习作交流(六)

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<p class="ql-block">  初学诗词,偶有习作,意在交流,恳请方家和读者不吝赐教。</p><p class="ql-block"> —— 桃源来客</p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七绝. <b style="font-size:22px;">放 炮</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">乖巧妮儿放炮喧,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">小盆被炸上青天。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">惹得亲友欢声笑,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">快乐乡村过大年。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七绝. <b>村北初逢</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">白雪纷飞小麦青,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">岩芯勘探过奇兵。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">餐风沐雨雄心在,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">情暖家国万里程。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七绝. <b style="font-size:22px;">元 宵</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">火树银花南鲁香,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">人流如水赏灯光。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">更欣广场喧歌舞,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">不夜天中乐小康。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七绝. <b style="font-size:22px;">春 雪</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">上元晨起雪连天,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">万里相思月应圆。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">走过看山三境界,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">心田安泰是福田。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七绝. <b style="font-size:22px;">祈 愿</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">漫步元宵念夜空,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">婵娟回望巷灯红。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">离别牵系千秋事,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">天上人间共大同。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">五律. <b style="font-size:22px;">春 雪</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">润物细无声,光熙耀世明。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">穿林惊鹊语,入寺伴佛灯。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">麦盖三层睡,丰收四季生。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">红尘虽过客,处处寄深情。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七律. <b style="font-size:22px;">女人花</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">——献给三八妇女节</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">春花烂漫遍天涯,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">妇女如花兴大家。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">清照论词千载秀,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">木兰征战万人夸。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">山欢水笑风和顺,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">物阜民丰景丽佳。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">携手并肩同筑梦,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">前程锦绣灿朝霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七绝. <b style="font-size:22px;">夜 摄</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">杏树花繁格外鲜,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜来伴月映蓝天。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲遐相对门前赏,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">不扰蜂蝶酿蜜甜。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七绝. <b style="font-size:22px;">晨 摄</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">清晨慢步寻图画,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">处处和谐处处佳。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">胸有朝阳人不老,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">天高地阔赏红霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">长相思. <b style="font-size:22px;">游山西道宝河村</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 望山头,上山头,攀绕河街古迹稠。欢心欲放喉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 大鱼游,小鱼游,水库清波无尽悠。影摇渔墅楼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">天净沙. <b style="font-size:22px;">游道宝河村</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">深山险路新芽,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">小桥流水人家。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">老醋盈摊漫话。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">轻声问价,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">买回憨笑如花。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七绝. <b style="font-size:22px;">滨河公园</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">十面繁花烂漫情,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">里厢鸟聚欲飞鸣。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">春光明媚人游瞩,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">风送芬芳满沁城。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span 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