【加强连】联对集锦(四百四十七)

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<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">特别声明:【加强连】联对集锦成刊,均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="font-size:20px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">【加强连】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">5月17日出句:</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">飘零岁月感怀多(琢玉)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饮罢一庭月色幽(琢玉)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">隐树千支睍睆歌(琢玉)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">承平世界比邻多(安宁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">樵罢双肩月色融(安宁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">喧径一群清脆声(安宁)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">悠闲岁月友人多(刘秋生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">客至三餐酒气浓(刘秋生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">落日一湖潋滟光(刘秋生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">谦和品性友人多(元其)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">书罢一笺竹韵清(元其)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">敲竹满园淅沥声(元其)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">随和天性友朋多(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">书罢全篇墨韵浓(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">沿岸数声婉转音(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清贫世界爱情真(宋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">游返一身草色凌(宋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欢柳一双曼妙姿(宋)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蹉跎岁月随感多(淡定)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">航返一身露气浓(淡定)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浮岸一帘柔美姿(淡定)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清闲岁月逸怀多(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">吟罢满身诗意浓(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伴竹千竿潇洒姿(荷花)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">流亡岁月故乡亲(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">牧罢群羊霞色披(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夹岸数声漂渺歌(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荒唐岁月怨情多(文心)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画罢半笺藕色鲜(文心)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">绕榭万丝骀荡风(文心)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">谦恭品性善缘多 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">聚醉全身酒气盈 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">敲牖数番摇曳枝 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清高路上故朋稀(老六)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">牧返一肩松气浓(老六)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">拂面千重绰约姿(老六)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">峥嵘岁月友情长(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">牧出一身雾气浓(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">入户一丝清淡香(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">随和物事友邻多(老农)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">宴别一身酒气浓(老农)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">承露千盘圆润珠(老农)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">灾荒年代恶魔多(闲云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">耕罢一身土气浓(闲云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浮岸数枝缥缈香(闲云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浮华时世畔朋多 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">餐罢一襟晚照明 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">旋步一行窈窕身 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍茫客路故情浓(梧桐)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歌罢一江蟾影幽(梧桐)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">隔水千重锦绣秋(梧桐)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">率性客路故交多 (钱云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">船泊孤洲鹭影频 (钱云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浮水一轮婀娜姿 (钱云金雨)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍凉世态感怀深(云朵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">樵歇一阶竹影清(云朵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鸣柳一堤婉转音(云朵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">随和世路睦邻多(八哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">樵返一身霭气浓(八哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">垂岸千条洒脱姿(八哥)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大千世界友人亲 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">棋罢半窗月色明(美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">栖树千声宛转音(美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">艰辛时节挚情希 (胡萝卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烹就一窗月色浓 (胡萝卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影 ( 问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">绿岸数群婀娜姿 (胡萝卜)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天).