<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="font-size:20px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">12月6日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜 (问天)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">承露荷盘载玉珠（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">废井苔深蛙唱喧（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">方可洞明晓古今（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">卧水荷钱诱锦鳞（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荒径花残蝶影稀（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">庶可看开远利名（琢玉）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">留梦月辉抚旧痕（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻 (问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古渡芦深鹭影稀（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">自此修来有淡宁（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣 (问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">迎夏荷杯宿稚蜂（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤枕泪枯夜气寒（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">即可抛开淡死生（元其）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">向晚烟光笼翠微 (燕燕于飞）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">旧榥纱残月影寒 (燕燕于飞）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">方可通明写始终 (燕燕于飞）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">迎夏柳丝钓乳鱼（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">朽户仓空鼠窜频（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如要追究尽是非 (雨燕)(今)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">流夜莺声唱晓曦 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新苑花繁蝶舞欢 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">便可居安远是非 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晓日莺歌唱柳丝（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荒野草枯鸟影稀（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">方可避开远是非（淡定）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">留夏荷盘盛落珠（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">废苑草深鸟唱幽（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且可修来淡利名（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映日葵花拽夕晖（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">破榻尘封客去空（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">方可忘机任卷舒（愚夫）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">临夏杨花点碧溪（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荒院苔深月照寒（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">便可心清得静闲（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">惜粉燕泥抺旧香 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荒径秋残叶覆深 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">便可看开任赚赔 (乡间晚风)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恋圃蜂群探嫩香（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">断壁苔枯月照寒（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">便可逍遥任往来（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">向日蜂房近野花（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曲径花繁蝶舞翩（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">便可圆通少是非（於发）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">怀旧苔丝覆古墙（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">废院苔深客迹稀（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">即可超然忘死生（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">向晚蝉声闹绮园（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">旧院花香蝶舞频（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">就可避开惹是非（若水）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">咏柳莺歌唱晚晴（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荒径树枯鸟影稀（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">唯盼行穷忘苦甜（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">出水荷尖栖小蜓（听花无语）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荒径苔深夕照斜（听花无语）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">定可了然有始终（听花无语）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">贺岁榆钱散旺门（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暗夜星稀客旅凄（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">方可归真享静闲（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恋水柳丝戏小鱼（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寂院树枯鸟影稀（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如未看开困是非（云朵）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">迎夏柳丝笑晚风（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荒院花凋蝶影无（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">便可逃开躲是非（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">避日蜂房酿冽香 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">残壁草萋兔过频 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">方可坦然淡死生 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓月柳丝揽碧波（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">弃院苔长燕舞欢（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">便可想通少是非（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挽春蛛网兜残瓣 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">照影鱼池纳碧流 (秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野陌花繁蝶舞频 (秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能悟透无悲喜 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">定可游居独往来 (秋生）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">简 评：</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：挽春蛛网兜残瓣 </p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 挽春：<span style="font-size:18px;">动宾短语，</span>挽留春天的意思，元末明初 · 丁鹤年《元旦寄朝真宫诸道侣》：“一气挽春回厚轴，五云扶日丽层霄。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 为了挽留春天，蛛网兜住了凋残的花瓣。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句“挽”“兜”二字，运用了拟人的修辞，形象的表现出惜春、恋春的情怀。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们修辞恰当、时令相谐的佳对举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">挽春蛛网兜残瓣</span></p><p class="ql-block">咏柳莺歌唱晚晴</p><p class="ql-block">卧水荷钱诱锦鳞</p><p class="ql-block">迎夏荷杯宿稚蜂</p><p class="ql-block">迎夏柳丝钓乳鱼</p><p class="ql-block">惜粉燕泥抺旧香 </p><p class="ql-block">恋圃蜂群探嫩香</p><p class="ql-block">恋水柳丝戏小鱼</p><p class="ql-block">迎夏柳丝笑晚风</p><p class="ql-block">钓月柳丝揽碧波</p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 颓甍：意思是坍塌的屋脊。晚清 · 范当世《<span style="font-size:18px;">寄题召伯埭斗野亭和秦少游及苏黄诸子</span>》：“不知斗野亭，复余几颓甍。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 坍塌屋脊的院落长满野蒿，只有蛐蛐儿白天黑夜不停地鸣叫。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句写出了萧疏破败、人迹全无的荒凉景象。</p><p class="ql-block"> 对句深谙出句的意旨，风格协调、补充自然的佳句是：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">颓甍蒿满蛩鸣彻</span></p><p class="ql-block">废井苔深蛙唱喧</p><p class="ql-block">荒径花残蝶影稀</p><p class="ql-block">朽户仓空鼠窜频</p><p class="ql-block">荒院苔深月照寒</p><p class="ql-block">荒径秋残叶覆深 </p><p class="ql-block">荒径树枯鸟影稀</p><p class="ql-block">寂院树枯鸟影稀</p><p class="ql-block">荒院花凋蝶影无</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：若能悟透无悲喜</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 感怀联</p><p class="ql-block"> 悟透”是理解得很透彻，完全明白了的意思，是动补结构的词语。清 · 沈上章《和百苦吟原韵 其二十六 风鹤 》：“惊魂已作伤弓鸟，悟透人间祸福机。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 如果能对事物、事理理解参悟透了，也就是理解得很透彻了，也就无所谓悲与喜了。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句是一种假设关系。师友们在这个假设关系下赋对，佳句多多，举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">若能悟透无悲喜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">如未看开困是非</span></p><p class="ql-block">唯盼行穷忘苦甜</p><p class="ql-block">方可洞明晓古今</p><p class="ql-block">即可抛开淡死生</p><p class="ql-block">方可避开远是非</p><p class="ql-block">且可修来淡利名</p><p class="ql-block">便可看开任赚赔</p><p class="ql-block">即可超然忘死生</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">便可居安远是非</span></p><p class="ql-block">方可忘机任卷舒</p><p class="ql-block">便可圆通少是非</p><p class="ql-block">便可逍遥任往来</p><p class="ql-block">方可归真享静闲</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：老农 琢玉 荷花 元其 燕燕于飞 雨燕 青丝羽衣 淡定 美西洋 愚夫 ANG.ZQ 乡间晚风 八哥 於发 老六 若水 文心 听花无语 闲云 云朵 弦思 笛里关山 大海 秋生</p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序） </p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片来自网络，致谢原作者</p>