<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">11月22日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乐结冬缘鹊唱频（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">樵子长歌满岭红（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杏苑盈香蝶影欢（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欣遇秋期菊绽迟（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">村妇笑收满垄金（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花圃盈芳蝶舞欢（荷花）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">为兆年丰雪落深 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春水平分两岸青 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江水流澄钓影闲 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">因恋岁新杏谢迟（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">稚子欢嬉两岸红（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">园圃溢红蝶影纷（八哥）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">为递乡音雁叫勤（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">牧叟独吟满岭青（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">旷宇盈蓝雁影清（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欣盼雪融鹊啭迟（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学子喜描满径红（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花径溢红蝶影翩（淡定）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">为报岁新鹊闹先 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">稚女羞簪几朵红 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坞岸疏红桃色娇 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">为伴君行雪步匆（忆南风）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">黄鸟争鸣几树红（忆南风）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岸石微青树影稀（忆南风）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">怕误良宵妹起迟（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">村女乐追满岸春（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霞岭深幽鹿影闲（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">偶遇风袭燕到迟 (雨燕)(今)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仕子欣描半岭红（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山谷漫红蝶影稠（雨燕）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不负宾来鹊啭欢 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春燕轻穿两岸红 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水榭轻红梅影疏 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欣赴莺邀柳绽初（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">村妇忙收几垄黄（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水榭含烟柳色新（老六）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">因恋情投雪去迟（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴客犹披万缕霞（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花圃盈香蝶翼欢（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">因赴花期燕舞欢（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">骚客漫吟万树红（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水榭盈香月影幽（Ang.zq）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹觅柳苏燕掠匆（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雅客素描五岭春（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杏岸盈馨鸟影纷（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">偶遇寒流雪化迟（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霜叶轻扬满岭红（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花苑溢香蝶影翩（若水）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">期待燕回柳绿迟（秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗老坐吟半岭红（秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">院落飘香蝶影明（秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">怕扰夜眠月起迟（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">村妪力敲满树彤（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">津渡强风客影稀（闲云）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">为恋佳人客去迟（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">騒客喜吟千曲新（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">阁道多弯游客稀（美西洋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">怕误莺回柳发新 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">村女悠歌满院香 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">园圃飘红蝶影忙 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹恋秋情雁去迟（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">少妇聊烹十里青（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花径新红蝶影迷（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">为赏冬深雪落多（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">村女漫观两岸春（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野径飘香花影斜（弦思）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不舍冬缘雪化迟（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">越女羞簪两鬓红（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花圃飘红蝶影稠（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恐耽春约梅开早（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">似畏残寒燕到迟（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野翁闲钓一溪碧（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">旭日初催满岭红（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭皋满翠禽声杂（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">榭苑轻红蝶舞欢（元其）</span></p> <p class="ql-block">简评：</p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：恐耽春约梅开早</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式：中平中仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 情景联</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 恐怕耽误了春天的约定，梅花早早地就开放了。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句所写的梅花开放的时节，当是冬末春初，师友们意象相关，景物同框，辞工意美的佳句举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">恐耽春约梅开早</span></p><p class="ql-block">不舍冬缘雪化迟</p><p class="ql-block">乐结冬缘鹊唱频</p><p class="ql-block">为兆年丰雪落深</p><p class="ql-block">为报岁新鹊闹先 </p><p class="ql-block">欣赴莺邀柳绽初</p><p class="ql-block">似畏残寒燕到迟</p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：野翁闲钓一溪碧</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式：中平中仄中平仄</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 情景联</p><p class="ql-block"> 野翁： 犹野老。唐白居易《偶吟》：“人生变改故无穷，昔是朝官今野翁。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 野老在一条碧绿的小溪上悠闲地垂钓着。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句可以调整语序理解为：“野翁一溪碧闲钓”，或“一溪碧野翁闲钓”，总之，“一溪碧”表示处所，在句中作状语。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们词工意美的佳句多多：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">野翁闲钓一溪碧</span></p><p class="ql-block">樵子长歌满岭红</p><p class="ql-block">村妇笑收满垄金</p><p class="ql-block">稚子欢嬉两岸红</p><p class="ql-block">牧叟独吟满岭青</p><p class="ql-block">学子喜描满径红</p><p class="ql-block">稚女羞簪几朵红 </p><p class="ql-block">仕子欣描半岭红</p><p class="ql-block">骚客漫吟万树红</p><p class="ql-block">雅客素描五岭春</p><p class="ql-block">诗老坐吟半岭红</p><p class="ql-block">骚客喜吟千曲新</p><p class="ql-block">少妇聊烹十里青</p><p class="ql-block">村女漫观两岸春</p><p class="ql-block">越女羞簪两鬓红</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：亭皋满翠禽声杂</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式：平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 亭皋：意思是水边的平地。出自《汉书·司马相如传上》：“亭皋千里，靡不被筑。”唐·张说《奉和春日出苑应制》诗：“雨洗亭皋千亩绿，风吹梅李一园香。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 水边的平地满是翠绿的颜色，传来了各种鸟叫的声音。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们意象谐和，词工意美的佳对是：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">亭皋满翠禽声杂</span></p><p class="ql-block">杏苑盈香蝶影欢</p><p class="ql-block">江水流澄钓影闲 </p><p class="ql-block">园圃溢红蝶影纷</p><p class="ql-block">花径溢红蝶影翩</p><p class="ql-block">霞岭深幽鹿影闲</p><p class="ql-block">山谷漫红蝶影稠</p><p class="ql-block">水榭含烟柳色新</p><p class="ql-block">花圃盈香蝶翼欢</p><p class="ql-block">杏岸盈馨鸟影纷</p><p class="ql-block">花苑溢香蝶影翩</p><p class="ql-block">花圃飘红蝶影稠</p><p class="ql-block">榭苑轻红蝶舞欢</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：琢玉 荷花 乡间晚风 八哥 大海 淡定 青丝羽衣 忆南风 老农 雨燕 听花无语 老六 梧桐 ANG.ZQ 文心 若水 秋生 闲云 美西洋 笛里关山 於发 弦思 云朵 元其 </p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序） </p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片来自网络，致谢原作者</p>