【芳草园】联对集锦(五百二十五)

笛里关山

<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">  【加强连】联对集锦,自五百零一集始,更名为【芳草园】联对集锦。愿【芳草园】百花竞放,异彩纷呈,装扮楹联天地永远的春天!</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">  特别声明:【芳草园】联对集锦成刊,均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">11月15日师友出句:</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫燕掠枝绿柳摇(云朵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">细柳婆娑舞惠风(云朵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日(笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鲤鱼跃水戏浮萍(云朵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霜槭遮峰赤焰燃(琢玉)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽径蜿蜒袅暗香(琢玉)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日(笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鲈鱼佐酒醉清秋(琢玉)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">修竹临风妙曲扬(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荷蕊娇娆香夜风(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日(笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鲤鱼溅水戏荷花(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新月钩云玉影移(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古寺庄严响晚钟(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鲤鱼跃浪戏流云(荷花)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒叶惊秋爽气生(愚夫)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">碧草葳蕤沁淡香(愚夫)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">良驹饮露驭清风(愚夫)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫气笼山玉影摇(淡定)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">碧柳婆娑醉晚风(淡定)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芦花带露伴流风(淡定)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">  </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大雁巡天玉影移(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">峻岭蜿蜒落晚霞(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日(笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜莺带露伴飞云(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋荻迎风白絮飞(元其)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">菡萏芬芳醉晚风(元其)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛟龙挟浪起狂飙(元其)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晨鸟喧林妙曲扬 (飞翔自由)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠竹飘摇滤朗星 (飞翔自由)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛟龙戏水逐流舟 (飞翔自由)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暮霭绕山银影浮(八哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽径朦胧透晚风(八哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日(笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">轻舟破浪逐归潮(八哥)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">泉瀑飞岩雅韵传(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫燕蹁跹醉晚风(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江鱼赶浪逐飞舟(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜露着枝玉滴栖 (青丝羽衣) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">锦鲤悠闲逐碧波 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蒹葭搖穗舞流风 (青丝羽衣)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">  </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">朝雾迷山白帐垂(秋生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">宝刹威严降福音(秋生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">兰舟破浪逐春风(秋生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">落日照林紫气浮(老农)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠柳婆娑舞暖风(老农)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日(笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鲤鱼跃浪浴轻风(老农)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">  </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋雁拂云矫羽翔(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">绮榭玲珑隐密林(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日(笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">丹萤举烛等流星(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋雁鸣空落日圆(梧桐)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">绿影婆娑映短亭(梧桐)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日(笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">黄芦依水望山城(梧桐)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">疏雨滋花香气幽 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽谷空蒙递晚钟 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟帆斩浪阅清秋 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋桂盈山馥气飞(文心)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">兰棹安恬醉雅人(文心)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">候虫出土沐春风(文心)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠柳含烟白絮飞 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">碧藕娉婷擎玉珠 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鲤鱼出水碎流云 (听花无语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">薄雾浮香幻景生(忆南风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香气氤氲绽新荷(忆南风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野花照水绕烟村(忆南风)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岸柳随风绿叶飘(於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">碧树葱茏起暮烟(於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蒹葭带露舞秋风 (於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍柏居山碧浪翻 (不亦le乎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野鹤悠闲戏轻云 (不亦le乎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日(笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋枫着色醉流云 (不亦le乎)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞染水金波漾(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">朝日照林绿意浓(美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清池潋滟浮明月(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠柳婀娜钓晚风(美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹏鸟披霞追落日 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛟龙破浪戏流云(美西洋)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">简 评:</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句:晚霞染水金波漾</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式:中平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block">联意为:</p><p class="ql-block"> 晚霞倒影在水中,金波荡漾。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句富含画面感,没有明显的节令限制。师友们景物同框,生发自然的佳句举例如下:</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">晚霞染水金波漾</span></p><p class="ql-block">紫燕掠枝绿柳摇</p><p class="ql-block">霜槭遮峰赤焰燃</p><p class="ql-block">修竹临风妙曲扬</p><p class="ql-block">新月钩云玉影移</p><p class="ql-block">寒叶惊秋爽气生</p><p class="ql-block">秋荻迎风白絮飞</p><p class="ql-block">泉瀑飞岩雅韵传</p><p class="ql-block">落日照林紫气浮</p><p class="ql-block">秋桂盈山馥气飞</p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句:清池潋滟浮明月</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式:平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 清 · 乾隆帝弘历《水中楼影》有这样的诗句:“清池潋滟映长空,蘸影楼台入水红。”</p><p class="ql-block"> 潋滟:水波荡漾的意思,是形容性的联绵词。南朝梁何逊 《行经范僕射故宅》:“潋滟故池水,苍茫落日晖。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为:</p><p class="ql-block"> 一泓清澈的池塘水波荡漾,里面漂浮着明月的倒影。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句为晚景联。师友们词工意美的佳对很多,举例如下:</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">清池潋滟浮明月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">兰棹安恬醉雅人</span></p><p class="ql-block">细柳婆娑舞惠风</p><p class="ql-block">荷蕊娇娆香夜风</p><p class="ql-block">碧柳婆娑醉晚风</p><p class="ql-block">紫燕蹁跹醉晚风</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">翠柳婀娜钓晚风</span></p><p class="ql-block">幽径蜿蜒袅暗香</p><p class="ql-block">翠竹飘摇滤朗星</p><p class="ql-block">绿影婆娑映短亭</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">锦鲤悠闲逐碧波</span></p><p class="ql-block">峻岭蜿蜒落晚霞</p><p class="ql-block">碧草葳蕤沁淡香</p><p class="ql-block">古寺庄严响晚钟</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句:鹏鸟披霞追落日</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式:中仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 鹏鸟没有特别的含义,可以理解为大鸟。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为:</p><p class="ql-block"> 大鸟展开双翼,披着霞光,向落日的方向快速地飞去。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句亦无明显的节令限制,师友们意象相关,景物同框,画面谐和的佳对举例如下:</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">鹏鸟披霞追落日</span></p><p class="ql-block">鲤鱼跃水戏浮萍</p><p class="ql-block">芦花带露伴流风</p><p class="ql-block">轻舟破浪逐归潮</p><p class="ql-block">兰舟破浪逐春风</p><p class="ql-block">鲤鱼跃浪浴轻风</p><p class="ql-block">候虫出土沐春风</p><p class="ql-block">野花照水绕烟村</p><p class="ql-block">秋枫着色醉流云</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅:芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">简评:笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿:云朵 琢玉 弦思 荷花 愚夫 淡定 大海 元其 飞翔自由 八哥 若水 青丝羽衣 秋生 老农 雨燕 梧桐 笛里关山 文心 听花无语 忆南风 於发 不亦le乎 美西洋</p><p class="ql-block">(以投稿先后为序) </p><p class="ql-block">编录:笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block">  限于篇幅,选取有代表性的对句简评一二,雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择,其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点,因学识水平有限,难免有疏漏和不妥之处,欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为师友们依图所出的句子</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片来自网络,致谢原作者</p>