<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">特别声明：【加强连】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span><a href="https://www.meipian14.cn/40j2cpwo" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">【加强连】联对集锦组稿成员主页链</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">7月24日精彩出句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">精彩对句呈现</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">潜修沧海始神龙（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">自无琐事惹心烦（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陋室酒香因友浓（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">只怜深谷必幽兰 (东篱月)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">频传深意理弦柔 (东篱月)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒夜雪花入梦轻 (东篱月)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">频亲细蕊是勤蜂（安宁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浑忘琐事挑灯忙（安宁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">平屋笛声吹月萧（安宁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟 (联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长留馥蕊有痴蜂 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲 (联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">终怀倔性促琴精 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦 (联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒阁箫声沐雪幽 (青丝羽衣)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常生绝巘是乔松（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">更怀雅意咏诗悠（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曲径苔痕过雨新（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常临巨海少穷鱼（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凡逢爱意令歌甜（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">弃院竹篱沐雪肥（雨燕）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">频临碧水有肥鱼（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">自存壮志涌心潮（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒舍烛光被雪残（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长居深泽是枭龙（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">更怀壮志慰诗情（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野径竹声映月幽（老农）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长存峭壁有奇岩（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">好书佳作耀文坛（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒院松枝遇雪肥（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常游碧海尽真龙（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">只来雅兴作画幽（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒岭花香带雪柔（大海）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常趟急浪数灵鱼（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">独怀雅韵嗅诗香（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">瘠土桃姿映日妍（老六）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常临陋室近贤人（秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常吟好句解诗愁（秋生）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野陌松声入夜狂（秋生）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">深藏幽谷尽琪花（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常怀壮志咏诗欢（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒院鹊声沐日喧（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常潜深海有蛟龙（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常存壮志铸心坚（八哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒院雪光映日清（八哥)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长留阆苑有奇花（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">更存壮志见心贞（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒院竹声伴雨清（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">独居深谷近灵芝 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长存锐气赋诗奇 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">越塞鸟声见日欢 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常吟碧叶是清蝉（</span><span style="font-size:18px;">乡间晚风</span><span style="font-size:20px;">)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">敢教浩气动天惊 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寂院笛声入夜清 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">偶来韶苑醉幽花（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">重温旧梦借诗圆（愚夫)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雪径松声对月言（愚夫）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">静开幽谷有芬葩（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">焉无逸致奏琴欢（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹院鹊声伴日喧（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">危依峭壁有奇松（金雨）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岂无妙句佐诗香（金雨）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽院兰姿临月柔（金雨）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欣观壑谷尽奇葩（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">疑无壮志放诗怀（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画院竹枝过雨新（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">深藏峻谷有猗兰（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">方成力作畅怀舒（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦（联友）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雪脊鹊声入室喧（云朵）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">久住高枝多俊鸟 (联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常游远海有香鲸 (胡萝卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">别有豪情催笔劲 (联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">几多才气吐文辉 (胡萝卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冻檐梅影经风瘦 (联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">萧壁柳丝因露新 (胡萝卜)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">首联出句：久住高枝多俊鸟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">高枝，偏正名词。指高树枝，亦指高地位。在古诗中常被用来象征高洁，高尚，或高远的志向。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">俊鸟，偏正名词，鸟的美称，在出句中似可理解为善飞之鸟，有能耐之鸟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三国时期文学家曹植曾诗曰：“潜鱼跃清波，好鸟鸣高枝。”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">唐人贾岛亦诗曰：俊鸟还投高处栖，腾身戛戛下云梯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">综合芳草，安宁，云朵，琢玉等老师的解读，出句为倒装句，义理联，其主干为俊鸟住高枝，四三结构，前后有因果联系，用正对入联较好。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诸师友词工意美佳联妙对略举几例：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">频亲细蕊是勤蜂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长留馥蕊有痴蜂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">潜修沧海始神龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长居深泽是枭龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常生绝巘是乔松。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">深藏峻谷有猗兰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长存峭壁有奇岩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常吟碧叶是清蝉。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二联出句：别有豪情催笔劲。词性分析：别有，副词+动词，豪情，豪迈的情怀，偏正名词。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">笔劲，指文章书法犀利有力，宋人楼钥诗曰：“墨妙饶精神，笔劲含姿态。”元人张宪亦诗曰：“诗严笔劲逼晋汉，学士何人美词翰。”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">催，动词，催促，促使，催生之意。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">催笔劲，催生文笔，文章强劲有力。催笔劲用动宾或动补均可应对，个见似用动补更为贴切。诸师友词工意美佳联略举几例。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长存锐气赋诗奇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">方成力作畅怀舒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">自无琐事惹心烦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浑忘琐事挑灯忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">独怀雅韵嗅诗香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">重温旧梦借诗圆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常存壮志铸心坚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凡逢爱意令歌甜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">只来雅兴作画幽。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">尾联出句：冻檐梅影经风瘦。景物联，其主干就是梅影瘦，诸师友以鹊声喧，竹声清，雪花轻，鸟声欢，笛声清，兰姿柔，雪光清，酒香浓入联应对，词工意美，佳联略举几例：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雪脊鹊声入室喧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒院鹊声沐日喧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒院竹声伴雨清。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒夜雪花入梦轻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">越塞鸟声见日欢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寂院笛声入夜清。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽院兰姿临月柔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒院雪光映日清。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陋室酒香因友浓。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">指导：芳草</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">简评：文心</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 笛里关山 弦思 文心</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">组稿： 琢玉 东篱月 安宁 青絲羽衣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">元其 雨燕 荷花 老农 弦思 大海 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">老六 秋生 淡定 八哥 若水 笛里关山 乡间晚风 愚夫 文心 金雨 於发 云朵 胡萝卜 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">排名按投稿前后</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">编录 文心</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。🌹🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">（1）出句为芳草老师精彩集句。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">（2）对句为师友们原创。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">（3）图片来自网络，致谢原作者。🌹🌹🌹</span></p>