<p class="ql-block">这次作业是把"白日依山尽,黄河入海流"当作首联补齐颔联颈联尾联凑成五言律诗。</p> <p class="ql-block">《登楼》常韦</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">萧萧梧叶落,阵阵暮云收。</p><p class="ql-block">世事原为梦,人生本自愁。</p><p class="ql-block">秋霜侵古道,稽月复何求。</p> <p class="ql-block">《登楼》高莹</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">马驰千里路,虎啸四方丘。</p><p class="ql-block">雨落黄沙软,风吹绿浪悠。</p><p class="ql-block">九弯奔大海,霸气贯神州。</p> <p class="ql-block">《登楼》 任焕萍</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">高巅空物我,劲气舞金秋。</p><p class="ql-block">起落诗呈慢,开合若水柔。</p><p class="ql-block">阴阳流画卷,道法自然修。</p> <p class="ql-block">《登楼》许可</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">悠悠天地阔,浩浩水云稠。</p><p class="ql-block">半世尘中老,今朝物外游。</p><p class="ql-block">登楼随远眺,咫尺转神州。</p> <p class="ql-block">《登楼》张建华</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">晨曦初旭展,暮霭绕田悠。</p><p class="ql-block">万古春秋远,千川岁月稠。</p><p class="ql-block">铮铮华夏骨,笑看颂神州。</p> <p class="ql-block">《登楼》</p><p class="ql-block">张卫平(平水韵)</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">长亭伤别意,古道惹离愁。</p><p class="ql-block">云影天边远,帆踪水际悠。</p><p class="ql-block">何时重聚首,泪眼望归舟。</p> <p class="ql-block">《登楼》桐荫海棠</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">太行松愈翠,阿里桧芳稠。</p><p class="ql-block">华北苗儿壮,桃园稻米收。</p><p class="ql-block">终将同日月,两岸写春秋。</p> <p class="ql-block">《登楼》陈红嬿</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">叠峦连锦绣,玉带送晚舟。</p><p class="ql-block">九曲天河水,丹青翰墨稠。</p><p class="ql-block">中华朝万里,盛世写千秋。</p> <p class="ql-block">《登楼》浮萍</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">举头忽已暮,回首已深秋。</p><p class="ql-block">书笔呈清远,恬盈在眼眸。</p><p class="ql-block">天边云散去,月下景堪幽。</p> <p class="ql-block">《登楼》余峰</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">秋云飘远处,大野展名楼。</p><p class="ql-block">鹳雀千人诵,名章百代留。</p><p class="ql-block">诗人今故地,岁月去悠悠。</p> <p class="ql-block">《登楼》</p><p class="ql-block">黄文瑾(平水韵)</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">荒村栖雀噪,古镇酒旗浮。</p><p class="ql-block">晕月勾恩怨,黄沙掠旧愁。</p><p class="ql-block">残年推送客,偻愀独登楼。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">《登楼》</p><p class="ql-block">许成玉(平水韵)</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">牧童横奏笛,钓者晚归舟。</p><p class="ql-block">啸啸斑鸠唱,凄凄大雁愁。</p><p class="ql-block">潺潺东逝水,何日复回头?</p> <p class="ql-block">《学诗有感》</p><p class="ql-block">成耀科(平水韵)</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">稀年听古韵,暮岁赋新秋。</p><p class="ql-block">课室书香绕,灯前夜月钩。</p><p class="ql-block">山河皆入画,诗意魅长留。</p> <p class="ql-block">《登楼》</p><p class="ql-block">齐宗一(特邀诗友)</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">青山遮不住,浊水涌无休。</p><p class="ql-block">千载白云幻,万般浮世愁。</p><p class="ql-block">长安一片月,逐梦泛舟游。</p> <p class="ql-block">《登楼》</p><p class="ql-block">齐宗一(特邀诗友)</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">横穿八万里,纵贯九州侯。</p><p class="ql-block">直挂云帆际,攀登皓月楼。</p><p class="ql-block">浮云游子意,誓壮伟人筹。</p> <p class="ql-block">《泰山望霞》</p><p class="ql-block">马安田(特邀诗友)</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">松风惊鸟语,雁阵掠云悠。</p><p class="ql-block">岱岳秋霞灿,沧溟暮霭稠。</p><p class="ql-block">心期晨彩耀,梦待曙光浮。</p> <p class="ql-block">《黄河口秋韵》</p><p class="ql-block">马安田(特邀诗友)</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">芦花盈浦溆,鸥鹭舞汀丘。</p><p class="ql-block">霞彩辉天地,波光映眼眸。</p><p class="ql-block">游船催楫返,留影醉心头。</p> <p class="ql-block">《登楼五首》Gzc</p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">茫茫空地阔,飒讽冷风稠。</p><p class="ql-block">雁过留身影,波推送晚舟。</p><p class="ql-block">壮心随浪去,诗酒趁年游。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">秋风吹滚浪,暮色送翔鸥。</p><p class="ql-block">云起千峰暗,霜来万木秋。</p><p class="ql-block">登楼天地远,美景屡回眸。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">苍穹含万象,大地载千秋。</p><p class="ql-block">野径穿林樾,村烟绕屋楼。</p><p class="ql-block">人生如逝水,何处觅归舟?</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">峰峦生暮色,岛屿带晴秋。</p><p class="ql-block">万里关山远,千年史册收。</p><p class="ql-block">英雄何处在?明月照孤舟。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">白日依山尽,黄河入海流。</p><p class="ql-block">天涯望不断,岁月去悠悠。</p><p class="ql-block">烽火连三晋,烟霞绕九州。</p><p class="ql-block">英雄多故国,霸业几时休?</p> <p class="ql-block">(仄)仄平平仄,平平仄仄平。</p><p class="ql-block">(平)平平仄仄,{仄)仄仄平平。</p><p class="ql-block">(仄)仄平平仄,平平仄仄平。</p><p class="ql-block">(平)平平仄仄,(仄)仄仄平平。</p> <p class="ql-block">以上是仄起首句不入韵式的五律的格式。</p>