<p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">11月6日学前练习点评∶郭文岩老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11月6日学前练习（押平水韵、自行检测）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令•猴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱:平声部 C1601.Z5 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平仄仄仄平平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平仄，仄仄仄平平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱:平声部 C1601.Z5</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令•猴(下平十一尤)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 文/宫帅(红二系北方一区12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">猴。</span></p><p class="ql-block">冲冠一怒九霄愁。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">丹炉覆，苑内万桃偷。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱:平声部 C1601.Z5</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·猴（下平十一尤+下平九青）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">猴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">穿溪荡树本无忧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遭绳缚，被耍苦蒙羞。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">掰枝弃果喜群游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">环形眼，觅洞闪明眸。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">惺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">菩提老祖赏其灵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学神技，历险取真经。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度韵∶平声部c1601·Z5</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·猴（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">猴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">挠腮弄耳手搔头。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">千钧棒，怒举众妖收。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度韵∶平声部c1601·Z5</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·猴（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">猴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">攀爬上下树丛遊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">铜锣响，诱惑入笼囚。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 李明LF12-BF024-003 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度韵∶平声部C1601·Z5</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·猴（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/李明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">猴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">林间跳跃任它游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天宫闹，千古美名留。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度韵∶平声部C1601·Z5</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·猴（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block">文/葛晓东</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">猴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">林中蹦跳涧边游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">食山果，自在度春秋。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block">十六字令·猴（下平十一尤）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">猴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天宫果苑把桃偷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仙丹盗，岁月不知秋。（苑字不妥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·猴（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">猴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">修仙练道八方游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天宫闹，四海美名留。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度韵∶平声部C1601·Z5</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·猴（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">猴。</span></p><p class="ql-block">银盘落水众人忧。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">急捞月，未得面红羞。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千年巨石变毛猴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金光眼，四海任它游。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱:平声部 C1601.Z5</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令•猴(下平十一尤)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">猴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">腾云驾雾伴僧求。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">真经在，大难不回头。[玫瑰]🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">猴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金睛火眼辨妖谋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嫉仇恶，正气定常留。（谋凑韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">猴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凭鸡儆汝勿需纠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">真顽劣，捣蛋不绸缪。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">惺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">菩提老祖赏其灵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学神技，历险取真经。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">11月4日学前练习点评∶侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·羊 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱:平声部 C1601.Z4 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平中仄平（韵）。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平仄仄，平平仄仄平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱:平声部 C1601.Z4</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·羊 (下平七阳)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅(红二系北方一区12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沸水三汆玉箸忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闻犬吠，垂涎佛跳墙。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·羊 （下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱:平声部 C1601.Z4 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">跪乳姿容泪眼汪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">知感戴，千恩孝顺偿。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">亡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">破洞丢空心底惶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闻过改，良机促汝强。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">道路多歧心内茫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">明事理，迷途不仿徨。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱:平声部 C1601.Z4 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·羊（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">强。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">健将登高有黑羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寻百草，攀崖意志刚。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">数载相依苏武旁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">邻北海，逢寒雪浩茫。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·羊（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">跪乳知恩举世扬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">听古训，人间日月长。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·羊（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">跪乳知恩举世扬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">当反哺，人间日月长。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·羊（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">跪乳之恩人世长。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学古训，应当反哺偿。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 李明LF12-BF024-003 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·羊（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">面貌慈祥胜暖阳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山顶上，飘浮雪叶忙。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·羊（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">伴武中郎北海疆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">卧冷雪，忠贞美誉扬。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嫩角红唇萌眼祥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欢蹦跳，身白似玉霜。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">珠圆玉润巧着装。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">摇短尾，徜徉品草香🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（珠圆玉润平平仄仄，应仄仄平平。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度十六字令·羊（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/郝成明L21-YD1137-017</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">结阵山坡韧性王。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">儒雅美，宽容向自强🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 宗庆良(总院督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·羊(下平七阳)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大雪封山没草粮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">愁感叹，断乳悔痕伤。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱∶平声部c1601·Z4</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令.羊（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">共庆丰年送吉祥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牢快补，荒原会有狼。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱∶平声部C1601·z4</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·羊（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">跪乳知恩天下扬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尝百草，柔丝滿口香。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 王守一LF12-BF024-013 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·羊（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/王守一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陇上寒烟归路茫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">坚骨傲，麒麟阁弥芳。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 齐云红九期</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> C1601．Z4曲度谱十六字令•羊(下平七阳)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">自在悠闲恋草狂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">身是宝，无私美誉扬。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">野径山坡卧白霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">肥不腻，丝滑入口香。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12侯昭思（执行系长）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">C1601．Z4曲度谱十六字令•羊(下平七阳)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯昭思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">藏域神羚傲雪霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">环境险，生存智慧强。🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">11月3日点评∶高凤霞老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">11月3日学前练习（押平水韵、自己检测）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令•蛇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱:平声部 C1601.Z3 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平中仄平（韵）。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平仄，平平仄仄平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱:平声部 C1601.Z3</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令•蛇(下平一先)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅(红二系北方一区12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">怜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">水漫金山怒火迁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雷锋塔，无情断宿缘。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱:平声部 C1601.Z3</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·蛇(下平一先+上平四支)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">驿动凡心结善缘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">西湖恋，佳音代代传。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">奇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">长白灵参有护持。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">神虫伴，驱侵共静怡。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（诗句很流畅，但感觉蛇的特征不太明显。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱∶平声部</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">c1601·z3</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·蛇（下平六麻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">绿水青山四野家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">身无足，皮柔蜕变爬。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度韵∶平声部</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">c1601·z3</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·蛇（下平六麻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">自古贪心妄想差。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">奇葩语，讹吞大象牙。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 曲度谱∶平声部c1601·z3</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·蛇（下平一先+上平一东+下平六</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">借盗千般只为缘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雷峰塔，难湮万古传。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">弓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">酒影于心生暗忡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">非良药，真情鬼怪终。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">昼夜爬行捉动蟆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬眠醒，灵姿水面划。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（“动蟆”，怎没听说过？诗友是为押韵吗？）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·蛇（下平六麻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/张鸿志LF12-BF024-018</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">草野藏踪无际涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">珍奇宝，经医进万家。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·蛇（下平二萧）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赏景西湖青白娇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">倾盆雨，书生纸伞邀。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 宗庆良(总院督） 助兴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·蛇(下平六麻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">起伏蜿蜒地面爬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">盘型体，身长毒刺牙。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·蛇（下平六麻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">正道修成出涧涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">祥云驾，扬名济世华。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·蛇（下平六麻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">狡诈逶迤丛草爬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">修成道，腾云四海家。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度十六字令·蛇（下平六麻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/郝成明L21-YD1137-017</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五爪神灵速度夸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">荫丛过，休眠洞里家。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10.十六字令.蛇（下平六麻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/蔡立华（总院长）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">绿草香床洞作家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬眠醒，为民野鼠查。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 李明LF12-BF024-003 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度十六字令·蛇（下平六麻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/李明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美丽身姿胜晚霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">无足走，自由蜕变家。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（足出律，应平；自出律，应平。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">各位诗友好！今天的十六字令大家写的都很好，合律合韵，思路开阔，诗句流畅，意境美好。学习成果显著，为诗友们点赞！祝诗友们在追逐梦想的路上飞得更高！更远！🌸 🌸 </span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">今日练习点评∶齐云红老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11月2日学前练习（押平水韵、自己检测）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令•龙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱:平声部 C1601.Z2 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">中仄平平中仄平（韵）。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平仄仄，中仄仄平平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱:平声部 C1601.Z2</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令•龙(上平四支)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅(红二系北方一区12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">奇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有眼无珠惹众疑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">玄笔点，电闪二龙离。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱:平声部 C1601.Z2 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·龙(上平二冬+上平一东)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">九子人间各极峰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">修造化，后世敬尊容。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">直入云霄上九重。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">终淡去，雾雨掩真容。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">未料真身惊叶公。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">休立表，若里已成空。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 侯召思(执行系长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·龙(上平二冬)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">民族图腾华夏锋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">惊世界，风雨更从容。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·龙(上平二东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四海炎黄景仰恭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">携瑞气，华夏血情浓。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">唤雨呼风无影踪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">潜四海，难觅显真容。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 王守一LF12-BF024-013 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·龙（上平二冬）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/王守一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">宠粉窗前临素容。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">惊胆魄，叶氏影无踪。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·龙（上平二冬+上平七虞+下平八庚）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">友爱方成华夏宗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">思进取，光耀化天钟。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">渴盼甘霖润禾株。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">祈祷首，电闪悦桑榆。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">睛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">破壁飞升无影征。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">关键点，诗画眼鲜明。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·龙（上平二东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吐雾喷云上九重。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鳞爪现，风雨保年丰。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·龙（上平二东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鳞爪飞扬腾涧峰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">登宝殿，人世拜尊容。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度谱∶平声部c1601.22</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·龙（上平二东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">万里长城傲险峰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">民族脊，屹立若青松。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度十六字·龙（上平二冬）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/郝成明L21-YD1137-017</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">潜海腾云万物恭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">承勇气，智慧向前冲。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·龙（上平二冬）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/张鸿志LF12-BF024-018</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">入海飞天志在胸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">环宇宙，步履愈从容。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 李明LF12-BF024-003 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·龙（上平二冬）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/李明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">驾雾腾云气势宏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">观世界，独立傲苍穹。👍👍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">点评 ：我觉得诗友们太棒了，一个个很流畅，意境也很好，祝贺点赞！🌹🌹🌹👍👍👍</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">11月1日学前练习点评：侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：1、押平水韵。2、自己练习检测。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令•牛</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/xxx</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平(韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">中仄平平中仄平(韵）。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平仄，中仄仄平平(韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·牛(下平十一尤)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅(红二系北方一区12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜叹星妃河畔忧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋风起，笑看鹊桥浮。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蒲草为鞍角做钩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">光阴惜，开卷伴同游。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">犊角初生虎亦忧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">哀庞德，白马泣汀州。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·牛(上平十二文)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇LF12-BF024-001</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">勤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">日出而耕千亩殷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">安敦厚，无悔淡功勋。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·牛(下平十一尤)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇LF12-BF024-001</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">默载东归老子游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">亲青地，德道垄中留。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·牛（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block">抵力耕艰默勿求。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青草尝，乳汁哺儿优。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·牛（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">谦逊顽强无怨求。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">低头干，荒地变良畴。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老子西游去讲修。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">经函谷，帷幄五千留。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·牛（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">恪尽天伦身背躬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">勤开拓，奉献不邀功。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·牛（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">骑倚青牛函谷留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">逍遥乐，道法写春秋。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·牛（下平一先）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">怜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">织女飞天难夜眠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">皮相赠，舍命续前缘。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·牛（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">助禹开江治水丰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">黄牛吼，民悦赞其功。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·牛（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/郝成明（纪检总监）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">耐力忠诚嚼草求。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">宽宏量，岁月品评优。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·牛（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/张鸿志LF12-BF024-018</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陇上躬耕累汗流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">征途漫，俯首不停休。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 王守一LF12-BF024-013 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·火牛阵（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/王守一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">角缚尖刀尾灌油。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">燃朱火，破阵斩燕酋。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·牛（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">俯首耕耘无所求。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">食青草，自在度春秋。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·牛（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仰首西行老子游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">经书作，决胜五千秋。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 宗庆良(总院督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·牛(下平十一尤)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。壮力耕田汗水流</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">经途野，嚼草总无求。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 王平（总教督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令•牛（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/王平（总教督）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">常伴青童四野游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">观山水，背上笛声悠。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12.李明LF12-BF024-003</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令.牛（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/李明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春夏秋冬田里游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">深沉吼，眼望到垅头。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">努力奔波耕不休。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吃青草，从未有奢求。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沉默寡言汗水流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">筋皮尽，只盼庆丰收。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">31日对句练习点评∶侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳下横琴，轻愁绕指</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 仄仄平平，平平仄仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：平平仄仄，仄仄平平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳下（名词）横琴（动宾），轻愁（偏正）绕指（动宾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 柳下横琴，轻愁绕指</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 梅边弄笛，别怨沾唇[，🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶柳下横琴，轻愁绕指</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶松间放鹤，别梦安心🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶天涯保国，一别萦怀🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳下横琴，轻愁绕指</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：廊前鼓瑟，淡虑萦怀🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：亭台抚阮，浅黛凝眸🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶柳下横琴，轻愁绕指</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：池边戏水，紫燕传情🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：风中舞剑，幻影留空🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：亭旁饮酒，醉意缠盅🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：山间鼓瑟，浅笑盈眉🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳下横琴，轻愁绕指</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：桥边倚笛，别绪摧眉🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：花间举酒，夙念牵心🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：山前纵马，壮志腾胸🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：城头仗剑，虎魄凝眸🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 王守一LF12-BF024-013 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳下横琴，轻愁绕指</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：花前煮酒，浅醉吟香。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：亭中唱赋，曲水流觞。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：弦旁舞鹤，丽鸟知音。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 王平（总教督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳下横琴，轻愁绕指</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：花前作赋，醉意生怀🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 侯召思(执行系长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳下横琴，轻愁绕指；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：林中跑步，快意强身。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 李明LF12-BF024-003 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳下横琴，轻愁绕指</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：窗前望月，远景怡心🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 郭文岩（九期） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳下横琴，轻愁绕指</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：征途客里，望月归心🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳下横琴，轻愁绕指</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：庭中鼓瑟，别梦萦怀🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：林中练武，客路惊心🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：亭中饮酒，故事当头🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳下横琴，轻愁绕指</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：亭台入戏，惬意萦怀🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：湖边弄墨，妙笔生花🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13. 