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<p class="ql-block">  初学诗词,偶有习作,意在交流,恳请方家和读者不吝赐教。</p><p class="ql-block"> ——桃源来客</p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七绝. <b style="font-size:22px;">红梅愿</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">红梅三九岸南开,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">何惧严寒笑满腮。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">不要八方人赞颂,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">只求傲雪唤春来。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七绝. <b style="font-size:22px;">红梅赞</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">岩上红梅今又开,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">香飘天外引人来。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">长征不忘峥嵘岁,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">欢庆新春情满怀。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">鹧鸪天. <b style="font-size:22px;">雪 梅</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">滚滚红尘陌路长,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">一枝独放斗萧凉。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">春花竞艳迷人眼,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋果争丰充口粮。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">风里绽,雪中狂,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">只愁逐利少芬芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">身经塞彻千般苦,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">一段清香醉运方。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">题图. <b style="font-size:22px;">一揽如意</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">一篮甜柿念乡音,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">揽秀犹怜山色新。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">如问欢娱何处有,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">意称今古胜黄金。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">题图. <b style="font-size:22px;">藕 籽</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">荷花映日摄心魂,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">引惹游人诗赋吟。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">妙笔寻得收获在,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">欢欣藕籽会嘉宾。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七律.<b style="font-size:22px;"> 风</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">告别雷电下天宫,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">惠顾农村情意浓。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">杨柳轻摇芽嫩绿,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">荷蕖曼舞蕾鲜红。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">扬场奏响丰收曲,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">解冻传来喜庆觥。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">四季轮回歌不尽,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">和谐相处业兴隆。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七绝. <b style="font-size:22px;">山 里</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">犁耙新田携老牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">放歌冬夏乐春秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">生活不只城中好,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">山里耕读岁月悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七绝.<b style="font-size:22px;">赏菊寄怀</b>(新韵)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">时至初冬姿傲霜,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">晨踱小院九花香。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">山菊烂漫千寻远,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">君莫高攀空自伤。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">图片来源:吕法铁/网络</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">背景音乐:《红梅赞》伴奏 方锦龙</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">编制时间:2023.12.4</p>