<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二零二四年十二月上社课</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">要 求：平水韵五微作五言律诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">收集并简评：唐嘉诚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 刊 头 题 字：谢宗山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 美 篇 编 辑：赵以顺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>【赵学鹏】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">初冬旅贵阳早起评播州雅韵诸君诗</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">菊淡梅开未，索句觅芳菲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">青雾迷三径，昏暝笼四围。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">衾寒醒梦早，霜嫩识几微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">斟酌屏中事，传诗意莫违。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">题大学军训照步韵谢勇兄</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">青春未锁屉，夜逐梦来归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">头戴星红帽，身穿军绿衣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鬓同秋共白，事与愿相违。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">怕不逢西伯，垂纶过古稀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">网观管晨辰怒批吴柳芳有感</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">只认正能量，专医辨是非。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">放之四海准，令得百川归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">止损掩家丑，叫停全国威。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一朝为菜韭，时刻念春晖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">少时因喜欢某女孩，为登门借口借书读得琼瑶言情小说，今作诗以悼琼女士。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">当年那窗外，记忆已稀微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蒙懂知情意，徘徊度画扉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新还紫贝壳，续借彩云飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一念一回味，思人对紫薇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">赴贵安值京东网蛙品味白酒官方旗舰店开业</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">沉浮过人境，网络系商微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">既得霜能履，何妨雪亦归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乘风心激荡，跨步马轻肥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又逐黔山道，重将梦放飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">闻若兮家冬日群芳争艳以为奇作诗戏赠</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">城南有佳处，斗室锁芳菲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不与时消息，自成春氛围。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一承金屋宠，无视朔风威。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遣梦窥难得，屏山隔锦帏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">冬日过百花湖访朱昌窖酒</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">小家藏碧玉，秀质出尘微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">腕底倾明艳，掌中生素辉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">相看惊岁晚，同醉觅春馡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹谢峰光护，垂青慰隔违，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">承蒙浩然兄弟团队数月努力，网蛙品味公司于贵阳重建，视频号、京东店铺相继上线，系列产品逐日成形，赋此志谢。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">再逢犹恨晚，深识更知希。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">生涯重集结，网上变云旂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">践道循天理，知微断事机。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">或能追六事，为国祷商祈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">近冬至回金港城小住入夜友人来电告窗外月圆</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">写尽团栾意，冬宵劳布挥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新随孤影返，相照万峰岿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月作春时蕊，人当客里归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莫比参商看，世事总睽违。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">评：高质高产，因时因事而诗，个中真意，妙趣无穷尽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>【谢 勇】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">偶翻旧照</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">照片在抽屉，青春恨不归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">胸空双剑气，尘满旧鹑衣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗笔非时用，萍踪与志违。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">倏然秋鬓老，回首梦依稀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">老花眼</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">人随年纪长，视物渐依微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">生怕量才浅，苦羞问字稀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心情容老大，目力感乖违。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">尽与诗书习，何妨花镜围。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">胖东来火爆网络有感</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤绝在尘境，持心与世违。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">商圈朴难见，平价市犹稀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">贩鬻蝇头利，蹈仁云隙辉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回思药神事，敢论是和非。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">评：白驹过隙，雪泥鸿爪，有难解荣枯之感。再论网事，此企业实属罕见。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>【牟明英】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">秋日感怀</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">带字信鸿归，悄然酸泪飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">萧萧愁客路，处处见霜威。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">深愧徒衰老，犹伤久隔违。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不堪望故里，未得报春晖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">评：常言“自古逢秋悲寂寥”，于兹更甚乎！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>【文受刚】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">八旬初度感怀</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">回眸多少事，每与愿相违。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">几度天灾袭，十年人祸飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曩哀牛马瘦，今喜稻粱肥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">难把韶光唤，安心享夕晖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">评：夕阳无限好，枫叶正当红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>【祝西峰】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> 冬 村</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">木落趁风飞，空林入望微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟浓双塔隐，寨小四山围。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">村酒开坛醉，年猪出圈肥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">气寒知岁暮，游子几时归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> 醉 酒</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">豪饮三杯酒，高谈口沫飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">俄乌还干仗，美日又生非。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不辨言深浅，浑忘路坦巍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">邻居边打趣，扶得醉人归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">评：刨锅汤好吃，按猪人那阵回？好一幅人间烟火气。又言家事国事天下事，事事关心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>【刘先伦】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">近来网购成瘾，购多不实用，因为之志，</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">修身百纳衣，饮水复充饥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">囊里青蚨少，街头货物稀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欲寻新世界，还是老玄机。