齐云红(九期)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳下横琴，轻愁绕指；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：书中悟道，快意扬眉🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">14. 郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岀句：柳下横琴，轻愁绕指</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：松边放鹤，热艺萦怀🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">30日对句练习点评∶郭文岩老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸡啼落月天将晓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 平平仄仄平平仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：中仄平平中仄平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鸡啼（主谓）落月（动宾）天(名词)将（副词）晓（动词）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 鸡啼落月天将晓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 客醒疏钟夜渐阑🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 杨绍英（教官） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸡啼落月天将晓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：犬吠沉星日渐升🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸡啼落月天将晓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：马啸扬风日已升🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：浪涌沉鱼地未知🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雾掩行车路渐迷🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸡啼落月天将晓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：犬吠开门夜未央🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：妇起炊茶牛尚酣🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 李明LF12-BF024-003 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸡啼落月天将晓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：犬吠开门人欲行🌹流水对</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 王守一LF12-BF024-013 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸡啼落月天将晓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：餐讫持耙农正忙🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鸥唱飞霞日渐高🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸡啼落月天将晓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：犬吠出云梦正酣🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雾起腾辉晨已归🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶鸡啼落月天将晓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶鸭戏流江水渐喧🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶鹤舞遮云影渐无🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸡啼落月天将晓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雁徙飞霞春已归</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">建议：日暖晴风春已归</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 出句：鸡鸣落月天将晓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：云退飞霞日欲出（云退飞霞不妥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：虎啸惊林兽已慌🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 宗庆良(总院督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:鸡啼落月天将晓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:马跃空山路欲归🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">28日对句练习点评∶侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：闲书一本清茶伴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 平平仄仄平平仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：中仄平平中仄平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲书（偏正）一本（数量）清茶（偏正）伴（动词）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 闲书一本清茶伴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 妙语连篇野菊痴🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：闲书一本清茶伴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：妙笔三支古画存🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：淡墨三分媚态生🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：宝砚三方高阁存🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：素纸多张妙画成🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：闲书一本清茶伴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：妙味千番陋室萦🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：翠菊双株彩蝶围🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：秀竹千竿淡墨添🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：闲书一本清茶伴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：浊酒三杯明月陪🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：热泪两行浊酒随🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（两仄应平）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：新梦三更热泪随🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶闲书一本清茶伴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶夜话千年淡饭陪🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶夜话千年美酒邀🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶暖语三冬爱意添。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶闲书一本清茶伴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：佳作千篇神笔磨🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：俊鸟千只南岭栖🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：细雨三滴紫燕归🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（细雨千条更好）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 李明LF12-BF024-003 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：闲书一本清茶伴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：枯叶几枚明月随🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>8. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：闲书一本清茶伴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：新句千行诗友欢🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 王守一LF12-BF024-013 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：闲书一本清茶伴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：幻梦千番黄叶飞🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：妙韵繁音雅趣生🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：闲书一本清茶伴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：玉砚三池平仄飞🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">27日对句练习点评∶高凤霞老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：平湖水冷秋光老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 平平仄仄平平仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：中仄平平中仄平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平湖（偏正）水冷（主谓）秋光（偏正）老（形容词）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 平湖水冷秋光老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 野柿霜红景趣新 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：平湖水冷秋光老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：朗月辉和丹桂香 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：怒海涛惊渔舸缺 🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（“缺”出律，应平。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：柳岸花红翠鸟祥🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（对句很美，但感觉像春天，有隔景之嫌。个见。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：平湖水冷秋光老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：古道亭寒树影惆 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（“惆”意为失意、惆怅，喻树影是否显牵强？个见，供诗友参考。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：高阁窗幽山色憔 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶平湖水冷秋光老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶峻岭松青晚节芳 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 李明LF12-BF024-003 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：平湖水冷秋光老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：深谷风轻夜雨暖 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：平湖水冷秋光老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：满地霜清草色丰 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：矮屋窗寒瓦鹊惊 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：峻岭林盈枫叶红 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 宗庆良(总院督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:平湖水冷秋光老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:远岸风高夜色寒 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:远岫花寒霁色深 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:远树枝寒雨意长 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 侯召思(执行系长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：平湖水冷秋光老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：大漠风轻神箭高 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：平湖水冷秋光老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：明月天高酒兴浓 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：绿柳芽新春色浓 🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block">（对句很美，春意盎然，可惜隔景了。）</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：玉竹节清意志坚 🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（“意志坚”显直白，诗意再浓些更好。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：黄菊花开景色新 🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（黄菊与花意重，联想出句“平湖之水冷”，那何处花开呢？个见，请诗友参考。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：平湖水冷秋光老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：古寺炉残暮色寒 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岀句：平湖水冷秋光老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：沃野花寒世味鲜 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">各位诗友好！今天的对句大家对的都很好，合律，对仗较工整，意境美好，只是偶尔出现出律、隔景、修辞等小瑕疵。相信随着深入学习，定会逐一克服，前进路上更加步履铿锵！诗友们加油！✊ ✊ </span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">26日对句练习点评∶齐云红老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：远望群山枫尽染</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 仄仄平平平仄仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：中平中仄仄平平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">远望（偏正）群山（偏正）枫（名词）尽（副词）染（动词，或形容词）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：远望群山枫尽染</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：轻描几笔画初成🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 宗庆良(总院督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：远望群山枫尽染</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：幽寻众树叶经飘🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶远望群山枫尽染</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶欣逢小雨菊先迎🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：远望群山枫尽染</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：近观曲径菊皆鲜🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：静临孤寺影趋空🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：远望群山枫尽染</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：俯观片菊蕊齐芳🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：进瞻孤雁翼单翔🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：远望群山枫尽染</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：近观万木叶皆黄🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：近观万径人皆杳人字出律🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：近观绿竹叶皆新🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：空闻万古事皆休🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：远望群山枫尽染</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：近瞧碧水鸭方游🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：近观浓雾树才衣🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：近观万木叶全疏🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 李明LF12-BF024-003 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：远望群山枫尽染</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：近闻盆景叶极香🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 齐云红九期 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：远望群山枫尽染</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：近听溪水韵无穷🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：远望群山枫尽染</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：纵闻野树叶皆飘🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：远望群山枫尽染</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：喜逢秋水蟹犹肥🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12. 王守一LF12-BF024-013 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：远望群山枫尽染</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：静听高树雀常欢🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">25日对句练习点评老师∶侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：人无侈欲胸襟阔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 平平仄仄平平仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：中仄平平中仄平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 人无侈欲胸襟阔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 夜若宽心魂梦清🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶人无侈欲胸襟阔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶雁有春心翼羽轻🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：人无侈欲胸襟阔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：树有深根枝叶欣🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：朝有贤君日月辉🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：笔有真功书画神🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 李明LF12-BF024-003 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：人无侈欲胸襟阔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鹰有决心天地宽🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 宗庆良(总院督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：人无侈欲胸襟阔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：我有多才眼界宽🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：人无侈欲胸襟阔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：海有重洋气度平🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：竹有虚心仪干刚🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：地有高山峰岭绵🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：人无侈欲胸襟阔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雨润山林气象清🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：人无侈欲胸襟阔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：诗有情怀意境高🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：人无侈欲胸襟阔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：人有雄心天地宽🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：人有贤朋品志高🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：人无侈欲胸襟阔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：马载清风天地宽🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：山藉仙踪气势宏🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：诗有灵犀意蕴浓🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：酒纳纯粮况味悠🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 王守一LF12-BF024-013 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：人无侈欲胸襟阔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：腹有华章翰墨新🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">24日对句练习点评老师∶侯昭思老师</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：棹歌起处惊鸥鹭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 仄平仄仄平平仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：中仄平平中仄平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 棹歌起处惊鸥鹭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 渔网收时现月星🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：棹歌起处惊鸥鹭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：俚曲飘来邀友朋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：月影移来就柏杨🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 王平（总教督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：棹歌起处惊鸥鹭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：牧子归时唤畜禽🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：棹歌起处惊鸥鹭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：帆影归时乐友朋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鸿雁归时暖蟹鱼🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（一般用燕表示春天，雁表示秋天。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：棹歌起处惊鸥鹭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：莲舞停时醉管弦🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶棹歌起处惊鸥鹭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶渔笛鸣时拂芰荷🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：棹歌起处惊鸥鹭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：春雨来时放叶芽🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 侯召思(执行系长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：棹歌起处惊鸥鹭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鱼影动时乐子翁🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：棹歌起处惊欧鹭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：朗月升空照户庭🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（月色更好）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">21日十六字令练习点评∶侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：1、以月亮为主题，题目自拟。2、押平水韵。3、自己练习检测。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度全格十六字令词谱@</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/×××</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">中平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平中仄仄平平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">中仄，平平中仄平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block">曲度全格十六字令·绘月(下平十四盐）</p><p class="ql-block">文/宫帅(红二系北方一区12024分院教官)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">毫尖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冰轮独醒坠重檐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">悬帐，澄辉梦里添。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 刘羽芳LF-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block">曲度全格十六字令·月光（下平七阳）</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">婆娑树影映方塘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如水，婵娟奉瑞祥。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度全格十六字令·梦月(下平五歌）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇LF12-BF024-001</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">入禾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">茕茕白兔觅嫦娥。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梦醒，晨光伴绿萝。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度全格十六字令·月(下平二萧）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">玉娇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凌波踏步细纤腰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欢笑，低眉将你邀。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度全格十六字令·望月（上平十四寒）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仰观。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天宫明月赛圆盘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">俯瞰，疑霜胜雪寒。。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度全格十六字令·品月（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">苍穹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">圆盘夜半挂当空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">玉白，霜凝万物笼。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度全格十六字令·望月（下平一先）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/郝成明（纪检总监）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">亮圆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">银光漫漫照年年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鉴古，查今看自然。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度全格十六字令·月夜（上平十一真）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">星辰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">常随玉镜洒梦频。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">哨所，戎师护国辛。[强][强]🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">20日十六字令练习评∶高凤霞老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：1、以月亮为主题，题目自拟。2、押平水韵。3、自己练习检测。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲度全格十六字令词谱</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/×××</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">中仄（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">中仄中平平仄仄（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">中平，中仄平平仄（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">词例：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令•望月暇思（去声二十三漾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/夏同椿（副总教督总系长）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">伫望。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">载梦神舟天宇旷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">问仙，宫阙娥无恙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·寻月(去声十七霰)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春院。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">藏入琼花浑不见。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欲寻，烛影红娇面。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·唤月(去声十五翰）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇LF12-BF024-001</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">轻唤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千里天河今两岸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">又逢，君目银光灿。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 侯召思(执行系长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·望月（上声二十二养）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">心往。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">明月高悬神气爽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欢歌，华夏同欣赏。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 王守一LF12-BF024-013 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·夏日观云（上声七麌）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/王守一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欲雨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">豪气匆匆开牖户。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">见龙，写意空天舞。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（令写的很好，合律合韵，诗句流畅。但是诗友请注意一个问题：今天的习作要求是“以月亮为主题”，题目自拟。作品无论选择哪个角度，都要含有月亮元素。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·晓月（入声六月）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晓月。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">斫桂吴刚持斧钺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">回望，曙色方初谒。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令.中秋望月（入声六月）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">宫阙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">明镜高悬天上月。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">中秋，欢聚人超越。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·晨练（入声四质）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月出。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">踏破霜霭迎旭日。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">笑声，伴我腮红溢。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（霭出律，应平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 李明LF12-BF024-003 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·问月（入声九屑）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/李明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">问月。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">几百亿年白似雪？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">哽咽，泪洒寒宫阙。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（“白”出律，应平；“雪”出韵，不属入声九霄韵部。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9.侯绪富LF12-BF024-05</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·赏月（上平七虞）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出户。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云绕玉盘丝带舞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嫦娥，携兔游宫府。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">各位诗友好！今天的练习大家写的都很好，合律合韵，起承转合好，意境美好！只有极少出律出韵问题。为诗友们点赞！在这里建议诗友们注意两点：一是写完作业务必用检测工具认真自检，避免出律出韵。二是认真审题，严格按照作业要求立意谋篇。诗友们加油！✊ ✊ </span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">10月19日：十六字令练习 题目：风</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">词谱：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平中仄平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平仄，仄仄仄平平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：押平水韵。自己练习检测。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">例词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令•风（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block">文/王平（总教督）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一夜吹来满树红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">飞鸢下，乐坏小顽童。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·风(上平一东)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漫卷乌云戏钓翁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">催花雨，把盏榻孤篷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·风(上平一东)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇LF12-BF024-001</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浩渺无垠旷野中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">来时路，起落几番空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·风（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">绿柳轻摇黄雀冲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花针雨，润物育千红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·风（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">风。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">落叶翩跹秋草躬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒流至，冻馁万千虫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·风（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">拂柳柔丝落叶红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">旗飘动，祖国在心中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令.风（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">满树红花一夜终。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">经行处，翠绿嫩芽葱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令.风（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">玉竹随行偏向东。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">节难毁，碧绿指苍穹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·风（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吹拂桃花笑面红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春光媚，嫩蝶舞青丛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·风（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">唤雨声繁润绿丛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">农哥喜，铁马吼田丰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7.郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·风（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/郝成明（纪检总监）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一夜吹来显绿丛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">无形拂，尽在赋诗中。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">16字令练习：10月18日点评侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">张孝祥谱（正格）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平。（韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平中仄平。（韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平仄，仄仄仄平平。（韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">按照上面的词谱写一首十六字令，题目自拟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：押平水韵，练习自己检测。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">张孝祥谱（正格）十六字令·晨(上平十一真)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">断梦难寻鸟语频。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">儿酣卧，粉面映丹唇。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华12024分院长</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">张孝祥谱（正格）</span></p><p class="ql-block">十六字令·梅（上平十灰）</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">白雪红颜傲峻台。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">佳人俏，百媚报春来。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">张孝祥谱（正格）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·填词(上平四支)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇LF12-BF024-001</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">词。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">静夜难眠寻笔思。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">邀明月，揽桂赋新枝。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">张孝祥谱（正格）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·填词（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">喜看红枫烂漫缪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒风起，只剩干离愁。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（写的是秋天景色，题目修改一下更好。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">张孝祥谱（正格）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令.松（上平二冬）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">松。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">傲视千山耐雪冬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">观天地，任我立群峰。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 侯召思(执行系长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令.秋（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯召思(执行系长）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">万木霜天色彩留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">南飞雁，展翅信天游。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">张孝祥谱（正格）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·凉（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雾起风吹落叶黄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晨街静，树上挂清霜。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令•秋（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/张鸿志</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">染透山峦画彩妆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋阳照，木叶散清香。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9。。. 李明LF12-BF024-003 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·温馨加油员（下平十三覃）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/李明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">甜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">笑脸相迎顾客甘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">加开水，送祝福平安。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10.十六字令•秋（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/王平（总教督）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">菊绽枫红雁过头。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">田增色，美景映双眸。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令•秋（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/王平（总教督）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岭下乡村景色幽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山环水，绿树掩红楼。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令•秋（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/王平（总教督）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">稻浪飘香硕果稠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">农夫乐，笑脸醉丰收。