<p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">丹桂</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹 </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一种安然色,仙家别样妆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">阴霾生桂魄,独立有天香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">骨气超凡俗,名声傲冷霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不关桃点注,品韵伴秋光。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">壬寅霜降</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋暮露凝霜,芦衰碧水凉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雁鸣排列阵,花陨对斜阳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小径幽烟霭,金风瑟野茫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人间真意薄,冷月到诗床。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">枫叶红(通韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">渐冷霧朦胧,临霜各不同。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋风寻旧梦,皓露染枫红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">落叶冰丝锦,流光玉树琼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">时空山减翠,岁老亦情浓。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">观团城山菊花展有赋</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">茂苑芳菲展画图,嫣红姹紫逸姿芜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋光粲粲黄金镂,丽日茫茫彩玉肤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">款款罗含窗里色,亭亭陶令圃边株。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有如群蕊争春艳,拾韵携香自拍娱。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">依李清照《醉花阴•九日》韵</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依绿偎红痴永昼,黄菊香无有?佳节复重阳,斗转星移,欲醉千杯酒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫愁岁老花渐瘦,百卉厌嘲诟。守拙抱枝头,风骨犹存,人自心通透。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">苏幕遮•壬寅仲冬夜吟</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨茫茫,风悄悄,轻雾笼烟,能有寒多少。难得风霜冰雪到,满院芙蓉,懒睡谁知晓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜沉沉,灯袅袅。旧梦相牵,旧梦愁肠绕。触物伤怀思难了。不怨沧天,天也终须老。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">初冬抒怀</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">满目苍黄山水冷,飞云旅雁舞霜天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清诗取意初寒彻,苦句凌心久善缘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雪压松枝枝更翠,冰侵梅蕊蕊尤妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block">任凭岁暮芳华少,我亦沈迷学少年。</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">壬寅初冬忆友</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">杨柳复伤摧,青荷残念违。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">径芜山已障,物累意难回。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">庭树晚烟冷,心花入暮归。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">书笺无可寄,寂寞雁孤飞。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">行香子•望雪</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">初雪飘飞,大地无垠。伫窗望,漫洒花银。纷飞竞舞,琼满乾坤。若杨花起,春纱浣,玉山浑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">时临岁尾,常闲常醉。腊肠香,鱼脍醅醇。清欢冬味,茶淡滋身。愿景依旧,亲依旺,友依真。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">咏小寒节气(通韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">严冬二九小寒凌,山谷平川啸北风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">南海妖魔掀恶浪,西疆壮士踏冰峰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">心期神助新冠灭,乡梦家圆喜鵲鸣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">举酒祝福君莫忘,民强国富始长宁。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">壬寅冬景</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹 </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有风背叶纷纷落,无雨枯黄似断魂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山静不闻飞鸟影,水寒未见打鱼人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">昏昏老眼书难近,霭霭霜云腿已沉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">所幸冠毒时远我,唯依电暖可怜身。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">清平乐•有感抗疫</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 三年生死,抗疫多悲喜。应治同医尊老辈,贫富无欺免费。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 共护民庶担当,白衣忘我扶伤。祖传时珍百草,神汤定胜顽阳。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">思亲</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:22px;">拈香数柱拜爹娘,未报亲恩泪两行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梦里临床三尺洞,生前身卧半茅房。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">饥荒岁月供求学,病老残年苦仿徨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">早隔阴阳尘土下,儿心悔恨几多伤。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">思念</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天寒儿欠挂,隔雨落窗纱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晨起侍娇草,闲来听塞笳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">开频诗醉我,随意笔生葩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一曲渔歌子,思亲在海涯。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">依韵奉和王建勤先生《梅花》</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">傲雪凌霜报岁阑,羡君抖擞丽妃冠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">斩新一朵含香至,瑞萼千枝带韵看。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不愧冰肌苏子咏,且亮玉骨陆翁叹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">残冬未减娇姿俏,风动株摇出手寒。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">迎新年</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">御寒将进酒,晴日尚宜身。