<p class="ql-block">出句:恋雨</p><p class="ql-block">点评:老马</p><p class="ql-block">参赛:每日一对快乐对联(九)群</p><p class="ql-block">颁奖:公子白衣</p><p class="ql-block">编辑:恋雨</p> <p class="ql-block">出句:春风十里桃花酒【恋雨】</p><p class="ql-block">综述:</p><p class="ql-block">1.情景类的对联,对句把握住“此时此刻,此情此景”,较为妥当;</p><p class="ql-block">2.要完成好对句,建议从出句中读出物象、意象、情感等,再者就是掌握语句节奏、词语结构和修辞手法等。对句以此为基础进行承接和升华。</p><p class="ql-block">3.本次出句“春风十里桃花酒”,节奏为2/2/3常见律句。可以解为沐浴着十里春风,你我共饮桃花美酒;也可解为春风如酒,醉了桃花;或可解为处处春风,桃花鲜美如酒,陶醉了你我……等等,解意因人而异,只要合情合理都是可以的。下联的承接应当依照个人的解意尽可能做到景同框,情同频。</p><p class="ql-block">4.佳句的推选以词雅句顺,对仗工稳,立意新奇,画面立体,情感饱满等来综合评判。</p><p class="ql-block">5.初次点评旨在学习。如有谬误、遗珠,还望众师友海涵!</p><p class="ql-block">6.根据个人喜好,荐优如下(同类句以提交时间靠前为优先)。</p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">最佳对句1比</b></p><p class="ql-block">50.雪之悠:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">淑气一襟林壑心。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">优秀对句12比</b></p><p class="ql-block">52.凤村:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">草字千行骚客情。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">55.墨兰:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">诗意千般世外仙。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">43.向阳而生:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">人面千娇柳叶眉。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">58.一滴水:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">明月一怀豆蔻情。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">32.丙辰:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">烟雨一蓑柳叶舟。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">33.如宝江山:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">杏雨一江柳叶舟。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">40.淮颍:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">翠色一堤杨柳烟。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">41.刘凤兰:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">细雨双堤杨柳烟。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">9.小雪:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">碧水一湖杨柳烟。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">22.伟记莲藕</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">白鹭一行杜甫诗。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">20.逊雪输梅:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">碧水一池莲叶羹。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">3.陈文久:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">明月一帘幽梦情。</p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">【更多对句】</b></p><p class="ql-block">1.沁园客~钱圣南:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">龙魄九州中国人。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">2.燕树志:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">秋月一轮杨柳诗。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">4.简而言之:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">山月一轮龙井茶。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">5.清叶玄璇:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">细雨千丝柳叶诗。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">6.一帆:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">明月万家谷雨诗。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7.欢喜就好:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">细雨一堤杨柳词。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">8.李宛容:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花</p><p class="ql-block">酒;</p><p class="ql-block">细雨一池玉叶羹。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">10.山清水秀:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">细雨三山竹叶茶。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">11.易达通:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">夜色无边荷叶茶。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">12.利哥:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">夏雨千丝茉莉茶。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">13.闲适:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">月色三江渔父歌。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">14.琦琦赵:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">绿染千锋茅屋歌。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">15.闲云:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">碧玉千丝柳叶眉。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">16.拓荒犁:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">晓色千家桂树香。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">17.LAI_巡山:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">雨燕双栖柳叶舟。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">18.随风儿:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">晓露千枝杜宇吟。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">19.kgdu uter dfei </p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">阴雨无时翠瓦楼。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">21.笨笨熊:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">细雨三更龙井茶。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">23.惠风:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">杏雨一犁松叶茶。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">24.寻找心灵家园:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">灯火万家月夜歌。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">25.感悟:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">楚水千年杨柳词。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">26.佚名:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">彩蝶一双梁祝缘。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">27.如钩岁月:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">客侣一群燕子楼。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">28.壮丽梯田:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">燕子一双柳叶眉。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">29.倦客:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">烟雨一窗游子愁。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">30.我对香烟变了心:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">瑞日千山玉叶羹。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">31.周子秀:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">澍雨一场陌草茵。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">34.若竹:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">秋雨三分茉莉茶。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">35.熊爱莲:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒</p><p class="ql-block">暮雨千山野旷香</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">36.周北强:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">杨柳双堤燕子诗。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">37.竹影清风:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">细雨千丝柳叶帘。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">38.abc:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">玉笛几声三世情。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">39.水木年华:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">柳色三重嫩蕊魂</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">42.Snaker:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">醉影千双柳叶眉。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">44.风烟俱静:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">秦腔百年柜中缘。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">45.王再平:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">茅屋满窗竹叶章。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">46.夏庆斌</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">疏雨千山柳叶风。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">47.点石成金:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">澹月一壶杨柳词。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">48.拙鸟依林:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">俏燕双飞细雨天。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">49.霞:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">时雨千家榆叶钱。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">51.红尘满清风:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">曦色两堤竹叶诗。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">53.江南:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">燕信几声柳絮云。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">54.《菊香诗苑村》村长:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">碧水一湾日月桥。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">56.雁鸣:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">绿水一湾赤子心。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">57.从此醉:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">才气满城公子名。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">59.风烟俱静:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">秦腔百年火焰驹。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">60.和气致祥:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">世事万般皆是缘。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">61.帝师范:</p><p class="ql-block">春风十里桃花酒;</p><p class="ql-block">明月千寻豆蔻心。</p>