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令•秋（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/王平（总教督）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桂冷星稀月似钩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凭栏望，独影照西楼。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11.十六字令·云（词林正韵、张孝祥体）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/郝成明（纪检总监）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫道无情百变君。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">随缘至，舒卷对晨昏🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·云（词林正韵、张孝祥体）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/郝成明（纪检总监）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">变幻多姿好梦勋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凭天阔，潇洒绣霓裙。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·云（词林正韵、张孝祥体）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/郝成明（纪检总监）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">借我清风伴月轮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">相思夜，照见梦中人。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·云（词林正韵、张孝祥体）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/郝成明（纪检总监）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梦系风头醉意真。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凌波步，走笔画乾坤。🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">10月16日语文基础知识练习点评∶侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、写出3个主谓词组：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、写出3个动宾词组：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3、写出3个并列词组：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4、写出3个动补词组：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5、写出3个偏正词组：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：练习的目的是促进诗友们理解运用词组的能力，反复温习基础知识是最好途径。（的字结构、介宾结构、所字结构词组自己练习）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10月16日语文基础知识练习</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、写出3个主谓词组：花朵凋谢，我们说道，微风拂过</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、写出3个动宾词组：找到方法，烹饪早餐，惩罚他</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3、写出3个并列词组：宽广辽阔，高山流水，花草树木</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4、写出3个动补词组：干得漂亮，热得烦躁，来一趟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5、写出3个偏正词组：鲜红的旗帜，优美的旋律，洁白的婚纱</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出三个主谓词组：秋意阑珊，落叶飞舞，风雨大作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出三个动宾词组：打扫房间，热爱祖国，学习写作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出三个并列词组：桃李，花草，风雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出三个动补词组：装满，吓跑，抱起</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出三个偏正词组：红叶，绿柳，飞虫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、主谓：虫鸣，人来，灯灭（秋虫鸣，故人来，寒灯灭）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、动宾：挑灯，阅卷，聚首（轻挑桔灯，静阅长卷，欢聚一堂）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3、并列：草木，日月，圆缺（芳草秀木，丽日皎月，抱圆补缺）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4、动补：阅尽，踏过，束紧（阅不尽，踏得过，束不紧）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5、偏正：朗月，铁路，故人（清朗月色，苍茫铁路，敦厚故人)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、写出3个主谓词组：我说 你走 雨打</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、写出3个动宾词组：打球 看书 写作业去了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3、写出3个并列词组：土地 桌椅 龙凤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4、写出3个动补词组：吃饱 看完 睡醒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5、写出3个偏正词组： 碧水 蓝天 白云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五. 冯素华12024分院长 一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">主谓词组∶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">农民播种，泰山雄伟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老师讲课，长江奔腾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">动宾词组∶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">耕耘田地，保护环境</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学习知识，服务人民。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">并列词组∶</p><p class="ql-block">努力学习，保护动物</p><p class="ql-block">青山绿水，跑跳结合。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">偏正词组∶</p><p class="ql-block">坚强的意志，飞快地奔跑，</p><p class="ql-block">松树的品质，深情地歌唱。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">动补词组∶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">笑得开心，飞得更高，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">画得真好，跳得好六六。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">六. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">主谓词组：精力充沛，心情舒畅，风云突变</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">动宾词组：学习知识，关心集体，发展生产。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">并列词组：文化教育，良师益友，齐心协力，真诚忠实。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">动补词组：压抑不住，运筹帷幄，扬名四海，驰名天下。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">偏正词组：壮丽山河，精心设计，坚决支持。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">评语：今天语文基础知识（词组结构）练习，主谓、动宾、偏正词组答的都挺好，答词、词组都可以。并列词组，两词应是同类的，如良师益友（名词名词），可以；筑牢基础（动词名词）不可以。动补词组两词应是动词形容词，笑得开心（动词形容词），可以；行走四野，（动词名词）不可以。另外，名词与名词组合的词、或词组，如何判断是并列结构，还是偏正结构？看两个名词的类别：古人把名词分为天文、地理、动物、植物、时令等二十多种。两个名词的类别相同，是并列结构，如日月（天文类），是；日夜（天文、时间类），不是。两个名词的类别不相同，是偏正结构。如秋风（时令、天文类），是；春秋（时令类），不是。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">词结构比较难，反复练习，慢慢就好了🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">10月15日语文基础知识练习点评∶徐振国老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">按照要求写词语：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个副词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个介词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个连词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个助词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个叹词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个拟声词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个副词：皆，颇，亦，曾经，居然</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个介词：比，在，为，把，向</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个连词：因为/所以，不仅/而且，虽然/但是，既然/那么，即使/也</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个助词 : 哉，乎，哇，了，的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个叹词：喂，唉，哼，哎，唉吆，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个拟声词：咔嚓，嘭嘭，噼啪，叮咚，唰唰🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个副词：就，刚，才，将，不</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个介词：在，于，向，从，为</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个连词：不但，而且，就，既，不仅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个助词：呢，吗，啊，着，吧</span></p><p class="ql-block">五个叹词：哼，嗯，耶，哦，喂</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个拟声词：潺潺，沙沙，潇潇，瑟瑟，滴滴答🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">按照要求写词语：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个副词：很 颇 极 十分 就</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个介词：把 从 向 往 比</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个连词：因为/所以 不但/而且 虽然/但是 和 或 又</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个助词：的 地 得 所 吗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个叹词：喂 吆 嗨 哼 哦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个拟声词：沙沙呼啦啦 汪汪 轰轰潺潺🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">副词：非常，绝对，极度，十分，全体。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">介词：从，自从，往，在，关于，使。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">助词：的，了，吧，之，乎，者，也。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">叹词：唉呀，啊，哎呦，哦，喂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">拟声词：哗啦啦，轰隆隆，叮当，叮咚，乒乓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">连词：和，与，跟，同，而。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 写出五个副词：分外，早已，仅仅，必定，竟然</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个介词：在，向，于，自，比</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个连词：何况，乃至，于是，至于，此外？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个助词 : </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">了，得，之，过，着，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个叹词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">呀，啊，哦，哇，嗯</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个拟声词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咚，嗡，砰，咕咚，淅淅沥沥🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个副词：甚，殊，弥，皆，悉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个介词：再，从，为，于，以</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个连词：而，与，以，既/又，虽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个助词：之，者，也，哉，焉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个叹词：嘻，乎，兮，矣，呜呼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个拟声词：喳，噌，唧唧，啾啾，嘎嘎🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 齐云红九期 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个副词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">非常，一般，特别，很，经常</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个介词：从，于，以，让，由</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个连词：也许/曾经/，只要/就，只有/才，哪怕/何况，没有/哪堪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个助词：嗟夫，了，夫，呜呼，然也，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个叹词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">哈哈，呵呵，嘿嘿，呜呼，嗨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个拟声词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乒乒乓乓，啧啧 ，霍霍，噗通，叮咚🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个副词∶很，马上，如，曾经，不断。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个介词∶通过，为了，把，向，随着。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个连词∶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">因为......所以</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不但......而且</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">虽然......但是</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和，既。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个助词∶的，地，得了，吗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个叹词∶啊，唉呀，哼，喂，噢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个拟声词∶汪汪，唧唧，哇哇，轰隆，沙沙。🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">10月14日掌握词性练习点评∶侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个名词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个动词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个形容词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个数词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个量词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个代词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">请注明词性，例如，红旗（名词）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">事业（）。上午（）。喜欢（）。鼓励（）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乐观（）。急躁（）。第一（）。十倍（）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">个（）。 趟（）。 你们（）。这样（）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10月14日掌握词性练习</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个名词：关山，蒹葭，狸奴，漏声，桂棹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个动词：泣，啼，蹙，炊，耕</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个形容词：窈窕，清浅，莞尔，汹涌，明媚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个数词：一，两，千，半，兆</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个量词：双，畦，辆，亩，只</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个代词：子，君，汝，自己，那里🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个名词∶祖国，国䘗，北京，华山，爸爸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个动词∶跑步，爬山，骑车，打拳，游泳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个形容词∶雪白，粉嫩，高大，美丽，飘逸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个数词∶壹，拾，千，百，万。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个量词∶个，篇，步，丈，元。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个代词∶我们，这些，哪里，她们，它们。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10月14日掌握词性练习</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个名词：绿柳、青杨、侧柏、红松、刺槐</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个动词：蒸、煮、烧、烤、涮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个形容词：火红、翠绿、鹅黄、袅袅、飘飘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个数词：三、百、千、万、十</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个代词：你们、我们、他们、它们、这个</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（没写量词）🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个名词：山，田，琴，椅，家</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个动词：唱，写，伸，瞻，开</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个形容词：冷，早，香，俏丽，缓慢</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个数词：零，半，一，两，千</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个量词：丈，座，首，杯，条</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个代词：它，彼，此，汝，谁🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">名词：菊花、青山、碧水、田野、太阳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">动词：吹、打、拿、拍、提</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">形容词：碧绿、美好、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">火热、粉红、深蓝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">数词：亿，百、千、万、十</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">量词：三张、五元、十里、一个、千山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（量词写成数量词了。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">代词：我们、你们、他们、它们、这个🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10月14日掌握词性练习</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个名词：大雁，芦苇，春天，高粱，蜻蜓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个动词：吹，跳，洗，飞，舞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个形容词：漂亮，火红，美妙，寒冷，雄伟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个数词：一半，三，百，零，十万</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">几写出五个量词：条，只，个，对，滴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写出五个代词：我，汝，吾辈，谁，这🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个名词：山，水，松，柳，画。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个动词：打，摇，扇，吹，抚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个形容词：美好，灿烂，蔚蓝，火红，碧绿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个数词：一，两，千，万，百。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个量词：个，元，付，套，棵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五个代词：你，他，我，人家，什么。🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">10月13日对句练习点评∶高凤霞老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雨润千山花草茂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 仄仄平平平仄仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：平平仄仄仄平平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗词基础好的诗友可以用出句作为首句，写成七绝诗，诗谱为：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平平仄仄，平平仄仄仄平平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平仄仄平平仄，仄仄平平仄仄平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：学员可以只完成对句，也可以对句、嵌句诗都写。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 雨润千山花草茂，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 春侵四月景光明。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·春霁有感(下平八庚)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨润千山花草茂，春侵四月景光明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人间万物欣欣意，笔下连篇霭霭情。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华12024分院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶雨润千山花草茂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶春回大地竹松青 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗∶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·龙风学习（下平九青）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨润千山花草茂，春回大地竹松青。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">时光荏苒寻诗径，我辈龙风作赋屏。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 王平（总教督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:雨润千山花草茂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:风开一镜鹭鸥欢 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4.侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雨润千山花草茂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：诗磨万首意情真 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：风摇万岭叶芽新 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·练习诗句有感（下平十一真）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨润千山花草茂，诗磨万首意情真。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">初学曲度迷痴起，浩瀚龙风笔下神🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（合韵。学出律，应平。诗句流畅，起承转合较好，赞！）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雨润千山花草茂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：风吹万物玉林生 🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（出句“花草”并列词组，对句“玉林”偏正词组，失对。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鹰翔万壑见闻多 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·偶感（下平八庚）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨润千山花草茂，风吹万物玉林生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云霞满纸心怀慕，百炼方能赋禀萌。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（合律合韵。转句略显突兀，由写景转入写情要有铺垫。个见，供参考。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 侯召思(执行系长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雨润千山花草茂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：林丰四野燕莺欢 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雨润千山花草茂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：云封万径柏杉浓 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：龙腾四月雾云生 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春安（下平九青）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨润千山花草茂，云封万径柏杉青。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春深四月风光好，沃野河川百事宁。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（合律合韵，诗句流畅，起承转合好，赞！）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 宗庆良(总院督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:雨润千山花草茂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:风吹万树柳林深 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雨润千山花草茂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：风临一曲管弦幽 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·随感(下平十一尤)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇LF12-BF024-001</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨润千山花草茂，风临一曲管弦幽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浓云散尽心如镜，皓月新颜映九州。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（合律合韵，诗句流畅，起承转合好，赞！）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 高凤霞 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雨润千山花草茂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：春盈四野马牛肥🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雨润千山花草茂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：云行万里路途遥] 🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（意境要拓展开。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12. 郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雨润千山花草茂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：秋来万物果粮丰 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·赞青松（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/郝成明（纪检总监）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨润千山花草茂，秋来万物果粮丰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">经霜叶色蚩尤烈，挂露青松志更忠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶雨润千山花草茂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶龙腾万里雾云生🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗∶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·春荣（下平九青）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨润千山花草茂，龙腾万里雾云生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">农家四月风光好，沃野河川百事荣。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（合律合韵，诗句流畅，起承转合好，赞！）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">10月12日对句练习点评∶齐云红老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸭戏江边春水暖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 仄仄平平平仄仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：平平仄仄仄平平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗词基础好的诗友可以用出句作为首句，写成七绝诗，诗谱为：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平平仄仄，平平仄仄仄平平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平仄仄平平仄，仄仄平平仄仄平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：学员可以只完成对句，也可以对句、嵌句诗都写。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 鸭戏江边春水暖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 虾惊棹底暮霞红🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block">七绝·汀洲鸭(上平一东)</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鸭戏江边春水暖，虾惊棹底暮霞红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">渔歌渐远汀洲冷，羽翅藏头憩蓼丛。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华（12024分院长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶鸭戏江边春水暖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶鹰翔塞外碧山喧🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗∶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝.春日（上平十三元）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鸭戏江边春水暖，鹰翔塞外碧山喧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃花绽萼莺歌早，柳叶垂枝蝶舞繁。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸭戏江边春水暖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：蛙鸣草地候虫清</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：蛙潜岸上绿苔寒🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·春日（下平八庚）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鸭戏江边春水暖，蛙鸣草地候虫清。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃红柳绿天增色，燕舞蝶飞万物荣。🌹蝶出律</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 王平（总教督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸭戏江边春水暖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：风吹岸上柳丝柔🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗∶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝•新春图（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/王平（总教督）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鸭戏江边春水暖，风吹岸上柳丝柔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山前一望参差绿，早有青童牧马牛。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸭戏江边春水暖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：风行陇上绿枝翩🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝•春（下平一先）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鸭戏江边春水暖，风行陇上绿枝翩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">炊烟乍起寒晨在，早有农家喜入田。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 宗庆良(总院督）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:鸭戏江边春水暖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:莺飞岸上暮风柔🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗∶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝∶放牧（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宗庆良</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鸭戏江边春水暖，莺飞岸上暮风柔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">扬鞭策马肥羊壮，笛梵童歌放牧悠。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸭戏江边春水暖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：云栖树上碧天悠🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·春江随感(下平十一尤)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇LF12-BF024-001</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鸭戏江边春水暖，云栖树上碧天悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平生甚爱观闲浪，率性成帆笔作舟。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸭戏江边春水暖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鱼翔河中碧空高🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：牛耕垄上柳芽娇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：龙腾笔下雨云浓🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗∶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝.画意（上平二冬）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鸭戏江边春水暖，龙腾笔下雨云浓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人生易老惜此刻，醉卧庭中望古松。🌹🌹此中有五连仄出律，注意诗谱平仄要求。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 王守一LF12-BF024-013 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸭戏江边春水暖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：豚游岸上喜东坡。🌹这两句后三字不对仗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·无题（下平五歌）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/王守一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鸭戏江边春水暖，豚游岸上喜东坡。🌹[强]请诗友注意(这两句不对仗)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蒌蒿又伴芦芽短，美味难寻不必多。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 李明LF12-BF024-003 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸭戏江边春水暖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鸡鸣夜晚月光寒🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·国泰民安（上平十四寒）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/李明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鸭戏江边春水暖，鸡鸣夜晚月光寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如今社会多安定，感谢国家管理严。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鸭戏江边春水暖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：苗生雨后阱田青🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">10月11日对句练习点评∶侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：村前嫩柳摇春色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 平平仄仄平平仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：仄仄平平仄仄平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗词基础好的诗友可以用出句作为首句，写成七绝诗，诗谱为：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平仄仄平平仄，仄仄平平仄仄平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平平仄仄，平平仄仄仄平平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：学员可以只完成对句，也可以对句、嵌句诗都写。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 村前嫩柳摇春色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 足下轻尘散竹声🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（足、竹对村、春，巧妙）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·游子归(下平八庚)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">村前嫩柳摇春色，足下轻尘散竹声。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">昔日离家方两尺，秋冬历尽万竿迎。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华（12024分院长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶村前嫩柳摇春色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶屋后夭桃绽暖风🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">嵌句入诗∶</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝∶春耕（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">村前嫩柳摇春色，屋后夭桃绽暖风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">布谷声声乡国喚，田园铁马吼青穹。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：村前嫩柳摇春色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：屋后池塘映月华🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：涧后青松傲北风。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">初春（上平.十四寒）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">村前嫩柳摇春色，涧后青松傲北风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鹿鹤长鸣逐日月，喧天鼓乐贺平安。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 侯召思(执行系长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：村前嫩柳摇春色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：树下儿童晒古诗🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：村前嫩柳摇春色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雨后斜阳映绿波🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：树顶黄莺筑暖窝🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝· 春之韵（下平五歌）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">村前嫩柳摇春色，雨后斜阳映绿波。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">紫燕临空欢戏水，逍遥老汉酒当歌。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：村前嫩柳摇春色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水上轻舟荡碧波🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雨后斜阳映彩霞🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（彩虹更好）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：案上文人醉墨香🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：村前嫩柳摇春色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：巷尾青杨引鹊鸲🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：垄上黄牛耙井田🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·村居（上平七虞）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">村前嫩柳摇春色，巷尾青杨引鹊鸲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">稼穑平仓人自在，神闲气定尽欢愉🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：村前嫩柳摇春色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：陌上幽兰挽日光🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block">七绝·春日还乡(下平七阳)</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇LF12-BF024-001</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">村前嫩柳摇春色，陌上幽兰挽日光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">犬吠鸡鸣提步缓，归来更晓恋家乡。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 李明LF12-BF024-003 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：村前嫩柳摇春色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：井下青蛙噪绿苔🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·和谐画面（上平十灰）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/李明/</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">村前嫩柳摇春色，井下青蛙噪绿苔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">马背夕阳相映趣，炊烟跳跃盼归来。