<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">11月29日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡 (问天)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夕照余晖熏细草 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚烟疏影掩幽花（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凭栏远望独凝眸（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">失意方知世态凉（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花开堤岸灿如霞（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">铺笺长考慢挥毫（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">病体方知药费高（元其）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟迷野渡渺如纱（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燃香静悟正参禅（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">傲骨尤知世路难（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风翻枫岭灿如霞（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">铺笺长叹正轻描（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">病体常知世故凉（淡定）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日斜水面灿如金（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挥毫逸兴漫题诗（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">美酒休嫌客话多（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云翻峰谷怒如龙（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">围炉轻啜慢烹茶（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤影尤知世路艰（老六）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪推石岸吼如雷 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">依窗冥想久低头 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">慧眼静观事术深 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云升竹岭雅如烟（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">临台慢写直挥毫（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">慧眼常观世路宽（大海）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风掀岸柳美如绦（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挥豪狂草屡更笺（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">弱志常嗟世事难（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风吹竹籁脆如弦（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">续茶慢呷再提神（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">卑位尤知世态凉（云朵）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风吹稻浪涌如潮（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">披衣夜读慢思联（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">达命深知世路难（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟迷野渡淡如纱 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">拥衾半坐静修禅 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">远足当求眼界宽 (听花无语)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云飞田陇静无声（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">登台凝望独依楼（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">病里常期方药真（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风吹岸柳卷如潮 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">觉寒急掩半开窗 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老雀当知食饵多 (青丝羽衣)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月偏云岭冷如霜 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抚腮小憩静修闲 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">少智长嘘世事艰 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风翻岭树猛如涛（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">展笺浮想慢濡毫（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">豪宦焉知世味酸（愚夫）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风穿松壑吼如雷（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">临窗小坐漫调弦（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">倦客深知世路难（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">泉流峭壁响如雷（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">围炉闲坐慢烹茶（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">弱志尤知世路艰（若水）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风掀海浪白于帘（秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">思乡侧卧慢临屏（秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">丑貌应知品德高（秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风豪林麓怒如潮（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">铺笺轻绘正濡毫（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">困境方知世路难（八哥）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风吟名句雅如莺 (不亦le乎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">执毫复拟竖誊诗 (不亦le乎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">厚土总欣竹影骄 (不亦le乎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风掀海浪怒如潮（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">临窗静赏慢挥毫（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">贵胄未谙世事艰（美西洋）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟凝野岭密如屏（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">借光频举紧舂粮（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">显爵方知世味浓（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">电划暮野巨如龙（忆南风）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蹙眉轻叹暗摇头（忆南风）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">病榻最知尘世艰（忆南风）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风穿竹径妙如弦（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">怡情慢品久思贤（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">阔老犹趋世态炎（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云妆野岭美如纱 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">停杯长啸倒提琴 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨涨山溪狂似瀑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鸟鸣竹岭韵如歌（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秉烛细吟斜捧卷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">倚窗远眺漫寻星（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穷身惯觉人情淡（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚岁已知世态凉（弦思）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">简 评：</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：雨涨山溪狂似瀑 </p><p class="ql-block">基本格式：仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 大雨过后，山溪中的水猛涨，其水势和声音，都像狂泻的瀑布。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句为四三结构，运用了比喻的修辞，写出了山溪的水势之大，画面感很强。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们生发自然、辞工意美的佳对举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">雨涨山溪狂似瀑</span></p><p class="ql-block">风穿竹径妙如弦</p><p class="ql-block">烟迷野渡渺如纱</p><p class="ql-block">日斜水面灿如金</p><p class="ql-block">云升竹岭雅如烟</p><p class="ql-block">风翻岭树猛如涛</p><p class="ql-block">花开堤岸灿如霞</p><p class="ql-block">月偏云岭冷如霜</p><p class="ql-block">鸟鸣竹岭韵如歌</p><p class="ql-block">浪推石岸吼如雷 </p><p class="ql-block">风吹稻浪涌如潮</p><p class="ql-block">风吹岸柳卷如潮</p><p class="ql-block">风豪林麓怒如潮</p><p class="ql-block">烟凝野岭密如屏</p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：秉烛细吟斜捧卷</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式：仄仄中平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 情景联</p><p class="ql-block"> 秉烛：拿着点燃的蜡烛。汉佚名《古诗十九首·生年不满百》：“昼短苦夜长，何不秉烛游。”宋梅尧臣《送道损司门》：“朝看不足暮秉烛，何暇更寻桃与杏。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> （我）拿着点燃的蜡烛，轻斜着拿着书卷，仔细地认真地吟咏吟诵着。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句“秉烛细吟斜捧卷”应调整语序理解为：“秉烛斜捧卷细吟”。<span style="font-size:18px;">“斜捧卷”不是目的，</span>“秉烛”、“捧卷”都是为“细吟”服务的，<span style="font-size:18px;">“细吟”才是目的。</span></p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们画面同框，辞工意顺的佳对举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">秉烛细吟斜捧卷</span></p><p class="ql-block">依窗冥想久低头 </p><p class="ql-block">铺笺长考慢挥毫</p><p class="ql-block">展笺浮想慢濡毫</p><p class="ql-block">燃香静悟正参禅</p><p class="ql-block">蹙眉轻叹暗摇头</p><p class="ql-block">续茶慢呷再提神</p><p class="ql-block">围炉轻啜慢烹茶</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：穷身惯觉人情淡</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式：平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 感怀联</p><p class="ql-block"> 穷身：穷汉，指经济状况不佳的人。 明 · 文徵明《丙辰岁除》：“平世及知更事少，穷身惟恐受恩多。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 经济状况不佳的人或穷汉，往往习惯地认为人情是淡薄的。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句揭示了不正视自己的不足，而“怨天尤人”的现象。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们对句意义相关，生发拓展自然的佳句举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">穷身惯觉人情淡</span></p><p class="ql-block">失意方知世态凉</p><p class="ql-block">傲骨尤知世路难</p><p class="ql-block">孤影尤知世路艰</p><p class="ql-block">慧眼静观事术深 </p><p class="ql-block">弱志常嗟世事难</p><p class="ql-block">卑位尤知世态凉</p><p class="ql-block">达命深知世路难</p><p class="ql-block">少智长嘘世事艰</p><p class="ql-block">豪宦焉知世味酸</p><p class="ql-block">倦客深知世路难</p><p class="ql-block">贵胄未谙世事艰</p><p class="ql-block">阔老犹趋世态炎</p><p class="ql-block">晚岁已知世态凉</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：荷花 元其 琢玉 淡定 於发 老六 乡间晚风 大海雨燕 云朵 老农 听花无语 梧桐 青丝羽衣 燕燕于飞 愚夫 ANG.ZQ 若水 秋生 八哥 不亦乐乎 美西洋 闲云 忆南风 文心 笛里关山 弦思 </p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序） </p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片来自西安汉城湖公园景物即时随拍</p>