称谓，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故事千秋万代崇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：爱晚亭，中国四大名亭之一，毛主席亲笔书写，原名红叶亭，一说法诗人袁枚建议改爱晚亭，另一说法湖广总督毕沅根据杜牧《山行》诗更名。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.11.1</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝•感初冬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">半绿半黄起北风，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">指尖微冷近寒冬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暮云峰岭天空远，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">近树萧萧叶舞中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.11.13</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝•观珠海航展视频有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">飞鹰展示翱天宇，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">炫技空中举世惊，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">喝彩声声留耳畔，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">科研州际最先锋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">航飞珠海显神功，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五彩喷薄展技能。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">奇景匠心云里跃，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">威严重器世皆惊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.11.17</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•感中华知青作家学会主席孟翔勇主编“第二届中华知青作家杯征文获奖文集”《知青之歌》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">征文五卷录青春，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故事真实感众君。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">半纪光阴多少事，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">主编翔勇几艰辛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如山文稿挑灯审，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">代序文章逐句斟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">兰质清风人盛赞，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">史书留作告儿孙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.11.23</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•游塞里木湖感怀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雪山覆盖古今情，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">化作湖泊世有名。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">妩媚多姿难入梦，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">婀娜娟秀好冰清。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">千年等待因缘分，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一次相逢忆永恒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仙女碧空观圣景，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翩翩起舞映苍穹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.11.23</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•依韵复玉恒《痛悼叶嘉莹先生》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">网悼迦陵远去闻，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗人华夏大师尊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">那年故里登台授，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">艺苑之花遍地芬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雪冷霜凄曾历尽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">骨坚心火更酬勤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">中国感动词专赠，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风雅先生万古存。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：第七句指叶嘉莹是2020年感动中国颁奖人物。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.11.25</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">附：玉恒原作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·痛悼叶嘉莹先生</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">百岁迦陵噩耗闻，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">含悲忍痛悼诗勋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">传承国粹倾心力，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">奉助骚坛赠重金。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃李满天结硕果，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">嫦娥洒泪捧仙樽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">先生去后谁称谓？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云锦华章启后昆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.11.24</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•《第十一批志愿军在韩烈士魂归故里》感作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">银妆素裹悼英雄，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遍地悲歌痛挽声。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">相继迎接群意厚，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">轮番恭敬众情浓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">当年辞去挥豪气，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">今日归来化圣灵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">为有牺牲多壮志，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风雷雨过贯长虹！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.12.1</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">附：2022年写下的同类诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律一《第九批志愿军在韩烈士魂归故里》有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃仙机场降悲雨，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">礼遇水门返故乡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">铁血出征年少勇，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">英雄报效气轩昂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">当年战友深情诉，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚辈后生志气扬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">疆土分离嗟统一，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">强军抗美盼兴邦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：第二句指用最高礼遇“过水门”迎接英雄回家</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本首为首句不入韵式。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2022.9.16</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 七律•网读唐明达著《五味人生》有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五味人生全历练，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">成书再版又三番。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伏雷冬雪知辛辣，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋月春花懂乐甜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乘勇除邪疏顺畅，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">持平济困解疑难。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">工商战线尖兵美，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">执法文明不简单。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.12.3</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律•依韵复玉恒《痛悼著名作家琼瑶》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">远去翩然化雪飞，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如花似玉永生辉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">深情故事成精典，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">妙笔书籍树口碑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">优美离别人敬重，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">尊严掌控众为魁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一身著作存天地，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翰墨结缘志不摧！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.12.5</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">附：玉恒原作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·《痛悼著名作家琼瑶》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">噩耗惊闻化雪飞 ，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">火花尽力已成灰！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">临别洒墨赢人叹，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">远去脱俗作主归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">优美翩然怡我去，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">折磨苦样忌他为。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">等身巨著陪天地，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不朽芳名映日辉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.12.4</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">踏莎美人•赞“时代楷模”单杏花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 以【踏莎行】前三句与【虞美人】后二句单串合而成。双调62字。以顾贞观词为例。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">时代精英，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">世人盛赞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秒查测脸识别感。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">交通掌控信息捷，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">网售票人方便喜欢学。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">科技之光，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">众民幸乐，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杏花团队精神越。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">突飞猛进业高杰，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">高铁乘行餐点可堪绝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">说明：韵式：AABB，AABB。上下阙四仄脚同韵，四平脚同韵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.12.10</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">复七芝友：古风《诗赞淑坤友》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杨逸灵韵创辉煌，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七彩长虹美霞光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芝兰高尚芳香馥，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">丽质琼葩尽华章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.12.14</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">附：杨七芝原作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗赞淑坤友</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古风/杨七芝 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">于2024.12.14. </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">谢友诗兴入眼帘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">淑华芬芳郁文坛</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坤琼仙韵千万朵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">丽质天姿国粹瞻</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">绝句•冬至</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">阴尽阳生数九天，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">气温低冷冻冰寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初轮光照开新日，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟火人间岁月欢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024冬至 12.21</span></p>