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（夕仄，应平）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 王守一LF12-BF024-013</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：村前嫩柳摇春色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：镜里轻红点俏容🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·小心思（上平二冬）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/王守一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">村前嫩柳摇春色，镜里轻红点俏容。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晨起阿哥邀岭外，疑知表意可相从？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（晨仄，应平）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11.徐振国(院督)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：村前嫩柳摇春色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：屋后长松映霞光🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">嵌句入诗：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·春日乡游 (下平七阳)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/徐振国(院督)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">村前嫩柳揺春色，屋后长松映霞光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">紫燕初归飞绕栋，桃花庭院冠群芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（庭院，庭平，应仄）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">10月10日对句练习点评∶韩家峰老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 平平仄仄平平仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：仄仄平平仄仄平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗词基础好的诗友可以用出句作为首句，写成七绝诗，诗谱为：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平仄仄平平仄，仄仄平平仄仄平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平平仄仄，平平仄仄仄平平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：学员可以只完成对句，也可以对句、嵌句诗都写。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:袅袅馀香入客窗🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·雨夜闲趣(上平三江)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦，袅袅馀香入客窗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浅紫金黄三五朵，悠然纸上对寒缸。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：瑟瑟秋风舞梦萦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：滚滚惊雷震客窗🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·秋夜（下平八庚）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦，瑟瑟秋风舞梦萦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">卧起灯油将殆尽，重铺暖衾到天明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 冯素华（12024分院长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶片片桃花落水湾🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗∶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝.秋雨（上平十五刪）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦，片片桃花落水湾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">最盼天公多作美，农哥日出欲耕艰。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 宗庆良(总院督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">飒飒秋风染岭霜🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-018 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">潇潇暮雨敲檐瓦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冽冽秋风弄海潮🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 葛晓东LF12一BF024一006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句；耿耿丹心育苑花🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：淡淡花香入客窗🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：袅袅炊烟绕瓮城</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：耿耿丹心育李桃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：淡淡灯光照客愁🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨夜寄乡思（下平.十二侵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦，淡淡乡愁乱客心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">把酒遥看家在处，扶琴暗叹觅知音。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：潋潋荷塘漾玉珠🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">嵌句入诗</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·雨夜游苏州园林(上平七虞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇LF12-BF024-001</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦，潋潋荷塘漾玉珠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">妙指连绵千古曲，今宵若梦恋东吴。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 葛晓东LF12一BF024一006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜雨寄乡思（下平.十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦，淡淡萤光照客愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">把酒遥思家在处，何当锦绣渡春秋？🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：朵朵秋菊展蕊香🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·秋（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦，朵朵秋菊展蕊香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">喜看今朝丰五谷，民安盛世祖国强。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 杨绍英（教官）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：潇潇暮雨敲檐瓦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：瑟瑟秋风害梦情🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·秋夜（下平八庚）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/杨绍英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">潇潇暮雨敲檐瓦，瑟瑟秋风害梦情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">把酒庭前无丽句，弹琴月下唱心声。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11.徐振国（院督）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：点点朝霜挂树枝🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><br></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">徐振国（院督）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·咏霜菊 （上平四支）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><br></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萧萧暮雨敲檐瓦，点点朝霜挂树枝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">可叹园林花落处，唯存紫菊靓容议。🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">10月9日对句练习点评∶郭文岩老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：一湖秋水明如镜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 仄平平仄平平仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：仄仄平平仄仄平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 或者平仄平平仄仄平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗词基础好的诗友可以用出句作为首句，写成七绝诗，诗谱为：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄平平仄平平仄，仄仄平平仄仄平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平平仄仄，平平仄仄仄平平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：学员可以只完成对句，也可以对句、嵌句诗都写。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 一湖秋水明如镜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 万岭霜枫艳有姿🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·秋景(上平四支)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一湖秋水明如镜，万岭霜枫艳有姿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忽见征鸿天上过，回眸岁月已成诗。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华（12024分院长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶一湖秋水明如镜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶万壑松林翠有霜🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗∶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝.秋色（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一湖秋水明如镜，万壑松林翠有霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">菊绽金丝南苑下，枫留紫叶扮家乡。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：一湖秋水明如镜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：两岸朝霞灿若金🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·咏秋晨(下平十二侵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇LF12-BF024-001</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一湖秋水明如镜，两岸朝霞灿若金。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">纵是长冬顷刻降，难冰此瞬少年心。🌹🌹（题目是咏秋而后两句借咏的又是冬天，转的有些过了。继续努力。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 王平（总教督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:一湖秋水明如镜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:半岭轻云淡若烟🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝•湖畔之秋（下平一先）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">王平（总教督）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一湖秋水明如镜，半岭轻云淡若烟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">列雁声声呼远岫，红枫片片衬黄田。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：一湖秋水明如镜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：几处莺唇巧似簧🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·秋日（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一湖秋水明如镜，几处莺唇巧似簧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">叶落缤纷何所拟，蜓飞雁去不需徉。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 宗庆良(总院督)助兴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:一湖秋水明如镜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:四野寒山冷似冰🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:百树寒云翠似花🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 李明LF12-BF024-003 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：一湖秋水明如镜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：两岸霞光美胜颜🌹🌹美胜颜不妥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·诗画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/李明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一湖秋水明如镜，两岸霞光美胜颜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">眼看佳景难画取，时常脑海起波澜。（眼看改为放眼？景出律）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：一湖秋水明如镜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：满树霜花美胜晶🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·秋韵（下平八庚）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一湖秋水明如镜，满树霜花美胜晶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">旭日初升藏暖意，银珠闪烁泪含情。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 葛晓东LF12一BF024一006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：一湖秋水明如镜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：两岸松涛翠欲流🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：半壁江山美盛春（美盛春不妥，字面对仗，意失对）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：万里江山美似花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：万里冰峰洁似云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：千里松涛翠欲流</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：千里竹波翠欲流</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝.江山如画（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一湖秋水明如镜，两岸松涛翠欲流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雾气营绕繁似锦，江山万里任君游。（绕出律，因绕的出律营繁孤平）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">10月7日对句（嵌句）练习点评∶侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳外兰舟过</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗词基础好的诗友可用出句作为首句，写嵌句诗，诗谱为：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平仄，平平仄仄平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平平仄仄，仄仄仄平平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：学员可以只完成对句，也可以对句、嵌句诗都写。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(12024分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 柳外兰舟过</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 江南桂岸凋🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·秋渐老(下平二萧) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳外兰舟过，江南桂岸凋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">才言秋渐老，皓首雪难消。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华（12024分院长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶柳外兰舟过</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶檐前紫燕飞🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗∶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·春归（上平五微）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳外兰舟过，檐前紫燕飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青山环绿水，旭日拥霞辉。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 侯召思(执行系长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:柳外兰舟过，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:江中锦鲤游。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳外兰舟过</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：舻间羽扇摇🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·行舟(下平二萧)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文／付靖宇LF12-BF024-001</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳外兰舟过，舻间羽扇摇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浮生流水事，渐远入云霄。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳外兰舟过</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：云间雨燕翩🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：花间翠鸟鸣🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·秋收（下平一先）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳外兰舟过，云间雨燕连。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">农人忙刈稻，稚子树荫眠。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（翩、连，取其一。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·秋思（下平八庚）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳LF12-BF024-016</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳外兰舟过，花间翠鸟鸣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">捎书何用雁，落雨寄深情。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 李明LF12-BF024-003</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳外兰舟过</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：天边火箭飞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·可爱祖国（上平五微）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/李明LF12-BF024-003</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳外兰舟过，天边火箭飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山河争壮丽，日月竞光辉。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 侯绪富LF12-BF024-005 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳外兰舟过</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：山前俊鸟飞🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·相思（上平五微）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳外兰舟过，山前俊鸟飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凝眸相念远，日日盼君归。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 王平（总教督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:柳外兰舟过</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:桥边竹笛鸣🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝•绣花女 （下平八庚）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/王平（总教督）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳外兰舟过，桥边竹笛鸣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">谁家描绣女，探户觅悠声。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 葛晓东LF12-BF024-006 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳外兰舟过</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：山中涧水流🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·山间月夜（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳外兰舟过，山中涧水流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人闲听鸟语，夜静月知羞。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 张鸿志LF12-BF024-18 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：柳外兰舟过</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：江边白鹭飞🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝•踏青（上平五微）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳外兰舟过，江边白鹭飞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春风吹绿野，万物现生机。🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月28日对句（嵌句）练习点评∶齐云红老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雾掩初弦月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 仄仄平平仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗词基础好的诗友可用出句作为首句，写嵌句诗，诗谱为：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平仄，平平仄仄平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平平仄仄，仄仄仄平平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：学员可以只完成对句，也可以对句、嵌句诗都写。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(六分院教官) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 雾掩初弦月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 风吹老树梅🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·腊夜(上平十灰)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雾掩初弦月，风吹老树梅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">飘飘先白雪，簌簌坠尘埃。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雾掩初弦月，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：风吹绿柳头。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：云遮半岫周。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·闲（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雾掩初弦月，风吹绿柳头。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">溪旁独信步，恰似画中游。🌹🌹注意独字是仄音三仄尾，应该是平音。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·双节有感（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雾掩初弦月，云遮半袖周。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">双节齐悦庆，异地客乡愁。🌹🌹注意节字出律仄音，应该是平音。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 杨绍英（教官） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雾掩初弦月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：心思故里人🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 冯素华院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶雾掩初弦月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶风摇数点莹🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗∶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·晨始（去声二十五径）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雾掩初弦月，风摇数点莹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">农哥鸡唱起，稻谷抢归庭。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 王守一 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶雾掩初弦月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：霜飞老树花🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·无题（下平六麻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/王守一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雾掩初弦月，霜飞老树花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">东坡当此景，忆否海棠家？🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 付靖宇LF12-BF024-001 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雾掩初弦月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：藤游九丈崖🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：秋妆五角枫🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·咏景(上平九佳)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雾掩初弦月，藤游九丈崖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蓬莱多妙境，吕祖洞尤佳。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·感秋(上平一东)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雾掩初弦月，秋妆五角枫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">临行山色远，背影各西东。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 刘羽芳 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雾掩初弦月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：风吹仲夏杨🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：霜遮半亩塘。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·感时（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雾掩初弦月，风吹仲夏杨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">狂飙舞落叶，满眼尽撷芳。🌹🌹舞落叶三仄尾，舞字出律。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·庆双节（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雾掩初弦月，霜遮半亩塘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">阖家团聚日，玉兔送吉祥。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 李明（东方红） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雾掩初弦月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：松迎傍晚阳🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·悠闲自得（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/李明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雾掩初弦月，松迎傍晚阳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">心中无恶念，做个读书郎🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雾掩初弦月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：云遮日暮霞🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月27日对句（嵌句）练习点评∶侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青山环绿水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 平平平仄仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗词基础好的诗友可用出句作为首句，写嵌句诗，诗谱为：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平平仄仄，仄仄仄平平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平仄，平平仄仄平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：学员可以只完成对句，也可以对句、嵌句诗都写。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(六分院教官) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 青山环绿水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 玉棹动兰舟🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·江行(下平十一尤)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青山环绿水，玉棹动兰舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">日逐三千里，风吹万古愁。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶青山环绿水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶白菊倚红亭🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·秋景（下平九青）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青山环绿水，白菊倚红亭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四野清风爽，千秋旭日屏。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 刘羽芳 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青山环绿水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：紫气绕东来（水，名词；来，动词）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·山间（上平十灰）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青山环绿水，紫气绕东来。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雾里云霄隐，云开峻岭魁。（绝句不要求对仗）🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青山环绿水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雾气绕东城🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 青山环绿水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 玉面罩红纱🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·静修(下平六麻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青山环绿水，玉面罩红纱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">潜隐浮尘外，无争气自华。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 李明（东方红） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青山环绿水，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：翠岛映蓝天。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·人民幸福（下平一先）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/李明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青山环绿水，翠岛映蓝天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">设计科学论，人民受益欢。（学仄，应平）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青山环绿水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：幼鸟落枝头🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·无题（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青山环绿水，幼鸟落枝头。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">练得冲云志，翱翔悦九洲。（洲应州，九州，指中国）🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 齐云红九期 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青山环绿水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：红日照高林（红平，应仄）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：白鹭绕清溪🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月26日对句（嵌句）练习点评∶韩家峰老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：月明山寺远</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 仄平平仄仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗词基础好的诗友可用出句作为首句，写嵌句诗，诗谱为：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄平平仄仄，平仄仄平平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平仄，平平仄仄平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：学员可以只完成对句，也可以对句、嵌句诗都写。嵌句诗最好按照标准格式来写。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(六分院教官) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 月明山寺远</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 风近夜船凉🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·凉夜无眠(下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月明山寺远，风近夜船凉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">石佛如悲悯，金轮早满舱。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华六分院院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶月明山寺远</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶春到石泉清🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·农忙（下平八庚）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月明山寺远，春到石泉清。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">铁马田园吼，金鸡屋舍鸣。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 杨绍英（教官） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：月明山寺远</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：星淡晚风柔🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·闲吟（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月明山寺远，星淡晚风柔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">信步吟春句，开心赏夜幽。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 刘羽芳 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：月明山寺远</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：辰起荜门开。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：花落杜鹃啼。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·山居（一）（上平十灰）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月明山寺远，辰起荜门开。此词“筚门”，查了一下：是“用荊竹和树枝所编成的门”，有出处，挺好！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">未至林深处，钟声似客来。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·山居（二）（上平八齐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月明山寺远，花落杜鹃啼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">望帝焉知错，山中布谷凄。🌹🌹用典好棒！记得可能是李商隐的诗句“望帝春深托杜娟”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 侯召思(执行系长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：月明山寺远</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：湖静柳丝垂🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：月明山寺远</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：霜冷水波寒🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·思（上平十四寒）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月明山寺远，霜冷水波寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">万里轻舟过，归乡远眺欢。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 月明山寺远</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 林静夜风柔🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·夜思（一）(下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月明山寺远，林静夜风柔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">旧梦随云去，新禅纸上留。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 月明山寺远</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 霜冷板桥沉🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·夜思（二）(下平十二侵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月明山寺远，霜冷板桥沉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欲踏天涯路，何妨草木深。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 家峰 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：月明山寺远，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：天冷稻田寒。“田”字挤韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗∶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·为家乡五常美丽的割稻人歌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> （上平十四寒）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/韩家峰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月明山寺远，天暮稻畦寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">汗滴仓丰盛，归来众饱餐。🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月23日对句（嵌句）练习点评∶侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鱼游池面水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 平平平仄仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗词基础好的诗友可用出句作为首句，写嵌句诗，诗谱为：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平平仄仄，仄仄仄平平（韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平仄，平平仄仄平（韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：学员可以只完成对句，也可以对句、嵌句诗都写。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(六分院教官) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 鱼游池面水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 笔走案头笺🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·春约(下平一先）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鱼游池面水，笔走案头笺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小院花盈树，清茶钓竹边。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华六分院院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鱼游池面水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：棹远岸边亭🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝.夏日晨景（下平九青）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鱼游池面水，棹远岸边亭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">碧柳梳浮日，红荷赧晓星。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 杨绍英（教官） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鱼游池面水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：蝶吻岸边花🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·春归（下平六麻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/杨绍英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鱼游池面水，蝶吻岸边花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳苑莺声婉，檐前燕饰家。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 侯召思(执行系长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:鱼游池面水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:蝶舞苑中花🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鱼游池面水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鹤立野滩沙🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝.观景（下平六麻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鱼游池面水，鹤立野滩沙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">俊鸟凌空戏，风清抚暖霞。