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梦起互联网，千单一嘘唏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">叔父寿辰，因会考不得返回</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">须发作冰草，寒霜冻日晖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">河山风乱扫，天地雪纷飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竟属牛和马，哪知是与非。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">何人驱犊返，我独不能归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">旋夜遣怀</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">难测是天威，生涯事总违。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">奈何天未老，忍顾燕双飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">行业受吾累，乡关盼我归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">此时因底事，举酒问心扉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">评：网购如搓麻，久弄有瘾。还乡心切，奈何要谋稻梁，生计为重，不可两全。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>【汪守先】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">沉 沉</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">沉沉欹枕卧，忽忽野情飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闭目深宵寂，滴心寒雨微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">有怀关物运，无梦出帘帷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霞想难成句，忧边与孰归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">甲辰仲冬水库工地作</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒凉来四面，劳苦减三围。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">足踏泞泥浊，身披雾雨微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">高低河畔路，远近渡头矶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霜髪随风散，年华逐浪飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">评：尽心尽责为工作，年华似水不复归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">【钟 华】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"> 大 寒</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凛冽朔风急，茫然白雪飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒云遮远岫，素霰掩清晖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">室有香盈袖，庭无绿染衣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且将尘事放，长共墨痕依。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">评：书香墨香浑然一体，留人长物自是诗书。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">【庄 红】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">今日聚会有感</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云开晴日启，酒气暖寒衣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">座上交新友，笔尖添彩辉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">已生诗意阔，更趁客情飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">醉后无须送，我携明月归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">评：醉酒当歌，酒助诗兴，高谈阔论，岂不美哉！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">【周国庆】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">晚 凉</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">严霜侵暮色，餐备待人归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">洗马分醯醢，司徒食瓠肥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">千夫言强愎。万姓盼晴晖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">四顾萧萧处，璨然扬大旂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">仲冬黄昏听银杏语</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">有客他乡至，日光昃渐稀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">君犹称不穀，我已嫁浽溦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">未肯枯颜色，兀自怜寸辉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风中临野望，片片伴云飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">评：百业萧条一业兴，几家欢喜几家愁。银杏如蝶翩翩，可到天尽头欤？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>【赵以顺】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">岁末遣怀</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒街风肆虐，霜霰叩窗扉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">好梦苍波渺，流年鬓上归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怜春日暖，已逐晓星微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">牛马尘中累，诸生与愿违。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">寒冬吟</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">朔风摧叶落，冷气透重帏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">远岫云踪隐，寒溪鸟迹微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乾坤多睿见，蝼蚁识天威。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">愿化春枝鹊，啼声报福归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">评：真正的冬天远远还没有到来。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>【唐嘉诚】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">过挑水龙潭</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">临山无翠微，栖鸟尽惊飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">峤险勿孤往，渊深坠石矶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹怜芒屦湿，可恨日光稀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">其境何清静，噫乎趁早归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">评：拙作。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>【张 雨】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">小雪后游云门囤</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">沿途横石壁，远岫白云飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">径曲生蓑草，山深冷翠微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">潮分两岸阔，舟越一江翚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">兴尽不知暮，何妨踏月归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">评：寄情山水，寻得桃源好避秦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>【梁正森】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">悼琼瑶阿姨</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一帘幽梦散，窗外彩云飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">化雪翩然舞，落梅自在归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风沙互为伴，蝴蝶前后随。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故土情难断，芝兰有泪垂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">评：斯人已逝，托体同山阿！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>【廖德勋】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">再临花溪</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梧叶铺金道，曾骑白马飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">彼时人婉婉，此际水依依。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">记忆逐波散，长林迎鹭归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不堪凌石蹬，倒影老余晖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">评：故地重游，有“朝花夕拾”之感。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>【牟明鹏】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">旧春偶感</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三春丽日晖，何处觅芳菲？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野径高天幕，晴光暖翠微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云霞行且看，草树不须围。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但使无违愿，闲随众鸟飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">评：心绪不宁，愿觅一清静处得闲适。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p>