<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.星空与酒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/归真</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">迷情那片海。忘却一片天</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赊半壶月色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">于某夜,朝你举杯</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沧海浅读:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">星海辽阔,月色醇浓,此等广博心境是对那个过往的“你”的释怀,忘却与怀念在感悟中已达成和解。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.年关将至</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/林海雪原</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">红灯笼又在路边遥望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">离家的浮云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大包小包,开始打点行装</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沧海浅读:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小诗画面感强,形象地刻画出年的氛围感以及守望者与归乡者的急切心情。年关,聚着多少亲人的期盼,荡着多少游子的辛酸,“离家的浮云”要翻山越水,回到亲人身边停一停,靠一靠,以解劳顿之苦,思念之情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3.春天的气息</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/醉客</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬的心事,依旧锁紧北方</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">扒开向阳积雪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">半寸绿色,点缀着眼眸</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沧海浅读:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">积雪中冒出的“半寸绿色”,足以驱赶掉“冬的心事”,足以诠释一个春天。小诗实写为主,未用过多过重的笔墨,以景带情,点到为止,“春天的气息”却已扑面而来。而透过一双“眼眸”,那份对春天的热切期盼和弥足信心,清透明亮异常打动人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4.春天的气息</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/绮梦天佑</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">草木惺忪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是谁唤醒了她的冲动</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一抹桃红晕染了绿色的梦境</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沧海浅读:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">拟人,设问,以及画面交叠带动的意境转换,使得作者心中的春天与季节的春天交融得形象而灵动。首句“草木惺忪”尤其凝炼精彩,从后句的主观情感加持,读者可以看到作者的一颗童心,令人仿佛进入到纯真的童话世界,清新而美好。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5.心中的眷恋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/君羊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">古桥,月光轻洒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风景依旧</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那年,那人,是否犹在</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沧海浅读:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">用场景气氛与时间跨度烘托情感,看似平静的疑问句下面一定压着难忘的过往。模糊的故事线条,清晰的思念情状,令人遐想,引人共情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6.春天的气息</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/浩然</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">烂尾楼,被黄鹂几声鼓噪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那打桩机</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">——又发出了惊雷般吼叫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沧海浅读:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">这“春天”不是自然界的,而是人世间的,它关系现实民生,更能让人感受到切实的寒与暖。好在只要“春天”来了,希望就来了。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7.缩影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/浩然</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">命运,打起一路水漂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">落脚之处</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仍试图捞回那朵浪花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沧海浅读:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">“水漂”物象既形象又深刻,不可测的“命运”由此有了既视感。人生之路起伏动荡,身处高点时的光彩无比美妙却如虚缈浮影,瞬间即逝不可把握,当时光归于平淡,可愿甘于落寂的清冷?“试图捞回”,是不甘,是惋叹,是留恋,一朵浪花窥见命运的缩影。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8.雨落半山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/雨竹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人到中年。又翻开一页</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">微光,穿过竹林</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">还有一只小鹿在奔跑</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沧海浅读:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">经历的风雨悉数翻过,对新的人生历程依然怀有美好憧憬。小诗立意积极,情感饱满而节制,童话般的画面通透、含蓄、唯美,传递出人生向光信念和高洁之志,呈意虚实结合,动静相宜,令人遐想。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9.身是客</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/秋水无痕</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">贪欢的,是镜中花还是梦中人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">繁华掩不住荒冢</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">笙箫,从南唐悱恻到破晓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沧海浅读:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">“镜中花”“梦中人”皆是虚幻的美好,谁能抓得住?卧龙跃马终黄土,世世浮华世世空,人生谁不是时间的过客?小诗用词练达,绮丽之中见深意。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10.身是客</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/清音</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">来不及多想</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">半月又转圆了,这个夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">得用一支烟火求生</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沧海浅读:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">语言不刻意雕琢,着力轻巧,虚实间意象峻立,喻意纵深。时间流逝,人生短暂,这身不由己被推碾着的昼夜,无奈与挣扎是常态。挤压之下,更燃起对生命的敬畏与渴求。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p 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