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 刘羽芳 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鱼游池面水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鸟戏海中虾🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·闲趣（下平六麻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鱼游池面水，鸟戏海中虾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">筑梦高枝上，悠闲自在鸦。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鱼游池面水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鹊起绿荫间🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·悯农（上平十五删）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鱼游池面水，鹊起绿荫间。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">感叹时光逝，秋分刈稻还。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 李明（东方红） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鱼游池面水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：日映岸边人🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·公园一瞥（上平十一真）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/李明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鱼游池面水，日映岸边人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">又是秋分至，公园锻炼频。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 王守一 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鱼游池面水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鹤立岸头沙。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·无题（下平六麻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/王守一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鱼游池面水，鹤立岸头沙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幸此无排废，悠然品早茶。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 鱼游池面水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 雁过雨中天🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">绝•又逢秋分（下平一先）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文／付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鱼游池面水，雁过雨中天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">转瞬秋分至，他乡酒亦绵。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 鱼游池面水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 鹿跃岸边林🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝•不老歌（下平十二侵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文／付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鱼游池面水，鹿跃岸边林。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">纵是风霜染，犹存赤子心。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 郭文岩总院督</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鱼游池面水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：蕾破柳塘春🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝.春色（下平十一真）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/郭文岩总院督</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鱼游池面水，蕾破柳塘春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有看千山色，闻香醉路人。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11.葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句∶鱼游池面水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句∶虎跃涧边松🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">侯昭思总院督：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙风12期北方一区开学前学习资料</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">第一讲学习汉字的平仄（平水韵）及其检测</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙凤教学以格律诗（唐诗、曲度式诗）为主，格律诗有四大基本要求：律（平仄）、韵（押韵）、对仗、粘对。不难看出，平仄知识是学习格律诗的基础。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、曲度校长（龙风创始人）关于汉字的平仄讲义（摘录）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 有些同学不知学写格律诗，从何入手。说没有基础，其实没关系的，你最少读过小学，就知道汉语拼音。懂得拼音，就知道汉语拼音的四声：“阴平（1声）、阳平（2声）、上声（3声）、去声（4声）”。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 搞清平仄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1).平，即汉语拼音第1.2声大部。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2).仄，即汉语拼音第3.4声全部，1.2声少部。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">说明：A、平，一定是1.2声字。 如高山（平平）；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.2声字，不一定是平声，可能是入声：即汉语拼音第1.2声的少部分是入声，如七、白等。入声属于仄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">B、仄，包括上（读三声）声、去声、入声（1.2声少部分、3.4声少部分）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">C、新韵（中华新韵的简称）与平水韵在律方面的区别，在于没有入声字。龙凤教学用平水韵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">D、掌握入声字，是学习平水韵格律诗的难点。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">常用入声字（平声）表（50字）：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出、竭、失、学、习、积、极、北、哭、独；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲、折、捉、黑、合、压、叔、竹、熄、吃；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">足、一、七、十、发、达、拍、稀、袭、击；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">屋、石、陌、答、直、接、熟、局、席、息；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">宅、伐、夺、鸭、结、食、格、咽、缺、哲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小结：1.2声的大部分是平；3.4声全部是仄，1.2声的少部分是仄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">练习：每天写十个平声字、十个仄声字，然后用《华韵检测》工具，纠错。附《华韵检测》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">新网址：http://www.huayunonline.cn/hy-index-lf.htm</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">使用方法：1、将上面新网址复制、粘贴到某一微信群。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、复制要检测的内容，打开《华韵检测》（龙风版），要检测的内容粘贴到作品框里。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3、点击作品框下面的“提交检测”。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4、下面出现依据平水韵、中华新韵两种结果。我们看依据平水韵的检测结果。检测结果中除了平、仄，还有“通”：表示多音字的意思，而不是平仄通用。《华韵检测》功能很多，我们陆续介绍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">达到目标：一周内，不参考任何资料，写十个平声字、十个仄声字，90%正确。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2023年8月9日（星期二）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">侯昭思总院督：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙风12期北方一区开学前学习资料</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">第二讲词性（属性）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 词性，包括词属性、词类别、词结构。这些都是练习对句的基础。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">本讲主要介绍词的属性。汉语常用词按其描述功能分为实词、虚词两大类，实词有六种、虚词有六种，共十二种。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一、实词六种：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、名词：表示人和事物名称的实词。如："黄瓜、计算机"等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">a、表示专用名称的叫做"专用名词"，如"云南、上海、李白"等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">b、表示抽象事物名称的叫做"抽象名词"，如"品德、友谊、方法"等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">c、表示方位的叫做"方位名词"，如"上""下""左""右""前""后""中""东""西""南""北""前面""后边""东边""南面""中间"等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、动词:表示人或事物的动作、行为、发展、变化等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">a、有的动词表示一般的动作，如"来、跑、学习、起飞、认识"等。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">b、有的动词表示心理活动，如"想、尊敬、了解、惦念"等，这样的动词前面往往可以加上"很、十分"。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">c、有的动词表示能够、愿意这些意思，叫做"能愿动词"，它们是"能、要、应、肯、敢、得（dei）、能够、应该、应当、愿意、可以、可能、必须"等。这些能愿动词常常用在一般的动词前面，如"得去、能够做、可以考虑、愿意学习、应该说明、可能发展"。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">d、还有一些动词表示趋向，叫做"趋向动词"，如"来、去、上、下、进、出、上来、上去、下来、下去、过来、过去、起等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">它们往往用在一般动词后面表示趋向，如"跳起来、走下去、抬上来、跑过去"。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">e、"是""有"也是动词，跟动词的用法一样，“是”也成为判断动词。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3、形容词：表示事物的形状、性质、颜色、状态等。如“多、少、高、矮、胖、瘦、死板、奢侈、胆小、丑恶、美丽、红色……”。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">状态形容词 通红、雪白、红通通、黑不溜秋等前面不能加“很”。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4、数词：表示事物数目的词。如"一、二、两、三、七、十、百、千、万、亿、半"。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">a、基数词： 一、二、百、千、万、亿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">b、序数词 ：第一、第二、第三</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">c、分数词 ：十分之一、百分之二十</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">d、倍数词 ：一倍、十倍、百倍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">e、概数词：几(个)、十来(个)、一百上下</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5、量词是表示事物或动作单位的词。 汉语的量词分为名量词和动量词 。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">a、名量词表示事物的数量，又可以分为单位量词和度量量词。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">单位量词表示事物的单位，如"个、张、、只、支、本、台、架、辆、颗、株、头、间、把、扇、等； </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">度量量词表示事物的度量，如"寸、尺、丈、斤、两、吨、升、斗、加仑、伏特、欧姆、立方米"。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">b、动量词表示动作的数量，用在动词前后表示动作的单位，如"次、下、回、趟、场"。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6、代词：能代替实词和短语。表示指称时，有定指和不定指的区别。不定指往往是指不确定的人、物或某种形状、数量、程度、动作等。他不常指某一定的人物，也就不可能有一定意义，介乎虚实之间。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">a、人称代词：代替人或事物的名称。我 你 您他 她 它 我们 你们 他们 她们 它们 咱 们 自己 别人 大家 大伙（自己能和其他代词连用，起强调作用。例如：我自己 你们自己 大家自己）。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">b、疑问代词：用来提出问题 谁 什么 哪（问人或事物）哪儿 那里 （问处所） 几 多 （问 数量） 多 多么 （问程度） 怎么 怎样 怎么样 （问性质状态）什么 怎样什么样 （问方式行动）。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">c、指示代词：用来区别人或事物 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">这、 那 （指人或事物）；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">这儿 、这里、 那儿、 那里 （指处所）；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 这会儿 、那 会 儿 （指时间）；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 这么 、这样 、这么样 、那么、 那样、 那么样（指性质、状态、方式、行动、程度）；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 这些 、那些 、这么些 、那么些 （指数量）；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 每 、各（指所有的或全体中任何一个）；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 某 、另 、别（确有所指，未说明哪一个）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">代词一般不受别的词类的修饰。代词同它所代替的或指示的实词或短语的用法相当，它所代替的词能充当什么句子成分，它也能充当什么句子成分。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二、虚词六种：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7、副词：总是用在动词形容词前面做状语，如 "很、颇、极、十分、就、都、马上、立 刻、曾经、居然、重新、不断"等。副词通常用在动词、形容词前面。 如"就来、马上走、十分好、重新开始"，只有"很""极"可以用在动词、形容词后面做补语，如"高兴得很、喜欢极了"。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8、介词：总是同其他的词组合在一起，构成介词短语，做定语、状语和补语。如"把、从、向、朝、为、为了、往、于、比、被、在、对、以、通过、随着、作为。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9、连词：可以连接词、短语、句子乃至段落。 如"和、及、或者、或、又、既"。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">关联词语可以看成是连词，如"因为……所以、不但……而且、虽然……但是"。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10、助词：附加在词、短语、句子上起辅助作用的词。助词可以分为三类： </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">结构助词，它们是"的、地、得、所、似的"；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">动态助词，它们是"着、了、过"；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">语气助词，如"啊、吗、呢、吧、呐、呀、了、么、哇"。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11、叹词表示感叹、呼唤、应答的词叫做叹词。如：“喂、哟、嗨、哼、哦、哎呀”。叹词总是独立成句。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12、拟声词这是模拟声音的词。如"呜、汪汪、轰隆、咯咯、沙沙沙、呼啦啦"。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：本讲根据王俊英老师（系长）2019·06·26《词性分类》编辑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">练习：把每种词的例词抄到笔记本上，每天看两遍，并不断补充新词。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学习目标：能快速判断遇见词的词性。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2023年8月15日</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">侯昭思总院督：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙风12期北方一区开学前学习资料</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">第三讲 词性（类别）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对仗要求词类相同。所以，要熟悉文字的词类，这样，才不至于对仗失对。常用词类有二十七种，多数为名词：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.天文：天、空、日、月、风、雨、霜、雪，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.时令：年、岁、晨、夕、昼、夜、春、秋，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3.地理：山、水、江、湖、城、村、州、邑，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4.宫室建筑：宫、殿、楼、台、房、舍、门、窗，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5.器物：舟、车、刀、剑、旗、鼓、帘、灯，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6.衣饰：衣、裙、巾、冠、钗、环、鞋、带，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7.饮食：酒、茶、饭、菜、羹、肴、丹、药，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8.文具：琴、棋、书、画、笔、墨、纸、砚，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9.文学：诗、词、章、句、文、赋、歌、谣，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10.草木花果：松、柏、杨、柳、杏、荷、兰、梅、菊，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11.鸟兽虫鱼：鹰、燕、虎、马、蝉、蚕、鱼、龟，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12.形体：身、心、头、手、影、魂、音、容，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13.人事心情：功、名、宴、游、才、情、爱、憎，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">14.人伦身份：父、母、夫、妻、君、臣、兵、将，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">15.代名词：我、余、他、谁、子、何、者、人，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">16.方位：东、南、西、北、上、下、前、后，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">17.数目：一、二、千、万、独、双、数、几、半，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">18.颜色：红、绿、丹、朱、墨、金、玉、彩、素、玄，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">19.干支：甲、乙、子、丑，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">20.人名：李白、苏东坡，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">21.地名：上海、新疆，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">22.同义双音词：山川、江湖、梳妆、宾客、友朋，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">23.反义双音词：短长、表里、古今、兴亡、纵横，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">24.重叠字：时时、处处、声声、漫漫、沉沉、魏巍，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">25.副词：欲、将、不、皆、亦、未、曾、须，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">26.连介词：与、和、共、而、还、则、只，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">27.助词：之、乎、也、耶、然、焉、哉、矣，等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">练习：把每类词的例词抄到笔记本上，每天看两遍，并不断补充新词。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学习目标：能快速判断遇见词的词类。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2023年8月17日</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">什么叫对句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 古代诗文中字数相同、文意相对的句子。现也指对联。通常为两个分句。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 本次对句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 出句:明月照(平仄声律与词性提示)，平仄/仄；明月是名词，也就是月亮、照在本句是动词、当动词时较多、当名词时很少，如:结婚照的照字是名词。明月/照。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">侯昭思总院督：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙风12期北方一区开学前学习资料</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">第四讲对仗、对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一、对仗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 对仗是诗词写作的一种方法，是格律诗的基本要求，贯穿龙风教学的始终。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 对仗以字、词为最小单元，然后组成句的对仗。对仗由上、下两部分组成，有的叫上句、下句，也有的叫出句、对句。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 对仗的要求：词的平仄相对（相反），词性相同，词义相联（不能相同）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 1、词的平仄相对，就是上句、下句同位置上的字平仄相反。如水（仄）/山（平），对；风（平）/云（平），错；天空（平平）/大地（仄仄），对；松柏（平仄）/杨柳（平仄），错。等等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 2、词性相同，就是上句、下句同位置上的词，属性相同，类别相同，结构相同。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 属性相同：如动词/动词,虎跃/龙腾；名词/名词，青松/白桦， 都可以。紫燕/鱼跃，名词/动词,错。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 类别相同：如天文/天文，月/星；动物/动物，猛虎/金鸡，可以。猛虎/高山，错。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">宽对也可以天文/地理、动物/植物等。如日月/山川；飞雁/赤枫，可以。日月/牛羊，错。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 结构相同。词结构，就是组成词的字，其属性及前后位置的形式，有主谓结构（名词+形容词，如月明；名词+动词，如星移）、有偏正结构、并列结构等。初学对仗，词结构不做要求。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 3、词义相联，就是上句、下句同位置上的词，意思相互有联系：相近，相反。不能相同（合掌）。如跑步/飞奔，错。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 二、对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 对句是诗词写作练习的初始方法。对句的形式，针对出句，做出对句。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句从每句话三言练起，逐渐达到每句话七言（诗词用语，常用言表示字）。一般出句仄收（句尾字仄声），对句平收（句尾字平声），这与对联要求一样。当然，对句不是对联（以后详解）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 对句的要求：对句与出句同位置上的字、词对仗，对句与出句的音步（节奏）一致、意境有联系。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 1、对句与出句字、词对仗，按对仗的要求作，就是了。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 2、对句与出句音步（节奏）一致，就是字对字，词对词。如出句：春风/暖；对句：李蕊/香，可以。若是出句：春风/暖；对句：蝶/恋花。错：音步（节奏）不一致。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 3、对句与出句的意境有联系。既不能合掌，又不能隔景。合掌就是对句与出句的意境相同。隔景就是对句与出句的意境没联系。一般是春、夏、秋、冬、白昼、黑夜、室内、屋外等，各为一景。如出句：春风暖；对句：菊蕊香。就隔景了，因为菊花秋季绽放。前面说的出句：春风/暖；对句：李蕊/香，可以：李花春天开放。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 对句的方法：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 1、把出句抄写在纸上，在每个字的下面标出其平或仄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 2、根据出句的平仄，按照“同位置的字平仄相对”，写出对句的平仄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如：出句 春风暖；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 平平仄；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 对句 仄仄平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 3、按照出句的意境（春天），考虑对句的意境和用词（字）。彩蝶、紫燕、翠柳、碧水等都是象征春天的名词，可与春天相对。旅雁、艳菊不能用，它们是秋天的象征。暖是形容词，欢、新、鲜、欣等都可以与之相对。这样：春风暖；/彩蝶欢。春风暖；/翠柳新。都可以。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 4、对句完成后，输入到手机，首先检测是否合律（平仄字的使用是否正确），有错修改。确认无误，发到群里交流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">要求：把今天学习资料，反复学习，练习，最好抄写到笔记本上，加深记忆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">练习：一是随群每天一对练习。二是找资料练习。练习越多，进步越快，格律诗写得就越好。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2023年8月22日</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句的基本方法：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、把出句抄写在纸上，在每个字的下面标出其平或仄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、根据出句的平仄，按照“同位置的字平仄相对”，写出对句的平仄谱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如：出句 春风暖；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 平平仄；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 对句 仄仄平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3、按照出句的意境（春天），考虑对句的意境和用词（主要是词属性、词类别，词结构暂时可以不考虑）。彩蝶、紫燕、翠柳、碧水等都是象征春天的名词，可与春天相对。旅雁、艳菊不能用，它们是秋天的象征。暖是形容词，欢、新、鲜、欣等都可以与之相对。这样：春风暖；/彩蝶欢。春风暖；/翠柳新。都可以。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句完成后，输入到手机，首先检测是否合律（平仄字的使用是否正确），有错修改。确认无误，发到群里交流。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">郝成明纪检总监：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对联口诀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">学写对联并不难，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">六大要素记心间。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">上下字数要相等，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">书写内容要相关。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">词性相当应一致，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">上下对应不可偏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">动名形容数量词，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">位置对正细钻研。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">主谓动宾和偏正，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">句式结构应一般。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">声律节奏要相应，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">强弱长短同步换。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄对平来平对仄，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平仄相谐句脚严。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一三五字可不论，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二四六字必规范。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">六大要素是基础，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">六个禁忌莫放宽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一忌同声来落脚，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平仄对应更直观。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二忌同声来收尾，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">上仄下平莫弄反。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三忌三平三仄尾，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写好对照念三遍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四忌孤平或孤仄，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">除去尾字仔细算。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五忌联中有重字，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">同位异位都要看。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">六忌同义词相对，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">合掌雷同非好联。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">侯昭思总院督：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">接龙信息的修改</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">接龙后的信息可以修改 ，但只能修改自己的信息，包括删除、修改字、增加信息。操作方法:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 1、打开并按住接龙表。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 2、点击左上角的“接龙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">”图标。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 3、进入接龙表，删除后面重新给你排序的姓名。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 4、找到原来的接龙信息，进行编辑修改:删除、修改字、增加信息都可以。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 5、修改完成后，点发送，即可。[握手][强]</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">侯昭思总院督：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大家好！多条信息的处理：收藏（编辑）、转发、删除。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、收藏（编辑）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 手机的“收藏”，不仅有保存功能，好有编辑功能，编辑时能自动保存。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 首先按住一条信息，然后点对话框的“多选”。接着就是选择信息，点击信息左边的O。最多可以选30条。信息选择完毕，点击下端的正方体图标（收藏）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 如果想继续编辑,点“我”进入“收藏”，找到文件并打开，点右上角三个点，选择“转存为笔记”，就可以编辑了。编辑完成，就全选、复制，粘贴到相应的群里。如果点击文件名，也可以转发，这样就是笔记形式。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、转发</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 首先按住一条信息，然后点对话框的“多选”。接着就是选择信息，点击信息左边的O。信息选择完毕，点下端的“逐条发送”，或“合并发送”（结果是笔记形式）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3、删除</span></p><p class="ql-block"> 过时、没用的信息要经常删除，否则影响运行速度，甚至打不开文档、卡机等问题。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 首选方法：按住一条信息，然后点对话框的“多选”。接着就是选择信息，点击信息左边的O。信息选择完毕，点下端的“删除”，即可。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 如果群里信息都没用，点群右上角三个点，找到并点击“清空聊天记录”，即可。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">龙风12期对句练习计划</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、初步计划练习三言至五言的对句，每日一对，每周一言。双休日休息。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二、出句由分院早上发布，希望群里的老师积极对句，给新来的诗友做示范。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三、欢迎老师都参加对句点评，只点评对句，不对人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四、优良的对句分院排光荣榜，并作成美篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五、人事安排/</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 协调美篇 ：冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 排光荣榜： 高海城</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 下发出句： 宫 帅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 周一点评： 郭文岩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 周二点评：韩家峰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 周三点评：侯昭思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 周四点评：齐云红</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 周五点评：高凤霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 2023年8月22日</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">8月23日对句点评：侯昭思老师！</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 闲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 明月照。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 冷烟生[🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 宫帅LF11-BF091-009 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 碧泉流🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 齐云红九期 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：大江流[🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：暖风吹🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 葛品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：劲风驰🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 万金波 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：稚荷娇🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:丽人行🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 李雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句： 明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句 ： 烈日灼🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 高晓君 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：繁星辉🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:锦舟停🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 东方红 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：泉水流🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雪花飘🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12.韩家峰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：玉帘窥🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：冷霜临🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：野乌啼🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13.侯昭思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：远山幽🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">14.高海城</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：洞箫纭🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">15郝成明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：白云生🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">16.冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：杏花羞🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">17.东方红</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：明月照谷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水泉流🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">18.付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:明月照</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:旅人游🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（修改:丽人行）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">8月24日对句点评：韩学峰老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅LF11-BF091-009</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青松岭；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：白鹿泉。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:青松岭；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:白桦林。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 东方红 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青松岭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：赤水河🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 边跑边唱 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:青松岭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:翠柏坡🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:紫雾崖🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:皓月天🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 谭淑英LF11-BF092-014 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:青松岭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:怪石崖🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6.齐云红</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青松岭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：落凤坡🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7.侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青松岭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：溪水烟🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8.高凤霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青松岭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：白鹤园🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：赤鲤湖🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9.高海城</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青松岭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：绕塞溪🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10.郝成明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青松岭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：绿竹林🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11.李雪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青松岭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：紫禁城🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12.高晓君</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青松岭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：红河谷🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13.韩家峰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青松岭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：白雪歌🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：紫燕崖🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">14.韩家峰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青松岭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：暮鼓钟🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：淡墨词🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">15.葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青松岭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：白云山🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">16.冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青松岭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：白鹤梁🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">17.