【芳草园】联对集锦（五百三十七）

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<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">　　特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">12月13日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕弄柳丝漱玉词 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日偏佛塔影崔巍 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不费挣名劳碌心 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕展花衣闹柳堤（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟笼松径磬传幽（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陶醉含饴幸福家（琢玉）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莺啭歌声醉晚风（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荷香寺院月盈空（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莫叹流年寂寞时（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹤舞晴空映夕阳（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">兰香净室烛燃双（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不碍饴孙静好秋（老六）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟列斜行绕绿堤（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花香佛殿磬声清（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不问世间纷扰因（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草着珠妆沐晚风（秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荷分水榭客迷全（秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不愿离乡热闹街（秋生）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹊唱情歌抢秀枝（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">僧温经卷磬萦空（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不作争职劳碌人 (雨燕)(今)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳展秀眉舞暖风（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">榴红木牗夏来初（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">即可潜心学古诗（元其)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花展娇姿织锦茵（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花开斋阁墨生香（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">肯做遣怀简素翁（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鸡唤朝霞送月光（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花丛农舍酒尝完（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">便是修身快乐时（大海）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕梳柳丝报好音（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">磬萦法座韵悠长（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">更喜服田丰裕时（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃露红颜出竹篱 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钟鸣佛寺客来多 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">尚有返童觅趣心 (青丝羽衣)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕舞柳丝沐晓风（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梅香山院鹊飞双（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">正好弄孙愉悦时（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝶舞花丛醉暖阳（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桂香雅院酒倾空（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">还慕吟风逸致情（Ang.zq）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹊闹梅枝唱晓风（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风翻经卷寺飘香（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">便做舒心快乐人（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕舞蛇形逐晚烟（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">客临酒肆盏斟空（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">何患经年贫贱身（闲云）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日出天门落晚山（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">兰香陋室卷留三（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">更觅还乡自在时（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鱼跃龙门破九天 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香氲蒲座手谈三 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不问浮名淡泊心 (听花无语)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕唱晨歌舞柳堤（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">僧敲棋子局平三（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">已淡争强功利心（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳系兰舟载夕阳（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霞萦山寺鸟归频（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不教倦游修病时（梧桐）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹰破云衫逐晚风（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日临书院牖涂辉（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不恋上班逍洒时（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雀对山歌舞竹林（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风临花径蝶飞三（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">已厌争名夺利心（弦思）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鸥印竹痕戏晚沙 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花香山院蝶飞双 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不肯偷生折贱腰 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕剪云笺绘晓天 (美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">松环古寺月盈全 (美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">唯愿余生自在时 (美西洋）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫排人字分春水（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莺唱情歌醉絮风 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梅馨石径曲传双 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">但求归老安闲日（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">自是忘情潇洒身 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">简 评：</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：凫排人字分春水</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 凫：野鸭子。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 野鸭子排成人字，把春天的水面都分开了，留下一串串的涟漪。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句运用了拟人的修辞手法，写出了饶有情趣的画面。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们词工意美的佳对举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">凫排人字分春水</span></p><p class="ql-block">燕展花衣闹柳堤</p><p class="ql-block">莺啭歌声醉晚风</p><p class="ql-block">鹤舞晴空映夕阳</p><p class="ql-block">鹊唱情歌抢秀枝</p><p class="ql-block">柳展秀眉舞暖风</p><p class="ql-block">燕梳柳丝报好音</p><p class="ql-block">桃露红颜出竹篱</p><p class="ql-block">蝶舞花丛醉暖阳</p><p class="ql-block">鹊闹梅枝唱晓风</p><p class="ql-block">燕唱晨歌舞柳堤</p><p class="ql-block">柳系兰舟载夕阳</p><p class="ql-block">鹰破云衫逐晚风</p><p class="ql-block">雀对山歌舞竹林</p><p class="ql-block">鸥印竹痕戏晚沙</p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：竹荫禅堂枰覆半</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> 荫：本意就是树阴，竹荫就是竹子的阴影。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">联意为：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> 竹子的阴影有一半遮着祠堂，也遮着围棋盘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> 这样的主语就是竹子，“荫”“覆”分别作谓语的中心语，是双谓语结构。但符合这样的结构的对句较难应对。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> 师友们对句的最后一个字以表数量的词来应对的佳句是：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">竹荫禅堂枰覆半</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">僧敲棋子局平三</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">香氲蒲座手谈三</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">风临花径蝶飞三</span></p><p class="ql-block">兰香净室烛燃双</p><p class="ql-block">梅香山院鹊飞双</p><p class="ql-block">花香山院蝶飞双 </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">钟鸣佛寺客来多</span> </p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们最后一个字以形容词或副词来应对的佳句举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:18px;">竹荫禅堂枰覆半</span></p><p class="ql-block">烟笼松径磬传幽</p><p class="ql-block">僧温经卷磬萦空</p><p class="ql-block">桂香雅院酒倾空</p><p class="ql-block">客临酒肆盏斟空</p><p class="ql-block">霞萦山寺鸟归频</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：但求归老安闲日</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 感怀联</p><p class="ql-block"> 归老：辞官养老。唐刘禹锡《将赴汝州途出浚下留辞李相公》：“功成名遂会归老，请向东山为近邻。”</p><p class="ql-block"> 安闲：安静清闲；安逸舒适，并列式的形容性的合成词。唐萧颖士 《白鹇赋》说：“情莽眇以耿洁，貌轩昂以安闲。”元洪希文《幽居》诗云：“投老安闲世味疏，深深水竹葺幽居。”</p><p class="ql-block"> 联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> （我） 只求辞官（或退休）养老安静闲适的日子里，</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句明显的是半句话，<span style="font-size:18px;">是典型的流水对。</span>对句需要说明干什么，或有怎样的兴趣爱好，怎样的期待等。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们顺着这个思路的佳句迭出：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">但求归老安闲日</span></p><p class="ql-block">陶醉含饴幸福家</p><p class="ql-block">肯做遣怀简素翁</p><p class="ql-block">便是修身快乐时</p><p class="ql-block">正好弄孙愉悦时</p><p class="ql-block">便做舒心快乐人</p><p class="ql-block">不费挣名劳碌心</p><p class="ql-block">不碍饴孙静好秋</p><p class="ql-block">不问世间纷扰因</p><p class="ql-block">不作争职劳碌人(今)</p><p class="ql-block">不问浮名淡泊心</p><p class="ql-block">不恋上班逍洒时</p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"> 联意也可以这样理解：<span style="font-size:18px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">但求归老/安闲日，即</span><span style="font-size:18px;">（我） 只求辞官（或退休）后，安静地度过悠闲的时光。这样的佳对是：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">但求归老安闲日</span></p><p class="ql-block">不肯偷生折贱腰 </p><p class="ql-block">即可潜心学古诗</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：燕燕于飞 琢玉 荷花 老六 老农 秋生 雨燕 元其愚夫 大海 八哥 青丝羽衣 淡定 ANG.ZQ 若水 闲云 於发 听花无语 云朵 梧桐 文心 弦思 乡间晚风 美西洋 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序） </p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block">　　限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片来自网络，致谢原作者</p>