《半亩方塘》·慈善诗会赋61班刊第1期

玉玲珑

<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赋61班第九次课外练笔</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">请完成以下轻隔句对句:</span></p><p class="ql-block">玉玲珑</p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">雕梁画栋,朝飞南浦之云;</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">对句参考:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">翠幌珠帘,暮卷西山之雨。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">原文:</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画栋朝飞南浦云,珠帘暮卷西山雨。</span>——《滕王阁序》</p> <p class="ql-block">🍃🌸🍃<span style="font-size:18px;">赋61班前八次做了几种不同结构的双平声、双仄声对语练习,今天是第一次课外轻隔句练笔,在此抛砖引玉,请洒潘江、各倾陆海云尔:</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">1. 赋6100玉玲珑</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雕梁画栋,朝飞南浦之云;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫幕云屏,晚对西江之月。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">2. 秋风</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雕梁画栋,朝飞南浦之云;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉槛朱帘,暮接西山之雨。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">3. 刘红科</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雕梁画栋,朝飞南浦之云;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠阁琼楼,暮瞰西山之日。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:20px;">4. 赋6103若兮雁兮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雕梁画栋,朝飞南浦之云;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠幕珠帘,暮挽西山之雨。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">5. 赋6116超然</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雕梁画栋,朝飞南浦之云;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">碧瓦红墙,暮映西天之彩。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">6. 赋6113兵之心</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雕梁画栋,朝飞南浦之云;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芳草清风,春驻东湖之阙。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">7. 赋6102潘萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雕梁画栋,朝飞南浦之云,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">朱栏玉砌,鸟瞰西山之月。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">8. 书卷好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雕梁画栋,朝飞南浦之云;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉殿瑶台,暮浴西津之月。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">9. 赋6107天籁静听</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雕梁画栋,朝飞南浦之云;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曲水流觞,杯举中天之月。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">10. 赋6108馨语</span><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雕梁画栋,朝飞南浦之云;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠阁珠帘,暮对西山之锦。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">11. 赋6115淡荷清韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雕梁画栋,朝飞南浦之云;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凤馆龙台,晚照关山之月。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">12. 赋6106心如大海</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雕梁画栋,朝飞南浦之云,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">碧瓦丹螭,暮耀西山之日。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">​13. 赋6118诗遥 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雕梁画栋,朝飞南浦之云;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠竹兰亭,暮看西山之月。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">14. 赋6105王一如</span><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雕梁画栋,朝飞南浦之云;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">墨竹烟松,夕染北峰之色。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">16. 大自然 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雕梁画栋,朝飞南浦之云,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉砌朱栏,夜映东山之月。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">《赋谱》云:凡赋句有壮、紧、长、隔、漫、发、送合织成,不可偏舍。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">隔句,隔句就是相隔一句对仗,因此又叫“隔句对”。这是赋句的基本句式之一。它和对联中两分句的联相似,也有人称为“分句对”或“复句对”。隔句分为六类,分别是:轻、重、疏、密、平、杂。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">轻隔:前四字,后六字。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">它们每个分句尾字的平仄为:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">平仄仄平,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">或:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仄平平仄</span></p> <p class="ql-block">校长:陌上花开</p><p class="ql-block">赋部部长:秋风</p><p class="ql-block">班主任:玉玲珑 书卷好</p><p class="ql-block">辅导老师:刘红科、望远欣慰、大自然</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">班长:淡荷清韵</p><p class="ql-block">班助:心如大海、若兮雁兮</p>