2024.01.23 <p class="ql-block"><b style="color: rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size: 22px;">湖湘学子—.—</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color: rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size: 20px;">以文会友,立足湖湘,弘扬国学</b></p> 星雨江南析句 <p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(237, 35, 8);">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(22, 126, 251);">——亲情。(快过春节了),最大的心愿就是,所亲之亲,身心常健,诸般皆好。这个亲,首先言长辈,进而放大到(我)所“亲”之诸亲。(快过春节了),这算是个隐性时态。为此,这个“亲”包涵两重含义:一是情感动词,二是名词。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size: 18px;">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(22, 126, 251);">—— 友情也。有了梅雪二字,合当下时态:梅雪迎春;郢中雪,乃郢中白雪、阳春白雪之典,指高雅的乐曲或诗文,(我)于梅下,能为好朋友的高雅的乐曲和诗文,调上一琴,有友情如斯,夫复何求。</span></p> 特别入选 <p class="ql-block">1</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:还期大爱永安然【月色朦胧】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:临水榭前,志趣知交燕赵风【月色朦胧】</p><p class="ql-block">2</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:还期衰朽总安平【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:得道石前,蝶梦复盘柯烂棋【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">3</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:还期新岁且安平【曹小白】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:嘻闹巷中,两小无猜竹马情【曹小白】</p> 优秀精品及简评(悄然老师) <p class="ql-block">4</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:不辞馀岁且劬劳【博宁】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(22, 126, 251);">简评:宁愿余生辛劳,只愿你过得好。情真,读之有“但愿世上无疾苦,宁可架上药生尘”之感。“劬劳”典出《诗经·邶风·凯风》棘心夭夭,母氏劬劳;《诗经·小雅·蓼莪》哀哀父母,生我劬劳。</span></p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:款步竹前,清逸自生林下心【博宁】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(22, 126, 251);">简评:出句言其高致,对副生隐逸之心。郢中雪~林下心,典对典,精致。</span></p><p class="ql-block">5</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:每因稚子更舒心【东旭】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(22, 126, 251);">简评:虽然稚子也包含在所亲之中,胜在“更”字之递进。健好~舒心,对仗失稳。</span></p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:伴鹤松间,逸兴频添稷下诗【东旭】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(22, 126, 251);">简评:调琴梅下,伴鹤松间,将风雅韵致进行到底。</span></p> <p class="ql-block">6</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:何妨唯我自烦忙【老张】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(22, 126, 251);">简评:与“一”异曲同工,只要你过得好。</span></p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:策杖溪边,气节直追箕下身【老张】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(22, 126, 251);">简评:箕下身,箕山之节。许由之典:箕山之下, 潁水之阳,耕而食,终身无经天下之色。韵典精准,文辞端方雅致。</span></p><p class="ql-block">7</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:不妨为子更殷勤【玉蝶】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(22, 126, 251);">简评:“为子”殷勤工作,是为了“所亲”常健好,好流水。</span></p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:酌酒窗前,逸兴同吟梁苑诗【玉蝶】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(22, 126, 251);">简评:出句言雅致,对句言才情。运典自然。惜:郢中~梁苑,对仗略宽;“诗”略窄,“梁苑春”如何。</span></p> <p class="ql-block">8</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:祈来余岁尽祥和【若耶秋水】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(22, 126, 251);">简评:上比期愿,下比期盼有延伸。</span></p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:置酒松边,气度堪追彭泽云【若耶秋水】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(22, 126, 251);">简评:上比高雅,下比极言出世隐逸情怀。运典精当。郢中~彭泽 对仗略宽。</span></p><p class="ql-block">9</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:但期之子时往还【放鹤闲人】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(22, 126, 251);">简评:上比祈愿亲人特别是二老健好,下比期望子女常回家看看。中年父母心中,无非上老下小。“但”字可斟酌。</span></p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:对酒屋边,逸兴不输天际云【放鹤闲人】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(22, 126, 251);">简评:调琴、对酒,这日子,风致优雅。运典略欠。</span></p> 优良作品 <p class="ql-block">10</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:也期祖国更昌隆【橙子】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:泼墨枝前,文采不输陌上春【橙子】</p><p class="ql-block">11</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:还期游子早团圆【秋水】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:把盏庭前,逸兴转迷尘外歌【秋水】</p><p class="ql-block">12</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:尤期佳节共团圆【明镜非台】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:策杖桥边,逸兴轻携心上人【明镜非台】</p> <p class="ql-block">13</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:相随到老少忧烦【莫黎】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:对酒竹边,品格番如湘上云【莫黎】</p><p class="ql-block">14</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:能教羁客总欢欣【百合】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:举目山前,清逸犹随天上云【百合】</p><p class="ql-block">15</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:还期诸位更辉煌【九妹】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:亮剑海中,斗志何妨鬓上霜【九妹】</p> <p