<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">特别声明:【加强连】联对集锦成刊,均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【加强连】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">9月22日出句:</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">与友同吟得月楼(老六)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">半缕烟云眷恋迟(老六)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舞柳枝头雀有痕(老六)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">与我同为戏柳莺(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">两代云萍聚梦遥(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">期夏到时果有成(雨燕)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">与我共分欢聚情(燕子)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">几处楼台望眼舒(燕子)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">看雨落时叶有神(燕子)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">与我共吟归国谣(八哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">满目烟霞画意浓(八哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闻夏来时鸟有声(八哥)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陪我同消羁旅愁(乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">几度星霜感念深(乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢梦碎时鸟怵心(乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">与尔同销入暮愁(元其)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">万种情怀对句多(元其)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">到酒阑时月满楼(元其)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">待我先吟望岁诗(云朵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">半世云烟归梦遥(云朵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">听雨落时竹作声(云朵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">邀月共酣醉晚亭(文心)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">百卷丹青写意深(文心)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寻柳萌时莺啭声(文心)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">与尔同销万古愁(老农)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">万里江山抒兴强(老农)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">等月满时梦自圆(老农)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">听我来哦得意诗(於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">数盏醇浆醉眼朦(於发)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">听雨落时鸟有声(於发)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">笑我偏迷啼柳莺(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">数载春秋归梦多(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">看絮飘时鸟有声(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">与我同观落日红(长安山石)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">百首诗词励志多(长安山石)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">待夏来时草铺茵(长安山石)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">励我勤耕藏宝书(钱云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">两目烟波离绪茫(钱云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">候雁回时月照愁(钱云金雨)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">许我无归逐鹤台(笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">满谷磬钟礼佛虔(笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">迎夏来临叶有情(笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">与我同书贺岁篇(安宁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十载江湖醉梦休(安宁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">载梦圆时月有情(安宁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">让我常来抱玉樽(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">两岸水云惬意深(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">听雨来时叶有声(若水)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伴我同吟贺岁篇(闲云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">万代江山咏德高(闲云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">期夏来时雨有诗(闲云)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">请匠同研酿酒方(不亦le乎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三幅江山筑梦新(不亦le乎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">饮酒兴时口叠诗(不亦le乎)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劝君莫歇留春盏(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">看我常烹邀月茶(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一川风月吟怀渺(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">百部诗书绘意浓(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问春归处花无语(联友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寻夏来时柳摆头(大海)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">简 评:</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句:劝君莫歇留春盏</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式:中平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 义理联</p><p class="ql-block"> 歇:休息的意思。</p><p class="ql-block"> 盏 :浅而小的杯子。春盏:大概是春日里的盛在杯里的美酒。宋胡仔《句其八》:“愁随竹叶消春盏,喜入灯花缀夜缸。”明·李梦阳《新庄漫兴四首 其三》:”盈盈车马客,时来弄春盏。”</p><p class="ql-block"> 联意为:劝你不要休息,面对大好春光,我们要好好享受,好好珍惜,并且把它留在酒杯里。出句有惜春、爱春的意思。 </p><p class="ql-block"> 劝君:劝你,动宾结构。“留春盏”的含义理解有些难度,但从结构上来说,是很明显的动宾短语。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们多以“我”应对“君”,辞工意美的佳对是:</p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">劝君莫歇留春盏</b></p><p class="ql-block">笑我偏迷啼柳莺</p><p class="ql-block">陪我同消羁旅愁</p><p class="ql-block">待我先吟望岁诗</p><p class="ql-block">励我勤耕藏宝书</p><p class="ql-block">让我常来抱玉樽</p><p class="ql-block">伴我同吟贺岁篇</p><p class="ql-block">看我常烹邀月茶</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友以“邀月”来应对“劝君”,思路开阔的佳对是:</p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">劝君莫歇留春盏</b></p><p class="ql-block">邀月共酣醉晚亭</p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句:一川风月吟怀渺</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式:中平中仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 一川:① 一条河流。《汉书·沟洫志》:“独一川兼。数河之任。”② 一片平川;满地。唐杜甫《自瀼西荆扉且移居东屯茅屋》诗之一:“平地一川稳,高山四面同。”</p><p class="ql-block"> 风月:清风和明月,并列关系。</p><p class="ql-block"> 吟怀:作诗的情怀。唐杜荀鹤《近试投所知》诗:“白发随梳落,吟怀说向谁?”清华岩《辛酉题古木泉石图》诗:“诚可羁游目,况复达吟怀。”</p><p class="ql-block"> 渺:形容词,①形容水大。②渺茫</p><p class="ql-block"> 联意为:一条大河或苍茫的平川上的清风和明月,触发了我作诗的情怀。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们深谙出句意旨,辞工意美的佳对是:</p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">一川风月吟怀渺</b></p><p class="ql-block">两代云萍聚梦遥</p><p class="ql-block">半世云烟归梦遥</p><p class="ql-block">两目烟波离绪茫</p><p class="ql-block">几处楼台望眼舒</p><p class="ql-block">几度星霜感念深</p><p class="ql-block">满目烟霞画意浓</p><p class="ql-block">数载春秋归梦多</p><p class="ql-block">十载江湖醉梦休</p><p class="ql-block">百卷丹青写意深</p><p class="ql-block">百首诗词励志多</p><p class="ql-block">百部诗书绘意浓</p><p class="ql-block">万种情怀对句多</p><p class="ql-block">万代江山咏德高</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句:问春归处花无语</p><p class="ql-block">基本格式:中平中仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 问春:问候(试问)春天,动宾结构。唐王周《问春》:“把酒问春因底意,为谁来后为谁归。”宋代晁补之的《水龙吟·次韵林圣予惜春》:“问春何苦匆匆,带风伴雨如驰骤。” </p><p class="ql-block"> 归处:① 归依。《诗·曹风·蜉蝣》:“心之忧矣,於我归处。” ② 归依之处。唐白居易《重题》诗之三:“心泰身宁是归处,故乡何独在长安 !”</p><p class="ql-block"> 联意为:试问春天的归依之处在哪里?花儿都没有说话。出句对春天的即将逝去有怜惜之意。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们不约而同的用“时”来应对“处”,以“有”应对“无”,且辞工意美的佳对是:</p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">问春归处花无语</b></p><p class="ql-block">期夏到时果有成</p><p class="ql-block">闻夏来时鸟有声</p><p class="ql-block">期夏来时雨有诗</p><p class="ql-block">看雨落时叶有神</p><p class="ql-block">听雨落时鸟有声</p><p class="ql-block">到酒阑时月满楼</p><p class="ql-block">载梦圆时月有情</p><p class="ql-block">舞柳枝头雀有痕(“舞”字当敲,人的行为更好。)</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅,选取有代表性的对句简评一二,其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点,因学识水平有限,难免有疏漏和不妥之处,欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅:芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">简评:笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿:老六 雨燕 燕子 八哥 乡间晚风 元其 云朵 文心 老农 於发 弦思 长安山石 钱云金雨 笛里关山 安宁 若水 闲云 不亦le乎 大海 </p><p class="ql-block"> (以投稿先后为准)</p><p class="ql-block">编录:笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片为本人家乡秋景随拍</p>