万金波</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：青松岭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：老虎滩🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">8月25日对句练习点评：高风霞老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅LF11-BF091-009</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 北望人🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华L21-YD1137-06 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：北啭莺🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：北调兵🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 高凤霞 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：北渡船🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 高晓君 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：日落残🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 李雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句： 南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句： 北上人🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 谭淑英LF11-BF092-014 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：北入河🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 万金波 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：古至今🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：外牧羊🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:上跃鱼🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:内绽花🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：北起枝🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:北渡鱼🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:外溢泉🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:下卷风🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12. 齐云红九期 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：北极熊🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：上指穹🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">14. 齐云红九期 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：左顾龟🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">15. 韩家峰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：夜戏珠🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：野噪鸦🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：晚啭莺🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">16. 东方红 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出对：南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：北渡人🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">17. 郝成明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:南飞雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:北斗星🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:北派兵🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">8月28日对句练习点评：郭文岩老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:风和日丽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅LF11-BF091-009 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 风和日丽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 绿软红娇🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华L21-YD1137-06 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风和日丽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：柳绿花红🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风和日丽；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">水秀山青。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风和日丽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：浪细波清🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水暖沙柔🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：海阔山空</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：海阔天高🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 李雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风和日丽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水绿山青🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风和日丽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：草翠霜白（白出律）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 东方红 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风和日丽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：月朗星稀🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水碧沙明🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 郝成明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:风和日丽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:地暖花开🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 谭淑英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:风和日丽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:野旷香飘🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风和日丽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：玉翠冰清🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：玉透冰清</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">8月29日对句练习点评：韩家峰老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:龙腾虎跃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅LF11-BF091-009 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 龙腾虎跃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 斗转参横🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：龙腾虎跃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鼓震锣鸣🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:龙腾虎跃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:燕舞莺歌🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 李雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：龙腾虎跃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：电闪雷鸣🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：眼笑眉开🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：龙腾虎跃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：凤舞鸢飞🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：地动山摇🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 杨倩 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:龙腾虎跃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:凤舞莺飞🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 郝成明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:龙腾虎跃🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:凤舞莺歌🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:鹤立鸢飞🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 谭淑英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:龙腾虎跃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:鹤语泉鸣🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 冯素华L21-YD1137-06 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：龙腾虎跃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：凤舞莺啼🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 东方红 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：龙腾虎跃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：马叫鸡欢🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：凤舞鱼翔🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11.高晓君</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：龙腾虎跃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：路转峰回🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">8月30日对句点评：侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:歌声响亮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅LF11-BF091-009 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 歌声响亮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 舞影翩跹🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:歌声响亮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:曲调悠扬🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 谭淑英</span></p><p class="ql-block">出句: 歌声响亮</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:酒气冲融🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 高晓君 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:歌声响亮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:月色朦胧🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：歌声响亮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：稻穗充盈🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：歌声响亮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：斗志昂扬🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：麦浪轻盈🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：酒兴酣然🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 冯素华L21-YD1137-06 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：歌声响亮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：喜气飘扬🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：舞曲荡扬🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 郝成明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:歌声响亮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:舞曲飞扬🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 杨倩 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:歌声响亮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:军旗飘扬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 李 明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：歌声响亮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：口号铿锵🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：步调均匀🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：纪律严明🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">8月31日对句点评：齐云红老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:鹤鸣湖畔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅LF11-BF091-009 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 鹤鸣湖畔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 猿啸岭中🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华L21-YD1137-06 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鹤鸣湖畔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：龙起雨前🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鹤鸣湖畔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鲸跃海中🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 高晓君 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:鹤鸣湖畔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:鹰旋长空</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鹤鸣湖畔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：狐遁雪中🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：云涌月前🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：风掠殿间🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：菊绽寺前🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鹤鸣湖畔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鱼跃水中🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：风涌雾端🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 谭淑英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 鹤鸣湖畔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:僧定寺间🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 东方红 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鹤鸣湖畔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鹏驾云端🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鸢舞树梢🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 万金波 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鹤鸣湖畔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：风舞竹间🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鹤鸣湖畔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：龙啸海边🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：松立涧旁🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 家峰 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鶴鸣湖畔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鸾舞树巅🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：莲睡渚边🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：猿啸岭头🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12. 齐云红九期 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鹤鸣湖畔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：日落洞中🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13. 郝成明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:鹤鸣湖畔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:龙出雨中🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">14. 李雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：鹤鸣湖畔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：龙潜海中🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月1日对句点评：高凤霞老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅LF11-BF091-009 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 黍稷麦菽🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华L21-YD1137-06 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：蛤鳖蟹蝦🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：杏李桔柑🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 高凤霞 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：瑟鼓笛笙🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 竹柏菊松🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 李雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：柴米酱茶🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 高晓君 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:雨雪露霜🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：寿喜禄财🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句；炮马帅車🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 雨雾雪霜🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 日月海天🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 草木瓦砖🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 姊妹弟兄🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：钺斧剑叉🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 杨倩 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:刀枪剑戟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 东方红 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：日月星辰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：象帅车卒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12. 齐云红九期 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：撇捺点提🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13. 万金波 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：丑旦净生🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">14. 谭淑英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:寺鼓佛香🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">15. 家峰 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雨露雪霜🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：石竹菊梅🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：剑酒乐诗🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">16.郝成明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：琴棋书画</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：诗句丹青🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月4日对句练习点评老师：郭文岩老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:雁过天无迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅LF11-BF091-009 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 雁过天无迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 霜飘地有华🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华L21-YD1137-06 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雁过天无迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：莺啼树有声🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：蜓挨水有波🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 雁过天无迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:鸡行地有痕🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 郭文岩（九期） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雁过天无迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：蜗行路有痕</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 谭淑英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 雁过天无迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:江摇水有声🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 李雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雁过天无迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：人来世有名🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雁过天无迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：风吹树有声🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 雁过天无迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 樵归路有歌🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 花开地有灵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 风临桂抱香🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 东方红 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雁过天无迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：人来世有缘🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：熊走地有痕🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 万金波 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雁过天无迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：霜来岭尽情🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：雁过天无迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：霜来叶自黄🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鱼走水有痕🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12.雪谷老杨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出向：雁过天无迹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：车行地有踪🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月5日对句练习点评：韩家峰老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:小院黄花绽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅LF11-BF091-009 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 小院黄花绽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 华堂绿酒温🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华L21-YD1137-06 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：小院黄花绽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：长城綠野迎🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：小院黄花绽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：长河碧水流🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 万金波</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：小院黄花绽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：长空白雁翔🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 小院黄花绽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 高朋锦履临</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 轩窗皓月升“轩”可改为“孤”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 长街碧树摇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 闲池锦鲤游🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：小院黄花绽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：青山碧水流</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：河边绿树摇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：虚空皓月照“照”应平修改一字，前四字意境挺好，可否改为“虚空皓月盈”。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：孩童柳树摇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 杨倩 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:小院黄花绽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:高原绿树迎🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">8. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：小院黄花绽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：山间碧水流🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：山间绿叶飘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：长空大雁鸣🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：长河落日圆（此乃王维《使至塞上》一诗中的原句，如在你自己创作的一首诗中，引用此一句是可以的，在此对句中还是不妥的。[抱拳]另外：“落”字（动）“黄”形容词词性也不对。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 东方红 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：小院黄花绽</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：中庭紫叶飞🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：方塘绿叶浮🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：长堤雪片飘🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（这里的雪片指柳絮）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10.雪谷老杨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：小院黄花绽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：邻家紫桂香🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月6日对句点评：侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:月明惊客梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅LF11-BF091-009 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 月明惊客梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 霜冷动乡心🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 月明惊客梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 风爽悦君心🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 冯素华L21-YD1137-06 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岀句：月明惊客梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：春好忆诗情🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 李雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：月明惊客梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：风大骇船人🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 东方红 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：月明惊客梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：灯暗惹蝉鸣🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：风轻唤儿回(轻平应仄)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 月明惊客梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 舟远忆朋情🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 琴暗掩愁肠🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 风静悟禅心🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 风凛荡松涛🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：月明惊客梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：云轻暖君心(轻平应仄)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：月明惊客梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：春至喜人心🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 谭淑英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 月明惊客梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:如鹊寄乡书🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 齐云红九期 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：月明惊客梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：人静叹离情🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 王平（总教督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:月明惊客梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:帘薄入虫声🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12.郝成明（纪检总监）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：月明惊客梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：风入写秋声🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13.雪谷老杨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：月明惊客梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：花美悦君心🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月7日对句练习点评：齐云红老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:思乡常对月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(教官) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 思乡常对月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 把酒又怀人🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华L21-YD1137-06 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：思乡常对月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：报国欲挥戈🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 侯召思(执行系长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：思乡常对月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：念子久依门🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 高凤霞 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：思乡常对月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：忆友总吹箫🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 把酒亦吟诗🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 东方红 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：思乡常对月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：念友总攀楼🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：睹物就怀亲🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 思乡常对月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 吊古复临风🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 忆友各逢秋🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 阅世偶开樽🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 纵酒亦鸣筝🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：思乡常对月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：念旧总调琴🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：念旧总贪杯🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 王平（总教督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:思乡常对月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:步阁每临风🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：思乡常对月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：饮水总观源🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：探海亦乘龙🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：睹物更昔人(昔是过去的，形容词，这里应该是动词 和对有点牵强，念着不太顺，可以换成愁人[强]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：念尔总观星(有点牵强)🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：恋物总关情🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:思乡常对月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:报国久期人🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:恋客不嫌朋🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 李雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:思乡常对月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：念故总分神🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12.齐云红</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：思乡常对月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：念旧光怀情🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：阅古更通今🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13.杨绍英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：思乡常对月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：忆故总调琴🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月8日对句点评：高风霞老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:心随秋色动</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 谭淑英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 心随秋色动</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:鸟傍暮云飞🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 李雪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：心随秋色动</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水顺坳方流🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 宫帅(教官) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 心随秋色动</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 梦逐雨声惊🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 冯素华（院长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：心随秋色动</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：步逐哨声频🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：脚伴夕阳归🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 心随秋色动</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 日照稻香生🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 月落客船停🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 露至旅人归🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 马踏鼓声连🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 雪谷老杨 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：心随秋色动</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：菊伴早霜开🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 高凤霞 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 心随秋色动</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 棹伴笛声归🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 东方红 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：心随秋色动</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雁伴彩云飞🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：墨绘夏荷摇🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：心随秋色动</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：蝶染菊香飞🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：心随秋色动</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雨打落花生</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（出句“秋色”偏正结构，“落花”动宾结构，失对。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 意向物华丰🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 雾顺雨风吹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（“秋色”偏正结构，“雨风”并列结构，失对。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 胆壮苦中生🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 叶落意难平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（心随/秋色/动；叶落/意/难平，句式结构不匹配。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 雪谷老杨 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 心随秋色动</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 影逐月光移🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12.葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：心随秋色动</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：意伴鹤鸣飘🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鹿伴鹤鸣奔🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（出句“秋色”为偏正结构；对句“鹤鸣”主谓结构，失对，建议改为鹤声。供参考。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：蝶伴稻香飞🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block">13.王守一</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：心随秋色动</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：足伴雁声🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">14.