【芳草园】联对集锦(五百三十八)

乡间晚风

<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">特别声明:芳草园联对集锦均得到参与成员认可。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=28575359&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=3589e1657bd3f70ad183b44da6991e45" target="_blank">芳草</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=660512&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=6510daf54abd2627ae2696eea8668cc4" target="_blank">云朵</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=42413481&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=db1731125d427ff1d7db5fd1f379c453" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">杨柳岸</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=62057625&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=f6dd49c213697a43a663523d40f45c87" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">乡间晚风</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);"></span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=83830822&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=77aa7a65a50aa55ddd97bba03b2a77e6" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">牧羊人</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);"></span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=215999486&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=01bdcdfc46adcabc4feaf071a68f007b" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">绿水无忧</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);"></span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=123638888&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=62d741234107c15b6526d9dc0e5879bc" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">闲云</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=7562687&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=24af62e134b250f75ecb45074ef0071b" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">月影清风</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;"></span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=8773504&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=a190d29ae2eaafad7908a0f87a8a15b0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">文心</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=7599613&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=c833e2533f1822d8a61509b0ec28ac86" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">秋实</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=120859849&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=e140da7c9319cee7aff8f344114b797a" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">钱云金雨</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=652384&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=e4a42a8f947363c0495ccd727742281c" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">长安山石</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=57960591&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=3371f4e581721e96e3f55909f40fec90" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">於发</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=23334970&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=4e233cdc985463247a913ed68977cd6f" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">笛里关山</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=324435478&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=0e1c2eca2d925bbd85adc527360d9585" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">七弦琴</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;"></span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=63866506&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8&um_rtc=7036dd20ad9952cd2b115ea616279f17" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">蒲公英</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;"></span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=58446201&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8&um_rtc=37c423a20b5b6e7db2de2bac0e346619" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">老六(仁义)</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;"></span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=72140024&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">安宁</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=59488342&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">弦思</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;"></span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=118454838&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">大海</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=57622801&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">若水</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=70461024&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=70461024&uuid=8c83c8e4a566775ed9d6c69d218f60b0&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=70461024&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=89dfcb6699f1a92f4efe65f8ac2b5c70" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">松源老农</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=169385171&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=169385171&uuid=f25830e309d241e1be5596e9d9550cfb&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=169385171&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=10c90c4fd97e0916351e4999cdecf93d" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">雨燕</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?um_rtc=e7c2f4577240717f5ec4c23ba1bd64e6&author_id=47060341&container=1&v=10.1.4" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">燕子</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=208837663&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=2a7a8f68f6217853364df3e7d0caf190&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">八哥</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=36358592&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=2a7a8f68f6217853364df3e7d0caf190&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">元其</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;"></span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=67439235&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=67439235&uuid=302d6bb9fdbe7565d4b64a1b87fff493&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=67439235&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=0696de72d758eaa6ac947b2d382d2e5f" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">五岳樵夫</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=434621046&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=434621046&uuid=f1eac61a947394a66fd1421c07defe8a&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=434621046&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e5d62d5b9b3d5e43d05a82db754a4105" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">过客</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=4490819&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=4490819&uuid=3477ded56f0e705e2a83b05ee793a9fb&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=4490819&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=84cf7cbec0cc8bb58ed97d4fff2907ae" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">宋</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=43288063&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=43288063&uuid=95ce0e76925f5e509acea2d632e17e23&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=43288063&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=705d407c7e08b5f1108b89f4c01e5fb5" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">荷花</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=750939&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=750939&uuid=c97ddab4d3e07b0406b7e3d90c60be98&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=750939&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=80b48afb7a1fb1390fb6cd353bed27df" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">美西洋</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?um_rtc=16a18011c7eaf69f5b4606ab0971fb08&author_id=3953176&container=1&v=10.2.1" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">ANG.ZQ</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=16510940&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=16510940&uuid=384145a50bf6378fd5f4603c7a0d59c5&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=16510940&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=1045e46bc02510122459e2734cc29b69" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">琢玉</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=359390016&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">青丝羽衣</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=303276228&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">胡萝卜</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=17450635&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">刘秋生</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=76534617&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">淡定</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=36222480&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">愚夫</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=22498736&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">梧桐</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=24752147&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">东篱月</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=443016337&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">华玉宇</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">十二月十六日精彩出句</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">秋高宜赏南山菊 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">揉断丝弦愁未解 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">竹因高节身难折 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">首联出句:秋高宜赏南山菊 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">解析:</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">秋高:秋日天空澄澈、高爽。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">释义:秋日天空晴朗,适合欣赏南山上的菊花。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">出句省略主语,暗含隐者形象,“采菊东篱下,悠然见南山”。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">联友以秋景应对,意境优美,对仗工整的佳句有:</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">秋高宜赏南山菊 </span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">酒醉又吟东晋诗</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">霜重尤迷北岭枫</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">气爽好听北壑松 </span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">日朗好看北岸枫</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">野旷好闻东岭泉</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">风紧爱听旷野松</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">霜冷厌听西岭风</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">二联出句:揉断丝弦愁未解 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">解析:</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">丝弦:用丝做的弦。