class="ql-block">16</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:还期来岁自康宁【青果】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:泼墨案头,雅兴顿生笔底花【青果】</p><p class="ql-block">17</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:方能夜梦总欢颜【花开花】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:极目关山,画卷铺开北国冬【花开花】</p> 入选作品 <p class="ql-block">18</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:何妨为客暂偷闲【红豆】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:煮茗画间,云气未移天际霞【红豆】</p><p class="ql-block">19</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:犹期诸弟共清闲【云遮月】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:把酒屏前,岁月同吟陌上词【云遮月】</p><p class="ql-block">20</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:何妨为客暂偷闲【红豆】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:煮茗画间,云气未移天际霞【红豆】</p> <p class="ql-block">21</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:还应岁里每相知【红蜻蜓】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:试剑营中,聚散难摇志士心【红蜻蜓】</p><p class="ql-block">22</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:只求情爱彼相安【九哥】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:把酒歌中,岁月无忧日里人【九哥】</p><p class="ql-block">23</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:犹期国运更繁华【飞燕】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:剪烛窗前,雅兴频增稷下词【飞燕】</p> <p class="ql-block">24</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:心怀博爱重情缘【云梦爱仁】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:寄语词间,笔线情牵梦里人【云梦爱仁】</p><p class="ql-block">25</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:但求来岁各平安【曼珠沙华】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:赏月庭前,竹韵偏邀下里人【曼珠沙华】</p><p class="ql-block">26</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:祈求斯世总平安【喜仔】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:敲句樽前,词赋空吟塞上秋【喜仔】</p> <p class="ql-block">27</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:唯求民众每安康【燕归来兰阁】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:望月案前,笔墨洒书锦帐春【燕归来兰阁】</p><p class="ql-block">28</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:祈福辈辈越安康【遥望星空】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:弄墨草堂,逸兴独寻天际霞【遥望星空】</p><p class="ql-block">29</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:但求世界永和平【晨阳】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:煮酒庭前,潇洒共吟梦里诗【晨阳】</p> <p class="ql-block">30</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:犹期余岁更安宁【丫丫】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:煮茗堂间,行止无关身后名【丫丫】</p><p class="ql-block">31</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:谁怜吾子且穷忙【少彰】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:把酒水边,草木正寻天际霞【少彰】</p><p class="ql-block">32</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:当思此事更艰辛【七字余句】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:把酒月边,心事无穷天外云【七字余句】</p> <p class="ql-block">33</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:每怜知己自多情。【醉满秋笺】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:煮酒溪边 ,花鸟争传陌上春【醉满秋笺】</p><p class="ql-block">34</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:唯期今世每平安【张利平】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:放眼陵前,日月磨残无字碑【张利平】</p><p class="ql-block">35</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:但期佳节每团圆【轻寒】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:邀友庭前,酒兴犹催月下诗【轻寒】</p> <p class="ql-block">36</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:耻为从众只穷忙【点雪】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:执手月前,契阔共倾天际霞【点雪】</p><p class="ql-block">37</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:常祈家眷总安康【易水邨人】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:吹笛竹前,曲韵连绵裙有风【易水邨人】</p><p class="ql-block">38</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:何妨迟暮更平凡【朵朵】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:抱朴山间,意气何妨鬓上霜【朵朵】</p> <p class="ql-block">39</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:唯求至爱尽安然【嫣然】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二: 弄月槛前,寂寞常随陌上风【嫣然】</p><p class="ql-block">40</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:还思此世尽无忧【云水谣】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:赋曲月前,尘梦常随故里云【云水谣】</p><p class="ql-block">41</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:唯期诸户福绵长【沈扣银】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:赏月窗前,觞咏轻吟梓里情。