<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">龙风国学院</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">国学院名誉总院长：梅欣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">国学院总院长：曲延波 李美权</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">国学院执行总院长：卢进海</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">国学院副总院长：刘李萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">1204分院院长：项新建</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">副院长：杜君 朗月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">教 官：王柏贤 洪彩娟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">课程编审：卢进海</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">授课老师：李美权</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">作业布置：国学院12期教研组</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本期点评老师：杜君</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">美篇制作：朗月</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">作业布置</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">1）依据“基本句式”推导一组七绝诗谱，谱式不限；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2）依据推导的诗谱写一首七绝，主题不限。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">龙风国学院第十二期</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">第一次复习作业：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">1）谱式：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2）诗谱：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">3）诗作：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">------------------</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">国学院李美权总院长</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2023.12.10前提交</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">1204分院第一次复习作业完成人员名单：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">01雷宝珠[玫瑰][玫瑰]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">02.贺菊能[玫瑰][玫瑰]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">03.王菊芳[玫瑰][玫瑰]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">04.黄青山[玫瑰]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">05.雷颖娴[玫瑰]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">06.[玫瑰]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">07.[玫瑰]</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学员:贺菊能</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学号:LF12_GX184_0033</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">1)谱式:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仄起平收押三平韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2)诗谱:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仄仄平平仄仄平(韵)，平平仄仄仄平平（韵)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">平平仄仄平平仄，仄仄平平仄仄平。(韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">3)诗作:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·赞龙凤国学院</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">(上平一东)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凤赋龙吟乐未穷，园丁力灌育花红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挥毫泼墨精英汇，满腹诗词韵味融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杜君评语:格律准确无误，诗意丰富，诗情浓厚，创作带来的快慰，对龙风学院的盛赞与感恩溢于笔端。很成熟，很好!</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学员:雷颖娴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学号:LF12-GX184-0029</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">1)谱式:仄起平收三平韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2) 诗谱:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仄仄平平仄仄平(韵)，平平仄仄仄平平(韵)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">平平仄仄平平仄，仄仄平平仄仄平(韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">3)诗作:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·赞青松(上平二冬韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大雪将临冷气浓，梧桐叶落水冰封，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">青松不惧寒风袭，郁郁葱葱立酷冬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杜君评语:平仄韵律把握准确，已具扎实的基本功。诗歌立意高妙，语言表情达意生动形象，青松拟人化自然真切，主题鲜明。非常好!</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学员:王菊芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学号:LF12-GX184-0032</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">1)谱式:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">平起仄收押二韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2)诗谱:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">平平仄仄平平仄，仄仄平平仄仄平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仄仄平平平仄仄，平平仄仄仄平平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">3)诗作:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·山顶观景</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">(下平一先)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">登高望远周围看，峭壁奇峰绿树连。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">腑视群山云雾绕，横观峻岭舞蹁跹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杜君评语:格律把握精准，景物描写笔意雄健豪放，角度变幻，层次深远，动静相衬，引人入胜，非常棒!“腑”应为“俯”，恐是笔误。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学员:黄青山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学号:LF12一GX184-0025</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝.咏白掌(上平十灰)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一蓬碧叶玉盆栽，喜見羊毫绿里偎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">待到含苞豪放日，东风鼓得白帆开。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杜君评语:格律精准无误，用词用韵达于娴熟，读来流畅自然，妙笔生趣，尤其“东风鼓得白帆开”句形象比喻，喜悦之情透出诗外，堪称佳作。好诗!</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学员:雷宝珠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学号:LF12-GX184-0031</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">1)谱式:仄起平收三平韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2)诗谱:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仄仄平平仄仄平，(韵)平平仄仄仄平平(韵)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">平平仄仄平平仄，仄仄平平仄仄平(韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">3)诗作:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·荷花玉兰(下平六麻韵部) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">细雨风飘疏影斜，初开几朵玉兰花。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芙蓉应在池塘放，白鸽何时落树桠?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">(荷花玉兰形似荷花，洁白硕大，树中花稀少，固疑似白鸽落树桠。)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杜君评语:平仄韵律无误，基本功牢固。诗境润美，正所谓“天然去雕饰”!好一“芙蓉应在池塘放，白鸽何时落树桠?”点睛之笔，譬喻升华，于斯立见高格!好诗!</span></p>