<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙风国学院</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">国学院名誉总院长：梅欣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">国学院总院长：曲延波 李美权</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">国学院执行总院长：卢进海</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">国学院副总院长：刘李萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1204分院院长：项新建</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">副院长：杜君 朗月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">教 官：王柏贤 洪彩娟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">课程编审：卢进海</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">授课老师：冯丽莉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">作业布置：国学院12期教研组</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">本期点评老师：王柏贤 项新建</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美篇制作：朗月</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">完成作业名单：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">王菊芳🌹🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">黄青山🌹🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雷宝珠🌹🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">贺菊能🌹🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雷颖娴🌹🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">常新泰🌹🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学员：王菊芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学号：LF12-GX184-0032</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五言律·步韵寇准《春日登楼怀旧》登宝石山观（下平八庚）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">登峰抬眼望，峻岭面前平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">远眺西湖水，游轮小艇横。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">群山升雾霭，峡谷起飞莺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陶醉不知返，悬崖瀑布惊。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2）七言律·依韵李白《别匡山》西湖美景（上平四支）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">西湖美景众周知，信手拈来写入诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">翠柳如烟飘绿雾，枫林似火映红枝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游人白鸽桥边涌，快艇轮船水面驰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬月风光无限好，赏心悦目使君痴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">教官王柏贤点评：五言律诗景色描写很好，平仄符合要求。七言律诗对西湖景色描写也不错，但是枫叶在西湖好像不多吧！</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学员:黄青山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学号:LF12一GX184一0025</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五律.步韵《春日登楼怀旧》游黄鹤楼公园感怀(下平八庚)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">登临观胜景，三镇两川平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">碧水烟波涌，彩虹天堑横。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">园中摇绿柳，树上唱黄莺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">驾鹤仙人叹，江城变化惊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律.依韵《别匡山》赞实验高中(上平四支)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">锦鲤荷塘岸柳垂，黉楼错落展英姿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">繁花艳艳幽香绕，绿树森森彩蝶追。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">授业匠心沉学海，育人师德示范旗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">百年老校呈新貌，日出霞腾正晓曦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">教官王柏贤点评：五言律诗景色悠美，使人如临其境，平仄符合要求！七言律诗写出了教书育人的高中，尤其最后一句有画龙点睛之笔！</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学员：雷宝珠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学号： LF12-GX184-0031</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1）五言律·步韵寇准《春日登楼怀旧》长沙洋湖游（下平八庚）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">驱车瞻胜地，荡漾意难平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岸上芦花密，湖中栈道橫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游船穿水面，碧野过流莺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">盛况民心乐，繁华世界惊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2）七言律·依韵李白《别匡山》湖南乔口古镇（上平四支）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">悠悠历史数千年，战国先民部落遺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浩渺团头湖水秀，绵延峻岭叠峦崎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">民风古朴安宁乐，石道楼房雅致居</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">度假休闲招客至，渔都老镇口皆碑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>教官王柏贤点评：这两首律诗都符合要求，但是缺少点睛之笔！</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学员：贺菊能</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学号： LF12-GX184-0033</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1）五言律·步韵寇准《春日登楼怀旧》故乡情（下平八庚）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">身临其境望，情荡绪难平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">满目新楼矗，空中网线横。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">儿时嘻戏地，绿荫藏飞莺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">家貌㢮弓展。神魂喜悦惊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2）七言律·依韵李白《别匡山》洽川奇瀵（上平四支）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">黄河孕育洽川奇，遍地瀵群暖意弥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">处女泉中柔色秀，佳人沐浴帝王嬉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏阳汤滚龙旋转，散雾腾空蟒骋驰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">亘古传闻仙境留，瑶池畅享旷神怡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>教官王柏贤点评：五言律诗写出了作者对儿时故乡情，很好！七言律诗作者把黄河洛川的美写出神韵，平仄符合要求。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学员：雷颖娴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学号： LF12-GX184-0029</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1）五言律·步韵寇准《春日登楼怀旧》洱海观光（下平八庚）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">登船倾目眺，碧绿水波平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乐曲舱中响，游轮海面横。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">湖心观美景，小院赏黄莺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">世外桃园地，流连令鸟惊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2）七言律·依韵李白《别匡山》游兴庆公园（上平四支）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">公园景色美神怡，绿树红花诱客痴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">碧水清波湖静秀，亭台画阁造型奇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙舟缓缓桥头过，翠柳依依脚下移。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫怨游人常忘返，儿童玩耍不归离。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">教官王柏贤点评：五言律诗符合平仄要求，就是游轮海面横有待推敲。七言律诗整体写作很好，写出了公园使人流连忘返的美景！</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学员：常泰新</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学号：LF12-GX184-0019</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1）五律.次韵《春日登楼怀旧》回乡感怀(下平八庚)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游人行远路，寂夜月清平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜梦长桥过，流云万里横。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春风吹绿柳，返梓念啼莺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乍遇乡音起，心伤泪落惊。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>项新建评语：格律正确，颈联欠工。诗有真情实感！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2）七律.依韵李白《别匡山》离别感怀（上平四支）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋风肃瑟叶纷飞，落日余晖映水垂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不舍从前思欲溯，如烟往事梦难随。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青丝渐乱空余恨，绿水长流泪满池。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">但愿来年能相聚，良辰共度定惜时。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">项新建评语：格律无误，颔、颈两联欠工。然离情感人！</span></p>