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">释义:(我)拨断了丝弦也没有化解内心的忧愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">出句为省略主语句,用揉断丝弦来表现内心忧愁之深。前四后三结构,前后因果关系明显。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">联友对句采用递进方式进一步渲染愁深不能化解或以其他方式将愁化解的佳句有:</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">揉断丝弦愁未解 </span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">望穿秋水梦难圆</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">启开鱼信怨皆消</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">饮干桂酒泪无休</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">饮残杯酒泪还流</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">喝完杯酒意不消</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">书干砚墨意难休</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">流干珠泪爱难平</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">书穷徽墨爱犹存</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">喝光烧酒绪难平</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">吹残玉笛怨难休</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">翻开画卷意难平</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">三联出句:竹因高节身难折 </span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">释义:竹子因为具有高的操守,不易折身。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">句中的“节”,一语双关,既是指竹节,也指竹子本身具有的操守。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">出句用了拟人的方法赞场竹子的品格。前四后三结构,前后因果关系明显,“有节”是“身难折”的根本原因。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">联友用平行对,赞扬另一事物高贵品格的佳句有:</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">竹因高节身难折 </span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">莲纵苦心气亦清</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">梅有冰心气自华</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">松以坚心志不移</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">兰有清心气自馨</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">梅以琼姿气自存</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">秋高宜赏南山菊 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">春早可观北苑花(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">揉断丝弦愁未解 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">望穿秋水梦难圆(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">竹因高节身难折 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">菊以傲霜心未残(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">秋高宜赏南山菊 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">日斜好观东岭枫(淡定)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">揉断丝弦愁未解 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">画完瘦竹意无穷(淡定)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">竹因高节身难折 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">兰有清心气自馨(淡定)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">秋高宜赏南山菊(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">霞蔚乐观东海潮(八哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">揉断丝弦愁未解(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">书干砚墨意难休(八哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">竹因高节身难折(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">梅以琼姿气自存(八哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">秋高宜赏南山菊 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">霜重再观北苑枫(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">揉断丝弦愁未解 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">启开鱼信怨皆消(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">竹因高节身难折 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">菊傲清霜蕊不衰(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">秋高宜赏南山菊(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">酒醉又吟东晋诗(云朵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">揉断丝弦愁未解(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">饮干桂酒泪无休(云朵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">竹因高节身难折(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">莲纵苦心气亦清(云朵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">秋高宜赏南山菊(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">霜重尤迷北岭枫(琢玉)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">揉断丝弦愁未解(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望穿秋水梦难圆(琢玉)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">竹因高节身难折(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">松以坚心志不移(琢玉)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">秋高宜赏南山菊 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">客贵当斟白玉杯 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">揉断丝弦愁未解 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">蘸干墨砚意方抒 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">竹因高节身难折 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">梅有素心自久香 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">秋高宜赏南山菊(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">野旷好闻东岭泉(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">揉断丝弦愁未解(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">饮残杯酒泪还流(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">竹因高节身难折(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">松有坚姿头不低(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">秋高宜赏南山菊(向天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">气爽好观秀岭枫(老农)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">揉断丝弦愁未解(向天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">流干珠泪爱难平(老农)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">竹因高节身难折(向天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">龟以忍耐寿更长(老农)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">秋高宜赏南山菊 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">日暮可观北极星(闲云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">揉断丝弦愁未解 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">认清草本疾能防(闲云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">竹因高节身难折 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">松为娇颜气不衰(闲云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">秋高宜赏南山菊 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">气爽好听北壑松 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">揉断丝弦愁未解 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">熨平眉黛意难收(燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">竹因高节身难折 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">兰以幽馨气自清 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">秋高宜赏南山菊(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">风紧爱听旷野松(文心)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">揉断丝弦愁未解(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">书穷徽墨爱犹存(文心)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">竹因高节身难折(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">松长虬枝骨自奇(文心)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">秋高宜赏南山菊(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">云淡好观北海潮(元其)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">揉断丝弦愁未解(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">歌残岁月意难平(元其)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">竹因高节身难折(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">人守清操气自闲(元其)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">秋高宜赏南山菊 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">霜冷厌听西岭风 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">揉断丝弦愁未解 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">酌空杯盏恨尤深 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">竹因高节身难折 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">海赖众川面更宽 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">秋高宜赏南山菊(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">夜静可观北斗星(美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">揉断丝弦愁未解(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">翻开画卷意难平(美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">竹因高节身难折(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">梅以傲姿雪不欺(美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">秋高宜赏南山菊 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">霜冷独钟北岭枫(Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">揉断丝弦愁未解 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">吹残玉笛怨难休(Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">竹因高节身难折 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">梅以孤芳品自高(Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">秋高宜赏南山菊(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">日朗好看北岸枫(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">揉断丝弦愁未解(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">喝光烧酒绪难平(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">竹因高节身难折(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">松秉贞心气自豪(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">秋高宜赏南山菊 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">露冷莫听西陆蝉 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">揉断丝弦愁未解 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">盼回兰棹恨皆消 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">竹因高节身难折 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">云秉无心梦自安 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">秋高宜赏南山菊(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">浪大难观北海鱼(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">揉断丝弦愁未解(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">喝完杯酒意不消(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">竹因高节身难折(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">杏有娇容品不端(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">秋高宜赏南山菊(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">雪艳犹寻北岭梅(於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">揉断丝弦愁未解(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">吟穷别恨念尤深(於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">竹因高节身难折(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">梅有冰心气自华(於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">秋高宜赏南山菊(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">气爽喜开北海樽(秋生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">揉断丝弦愁未解(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">斟来黍酒梦犹酣(秋生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">竹因高节身难折(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">兰有清香影不同(秋生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">限于篇幅,选取有代表性的对句简评一二,其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点,因学识水平有限,难免有疏漏和不妥之处,欢迎各位师友予以指正。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">审阅:芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">组稿:</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">(以投稿先后为准) 琢玉 笛里关山 荷花 雨燕 八哥 元其 闲云 云朵 於发 淡定 文心 大海 乡间晚风 若水 青丝羽衣 梧桐 弦思 美西洋 Ang.zq 刘秋生 燕燕于飞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"> 编录: 乡间晚风</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">②对句为师友们原创</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p>