万金波</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：心随秋色动</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：爱伴烛光流🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">各位诗友好！今天的对句增加了内涵，乃为由浅入深学习之必然。诗友们对的都很认真，有些诗友的对句很精彩，获得两朵小红花。而获得一朵花的对句，则是词性、平仄、句式结构与出句相对，但有瑕疵，主要问题是与出句句意不匹配。我们练习对句，不仅要词性、平仄、句式结构相对，更要准确理解出句的内涵。心随/秋色/动，意为心随着秋色而动。仔细揣摩侯系长的对句“蝶染/菊香/飞”，东方红诗友的“雁伴/彩云/飞”，相信会从中得到启发。追逐梦想，始于足下。诗友们加油！🌹🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">王俊英总系长：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讲给新学员:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、什么是平仄？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平仄即四声 小学时我们学过的:一声平，二声扬，三声拐弯四声降，就是如此。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗词中的四声指中古汉语的平、上、去、入四声，四声各自的音调特点是：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、平声是一个不升不降的长音；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、上声是从低音滑至高音，是个升调；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3、去声是从高音滑至低音，是个降调；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4、入声是一个急促的短音。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平仄就是中古四声的再分类。中古的平声属平，上、去、入属仄。其分类依据为音调是否能在同一音高长期持续。音调能够在同一音高长期持续的属平，否则属仄。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">普通话分别平仄的方法：三四声属仄；一二声大部分属平，极少数属仄，比如入声中就有好多平音。所以，大家一定要熟记17个入声韵部，不要把这些仄韵字混淆成平韵字。例如:屋，竹，石，倚等等这些入声字都是仄韵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二、关于平水韵基本知识</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写诗，熟悉运用平水韵，是最基本最重要的能力。在知道何为平仄之后，大家尽量不要再借助字典去判断是平还是仄。因为，古时，有一些一声字，因为地域发音所限，也被纳入了仄韵字范围，即入声。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵有106个韵部，包括上平15个，下平15个，上声29个，去声30个，入声17个。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其中，上平15个+下平15个，这30个韵部属于平水韵中的平韵部分。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">上声29个+去声30个+入声17个，这76个韵部都属于平水韵中的仄韵部。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我们写一首诗词时，最初的学习阶段，要把押韵的韵脚锁定在同一个韵部里。比如，您选择了“上平一东”这个韵部，那么您在本首诗中的所有韵脚，就只能去“上平一东”的韵部里去挑选您衷爱的字。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">红二系北方大区: 王俊英整理</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2021.11.02</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月11日对句练习点评：郭文岩老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:花香惊蝶梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(教官) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:花香惊蝶梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:柳色醉莺声🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:花香惊蝶梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:竹翠恋人心🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 王平（总教督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:花香惊蝶梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:柳影落荷塘🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:花香惊蝶梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:树影画诗情🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:水色染渔歌🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:月镜映天仙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:雁语遁秋风🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 冯素华（院长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：花香惊蝶梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鸟语闹春潮🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 东方红 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：花香惊蝶梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雨润沁兰芯🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水缓引蛙眠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句；花香惊蝶梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句；稻艳搅蝉眠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：稻艳搅蝉鸣🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：花香惊蝶梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鸟语醉君心🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水秀扰鲤魂🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 谭淑英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:花香惊蝶梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雨露沐桃源🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 万金波 （助兴）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：花香惊蝶梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水碧醉荷仙🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 王守一 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:花香惊蝶梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:叶乱舞春风🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12. 郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:花香惊蝶梦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:叶翠待蚕眠🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">点评：韩家峰老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9月12日对句：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风吹柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 冯素华（院长）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风吹柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：日出云红</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 赵春梅（总教督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风吹柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水溅天蓝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 杨绍英（十一期） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风吹柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雨润花红</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雨洗山青</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 齐云红九期 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风吹柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鸟悦林高</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水静云清</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 宫帅(教官) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风吹柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水暖鱼欢</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:风吹柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:日照云青</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 高凤霞 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风吹柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：露湿花红</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：蝶醉花香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风吹柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：蝶舞花红🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：马踏苔青🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雾散天宽🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：浪落江空🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 谭淑英（校长）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风吹柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水照荷明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 王守一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风吹柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：燕剪帘疏“燕剪”对的挺好，“帘疏”也对仗，意思深些，难理解[抱拳]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风吹柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：龙啸云翻“龙”平声，应改一仄声字才对。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：虎啸林惊🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：日丽空高</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句；日丽花红</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：日映花红🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12. 李明（东方红） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风吹柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雨打菊黄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：日晒椒红</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13. 李雪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风吹柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雪打梅红（隔景）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">14. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风吹柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：浪涌鱼惊🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雨映桃红🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">15. 侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：风吹柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：石垒松高</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">王俊英总教督：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 风/吹/柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平仄:平/平/仄仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">句式:主/谓/宾（补）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">词性:名/动/名（形容词用作动词）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句要求:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平仄:仄仄平平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">句式和词性参照出句解释</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尾字:可以与出句一样，形容词用作动词，也可以直接用动词。此处用形容词是宽对，不是工对。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">例如:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">“春风又绿江南岸”，此句中，绿，也是形容词用作动词。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讲给新学员（二）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大家初学对句，不要急于求成，慢慢来。现在还是招生阶段，系统的课件学习，需要总社安排龙风十个系，约300多个分院，统一时间去进行，敬请诗友们耐心等待。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">现在学习对句，有以下几个方面的原因:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.通过最少的字，先了解平仄、词性、句式。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.对句，要求出句和对句必须平仄协调，词性一致，句式统一。大家熟悉的五律和七律，重要的一点要求就是必须对仗。练习对句，就是为日后写好律诗做基础。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3.对句的句意，要求上下联意境必须关联，不能隔景、隔意、不能合掌。这也是为锤炼字句做准备，言简意赅才会写出好诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4.诗友们在对句时，还需要杜绝不规则的重复字。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">另外，雅、新、奇等，也是大家应该重视的[抱拳][抱拳]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">红二系北方大区:王俊英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2023.09.12</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">韩家峰老师：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">【献给新诗友】（—）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">容易当成平声字入诗词的入声字</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/韩家峰（十期）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【一屋】屋 竹 服 福 熟 族 菊 逐 伏</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 犊 渎 牍 粥 哭 幅 斛 叔 淑</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 菽 倏 独 秃 辐 茯</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【二沃】足 烛 毒 局 督 赎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【三觉】觉 捉 卓 啄 剥 驳 雹 浊 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 雹 学 濯 涿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【四质】实 出 疾 吉 失 漆 七 卒</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 悉 蟋 姪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【五物】吃 不 拂 屈 佛 掘 弗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：以上是我自己整理的，只是常用的（五个入声部）的常用入声字</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如有疏漏请补充指正。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【献给新诗友】（二）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">容易当成平声字入诗词的入声字</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/韩家峰（十期）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【六月】伐 罚 卒 竭 窟 歇 突 忽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 曰 阀 勃 纥 渤 揭 碣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【七曷】曷 达 活 钵 脱 夺 割 拔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 拨 跋 撮 泼 掇 妲 聒 </span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 【八黠】黠 拔 八 察 杀 瞎 刮 刷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 滑 辖 猾</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【九屑】节 绝 结 穴 说 舌 洁 别</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 缺 折 拙 悦 诀 咽 噎 傑 </span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 哲 截 浙 孑 桔 颉 拮 撷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 揭 薛 撇 迭 跌 掇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【十药】薄 阁 爵 约 酌 托 削 铎 </span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 搏 嚼 勺 貉 博</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：以上均为个人整理，供参考</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">韩家峰老师：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【献给新诗友】（三）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">容易当平声字入诗词的入声字</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/韩家峰（十期）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【十一陌】石 白 泽 伯 宅 席 格 帛</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 额 积 夕 屐 隔 核 责 惜</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 择 摘 昔 谪 跖 皙 淅 鬲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 骼 舶 珀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【十二锡】锡 击 笛 敌 滴 镝 檄 激</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 析 狄 荻 戚 涤 的 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【十三职】职 国 德 蚀 极 息 直 得</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 黑 贼 则 殖 植 棘 织 勒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 逼 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【十四缉】缉 辑 集 急 习 十 拾 袭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 及 级 楫 揖 汁 执 汲 吸</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【十五合】合 答 閤 杂 匝 阖 塌 咂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【十六葉】帖 贴 牒 接 蝶 叠 颊 协</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 侠 荚 睫 浃 挟 铗 辄 婕</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 谍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【十七洽】狭 峡 匣 压 鸭 乏 插 押</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 狎 夹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">编后语：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 以上是为诗友们在作业和今后创作中检查平、仄所用。在入声十七部里拣选出容易当成平声字写在诗、词里的入声字。由于各方面原因错误和疏漏再所难免，诚望各位老师、诗友指正。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 编者 韩家峰（十期）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 2022.12.9日</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">韩家峰老师：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">大家好[微笑]把我以前整理的：容易当成平声字入诗词的“入声字”表发给大家，望大家家里有打字机的（没有的可去街上打印）这个实用方便[微笑][握手]</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 另外的56个平仄通用字也挺实用</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">这些字要在你具体使用时在词、句中确定它的是平、是仄。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">韩家峰老师：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">56个平仄通用字</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵中 可平仄两用意思不变的56个字 笼、邅、缭、挠、姣、獠、爹、么、峨、狰、醒、妇、负、否、阜、亩、牡、蹂、揉、取、颔、嵌、巉、狙、楷、菌、巉、渐、撞、怒、吐、喷、论、翰、叹、漫、看、讪、钿、钞、铫、泡、刨、敲、过、髁、望、莹、凭、听、售、澹、蜺、批、忘、驱。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月13日对句点评：侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：千山竟秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 平平仄仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：仄仄平平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 百鸟争春🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 王平（总教督）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 杨绍英（十一期） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：千山竞秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：百花争妍🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 宫帅(教官) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：千山竞秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：万壑争流🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:千山竞秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:片叶含香🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 高凤霞 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：千山竞秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：万木争荣🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 冯素华（院长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：千山竞秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：万顷逢秋🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 李雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：千山竟秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：万马争先🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：千山竟秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：二虎争王🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 王守一 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：千山竞秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：百涧惊春🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：千山竞秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：万舸争流🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：百鸟争鸣🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：百虎争雄🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：千山竞秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：百卉争妍🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：百兽争呜🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：百兽争先🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：百卉含英🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12. 李明（东方红） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：千山竞秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：百舸争流(借用)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：万箭齐发🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：千山竞秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：万壁奔高🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：半月含凉🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：一凤凌云🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：四目关情🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：六祖谦禅🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">14. 谭淑英（院长）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：千山竟秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：百岭争奇[🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">王平总教督：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">关于诗友对句的一点提示：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、我们现在的对句是比较工整严格的，初学者必须这样。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、现在的对仗最基本的要求是：A、对仗要求上下两句平仄必须相反。B、句法结构要一致。C、要求词语所属的词类(词性)相一致。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3、词性有时候不是固定的：例如，出句：千山竞秀，秀，可以理解为名词（一种场景），可以对名词：春、辉、情等，可以理解为动词（漂亮起来），可以对流、鸣、荣等。可以理解为形容词（什么形态），可以对奇、清，香等。出句的词性往往是由对句的意境决定的。以后慢慢体会。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4、对句与出句相对的词语不能雷同：如，冷对凉。静对幽。（合掌的毛病）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5、对句与出句的内容应该是场景一致：如，红梅点点，爆竹声声（都是过年时的景象），而红梅点点，对细雨霏霏，就不是一个季节的场景。（隔景的毛病）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 2023年9月14日星期四</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月14日对句点评：齐云红老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 冯素华（院长）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：竹叶千千🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：腊雪皑皑🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 宫帅(教官) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雪意枝枝🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 杨绍英（十一期） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：腊雪翩翩🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 刘羽芳 出句：梅花点点 对句：杏雨纷纷🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5.谭淑英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：月色蒙蒙🌹🌹这个应该是朦朦吧？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6.侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：足印多多🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：皎月弯弯🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：涧水潺潺🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：竹马莹莹🌹🌹可我有点不明白这是啥意思？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：玉笛声声🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鬓雪苍苍🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8.李雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：海浪涛涛🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 赵春梅（总教督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：树影斑斑🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：细手纤纤🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：落日圆圆🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 刘羽芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：杏雨纷纷🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：柳叶摇摇🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雾气蒙蒙🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：字迹斑斑🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13. 王守一 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：杏口殷殷🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">14..李明（东方红） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：眼泪滴滴🌹滴滴是仄音应平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：玛瑙颗颗🌹颗是仄音应平。这就是平水韵和今天新韵韵部的区别。请诗友多注意。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">15..齐云红九期 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鼓韵声声🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：竹色青青🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block">对句：醉意熏熏[强][强]</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">16. 郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:鬓发斑斑🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:树叶飘飘🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:野鹊喳喳🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">17.高凤霞 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：梅花点点</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：柳树芊芊🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：蕙草丛丛🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">李竹兰老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平水韵常用字表</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">上平声</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【上平一东】东同童僮铜桐峒筒瞳中[中间]衷忠盅虫冲终忡崇嵩[崧]菘戎绒弓躬宫穹融雄熊穷冯风枫疯丰充隆窿空公功工攻蒙濛朦瞢笼胧栊咙聋珑砻泷蓬篷洪荭红虹鸿丛翁嗡匆葱聪骢通棕烘崆</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【上平二冬】冬咚彤农侬宗淙锺钟龙茏舂松淞冲容榕蓉溶庸佣慵封胸凶匈汹雍邕痈浓脓重[重复]从[服从]逢缝峰锋丰蜂烽葑纵[纵横]踪茸蛩邛筇跫供[供给]蚣喁【上平三江】江缸窗邦降[降伏]双泷庞撞豇扛杠腔梆桩幢蛩[冬韵同]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【上平四支】支枝肢移[竹移]为[施为]垂吹陂碑奇宜仪皮儿离施知驰池规危夷师姿迟龟眉悲之芝时诗棋旗辞词期祠基疑姬丝司葵医帷思[思念]滋持随痴维卮麋螭麾墀弥慈遗肌脂雌披嬉尸狸炊湄篱兹差[参差]疲茨卑亏蕤骑[跨马]歧岐谁斯澌私窥熙欺疵赀羁彝髭颐资糜饥衰锥姨夔祗涯[佳、麻韵同]伊追蓍缁萁箕椎罴篪萎匙脾坻嶷治[治国]骊綦怡尼漪牺饴而鸱推[灰韵同]匙陲魑锤缡璃骊羸帔糜蘼脾芪畸牺羲曦欹漪猗崎崖萎筛狮蛳鸱绥虽粢瓷椎饴嫠痍惟唯机耆逵岿丕毗枇貔楣霉辎蚩嗤媸颸埘莳鲥鹚笞漓怡贻禧噫其琪祺麒嶷螭栀鹂累踟琵祁骐訾咨睢馗胝鳍蛇[委蛇]陴淇丽[地名]厮氏[月氏]僖嘻琦怩熹孜罹磁痿隋逶郦嵋唯椅[音漪,木名] 【上平五微】微薇晖辉徽挥韦围帏违闱霏菲[芳菲]妃飞非扉肥威祈畿机几[微也、如见几]讥玑稀希衣[衣服]依归饥[支韵同]矶欷诽绯晞葳巍沂圻颀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【上平六鱼】鱼渔初书舒居裾琚车[麻韵同]渠蕖余予[我也]誉[动词]舆胥狙锄疏蔬梳虚嘘墟徐猪闾庐驴诸储除滁蜍如畬淤妤苴菹沮徂龉茹榈於祛蘧疽蛆醵纾樗躇[药韵同]欤据[拮据]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【上平七虞】虞愚娱隅无芜巫于衢癯瞿氍儒襦濡须需朱珠株诛硃铢蛛殊俞瑜榆愉逾渝窬谀腴区躯驱岖趋扶符凫芙雏敷麸夫肤纡输枢厨俱驹模谟摹蒲逋胡湖瑚乎壶狐弧孤辜姑觚菰徒途涂荼图屠奴吾梧吴租卢鲈炉芦颅垆蚨孥帑苏酥乌污[污秽]枯粗都茱侏姝禺拘嵎蹰桴俘臾萸吁滹瓠糊醐呼沽酤泸舻轳鸬驽匍葡铺[铺盖]菟诬呜迂盂竽趺毋孺酴鸪骷刳蛄晡蒱葫呱蝴劬殂猢郛孚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【上平八齐】齐黎犁梨妻[夫妻]萋凄堤低题提蹄啼鸡稽兮倪霓西栖犀嘶撕梯鼙赍迷泥溪蹊圭闺携畦嵇跻奚脐醯黧蠡醍鹈奎批砒睽荑篦齑藜猊蜺鲵羝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【上平九佳】佳街鞋牌柴钗差[差使]崖涯[支麻韵同]偕阶皆谐骸排乖怀淮豺侪埋霾斋槐[灰韵同]睚崽楷秸揩挨俳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【上平十灰】灰恢魁隈回徊槐[佳韵同]梅枚玫媒煤雷颓崔催摧堆陪杯醅嵬推[支韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">1</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">同]诙裴培盔偎煨瑰茴追胚徘坯桅傀儡[贿韵同]莓开哀埃台苔抬该才材财裁栽哉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">来莱灾猜孩徕骀胎唉垓挨皑呆腮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【上平十一真】真因茵辛新薪晨辰臣人仁神亲申身宾滨槟缤邻鳞麟珍瞋尘陈春津秦频蘋颦濒银垠筠巾民岷泯[轸韵同]珉贫莼淳醇纯唇伦轮沦抡匀旬巡驯钧均榛莘遵循甄宸纶椿鹑屯呻粼嶙辚磷呻伸绅寅姻荀询峋氤恂嫔彬皴娠闽纫湮肫逡菌臻豳【上平十二文】文闻纹蚊云分[分离]氛纷芬焚坟群裙君军勤斤筋勋薰曛醺芸耘芹欣氲荤汶汾殷雯贲纭昕熏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【上平十三元】元原源沅鼋园袁猿垣烦蕃樊喧萱暄冤言轩藩媛援辕番繁翻幡璠鸳鹓蜿湲爰掀燔圈谖魂浑温孙门尊[樽]存敦墩炖暾蹲豚村屯囤[囤积]盆奔论[动词]昏痕根恩吞荪扪昆鲲坤仑婚阍髡馄喷狲饨臀跟瘟飧</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【上平十四寒】寒韩翰[翰韵同]丹单安鞍难[艰难]餐檀坛滩弹残干肝竿阑栏澜兰看[翰韵同]刊丸完桓纨端湍酸团攒官观[观看]鸾銮峦冠[衣冠]欢宽盘蟠漫[大水貌]叹[翰韵同]邯郸摊玕拦珊狻鼾杆跚姗殚箪瘅谰獾倌棺剜潘拼[问韵同]槃般蹒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">瘢磐瞒谩馒鳗钻抟邗汗[可汗]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【上平十五删】删潸关弯湾还环鬟寰班斑蛮颜奸攀顽山闲艰间[中间]悭患[谏韵同]孱潺擐圜菅般[寒韵同]颁鬘疝讪斓娴鹇鳏殷[赤黑色]纶[纶巾]</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">张华峰系长：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">72个平仄通用字</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">笼（名词除外）、过（经过，度过，越过，超过）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">缭、獠、峨、醒、揉、爹、颔、嵌、楷、撞、喷、探、翰、叹、看、讪、敲、髁、望、凭、听、售、批、忘、驱、泯、司、缠、、扳、喷、嘘、潸、稍、欷、缔、飏、廷、浏、淙、砭、溶、澜、谰、妊、娠、咱、挤、诽、骜、钿、偿、诋、慷、吭、挠、缇、淹、茹、孺、，障、篓、苫、铫、蜺、填、么、，监，馋，胶，嘹……</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月15日对句点评：高风霞老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">王平总教督</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：幽兰吐秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平仄仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：绿桂飘香🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 冯素华（院长）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：幽兰吐秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：野菊争芳🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 杨绍英（十一期） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：幽兰吐秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：野杏生香🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：彩蝶穿花🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 宫帅(教官) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：幽兰吐秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：碧涧浮光🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 高凤霞 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：幽兰吐秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：好鸟衔香🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 刘羽芳 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：幽兰吐秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：赤兔逐香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（赤兔泛指良马，不知诗友笔下赤兔何寓意？赤兔追香不贴切。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：碧海扬波🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：翠玉含温🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 万金波（系督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：幽兰吐秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：彩蝶拚娇🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（精彩！🌹🌹）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 谭淑英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：幽兰吐秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：寸草争辉🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：幽兰吐秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：翠鸟衔芳🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：绿柳含羞🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：空谷留香🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：幽兰吐秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：朗月含辉🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：玉凤呈祥🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（与出句意境关联紧密些更好）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：劲竹扬枝🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：锦瑟沉弦（沉弦不妥，这个词常见于中医脉象沉弦，乐器通常为扣弦、轧弦，还有沉弦吗？个见。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：幽兰吐秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：碧玉流光🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：玉树临风🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 赵春梅（总教督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：幽兰吐秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：浊酒浮香🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12. 李雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：幽兰吐秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：翠柳含春🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13. 李明（东方红） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：幽兰吐秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鬼谷传神🌹 （“传神”生动，“鬼”谷可再酌。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：古典飘香🌹🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（与出句意境关联紧密些更好）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：幽兰吐秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：绿箭传神🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：白菊含情🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:幽兰吐秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:绿桂飘香🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:野鹿闻声🌹 🌹 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"> </p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">侯昭思总院督：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大家好！曙色，应是拂晓、清晨。如果对暮色、夜色就隔景了。一般春、夏、秋、冬各为一景，昼、夜，室内、外各为一景。隔景就是去了对句的内在联系。[握手][强]</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大家好！今天对句总体挺好。存在问题一是数词的使用:对句只能数词对数词，或者用有数的意思的字对。如多、满、单、双等。</span></p><p class="ql-block"> 存在问题二是隔景。这在早上已提示。