【沈扣银】</p> <p class="ql-block">42</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:期成那客不多愁【雨寒】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:策杖山中,岁暮徒来陌上春【雨寒】</p><p class="ql-block">43</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:求期诸事总清平【知足常乐(湘潭)】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:洗砚池边,雅韵同流天上云【知足常乐(湘潭)】</p><p class="ql-block">44</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:殷期挚爱更尊高【籽粒】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:伴鹤松中,云水闲看山上庐【籽粒】</p> <p class="ql-block">45</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:期逢凡事俱从容【柳眉儿】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:邀友舍中,墨韵微熏案上笺【柳眉儿】</p><p class="ql-block">46</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:唯期吾爱尽安恬【灰姑娘】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:弄笛庐前,雅韵同吟汉上云【灰姑娘】</p><p class="ql-block">47</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:安居盛世自康宁【昨夜星辰】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:近水楼头,咫尺难寻昔日人【昨夜星辰】</p> <p class="ql-block">48</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:还祈国泰永安康【蓝岚】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:舞袖花间,诗意犹如梦里人【蓝岚】</p><p class="ql-block">49</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:但教新岁更安康【柳叶青青】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:煮酒舍中,往事常谙故里情【柳叶青青】</p><p class="ql-block">50</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:唯祈環宇共康宁【徐志安】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:烹菜锅中,色味还依火候功【徐志安】</p> <p class="ql-block">51</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:如今每日盼安康【花香依然】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:煮酒花前,香气招来路上宾【花香依然】</p><p class="ql-block">52</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:犹多适意共言欢【金蕊】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:话旧灯前,意气无妨鬓角银【金蕊】</p><p class="ql-block">53</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:更求至爱永平安【像风一样自由】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:策马天涯,气势不输 关外侯【像风一样自由】</p> <p class="ql-block">54</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:不欺童叟广财源【苏颜长安】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:拾贝桑田,岁月不饶海外仙【苏颜长安】</p><p class="ql-block">55</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:但求世界更和平【烈火蓝焰】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:把盏亭前,脑海翻开往日情【烈火蓝焰】</p><p class="ql-block">56</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:唯期故友总轻安【支桂龙】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:把卷篱前,逸兴自来方外情【支桂龙】</p> <p class="ql-block">57</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:还期故友久平安【我心依然】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:对酒竹间,逸兴可追天际风【我心依然】</p><p class="ql-block">58</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:何愁游子不春归【小呆】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:惦友心中,情义堪追管鲍交【小呆】</p><p class="ql-block">59</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:还期心态总平和【风中的旗】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:听浪江边,岁月已涂头上霜【风中的旗】</p> <p class="ql-block">60</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:谁知世事总穷忙【无悔】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:得句灯前,雅俗有馀荆楚诗【无悔】</p><p class="ql-block">61</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:绕于膝下自天真【小铃铛】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:独步江湖,小可自称化外仙【小铃铛】</p><p class="ql-block">62</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:惟祈寰宇共康宁【徐志安】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:遇事当前,气度谨遵心底音【徐志安】</p> <p class="ql-block">63</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:不教游子总忧心【化蝶】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:寄语案前,小字犹牵故里亲【化蝶】</p><p class="ql-block">64</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:犹传游子更平安【君子兰CLJ】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:弄墨竹边,心事有关山里情【君子兰CLJ】</p><p class="ql-block">65</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:祈求家人应无恙【沙芹】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:高山流水,岁月悠长蓝天霞【沙芹】</p> <p class="ql-block">66</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:犹欣我国更繁荣【青云直上】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:对弈松间,惬意随吟世外陶【青云直上】</p><p class="ql-block">67</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:期逢佳节倍承欢【小鱼】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:泼墨君前,龙凤舞飞毛体书【小鱼】</p><p class="ql-block">68</p><p class="ql-block">出句一:愿得所亲常健好【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句一:思将吾爱总安康【云水谣】</p><p class="ql-block">出句二:调琴梅下,风华相续郢中雪【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">对句二:和曲月前,尘梦追随陌上云【云水谣】</p> 课外作品 <p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(237, 35, 8);">一、出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</span></p> <p class="ql-block">1</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:有情当对月,凭浪漫一分,于天地来回【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">2</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:有春即尽兴,看烂漫万千,在野陌铺开【籽粒】</p><p