我写你诵| 秋之韵

金雀山

<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋,是你,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">让我荡起童年的回忆,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋,是你,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">让我涌起家乡的眷恋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋,是你,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">让我唤起青春的激情,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋,是你,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">让我再一次提笔,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勾起我心底无尽的思念。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江山叠彩,五彩斑斓,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">人间千色,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋色,平分一半。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一园春花堪入画,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">缤纷夺目,百花争艳,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">半窗秋月情如诗,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">对影成句,一地阑珊。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">静谧,丰满,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我爱的秋,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋水为墨,秋叶为笺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清风有信,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">你是秋风我是诗,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋色横空,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">彩笔淡墨娇姿绽。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陌上桂生金,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岭下枫欲燃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">几簇菊桂花艳舞,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">半山枫叶醉红颜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">高天云水遥,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长亭落日圆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一行大雁掠长空,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云端书写秋之恋。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋,有,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">“满城尽带黄金甲”的豪情,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">“霜叶红于二月花”的美赞,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">“江枫渔火对愁眠”的悲愁,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">“阶前梧叶已秋声”的感叹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋声,悦耳,婉转,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">奏响一曲秋之韵,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穿透心扉,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">轻盈,静美,恬淡。</span></p> <p class="ql-block">诵读老师文章链接:</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/56wptrfh?first_share_to=copy_link&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=9314944" target="_blank">剑青老师诵</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/56wsw6dv?first_share_to=copy_link&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=9314944" target="_blank">艾瑞丝老师诵</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/56y7gfjy?first_share_to=copy_link&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=9314944" target="_blank">咏老师诵</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/56y68wrb?first_share_to=copy_link&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=9314944" target="_blank">珠猪姥爷诵</a></p><p class="ql-block">珠猪姥爷的精彩点评:</p><p class="ql-block">拜读金雀山老师的诗作《秋之韵》,深深被老师的佳作吸引,这是一篇极具功力的好作品:</p><p class="ql-block">通篇浑然一体,尽展大美秋天。</p><p class="ql-block">文中精彩段落,自成精湛佳联。</p><p class="ql-block">妙笔生辉!</p><p class="ql-block">金雀山老师《秋之韵》诗作中,隐含对联:</p><p class="ql-block">1、一园春花堪入画,缤纷夺目,百花争艳,半窗秋月情如诗,对影成句,一地阑珊。</p><p class="ql-block">2、陌上桂生金,岭下枫欲燃。</p><p class="ql-block">3、几簇菊桂花艳舞,半山枫叶醉红颜。</p><p class="ql-block">4、高天云水遥,长亭落日圆。</p><p class="ql-block">5、一行大雁掠长空,云端书写秋之恋。</p><p class="ql-block">6、陌上桂生金,几簇菊桂花艳舞,岭下枫欲燃,半山枫叶醉红颜。</p><p class="ql-block">7、高天云水遥,一行大雁掠长空,长亭落日圆,云端书写秋之恋。</p>