<p class="ql-block">指导老师无为斋主人</p><p class="ql-block">2024.10.9</p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">下期作业：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">对句：（上句）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">出句：（下句）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">1、金秋处处庆丰收。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">2、自撰联。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">出题与点评老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">闫秀萍</b></p> 金秋 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘宽应</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">红叶频频传喜讯：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，语义上下关联，喜讯与丰收结构不对应。</span></p> …… <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">霍成奎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">圆月年年祈幸福；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，联语关联，幸福与丰收结构不一致。</span></p> 诗情画意 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘建和</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">炎夏频频揮汗水；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">自撰联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝《秋韵》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘建和</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">炎夏频频揮汗水；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">又逢光景一年好，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">稻谷满仓月满楼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，上下联语义关联，因有夏日辛勤耕耘，所以换来金秋收获。但汗水与丰收结构不一致。</span></p> 清雅 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">白露年年呈硕果；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一一郭保旺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，上下联表义一致，硕果与丰收词性结构不一致。</span></p> 金色年华 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赵显勇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">艳菊层层迎贵客；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，语义关联，贵客与丰收结构不一致。</span></p> 精妙 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">郝建富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大雁声声鸣好运；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，语义关联，好运与丰收结构不一致。</span></p> 秋声 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梁金翠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沃野层层飘雅韵；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，语义关联，意境美好，但雅韵与丰收结构不一致。</span></p> 文化 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">温丕彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">碧水滔滔歌大美；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，对仗工整，形对意联。[强][强]</span></p> 金秋 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">耿宝异</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">硕果累累映喜气；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：“映”字应平而仄，三仄尾，喜气与丰收结构不对应，语义上下联相关联。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">改出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">耿宝异</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">硕果累累盈瑞气；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p> 花香 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">武达</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">好岁时时传笑语；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，语义关联，笑语与丰收结构不对应。</span></p> 风光无限好 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">程树光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">华夏人人明细作；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，语义关联，华夏/金秋，结构不相对应。</span></p> 凉风习习 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">崔晓清</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">明月时时增福报；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，词性相对，语义相关。</span></p> 斑斓秋色 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 赵文英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尊酒家家迎喜宴，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，语义关联，喜宴与丰收结构不对应。</span></p> 秋画 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">王占安</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">碧浪时时传喜讯，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，语义关联，喜讯与丰收结构不对应。</span></p> 馨香 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">许晋武</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">硕果累累传笑语；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，语义关联，笑语与丰收词性结构不一致。</span></p> 秋色迷人 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冀雅玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">硕果枝枝书大有；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，对仗工整，形对意联，呈现出收获季节硕果累累，粮丰果熟的丰收景象以及人们的喜悦之情。</span></p> 果实累累 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">张期望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雁阵声声惊寒露；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：“寒〞字应仄而平，寒露与丰收结构不对应，上下联语义感觉关联性不强。</span></p> 田野流金 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">王海良作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.出句对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：赤县田田盈窃笑；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.自撰诗联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五句谣•秋日寻芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋高气爽带妻娃，结伴寻芳五指崖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">菊妾方邀闻异馥，兰妃又唤赏奇花。归来已是满天霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评：平仄合律，形对意联，表达了丰收季节的喜悦的之情。</span></p> 美景迎眸 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梁小彬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乡野村村听大戏；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋处处庆丰收。</span></p>