破阵子 寂静之声 及新古典风

物理学博士

破阵子

The Sound of Silence

新韵

万众喧嚣闭耳，

一滴水落独听。

梦里高歌音未响，

此意何能言语明？

唯闻寂静声。

五色霓虹刺目，

一条石径独行。

道法阑珊藏陋巷，

觉悟还需心点灯。

谈交暗夜朋。

​取材于同名歌曲



新古典诗派的主张——

第一：古典诗词的美很大一部分来自韵律。在汉语发音已经发生了很多变化的情况下，坚持用平水韵和词林正韵反而违背了古典诗词的初心。我们主张严格遵守平仄格律，使用现代汉语的发音。

第二：就算不能超越古人，也要写出时代感。从选词到内容，要让读者感受到我们这个时代。我们还要尽量用大家容易懂的语言，让更多的人能读，爱读。

《寂静之声》是史上最成功的英文流行歌曲之一。当我把玩它的歌词，能感受到深刻的意境和禅机，虽然作者西蒙先生可能并不懂这两个词。

于是用一首破阵子再现了这个意境。

附：寂静之声歌词

《The sound of silence》

Sung By "Paul Simon"

Hello darkness my old friend.

I've come to talk with you again.

Because a vision softly creeping

Left its seeds while I was sleeping.

And the vision that was planted in my brain

Still remains with the sound of silence

In restless dreams I walk alone

Narrow streets of cobble stone

Beneath the hallo of a street lamp,

I turned my collar to the cold and damp

When my eyes were stabbled by the flash of a neon light

That split the night

And touched the sound of silence

And in the naked night I saw ten thousand people may be more

People talking without speaking hearing without listening

People writing songs that voices never share

And no one dare disturb the sound of silence

"Fool" said I "you do not know

Silence like a cancer grows

Hear my words that I might teach you

Take my arms that I might reach youBut my words like silent rain-drops fell

And echo-ed in the wells of silence

And the people bow and prayed

to the neon God they made

And the sign flash out its warning

In the words that it was forming

And the sign said "The words of the prophers arewritten the subway walls and tenement halls"

And whispered in the sounds of silenceThe End.