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">网购花平价,场销菜惠民。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">行人随卷袖,杪岁尽除尘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冠疫终消去,芳樽喜入春。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">欢度春节</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晚会联欢华夏同,时逢盛世乐融融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">盆盆花草香庭院,款款灯笼贺岁荣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">网络争鸣声切切,诗词应和兴匆匆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">唱完白雪吟梅朵,春在千门万户中。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">除夜</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">卯兔送寅虎,屠苏醉俗人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今宵犹几许,时过又三春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">过大年</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">祝福欢歌华夏同,时逢盛世乐融融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">盆盆花草香庭院,款款灯笼映颊红。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">网络争鸣声切切,诗词应和兴匆匆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">唱完白雪吟梅朵,春在千门万户中。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">早春</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">低帘慵懒酣酣日,窗外梧桐影半明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨洒枝条眉眼湿,风吹梅蕊暗香生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">可怜春浅游人寂,独傍花台盼好晴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人老簪稀时韵少,经年疫害减心情。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">阳台种花之五•早春(通韵)</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幽居静赏景清馨,培草浇花趣味寻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">昨夜霏微开嫩蕊,今晨日旭绕鹅鳞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吟风唱月竹作伴,修韵裁诗笔为邻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">庭院素笺添小绿,如痴如醉乐身心。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">咏迎春花</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹(湖北)</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依栏纤弱绿条长,带雪经霜折嫩黄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">百卉含苞犹未醒,独君与友共芬芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">新茎无意羞花小,粉萼倾怀约晓光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">娇影素心情更重。不甘寂寞不轻狂。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:22px;">玉兰花</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">素颜含笑看朝霞,无愧尊名白玉花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冰骨婷婷凝浅靥,风姿绰绰照矜葩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一竿弯月牵春影,几树琼脂拢曙华。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不妒群芳梳夜色,岂因娇艳向人夸。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">春晨</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晓色睡初醒,推窗清气漫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山峦含扇月,岸柳挂珠冠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">最有春花簇,无须玉手抟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">馨风轻拂面,莫厌百回看。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">十六字令三首</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬,山覆银装枫叶红。无声画,四季美无穷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">松,挺拔参天笑朔风。任摧折,枝翠叶葱茏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">梅,玉蕊冰天藏韵姿。寒英碧,三友总相陪。</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">忆江南•思乡三首(欧阳修体)</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block">(一)</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">江南望,封沪客愁生。悠步窗前情绪乱,低头人后泪珠盈。何日故乡行?</span></p><p class="ql-block">(二)</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天色暮,夜火照申城。才上西楼傍月影,似乘高铁过江汀。遥听杜鹃声。</span></p><p class="ql-block">(三)</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">家乡好,最忆是湖浜,蜂蝶丛花鴛戏水,鹭鸥垂柳燕争鸣。波暖绿洲宁。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">依韵奉和陈少书先生《六秩感怀》</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花甲君临喜庆期,恰逢癸卯兔辉时。</span></p><p class="ql-block">文贤未面情如故,风雅常餐敬若师。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">去日德高齐梓里,来年椿茂弄潮儿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">开元试笔难佳句。举酒同欢献小诗。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">毕老师点评</span></p><p class="ql-block">苏幕遮•冬夜吟</p><p class="ql-block">陈丹(湖北)</p><p class="ql-block"> 雨茫茫,风悄悄,轻雾笼烟,一夜寒多少。难得风霜冰雪到,满院芙蓉,懒睡谁知晓。</p><p class="ql-block"> 夜沉沉,灯袅袅。旧梦相牵,旧梦愁肠绕。触物伤怀思未了。老镜昏花,天也终须老。</p><p class="ql-block">毕彩云点评:</p><p class="ql-block"> 《苏幕遮》这个词牌,可平可仄之处较少,上下阕各四仄韵,填起来有难度;将此调写成佳作,难度更大。</p><p class="ql-block"> 女诗人陈丹按此调填写的《冬夜吟》之作,很有自己的创作特色,婉约之情,跃然纸上。由于格律规定,上下阕各有两个九字句,或者说上下阕各有四言、五言连缀句,而上下句式结构一致,这就给诗人留下很大的施展创作艺术的空间:可以写成叠词、叠句,可以写成对仗句,可以写成连缀句。陈丹对此调掌握的非常娴熟,运用得很得体。围绕着“冬夜”这个特定环境,以景抒情,又含而不露。给读者的感觉是:此情此景,萦绕在心,又不必明示。在描写景物和内心活动之时,将遣词、造语,句式结构安排得井井有条,恰到好处。上下阕的衔接相辅相成,很有天衣无缝之严密。结句蕴含深远,即有人生、世事之哲理,又留给读者以无限想象之空间。此调不失为佳作。</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">作者简介:</span></p><p class="ql-block">陈丹,网名枫叶如丹。原名陈菊枝。</p><p class="ql-block">一九四六年出生,一九六五年高中毕业于大冶一中(当时因病未能参加高考)。退休前先后从事过中小学教育和事业单位宣传教育工作。</p><p class="ql-block">中华诗词学会会员,湖北省中华诗词学会会员,黄石市西塞社会员。</p><p class="ql-block">热爱文艺术,对音乐,京剧,绘画有浓厚兴趣。爱好广泛,生活充实。</p>