<p class="ql-block">出句：西西</p><p class="ql-block">1</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：山水相迎满目春【风吹麦浪】</p><p class="ql-block">【秋的惆怅】简评：</p><p class="ql-block">上下联景象非常和谐，一帘春雨唤醒了河山，青山绿水拉开了春天的序幕，闭着眼睛都可想象到一幅春暖花开的画面。</p><p class="ql-block">2</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：草木荣枯几度秋【淘宝】</p><p class="ql-block">【秋的惆怅】简评：</p><p class="ql-block">境界开阔，对句并不是把一帘雨固定为某个场景，而是理解为世事的变幻，草木荣枯既体现季节变换又暗合世事变幻，和上联情景统一，赞！</p><p class="ql-block">3</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：岁月蹉跎几首诗【杨云贵】</p><p class="ql-block">【秋的惆怅】简评：</p><p class="ql-block">该联和上一联差不多，思维旷达，岁月蹉跎，风云变幻，人生的经历皆可用诗意的文字来表达。</p><p class="ql-block">4</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：日月轮回遍地花【七七】</p><p class="ql-block">【秋的惆怅】简评：</p><p class="ql-block">对句前四字和后三字之间的关联不是很紧密。</p><p class="ql-block">5</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：星月铺成满地银【晓春】</p><p class="ql-block">【秋的惆怅】简评：</p><p class="ql-block">该联是把上联作为一个即时的场景来对，单看下联也是一个漂亮的句子，但作为一个场景来说，下联的星月和上联的雨就隔景了，且上联的雨为实，下联的银为虚，银在此处用了比拟的修辞手法，上联的雨没有比拟，从这两点来看尾字的对仗稍有瑕疵。</p><p class="ql-block">6</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：桃李竟发满目春【小石头】</p><p class="ql-block">【秋的惆怅】简评：</p><p class="ql-block">发，入声字，按平水韵不合律，按新韵可，很漂亮的下联，一场春雨催发了桃李花开，顿觉春意盎然。</p><p class="ql-block">7</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：岁月衍生两鬓霜【化蝶】</p><p class="ql-block">【秋的惆怅】简评：</p><p class="ql-block">该联和前面第二第三两联类似，思维开阔，经历了人生的风雨，只赚得风霜两鬓，不觉唏嘘。</p><p class="ql-block">8</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：茶酒闲斟几首诗【芬芳】</p><p class="ql-block">【秋的惆怅】简评：</p><p class="ql-block">下联表达了一种闲情逸致，上联风云雨之间的关系是相辅相成的，但诗酒茶并不是必然相关的。</p><p class="ql-block">9</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：波浪光浮五色霞【文雅】</p><p class="ql-block">【秋的惆怅】简评：</p><p class="ql-block">该联和上联所说的问题差不多，波浪和霞之间缺少必然联系。</p><p class="ql-block">10</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：山水交融千幅图【荒园】</p><p class="ql-block">【秋的惆怅】简评：</p><p class="ql-block">下联前四字用的好，千幅稍觉刻意了些。</p> <p class="ql-block">11</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：爱恨编成别样情【多情公子】</p><p class="ql-block">12</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：诗酒相邀百里春【水墨丹青】</p><p class="ql-block">13</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：岁月悠闲半榻书【籽粒】</p><p class="ql-block">14</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：草木葱茏十里春【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">15</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：岁月耕成半亩诗【紫月】</p><p class="ql-block">16</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：诗酒悲欢半阁愁【彩虹】</p> <p class="ql-block">17</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：日月轮回四季歌【橙子】</p><p class="ql-block">18</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：莺燕欣歌满树花【丁平思】</p><p class="ql-block">19</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：水墨争凝半阙词【云遮月】</p><p class="ql-block">20</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：桃杏争娇满目春【布衣木子】</p><p class="ql-block">21</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：水月不留半点痕【小猫】</p><p class="ql-block">22</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：名利分争半片天【像风一样自由】</p><p class="ql-block">23</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：草木更生半壁春【曹刿论绽】</p><p class="ql-block">24</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：花木空存满院春【等你在雨中】</p><p class="ql-block">25</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：岁月消磨几度霜【七字余句】</p><p class="ql-block">26</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：天地开明万里春【玉蝶】</p><p class="ql-block">27</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：庭院香飘十里春【高千策】</p><p class="ql-block">28</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：日月轮回两鬓霜【佳儿】</p><p class="ql-block">29</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：桃杏绽开千簇花【老高】</p><p class="ql-block">30</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：山水合成百世图【最美的坟墓】</p><p class="ql-block">31</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：草木峥嵘百日春【掬水月在手】</p><p class="ql-block">32</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：我自沉沦半卷书【秋月】</p><p class="ql-block">33</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：蜂蝶招来满园春【针行】</p><p class="ql-block">34</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：桃李争妍满目春【红蜻蜓】</p><p class="ql-block">35</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：杨柳无由半缕烟【天湖】</p><p class="ql-block">36</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：燕雀翻飞万里程【云淡】</p><p class="ql-block">37</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：蜂蝶飞来满院春【无悔】</p><p class="ql-block">38</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：岁月清幽半盏茶【一新】</p><p class="ql-block">39</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：桃李芬芳四海春【不负如来】</p><p class="ql-block">40</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：草木争荣四季青【乐天】</p> <p class="ql-block">41</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：闪电惊鸿万里空【无言的沉默】</p><p class="ql-block">42</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：沟壑纵横几道河【菲儿】</p><p class="ql-block">43</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：霜月有时隔岸生【月色自然】</p><p class="ql-block">44</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：草木丛生万里春【丫丫】</p><p class="ql-block">45</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：笔墨留香万物春【龙吟九渊】</p><p class="ql-block">46</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：江海杨波半卷风【天行健】</p><p class="ql-block">47</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：烟水淋漓半壁山【柳岩】</p><p class="ql-block">48</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：过往犹成几阙诗【缘聚】</p><p class="ql-block">49</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：岁月流成九曲河【曼珠沙华】</p><p class="ql-block">70</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：羯鼓催开万朵梅【依依】</p><p class="ql-block">71</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：草木丛生满院青【青莲】</p><p class="ql-block">72</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：岁月虚无满目愁【罗马雄风】</p><p class="ql-block">73</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：人世沧桑五味盅【哇！】