</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">义行天下友朋多(於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟至双溪柳色新(於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夹岸千株浪漫姿(於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤介人生知己少(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">宽柔交道淑贤多(愚夫)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓归两袖荷香满(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">濯足双眸云影舒(愚夫)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映池几朵娉婷影(问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">绕屋满园荃蕙香(愚夫)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">简 评:</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句:孤介人生知己少</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式:中仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 感怀联</p><p class="ql-block"> 孤介:耿直方正,不随流俗。 晋陶潜 《戊申岁六月中遇火》:“总发抱孤介,奄出四十年。”</p><p class="ql-block"> 知己:彼此相知而情谊深切的人。唐王勃《送杜少府之任蜀州》:“海内存知己,天涯若比邻。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为:</p><p class="ql-block"> 耿直方正的人生(态度或经历),(所遇或所交)的知己就少多了。</p><p class="ql-block"> “孤介”是并列式的形容词,“知己”是偏正式的名词。师友们辞工律正、富含理趣的佳对是:</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">孤介人生知己少</span></p><p class="ql-block">飘零岁月感怀多</p><p class="ql-block">承平世界比邻多</p><p class="ql-block">谦和品性友人多</p><p class="ql-block">随和天性友朋多</p><p class="ql-block">蹉跎岁月随感多</p><p class="ql-block">清闲岁月逸怀多</p><p class="ql-block">荒唐岁月怨情多</p><p class="ql-block">谦恭品性善缘多 </p><p class="ql-block">随和物事友邻多</p><p class="ql-block">随和世路睦邻多</p><p class="ql-block">苍凉世态感怀深</p><p class="ql-block">清贫世界爱情真</p><p class="ql-block">峥嵘岁月友情长</p><p class="ql-block">艰辛时节挚情希 </p><p class="ql-block">苍茫客路故情浓</p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句:钓归两袖荷香满</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式:中平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 叙事联</p><p class="ql-block">联意为:</p><p class="ql-block"> 垂钓归来,(我的)两个衣袖都是满满的浓浓的荷花香味。</p><p class="ql-block"> 钓归:垂钓归来,动词。满:浸满、熏满的意思,动词。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句为省略主语句。荷香满的季节应是夏季,出句形象地写出了主人公的惬意、闲适与陶醉的生活状态。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们以顺承流水的方式,进一步生发补充出句的意趣的佳对是:</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">钓归两袖荷香满</span></p><p class="ql-block">饮罢一庭月色幽</p><p class="ql-block">航返一身露气浓</p><p class="ql-block">聚醉全身酒气盈 </p><p class="ql-block">宴别一身酒气浓</p><p class="ql-block">烹就一窗月色浓 </p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们用对举的方式,丰富了出句的意象,富含生活气息的佳对是:</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">钓归两袖荷香满</span></p><p class="ql-block">樵罢双肩月色融</p><p class="ql-block">书罢一笺竹韵清</p><p class="ql-block">书罢全篇墨韵浓</p><p class="ql-block">吟罢满身诗意浓</p><p class="ql-block">牧罢群羊霞色披</p><p class="ql-block">画罢半笺藕色鲜</p><p class="ql-block">耕罢一身土气浓</p><p class="ql-block">歌罢一江蟾影幽</p><p class="ql-block">棋罢半窗月色明</p><p class="ql-block">樵歇一阶竹影清</p><p class="ql-block">樵返一身霭气浓</p><p class="ql-block">牧返一肩松气浓</p><p class="ql-block">船泊孤洲鹭影频</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句:映池几朵娉婷影</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式:中平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 娉婷:用来形容女子姿态美好的样子,亦借指美人。辛延年的《羽林郎》:“不意金吾子,娉婷过我庐。”宋辛弃疾 《清平乐·博山道中即事》:“一川明月疎星,浣纱人影娉婷。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为:</p><p class="ql-block"> 有几朵花,倒映在池塘中,浮现出优美的影子。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句“映池”为动宾式的短语(词组),“娉婷”是联绵词,也是形容词。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们应对意象丰富、 辞工意美的佳对是:</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">映池几朵娉婷影</span></p><p class="ql-block">隐树千支睍睆歌</p><p class="ql-block">喧径一群清脆声</p><p class="ql-block">落日一湖潋滟光</p><p class="ql-block">夹岸数声漂渺歌</p><p class="ql-block">绕榭万丝骀荡风</p><p class="ql-block">敲牖数番摇曳枝</p><p class="ql-block">敲竹满园淅沥声</p><p class="ql-block">拂面千重绰约姿</p><p class="ql-block">入户一丝清淡香</p><p class="ql-block">承露千盘圆润珠</p><p class="ql-block">浮岸数枝缥缈香</p><p class="ql-block">浮水一轮婀娜姿</p><p class="ql-block">鸣柳一堤婉转音</p><p class="ql-block">垂岸千条洒脱姿</p><p class="ql-block">夹岸千株浪漫姿</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅:芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山 弦思 天天开心</p><p class="ql-block">简评:笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿:琢玉 安宁 刘秋生 元其 若水 宋 淡定 荷花 弦思 文心 青丝羽衣 老六 大海 老农 闲云 笛里关山 梧桐 钱云金雨 云朵 八哥 美西洋 胡萝卜 於发 愚夫 </p><p class="ql-block"> (以投稿先后为序) </p><p class="ql-block">编录:笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block">  限于篇幅,选取有代表性的对句简评一二,其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点,因学识水平有限,难免有疏漏和不妥之处,欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片为本人自拍</p>