class="ql-block">3</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:有情就会爱,看岁月万千,在世上繁荣【如烟】</p><p class="ql-block">4</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:赏花犹望月,寻惬意几分,于夜色吟来【灰姑娘】</p> <p class="ql-block">5</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句: 思乡时望月,待雁字一行,由云畔飞来【轻寒】</p><p class="ql-block">6</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句: 有诗不必酒,看豪迈万千,自云际吟来【望长天】</p><p class="ql-block">7</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句: 有诗又作曲,叹岁月短长,自心里吟来【云遮月】</p><p class="ql-block">8</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句: 有情皆入画,看山水几分,从笔底生来【一剑钟秦】</p> <p class="ql-block">9</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句: 争春先著柳,揽燕语一帘,在窗外吟来【化蝶】</p><p class="ql-block">10</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句: 栽松才引鹤,看淡泊三分,于岁里修来【水墨丹青】</p><p class="ql-block">11</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:寻春来策杖,看灿烂千山,尽眼底收来【雨寒】</p><p class="ql-block">12</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:有情曾剪柳,听岁月古今,自月殿偷来【东旭】</p> <p class="ql-block">13</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:没才还凑对,凭喜好三分,将佳句搜来【曹小白】</p><p class="ql-block">14</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:欲诗先沽酒,任往事三千,凭玉管书空【玉蝶】</p><p class="ql-block">15</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句: 有闲常访客,看潇洒几分,在酒里寻来【九哥】</p><p class="ql-block">16</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句: 无云能见日,凭浪漫几回,从宇宙归来【何惠明】</p> <p class="ql-block">17</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:有包争对句,叹空喜几回,嗔网络称忙【玉蝶】</p><p class="ql-block">18</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:有云不掩月,想狂放几何,从梦里归来【晨阳】</p><p class="ql-block">19</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句: 逢春常有兴,抛落魄三分,对山谷狂歌【张利平】</p><p class="ql-block">20</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句: 有花未舞蝶,留袅娜三分,随春季归来【红蜻蜓】</p> <p class="ql-block">21</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨1江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句: 画霜当点竹,留淡泊一分,遗日月轮回。【燕归来兰阁】</p><p class="ql-block">22</p><p class="ql-block">出句:无雪也开梅,问风流多少,向人间寄去【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句: 有花还对酒,愁寂寞别离,斜竹外啼残【少彰】</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color: rgb(237, 35, 8);">二.、出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</span></p> <p class="ql-block">1</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:应怜杨柳,正寂寂渡头,相陪客醉月三更【悄然】</p><p class="ql-block">2</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:应知鸿雁,及寂寂天边,欲寻客路梦九霄【东旭】</p><p class="ql-block">3</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:难为明月,怜夜夜窗前,劳窥心迹梦三千【玉蝶】</p><p class="ql-block">4</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:还思竹舍,闻岁岁霜中,犹欣曲意燕双簧【九妹】</p> <p class="ql-block">5</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:何如明月?看处处楼头,好邀人共酒三杯【七字余句】</p><p class="ql-block">6</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:可怜竹影,立杳杳江边,空悲泪落迹千斑【杨杨】</p><p class="ql-block">7</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:愁因雁信,叹阙阙词中,独怜身影泪三分【云遮月】</p><p class="ql-block">8</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:岂知醉客,来首首诗中,强留夜月酒千杯【九哥】</p> <p class="ql-block">9</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:难忘往事,经历历风中,谁知岁月梦无痕【知足常乐(湘潭)】</p><p class="ql-block">10</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:哪堪竹笛,来袅袅风中,凭对月远思千山【轻寒 】</p><p class="ql-block">11</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:谁怜客路,叹岁岁天涯,唯将愁绪酒三杯。【无悔】</p><p class="ql-block">12</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:同吟翠竹,思月月山中,喜随菊化雨千番【何惠明】</p> <p class="ql-block">13</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:唯凭酒盏,吹夜夜笳来,犹添感慨梦三千【少彰】</p><p class="ql-block">14</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:还期明月,映夜夜孤窗,遣游子入梦三更【红蜻蜓】</p><p class="ql-block">15</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:欲邀明月,望岁岁家山,空留意绪酒三巡【灰姑娘】</p><p class="ql-block">16</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:诚祈晴日,照片片田畴,引来款到富三农【徐,安】</p> <p class="ql-block">17</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:莫非骚客,看座座山间,常行曲径夜三更【易水村人】</p><p class="ql-block">18</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:若非竹影,幻夜夜窗前,招来梦枕泪千痕【曼珠沙华】</p><p class="ql-block">19</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:曾为羁客,望夜夜窗前,不堪寒月梦三更【张利平】</p><p class="ql-block">20</p><p class="ql-block">出句:算是梅花,念年年雪里,教惹风怀春一度【星雨江南】</p><p class="ql-block">对句:常思鸿雁,望片片岭间,空期云卧影千寻【放鹤闲人】</p> THE END <p class="ql-block" style="text-align: center;"><b style="color: rgb(237, 35, 8);">——谢谢临阅,敬请不吝赐教!</b></p>