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 大家不要怕出错，改了就前进一步。[握手][强]</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月16日对句点评：侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:平湖曙色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 平平仄仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:沃野春光🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 仄仄平平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:平湖曙色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:远岸秋声🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 杨绍英（十一期） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 平湖曙色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：大海潮声🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：两岸秋光（两是数词，不妥，再酌）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：老屋晨炊🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：平湖曙色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：翰海滔声</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：静夜风光🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 郝成明（纪检总监） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:平湖曙色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:大海清光🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:大地生辉🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:乡梦朝晖🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 谭淑英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：平湖曙色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：远寺清烟🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:平湖曙色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:古巷晨炊🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:陡岭松风🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:曲涧溪声🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:福鼎春茶🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 刘羽芳 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：平湖曙色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：碧野秋香🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：皓月生辉(晨、夜隔景)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 李雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：平湖曙色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：大道金光🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 冯素华（院长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：平湖曙色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：绿野春晖🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 齐云红九期</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：平湖曙色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：小岛风情🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：老树新芽🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 平湖曙色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：落日余晖(晨、晚隔景)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月18日对句练习点评：郭文岩老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：枫红妆远岫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 平平平仄仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：柳绿映平湖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 仄仄仄平平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(教官) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：枫红妆远岫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：菊紫醉疏篱🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：枫红妆远岫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：凤舞阔高天🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水澈映游鱼🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：玉翠耀双睛🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：叶翠映红山（红重了）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 刘羽芳 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：枫红妆远岫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水绿映青山🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：柏翠唤幽情🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雁影掠人心🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 侯召思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:枫红妆远岫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:竹绿染长坡🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 李雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：枫红妆远岫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水碧映蓝天🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 冯素华（院长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：枫红妆远岫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：柏翠护华堂🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：竹倩舞双溪🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：枫红妆远岫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雨冷落低丘🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：枫红妆远岫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雁去画长空🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：枫红妆远岫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雨冷忆清秋🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：枫红妆远岫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：稻香醉人心（远岫/人心不妥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 李明（东方红） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：枫红妆远岫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：柳绿染长堤🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：柏翠映高墙🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：枫红妆远岫岩县</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水绿染纤云🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：鬓白润归心🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：瓦黛掩深闺🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：酒烈暖征途[玫瑰]🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 谭淑英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：枫红妆远岫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水白迎轻舟🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 杨绍英（十一期） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：枫红妆远岫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：雁字列长空🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月19日对句练习点评：韩家峰老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 一堤杨柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 仄平平仄仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 三径菊花黄🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 平仄仄平平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句前，建议查询“平水韵”链接，了解:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.“杨柳”一词的多重释义。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.“绿”字的多重词性。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(六分院教官) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 一堤杨柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 千棹浪涛翻🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 千棹暮涛金</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 刘羽芳 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：一堤杨柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：千顷稻花香🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：千里浪涛长</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：三处桂花黄（燕雏鸣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：一堤杨柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：三垅菜花黄🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：千亩沃田肥🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 杨绍英（十一期）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：一堤杨柳绿，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：千树鹧鸪啼🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：一堤杨柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：双岸桂花红🌹（桂花一般在9–10月份开放，杨柳绿在春季）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：千叶水波清</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 冯素华六分院院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：一堤杨柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：三伏芰荷香[🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 高凤霞 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：一堤杨柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：千里稻花香🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 李雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：一堤杨柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：千岭柏松苍（“杨柳 ”对“柏松”此对不妥。应修改请再酌，有个写对仗的诗病叫“合掌”犯了此错[抱拳][握手]（即：都是同一类的在下句出现）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 一堤杨柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 双面酒旗红：此对可以。最好在写诗对句时，词语不要太直接了当，应含蓄些，夸张些也更好：想想李白的“飞流直下三千尺”[微笑][握手]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那你的对岂不可以写为：“千店酒旗红”或者是“酒旗斜”更有诗意了。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 千户桂枝黄🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 千嶂暮云稠🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 双鬓白云苍🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 李明（东方红） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：一堤杨柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：三地手足亲🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：全场照明红</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 王守一 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 一堤杨柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 三里客帆扬🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12. 家峰 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：一堤杨柳绿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：双岸子规啼🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：三径板桥荒🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：千墅画图新🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">各位《冯素华六分院》的新诗友，大家下午好[合十]！经过一段时间的练习对句，感觉各位都有了很大的进步[强]，我今天的点评如有疑问，尽可说出，大家在寻求确切答案为高，以求更长足之进步！</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月20日对句点评：侯昭思老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:窗前花弄影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 平平平仄仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:院外鸟喧枝🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 仄仄仄平平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(六分院教官) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:窗前花弄影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:案上笔留🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华（六分院院长 ）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：窗前花弄影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：野外雁归巢。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：岭上雨飘丝🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 李明（东方红） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：窗前花弄影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：月下水漂萍🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：梦里酒晕容🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 杨绍英（十一期） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 窗前花弄影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：树杪雀弹枝🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：岸上柳随风🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 吕跃 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:窗前花弄影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:岭上树摇风🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 刘羽芳 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：窗前花弄影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：月下剑生风🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：叶底雀呼朋🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:窗前花弄影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:屋后树吟风🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:巷内瓦含烟🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:树下石牵苔🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:纸上墨谈秋🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：窗前花弄影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：古木叶逢春（木不是方位名词）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：古树叶重新（树不是方位名词）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：松下鹤鸣春（松平，应仄）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：日下地生辉🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 侯召思(执行系长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：窗前花弄影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：院里燕谈情🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 李雪 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句；窗前花弄影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：月下树留阴🌹🌹（日下，更好）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：窗前花弄影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：水下蟹追龙🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：树上鸟逐虫🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12. 王守一 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:窗前花弄影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:枕底梦生香🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13. 齐云红九期 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：窗前花弄影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：帘外雨愁人🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：月下曲鸣心🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">王平总教督：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">各位院长教官新诗友好，学员这几天的对句在老师的辛勤指导下，都有了很大提高。因为开学的时候要进行学前测试，所以从今天开始，练习嵌句入诗（写五绝），就是用大家的对句延展一下，写成五绝，这个练习并不难，需要老师费心做好指导，新诗友用心学习。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句：窗前花弄影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，院外鸟喧枝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平平仄仄，仄仄仄平平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">客赞山村好，生活美若诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平仄，平平仄仄平</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">讲给新学员（四）——嵌句入诗</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">红二系北方大区: 王俊英</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">各位诗友，大家好！今天与大家聊聊“嵌句入诗”。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 自十二期招生以来，我们的对句练习，由浅入深，已经进入了一个新的阶段。对句练习的目的，我在“讲给新学员”的第二讲中曾经指明，原因有三:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">第一，是为了用最少的字，先了解平仄、词性和句式。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">第二，是为了强化对仗练习，为以后写好律诗做基础。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">第三，因为对联讲究言简意赅，勤加学习可以有效的促进遣词造句，写出好诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 有一部分诗友，在来龙风之前，可能已经对平仄格律比较熟悉了。那么您可以利用对句间隙，进行“嵌句入诗”。这个活动，在北方一区的“竹烟波月品诗亭”，经常有老师练习。它可以引发作者的写诗兴趣，代入感很强。您可以把出句和对句直接作为绝句的起承句、或转合句；也可以用作律诗的首联、颔联、颈联、或尾联。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗要注意下面几点:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 句子不能随意组合，要注意诗词的“起承转合”之规律，统一意境，突出主题。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.所用诗谱不能失粘失贴，要注意平仄和谐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3.押韵要正确。一般情况下，是以下联的尾字为准，去选择对应的平水韵韵部。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">下面，用我自己之前写的一首嵌句入诗，与大家共做交流:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 稚子牵牛桥上过（刘全武）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 清歌入耳垄上来（王俊英）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">参照诗谱: 仄起仄收押二平韵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平平仄仄，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平仄仄仄平平。（韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平仄仄平平仄，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平仄仄平。（韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七绝·清平乐</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/王俊英（泉水叮咚）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">稚子牵牛桥上过，清歌入耳垄头来。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">分明五柳桃源梦，正倚东风次第开。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">附注:“五柳”为陶渊明别号。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">[图片]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2023.09.18</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">宫帅（六分院教官）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">敲黑板，划重点:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.今天的练习是完成一首嵌字诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 诗的前两句已给出，就是诗友们昨天练习的对句，即群里发的出句“窗前花弄影”和自己写的对句。所以，大家只要写出诗的后两句即可。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 后两句在格式上，不需要对仗。在内容上，以“窗前花弄影，院外鸟喧枝。”这两句为例，后两句既可叙事(比如:春日早起，邀友踏青等），又可抒情(比如:窗外太吵，引人不满。或早起读书，珍惜时光等)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 诗句内容以弘扬真、善、美为佳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.今日题点:押韵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 1窗前花弄影， 2院外鸟喧枝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 3客赞山村好，4生活美若诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 以上诗为例，这首诗的第2句和第4句需要押韵。韵脚字是这两句的最后一个字，即“枝”和“诗”。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 确定韵脚字的方法:先将第二句最后一字“枝”，输入“平水韵”链接中，查询出其所在韵部“上平四支”。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 然后，根据自己构思的后两句诗的思路，先写出诗的第三句。再在“上平四支”韵部中找出与自己思路相关的一个字，定为第四句的末尾字，并在末尾字的基调上，写出第四句。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3.完成后的检测。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 诗友们的大作完成后，请在“华韵”链接中，分别输入:诗谱“平平平仄仄，仄仄仄平平(韵)。仄仄平平仄，平平仄仄平(韵）”和自己的诗句进行检测。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 并根据检测结果，对出律、出韵、重复字等文体进行修改。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 最后，将完成修改的嵌字诗提交群内接龙。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">21日五绝点评老师：齐云红老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">各位院长教官新诗友好，学员这几天的对句在老师的辛勤指导下，都有了很大提高。因为开学的时候要进行学前测试，所以从今天开始，练习嵌句入诗（写五绝），就是用大家的对句延展一下，写成五绝，这个练习并不难，需要老师费心做好指导，新诗友用心学习。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句：窗前花弄影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，院外鸟喧枝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平平仄仄，仄仄仄平平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">客赞山村好，生活美若诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平仄，平平仄仄平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(六分院教官) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·同好(上平十一真)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，案上笔留春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">勒马寻邮舍，捎于爱画人。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 冯素华六分院院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝.雨后（下平八庚）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，岭上雨飘丝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">远眺青松挺，回寻赤鲤姿。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 李明（东方红） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·相思（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/李明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，梦里酒晕容。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">枕上相思泪，奔流到冀东。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 杨绍英（十一期） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·乡景（上平四支）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/杨绍英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 窗前花弄影，树杪鸟弹枝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 紫燕徊青柳，游鱼闹碧池。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 侯召思(执行系长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·诚（下平八庚）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯昭思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，院里燕谈情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鸟语谁人晓，诚心妙理明。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝.春涧月夜（上平十一真）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/葛晓东</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，月下鹤鸣春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜半千山静，云深万木伸。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7。.宗庆良(总院督） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗：（助兴）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，槛外草生香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">旷野青林叶，深山碧水凉。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝.问秋（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，树上鸟衔虫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">飒飒秋风起，谁人懂我衷。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·忆夏(上平一东)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，屋后树吟风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">偶有蜻蜓过，垂髫雀跃中。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10.嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·居江南偶感(下平一先)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，巷内瓦含烟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四季江南水，浮沉又一年。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11.嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·思故乡(上平十灰)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，树下石牵苔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">故土连根忆，今宵入梦来。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12. 付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·逢秋(下平十一尤)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，纸上墨谈秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欲寄南飞雁，清风代我游。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13. 刘羽芳 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·怀秋（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，月下剑生风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">草翠连成碧，秋香锦冠同。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">14.嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·思乡（下平十蒸）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，叶底雀呼朋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">踏破青山去，归来月已升。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">15. 高凤霞 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">思（下平十二侵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/高凤霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，屋外客弹琴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">委婉思乡曲，牵情泪湿襟。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">16.. 齐云红九期</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝•愁(下平十二侵)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 窗前花弄影，月下曲鸣心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">敢问情何寄，青春难再寻。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">17.侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝.问秋（上平一东）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前花弄影，树上鸟衔虫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">飒飒秋风起，谁人懂我衷。🌹🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月22日对句（嵌句）练习点评：高凤霞老师</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：岩巅横老树</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 平平平仄仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗词基础好的诗友可用出句作为首句，写嵌句诗，诗谱为：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平平平仄仄，仄仄仄平平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仄仄平平仄，平平仄仄平（韵）。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：学员可以只完成对句，也可以对句、嵌句诗都写。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1. 宫帅(六分院教官)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 岩巅横老树</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 日下艳仙桃 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·追风(下平四豪) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/宫帅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岩巅横老树，日下艳仙桃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">摘与摩霄鹤，追风碧汉涛。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2. 杨绍英（教官） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：岩巅横老树 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：槛外染秋霜 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（嵌句入诗）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·游子怀乡（下平七阳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/杨绍英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岩巅横老树，槛外染秋霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">只影残灯夜，思乡暗自伤。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3. 刘羽芳 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：岩巔横老树</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：陇下卧黄牛 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（嵌句入诗）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·山间（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岩巔横老树，陇下卧黄牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">草没山羊角，藤缠瘦柏周。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（合律合韵，诗句流畅，起承转合好，意境美好。赞！）🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（嵌句入诗）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·山间（二）（下平六麻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/刘羽芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岩巔横老树，岭下满青纱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">侧耳山涛颂，忽觉雀鸟喳。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（1.合韵，“忽觉”出律，仄仄，应平平。2.诗句流畅，起承转合好。赞！山涛“颂”可再酌。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4. 侯绪富 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：岩颠横老树，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：谷底卧青牛。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（嵌句入诗）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝.晨（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯绪富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岩颠横老树，谷底卧青牛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">日起曦增色，蜂飞蝶舞稠。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（合律合韵，诗句流畅，意境美好，赞！“曦增色”还可再打磨。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5. 侯召思(执行系长） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：岩巅横老树</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：岭上绽新花 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（嵌句入诗）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·登山(下平六麻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/侯昭思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岩巅横老树，岭上绽新花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">景色游人醉，诗情梦里家。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6. 李明（东方红） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝·母爱（上平十四寒）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岩巅横老树，洞底产新鸾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冷热心中挂，黑白喂暖餐。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（1.“黑白”仄仄，应平平，出律。2.视觉独特，立意很好，诗句流畅，起承转合好。赞！“冷热”“黑白”稍显直白，诗味再浓些会更出彩！）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7. 葛晓东字品序 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：岩巅横老树 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：月下醉诗仙 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：月下赏新花 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8. 冯素华六分院院长 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：岩颠横老树</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：岭下绕长河 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝.秋晨（下平五歌）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/冯素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岩颠横老树，岭下绕长河。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏梦鸡鸣远，秋怀雁翅歌。🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9. 高凤霞 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：岩巅横老树</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：石罅绽奇花🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10. 付靖宇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 岩巅横老树</span></p><p class="ql-block">对句: 谷底涌新泉 🌹🌹</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝•观景遐思（下平一先）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文／付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岩巅横老树，谷底涌新泉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">愿做凌云鸟，徜徉妙境前。🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（合律合韵，诗句流畅，起承转合好，意境美好。赞！）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句: 岩巅横老树</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句: 渡口荡轻舟 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌句入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五绝•咏行者（下平十一尤）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文／付靖宇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岩巅横老树，渡口荡轻舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫惧天涯险，人生几度秋?🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（合律合韵，诗句流畅，起承转合好。“莫惧天涯险，人生几度秋”，依景抒怀，感悟人生。赞！）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11 董瑞华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:岩巅横老树</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句:海底卧苍龙 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12. 齐云红九期 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：岩巅横老树</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句：涯底冒清泉 🌹🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">各位诗友好！看了今天的对句，有一较深的感触：大家经过一段时间的对句、嵌句入诗练习，均有了明显进步和提高，特别是一些诗友不仅对句工整，嵌句入诗也渐入佳境，进一步印证了“有耕耘必有收获”！诗友们加油！✊ ✊ ✊ </span></p>