<p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">《重阳踏秋、情满河下》发表后,受到各方面关注,文章被中国老年大学协会转发。文章得到战友、同学大力支持,写了不少好的评论,现摘录几段,以飨读者。</p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">张正义参加<span style="font-size:18px;">手机班重阳节活动有感,随书打油一首,恭请各位斧正。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">欢度重阳节</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">九月初九重阳节,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">手机班人河下集。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">班长挥旗似导游,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">书记话简做讲解。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">每游一景有留影,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">老师同学都开心。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">西偏太阳快落山,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">有幸相聚手机班。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">期待此举时常有,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">健康快乐人长久。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">颜土奎读《重阳踏秋、情满河下》有感,为手机班尊老敬老点赞!</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">重阳观景稻己黄,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">祖国山河尽辉煌。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">眼见丰收已在望,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">农夫心中喜洋洋。</p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">陈长松另有活动,没能参加手机班重阳节活动,留言:夕阳无限好,人间重晚晴!祝大家玩的开心!</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">古街古巷古文楼,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">千里运河御码头。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">老店比肩三百家,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">旅游胜景人人夸! </p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;">罗卫民祝战友重阳节快乐!永远幸福安康!</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">岁岁重阳,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">今又重阳,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">菊花傲霜满地香;</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">久久思量,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">久久难忘,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">九九重阳胜春光;</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">美酒一杯,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">秋雁两行,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">福泽深厚又绵长。</p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">王春广用一首《采桑子●重阳》祝手机班同学重阳节快乐!</p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">岁月悠悠人易老,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">漫漫时光。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">岁岁重阳,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">步入夕阳也辉煌。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">霜重垄上稻谷黄,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">颗颗饱满。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">粒粒饭香,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">太平盛世人欢畅。</p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">顾峰重阳踏秋有感</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">(七律)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">风轻露重桂花香,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一夜寒凉到重阳。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">踏秋寻古河下去,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">结伴同游情谊长。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">千米老街青石巷,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">万家商铺依两旁。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">昔日茶巷今变样,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">同学笑声传远方。</p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">2024年10月11日,手机同学重阳节到河下古镇采风有感。霍养俊</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">同学一行访河下,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">秋风已凉雨沙沙。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">穿过花街拜茶巷,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">坐客文楼探繁华。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一脚登朝效古贤,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">西游大师笔生花。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">凤凰涅槃助穿越,</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">文旅劲风卷华夏。</p> <p class="ql-block">感谢阅读,欢迎点评!</p>