</p><p class="ql-block">74</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：岁月轮回满目春【漫步】</p><p class="ql-block">75</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：尘雾迷濛千古情【清净本然】</p><p class="ql-block">76</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：你我相逢几度情【红尘】</p><p class="ql-block">77</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：桃李盛开满岭香【天马行空】</p><p class="ql-block">78</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：气节凝成万古魂【鹤舞】</p><p class="ql-block">79</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：春色香生满枝花【岸芷汀兰】</p><p class="ql-block">80</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：波浪推来几叶舟【十三香】</p><p class="ql-block">81</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：桃李不言十里春【朵朵】</p> <p class="ql-block">82</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：草木依稀万里秋【林木子】</p><p class="ql-block">83</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：枫叶铺成满地红【如意如愿】</p><p class="ql-block">84</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：杨柳摇来满苑春【小园春光】</p><p class="ql-block">85</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：淑气催开满树花【明镜非台】</p><p class="ql-block">86</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：霞霁铺开满目春【老头】</p><p class="ql-block">87</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：焰火生成五彩霞【执手温酒】</p><p class="ql-block">88</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：日月生辉七彩霞【孤读求拜】</p><p class="ql-block">89</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：雨露招摇满院风【风荷】</p><p class="ql-block">90</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：岁月流连满目霜【青果】</p><p class="ql-block">91</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：锦绣平添半抹霓【探狼】</p><p class="ql-block">92</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：山水闲听万卷诗【书兰】</p><p class="ql-block">93</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：蜂蝶闲飞满目春【梦若流云】</p><p class="ql-block">94</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：草树融和千岭茵【味可可】</p><p class="ql-block">95</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：草木凋零满地霜【君子兰CLJ】</p><p class="ql-block">96</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：岁月犹如半碗茶【曼妹】</p><p class="ql-block">97</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：人马饥寒几日愁【颜开运畅】</p><p class="ql-block">98</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：草木萌生四野春【淡看浮云】</p><p class="ql-block">99</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：日月清明万里春【沈青峰 】</p><p class="ql-block">100</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：烟柳妆成满眼春【轻寒】</p><p class="ql-block">101</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：冷暖嵯峨万叶红【方南】</p><p class="ql-block">102</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：日月轮回满目春【子衿】</p><p class="ql-block">103</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：溪面描成万点粼【荷塘月色】</p> <p class="ql-block">104</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：蜂蝶翻来几缕香【雨寒】</p><p class="ql-block">105</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：柳絮飞来满院花【学敏】</p><p class="ql-block">106</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block"> 对句：日月清明满地花【大程】</p><p class="ql-block">107</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：水月诗成几盏茶【子衿】</p><p class="ql-block">108</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：桃李盛开满眼春【花火牡丹】</p><p class="ql-block">109</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：水墨氤氲满卷春【若耶秋水】</p><p class="ql-block">110</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：岁月轮回半世缘【九妹】</p><p class="ql-block">111</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：桃李凋零满目伤【冷月若水】</p><p class="ql-block">112</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：鸥鹭结盟两袖香【青云直上】</p><p class="ql-block">113</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：岁月添来两鬓霜【柳眉儿】</p><p class="ql-block">114</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：纸笔空描满院花【紫薇】</p><p class="ql-block">115</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：水雾苍茫十里烟【倪哥】</p><p class="ql-block">116</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：雪月生成几阙诗【花香依然】</p><p class="ql-block">117</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：天地行吟两袖风【紫云汐风】</p><p class="ql-block">118</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：岁月平添两鬓秋【若素】</p><p class="ql-block">119</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：功利存余两袖风【清都客 】</p><p class="ql-block">120</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：雷电交加千道光【邓洁】</p><p class="ql-block">121</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：草木修成四路春【水影晃树】</p><p class="ql-block">122</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：山水描来几片霞【疯子】</p><p class="ql-block">123</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：水墨淋漓半壁山【挥翰】</p><p class="ql-block">124</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：江海航行万里船【浅笑】</p><p class="ql-block">125</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：岁月熬成千古情【喜仔 】</p><p class="ql-block">126</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：世事参空百样心【冷梅 】</p><p class="ql-block">127</p><p class="ql-block">出句：风云幻化一帘雨【西西】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：江海行来万里程【李月】</p>